OK I am going to temporarily break the rules and put a page up as a reviewer response, Those of you who have issues with this please know that this chapter will soon be gone.
To my reader Misguided Devil, you review struck my interest, I would like to talk to you more if you don't mind. You can find my email in my authors info page, I promise I am not some sort of stalker freak, but the way you worded your review seems rather interesting to me, and you seem like it would be worthwhile to talk to you