Congrats for Kamyan and Aloha Kitty for guessing who Meg really was!
So, here's the last chapter! Also, since this particular NeoMoon Star fic is the worst of the 3(in the future it'll be 4), I have decided to give you all a preview of the "NeoMoon Star 2: The Jewel Staff Saga"! Additional information is on my profile under "Future Fics."
"NeoMoon Star"
"Chapter 5"
NeoMoon Star couldn't believe it. Meg, her supposedly adopted mother, was really NeoMoon Crystal, her real mother. Zac was stunned, "She didn't die..."
NeoMoon Crystal motioned for Ruby to come near, "Come on, Ruby. Are you scared?" Sloth glared at Crystal, "You! You somehow escaped! I thought I killed you!"
Crystal smirked, "You thought I was dead, but you were wrong. NeoMoon Star, you ready to fight?"
Star slowly nodded, "Ready whenever you are."
NeoMoon Crystal went into battle, "Crystal Nova Glow!"
"NeoNova Shine!"
Sloth was blinded for a moment or two.
"Aqua Crystal Throw!" Crystal shouted.
While Sloth was distracted, NeoMoon Star attacked from behind, "Flaming Neggs!"
Sloth felt the burning heat from the Neggs and the ice cold touch of the Aqua Crystals. He staggered. Amber attacked, "Magic Pebbles!" Ruby decided to join the fight, "Spark!"
Crystal yelled to Star, "We need to attack Sloth with our special attacks!"
"I've never had a reason to use it before, but I can try."
"Good. Ready?"
Star nodded, ready for the challenge. Crystal attacked, "Crystal Shine Illusion!"
"Diamond Star Shatter!"
Amber and Ruby froze him with a Fiery Glaze. Star's and Crystal's attacks hit him. He was destroyed. Crystal turned to Ruby, "Do you sense him?" Ruby shook her head. Star looked at Crystal, "We need to talk. Now."
"So you were alive all this time, right in front of my face, and I didn't know?"
Meg nodded.
"But why?"
"I don't know, Jessie... I just didn't want people like Sloth to know NeoMoon Crystal was still alive."
Ruby and Amber were talking in their own corner.
Jessie continued, "You only revealed yourself when I was fighting Sloth?"
"I was afraid he would attack you once you grew old enough to use your NeoMoon powers so I 'adopted' you."
"Oh, I guess that's a good enough reason. So my dad, Zac, didn't know you were still alive?"
Ruby stopped her conversation with Amber and turned towards Jessie, "Zac didn't know about her being alive, but we heard about a heroine defending Neopia. We did some reasoning and figured it must be Jessica Stephens, NeoMoon Crystal's daughter. We traveled here, having no idea NeoMoon Crystal was alive."
All of a sudden, an excited Sapphire burst through the door. Jessie was startled, "Sapphire! What's wrong?"
"Brandy... She's been taken!"
"Brandy?! Come on, Amber!" Jessie ran out the door. In a matter of seconds, she was back, "Where is she, Sapphire?"
They were in a forest. Jessie, Amber, Meg, Ruby, and Sapphire were looking for suspicious behavior. After a few minutes of walking, they found her.
She was being tortured by a tall creature that resembled Sloth. It said, "My name is Raffle, brother of Sloth. He stole the land I was to rule. The first thing I had to do was get rid of NeoMoon Star. So, I took her friend."
"No, you won't!" NeoMoon Star said, (A/N: She had transformed while Raffle was speaking.)
Star quickly retrieved Brandy and turned to Raffle, "Say goodbye! Diamond Star Shatter!"
Raffle was gone.
"You alright Brandy?"
Brandy nodded.
Peace remained on Neopia. Zac and Meg stayed. Ruby and Amber became the best of friends. Brandy visited regularly. NeoMoon Star or NeoMoon Crystal weren't needed anymore, but if evil did threaten Neopia again, they would be the ones you'd have to face...
The End! Now here's a preview of "NeoMoon Star 2: The Jewel Staff Saga"! Imagine it like little clips. Each paragraph represents a different scene.
Unknown to anyone in the house, in the room over, was the glass case with the power sticks in it. Inside, the small power sticks were glowing, calling to their owners.
"Sapphire..." Brandy whispered, her voice wavering and worried, "I had a feeling he would come back to get revenge on me. I don't even think NeoMoon Star or Crystal can handle him. I'm the only chance for Neopia if out to the open. Let's go, Sapphire."
Ruby left the room and muttered to herself, "She doesn't know the Jewel Staff's other power... Could Brandy be... the one?"
"Why now, Nicholas?" Rachel asked the man in black, "Why do you show yourself after 13 years?"
Meg gasped, "I recognize that voice. It's... the NeoMoon Queen!"
That's it! Comments on the preview(and ending) are welcome! Oh, and Rachel is Brandy's mother.
