Astievia: Great story! One thing I would sugest is to at the begining of
your story put who's thoughts they were. Because at first it was marcos,
and then jakes but I didn't know who's it was until the end.
Astievia
Alright. You can see I have.
Anonymous-cat: Its interesting, for sure. Continue this.
Thank you. I am.
Tobias
DEMORPH! Jake screamed. I could see the none of that gashes hit his heart. Lucky. One large gash had pierced Marco's lung, and Marco was out cold. I could here a wheezing.
Jake... Never mind. I walked over to the bear and sliced of part of his skin. I hated doing this. Even to a dead person. But I had to. Marco might die.
I placed the piece of skin and fur over the hole in his lung. I knew if Marco was awake he would already be demorphing.
Jake, I said. Try to wake him. He was already doing it. I was holding the skin down with my weak andilite hands. I heard saw Visser One stir. Uh- oh.
WAKE UP! I screamed to Marco in desperation. He stirred, but so did Visser one. Common.
He started to demorph. Whoa! Talk about chest pains! Marco said as he was demorphing.
When he was finished demorphing he started to morph back to Gorilla. I saw Visser One start to get up. Uh-oh. He tried to stand up but couldn't. His legs were broken. He started to morph a bird. His legs were the first to go. Then he demorphed. Marco was already bounding over there to knock him out again.
Am I gonna have to knock you out again? Marco asked in mock desperation. I flew and raked his eyes. Marco swung but Visser One cut of his fist. The stump slammed him in the head as Marco cried out in pain. Visser One went sprawling but wasn't knocked out. He started to run away. Marco started after him.
Let him go. Jake said. Now, demorph.
Alright. Marco said. He demorph and remorphed.
Has anyone noticed how big this place is? Marco asked.
We know it's huge. Jake said.
No, I mean how big these halls are. Marco replied. This stretch right here is about 30 feet tall and 20 feet wide.
I have an idea. Why don't we look for this things fighters?
Good idea.
We need food. I said. We started looking for food and we stumbled onto what looked like an escape pod. Maybe there we rations in here. We went in.
The doors behind us closed. And suddenly we were hurdling through space. Right towards the planet.
Prepare for land. I heard the computers voice in my head. Please strap yourself in. I looked around for something to stap me down. Nothing. There was something that looked like a buckle. It looked like it was for holding down a whale. It was huge!
WHAM! We hit the ground, hard.
I have determined that this planet is habitable for you. The computer said. A hatch opened on the side of the pod.
I knew this was a low gravity planet. I should be able to fly perfectly well here. I thought. We ventured out of the pod. We were about 150 yards out of the Pod when a giant monster leaped at us.
Go flea! I heard Jake yell. I was flying high above the ground. Perfectly safe. Or so I thought. A bird with 12 wings dived at me from higher up. Why the heck does he need twelve wings? I wondered. I easily got out of the way. It was easy to do because of the low gravity.
Tobias, tell me when he's gone.
He's going right now. Not the brightest creature. I said. Wait till I give the word.
I waited till the monster was out of range. Alright, demorph. I said. My advise, morph bird. They took my advise. We flew around the jungle, until we found a city.
It was a Kelbird city. I flew a little higher. Then I saw it. Another escape pod.
It came down and landed just outside the city. We decided to investigate. We flew down to the escape pod and found it empty. We followed the tracks. They were boot tracks.
We came to a stream. I saw someone drinking water. It looked up and saw us. We tried to look like normal birds but she knew we were from earth. Yes, she. It was Rachel!
Rachel! I almost lost my, well, balance, in the air. I fell a bit. I saw her starting to morph Grizzly. Huh? Why was she morphing Grizzly. I forgot. She had to be a Yeerk. She now knew we were here and she was preparing. We flew to a tree and demorphed and remorphed. Battle morphs. I was still hawk of coarse. We walked to where we saw her last. We had to do this. We found her. She was looking at us, ready for battle. Maybe Rachel rubbed of on her.
