uh, get a beta, dat way u can avoid lots of errors. ok start. keep on
tryin. lots of ideas are jumbled together. take ur time wit the plot.
Thanks! I will.
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Cassie's POV.
I was watching the animals. I was an Oak. I had acquired an oak. I morphed it. Did you know that oaks have eyes? It amazed me. And ears. Well not eyes and ears. I had all around vision. I could see through my bark!
I couldn't tell where the ears were. I loved watching the animals as a tree.
All the animals scattered when my cell phone rang. I demorphed as fast as I could. I picked up the cell phone.
"Hello?" I answered the phone.
"Cassie? This is the president."
"Hello Abby." I greeted her. "What's up?"
"We have a problem. The Andilite's saw a Bug Fighter."
"A Bug fighter?" I asked. "Where?"
"No where near here. They saw it in Andilite territory."
"The Yeerks." Hmm... "You think the Yeerks have set up a base somewhere?" I asked.
"Yes. So do the Andilite's. We are hurrying the Zero-Space ship production. It should be ready in three months." Abby said.
"Why did you call me?" I asked.
"We need an expert on the Yeerks." She said.
"Well, I'm not an Expert. Call Marco's mom. Eva. Eva and war prince Allorian."
"The Andilites already contacted him." Abby told me. "But we can't find Eva or Marco. Or Jake. They are all missing."
Why was Eva missing? Oh, yeah. She was out on a vacation. She didn't want to be bothered. So she sneaked away on a private boat. She went to Hawaii.
"She's in Hawaii." I told her. "On Hawaii island. She's on vacation. She didn't want to be bothered but I guess she will help you on this."
"What about Marco and Jake." Abby asked.
"Uh, I don't know where they are." I lied. Sorta. I had no idea where they were. Sooo... Anyway.
"Thanks! Bye." That was brief. But I had to figure....
The Yeerks were must have found a new host species. I wondered what they looked like. If they new about it. Are they fighting back?
I had to wonder. I had an idea. I headed back toward base camp. . . . . .
Jake's POV
She growled. A loud, threatening growl.
You will never get Rachel back. The Yeerk sneered. You. You Jake. You lost her.
She was trying to get at my weak points. I ignored her. Or, the Yeerk. I had to do this. Rachel would understand.
Marco, I said in private thought speak. You circle around to her back. I'll be right here. Tobias, morph Andilite. We need to form a triangle. I knew Tobias didn't want to do this. I didn't take Cassie to figure that out.
He morphed Andilite quickly while we kept Gat-three-one-four-two busy. (Authors note: Don't even think about asking how he knew the Yeerk's name.)
Tobias stepped into the open.
Ahh, so the little girl's lover steps into the open. Gat sneered. Can you do it Tobias? Can you kill Rachel?
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Tobias's POV
I rushed forward thrashing with my tail wildly. This Yeerk will die. I knew Rachel would want it this way. I thrashed at the Yeerk wildly. Jake and Marco joined. The Yeerk was badly beaten. It started to run. It started to demorph as it ran. We followed. The Yeerk was now fully Rachel now. It hurt, Seeing Rachel and knowing that the real Rachel was inside, screaming. I ran forward and sank my tail blade into her heart.
I cried. Rachel was gone. Again. I cried. Marco and Jake stayed back
Thanks! I will.
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Cassie's POV.
I was watching the animals. I was an Oak. I had acquired an oak. I morphed it. Did you know that oaks have eyes? It amazed me. And ears. Well not eyes and ears. I had all around vision. I could see through my bark!
I couldn't tell where the ears were. I loved watching the animals as a tree.
All the animals scattered when my cell phone rang. I demorphed as fast as I could. I picked up the cell phone.
"Hello?" I answered the phone.
"Cassie? This is the president."
"Hello Abby." I greeted her. "What's up?"
"We have a problem. The Andilite's saw a Bug Fighter."
"A Bug fighter?" I asked. "Where?"
"No where near here. They saw it in Andilite territory."
"The Yeerks." Hmm... "You think the Yeerks have set up a base somewhere?" I asked.
"Yes. So do the Andilite's. We are hurrying the Zero-Space ship production. It should be ready in three months." Abby said.
"Why did you call me?" I asked.
"We need an expert on the Yeerks." She said.
"Well, I'm not an Expert. Call Marco's mom. Eva. Eva and war prince Allorian."
"The Andilites already contacted him." Abby told me. "But we can't find Eva or Marco. Or Jake. They are all missing."
Why was Eva missing? Oh, yeah. She was out on a vacation. She didn't want to be bothered. So she sneaked away on a private boat. She went to Hawaii.
"She's in Hawaii." I told her. "On Hawaii island. She's on vacation. She didn't want to be bothered but I guess she will help you on this."
"What about Marco and Jake." Abby asked.
"Uh, I don't know where they are." I lied. Sorta. I had no idea where they were. Sooo... Anyway.
"Thanks! Bye." That was brief. But I had to figure....
The Yeerks were must have found a new host species. I wondered what they looked like. If they new about it. Are they fighting back?
I had to wonder. I had an idea. I headed back toward base camp. . . . . .
Jake's POV
She growled. A loud, threatening growl.
You will never get Rachel back. The Yeerk sneered. You. You Jake. You lost her.
She was trying to get at my weak points. I ignored her. Or, the Yeerk. I had to do this. Rachel would understand.
Marco, I said in private thought speak. You circle around to her back. I'll be right here. Tobias, morph Andilite. We need to form a triangle. I knew Tobias didn't want to do this. I didn't take Cassie to figure that out.
He morphed Andilite quickly while we kept Gat-three-one-four-two busy. (Authors note: Don't even think about asking how he knew the Yeerk's name.)
Tobias stepped into the open.
Ahh, so the little girl's lover steps into the open. Gat sneered. Can you do it Tobias? Can you kill Rachel?
. . . . . . .
Tobias's POV
I rushed forward thrashing with my tail wildly. This Yeerk will die. I knew Rachel would want it this way. I thrashed at the Yeerk wildly. Jake and Marco joined. The Yeerk was badly beaten. It started to run. It started to demorph as it ran. We followed. The Yeerk was now fully Rachel now. It hurt, Seeing Rachel and knowing that the real Rachel was inside, screaming. I ran forward and sank my tail blade into her heart.
I cried. Rachel was gone. Again. I cried. Marco and Jake stayed back