Hey! Okay, I got more then 10 reviews but I said it was for yesterday but whatever! LOL. Ok, I really hope you like this chapter because I made it, it's not in the book and I thought Lucinda needed to come back
I'm really sorry this chapter is short! Sorry!
Disclaimer: I do not own Ella Enchanted
No one's POV
Lucinda knew she couldn't use big magic and help Ella. But entering one's dream wasn't big magic. But then again, it wasn't small magic. One mistake and she could possibly hurt the young prince. Lucinda remembered Ella's desperate and pleading face when she had told her she couldn't help. Lucinda could but not in the way Ella had wanted.
She would just try. She decided that it wasn't big magic, just…medium magic. She knew there was no such thing but she brushed it away. She wasn't one to give up easily.
Maybe if she showed the young prince without actually telling him about Ella's curse, he could help her break free. Hopefully. She closed her eyes and entered the dream…
Char's POVElla never eloped; she was going to have a wedding to her future husband, that old rich man she told me about in her letter. I was invited and it was held at the castle.
I wore my best suit and then went outside. When I went outside, I felt as if my breath left me. There was Ella in the most beautiful wedding gown I had ever seen. She looked like an angel…
She turned slowly away from her guests and spotted me and that beautiful smile spread across her face. Her eyes twinkled happily and she looked so happy…so beautiful…
I felt my legs walking towards her, as if in a trance.
I stopped right before her and stared into her emerald green eyes.
We both smiled at each other and then I asked if she wanted to go through the maze garden with me. She said yes.
My heart began to pound and I felt as if nothing else in the world matter.
We began walking and halfway through, she told me a joke and I began to laugh. Everything was perfect…every moment…
I had to sit down on a stone bench to calm myself down. She sat next to me, laughing also.
The clock gonged and Ella stood. It was time for her wedding and when I would lose her forever…
She began to walk away but I jumped up and grabbed her wrist. She turned around and looked me in the eyes, her eyes so curious.
And then I leaned down and kissed her.
It was perfect. She was mine…
I pulled back slowly and said softly, "Ella…marry me. Marry me, Ella."
Fear was in her eyes. Then, she began to run away from me. The maze disappeared and she began to run towards a light.
No! I felt my heart pound. She was going to leave me again and never be in my arms again! No!
I heard a voice say softly, "She must obey…she is born to obey… for it is her gift…"
Who said that? I ignored the voice and began running towards Ella. But she was gone.
"ELLA!" I screamed but to no avail. She left me again, with my broken heart. I fell to my knees. "Ella…"
I pounded the ground and held my head towards the ground, the tears falling off my face.
I then screamed, "NO!"
That wouldn't be considered a cliffhanger, right? LOL. Okay, that's the end of the dream. Review time!
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Awaiting Impatient Person- Yeah, I'm not a fan at all either. LOL. I would have done your suggestion but one problem: he doesn't find out her identity until her mask is taken off my Hattie. LOL. And, yeah, Cecilia is just so smart because girls are just smart! And besides, Char is too overtaken by his emotions to really think about that at the moment. LOL. Thanks so reviewing that long review! And, LOL, that trumpets blare was cool! LOL. I liked it! Pure original idea. Thanks for reviewing!
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Okay, now that's all done, let's do my favorite thing besides writing: you reviewing! LOL. Can I get 15 reviews before I post my nest chapter? Please?
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