Sorry for such a short chapter. Not much action. Next chapter will be better.
Anonymous-cat: Its interesting, for sure. Continue this.
Thank you. I am.
Tobias
DEMORPH! Jake screamed. I could see the none of that gashes hit his heart. Lucky. One large gash had pierced Marco's lung, and Marco was out cold. I could here a wheezing.
Jake... Never mind. I walked over to the bear and sliced of part of his skin. I hated doing this. Even to a dead person. But I had to. Marco might die.
I placed the piece of skin and fur over the hole in his lung. I knew if Marco was awake he would already be demorphing.
Jake, I said. Try to wake him. He was already doing it. I was holding the skin down with my weak andilite hands. I heard saw Visser One stir. Uh- oh.
WAKE UP! I screamed to Marco in desperation. He stirred, but so did Visser one. Common.
He started to demorph. Whoa! Talk about chest pains! Marco said as he was demorphing.
When he was finished demorphing he started to morph back to Gorilla. I saw Visser One start to get up. Uh-oh. He tried to stand up but couldn't. His legs were broken. He started to morph a bird. His legs were the first to go. Then he demorphed. Marco was already bounding over there to knock him out again.
Am I gonna have to knock you out again? Marco asked in mock desperation. I flew and raked his eyes. Marco swung but Visser One cut of his fist. The stump slammed him in the head as Marco cried out in pain. Visser One went sprawling but wasn't knocked out. He started to run away. Marco started after him.
Let him go. Jake said. Now, demorph.
Alright. Marco said. He demorph and remorphed.
Has anyone noticed how big this place is? Marco asked.
We know it's huge. Jake said.
No, I mean how big these halls are. Marco replied. This stretch right here is about 30 feet tall and 20 feet wide.
I have an idea. Why don't we look for this things fighters?
Good idea.
We need food. I said. We started looking for food and we stumbled onto what looked like an escape pod. Maybe there we rations in here. We went in.
The doors behind us closed. And suddenly we were hurdling through space. Right towards the planet.
Prepare for land. I heard the computers voice in my head. Please strap yourself in. I looked around for something to stap me down. Nothing. There was something that looked like a buckle. It looked like it was for holding down a whale. It was huge!
WHAM! We hit the ground, hard.
I have determined that this planet is habitable for you. The computer said. A hatch opened on the side of the pod.
I knew this was a low gravity planet. I should be able to fly perfectly well here. I thought. We ventured out of the pod. We were about 150 yards out of the Pod when a giant monster leaped at us.
Go flea! I heard Jake yell. I was flying high above the ground. Perfectly safe. Or so I thought. A bird with 12 wings dived at me from higher up. Why the heck does he need twelve wings? I wondered. I easily got out of the way. It was easy to do because of the low gravity.
Tobias, tell me when he's gone.
He's going right now. Not the brightest creature. I said. Wait till I give the word.
I waited till the monster was out of range. Alright, demorph. I said. My advise, morph bird. They took my advise. We flew around the jungle, until we found a city.
It was a Kelbird city. I flew a little higher. Then I saw it. Another escape pod.
It came down and landed just outside the city. We decided to investigate. We flew down to the escape pod and found it empty. We followed the tracks. They were boot tracks.
We came to a stream. I saw someone drinking water. It looked up and saw us. We tried to look like normal birds but she knew we were from earth. Yes, she. It was Rachel!
Rachel! I almost lost my, well, balance, in the air. I fell a bit. I saw her starting to morph Grizzly. Huh? Why was she morphing Grizzly. I forgot. She had to be a Yeerk. She now knew we were here and she was preparing. We flew to a tree and demorphed and remorphed. Battle morphs. I was still hawk of coarse. We walked to where we saw her last. We had to do this. We found her. She was looking at us, ready for battle. Maybe Rachel rubbed of on her.
Sorry for such a short chapter. Not much action. Next chapter will be better.