So, here's the last chapter! Also, since this particular NeoMoon Star fic is the worst of the 3(in the future it'll be 4), I have decided to give you all a preview of the "NeoMoon Star 2: The Jewel Staff Saga"! Additional information is on my profile under "Future Fics."
"NeoMoon Star"
"Chapter 5"
NeoMoon Star couldn't believe it. Meg, her supposedly adopted mother, was really NeoMoon Crystal, her real mother. Zac was stunned, "She didn't die..."
NeoMoon Crystal motioned for Ruby to come near, "Come on, Ruby. Are you scared?" Sloth glared at Crystal, "You! You somehow escaped! I thought I killed you!"
Crystal smirked, "You thought I was dead, but you were wrong. NeoMoon Star, you ready to fight?"
Star slowly nodded, "Ready whenever you are."
NeoMoon Crystal went into battle, "Crystal Nova Glow!"
"NeoNova Shine!"
Sloth was blinded for a moment or two.
"Aqua Crystal Throw!" Crystal shouted.
While Sloth was distracted, NeoMoon Star attacked from behind, "Flaming Neggs!"
Sloth felt the burning heat from the Neggs and the ice cold touch of the Aqua Crystals. He staggered. Amber attacked, "Magic Pebbles!" Ruby decided to join the fight, "Spark!"
Crystal yelled to Star, "We need to attack Sloth with our special attacks!"
"I've never had a reason to use it before, but I can try."
"Good. Ready?"
Star nodded, ready for the challenge. Crystal attacked, "Crystal Shine Illusion!"
"Diamond Star Shatter!"
Amber and Ruby froze him with a Fiery Glaze. Star's and Crystal's attacks hit him. He was destroyed. Crystal turned to Ruby, "Do you sense him?" Ruby shook her head. Star looked at Crystal, "We need to talk. Now."
"So you were alive all this time, right in front of my face, and I didn't know?"
Meg nodded.
"But why?"
"I don't know, Jessie... I just didn't want people like Sloth to know NeoMoon Crystal was still alive."
Ruby and Amber were talking in their own corner.
Jessie continued, "You only revealed yourself when I was fighting Sloth?"
"I was afraid he would attack you once you grew old enough to use your NeoMoon powers so I 'adopted' you."
"Oh, I guess that's a good enough reason. So my dad, Zac, didn't know you were still alive?"
Ruby stopped her conversation with Amber and turned towards Jessie, "Zac didn't know about her being alive, but we heard about a heroine defending Neopia. We did some reasoning and figured it must be Jessica Stephens, NeoMoon Crystal's daughter. We traveled here, having no idea NeoMoon Crystal was alive."
All of a sudden, an excited Sapphire burst through the door. Jessie was startled, "Sapphire! What's wrong?"
"Brandy... She's been taken!"
"Brandy?! Come on, Amber!" Jessie ran out the door. In a matter of seconds, she was back, "Where is she, Sapphire?"
They were in a forest. Jessie, Amber, Meg, Ruby, and Sapphire were looking for suspicious behavior. After a few minutes of walking, they found her.
She was being tortured by a tall creature that resembled Sloth. It said, "My name is Raffle, brother of Sloth. He stole the land I was to rule. The first thing I had to do was get rid of NeoMoon Star. So, I took her friend."
"No, you won't!" NeoMoon Star said, (A/N: She had transformed while Raffle was speaking.)
Star quickly retrieved Brandy and turned to Raffle, "Say goodbye! Diamond Star Shatter!"
Raffle was gone.
"You alright Brandy?"
Brandy nodded.
Peace remained on Neopia. Zac and Meg stayed. Ruby and Amber became the best of friends. Brandy visited regularly. NeoMoon Star or NeoMoon Crystal weren't needed anymore, but if evil did threaten Neopia again, they would be the ones you'd have to face...
The End! Now here's a preview of "NeoMoon Star 2: The Jewel Staff Saga"! Imagine it like little clips. Each paragraph represents a different scene.
Unknown to anyone in the house, in the room over, was the glass case with the power sticks in it. Inside, the small power sticks were glowing, calling to their owners.
"Sapphire..." Brandy whispered, her voice wavering and worried, "I had a feeling he would come back to get revenge on me. I don't even think NeoMoon Star or Crystal can handle him. I'm the only chance for Neopia if out to the open. Let's go, Sapphire."
Ruby left the room and muttered to herself, "She doesn't know the Jewel Staff's other power... Could Brandy be... the one?"
"Why now, Nicholas?" Rachel asked the man in black, "Why do you show yourself after 13 years?"
Meg gasped, "I recognize that voice. It's... the NeoMoon Queen!"
That's it! Comments on the preview(and ending) are welcome! Oh, and Rachel is Brandy's mother.