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taking your contributions and tips into heavy consideration. I am extremely
sorry that I portrait Anna in such a bad light! I will try and make her
more herself. I portrayed her pretty mean because I wrote the first couple
of chapters when I didn't know much about her. Now she is my 2nd favourite
character and I will portray her as you all want her. I know Yoh would
never say anything bad about Anna, I wrote the chapter when I was feeling
not so good and I kind of put my feelings into my chapter, which was wrong
of me indeed because I disappointed many of you, isn't it? Please send me
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Chapter 8
Amida Maru and Pailong left Anna, Yoh and Jun to talk. They went outside into the garden. Amida Maru was looking very curious and Pailong wanted to know why.
"Amida Maru, are you troubled?" asked Pailong in confusion.
Amida Maru nodded. "I am. I have always wondered why you returned to the Tao's. They did so many bad things to you. You didn't have to go back."
Pailong smiled. "Yes they did many bad things to me indeed, but I learnt to forgive and that was very good. What is done is done, and whether I go back to the Tao's or not will not rewrite history. My life was taken away, not by Master Len or Miss Jun, but by the ancestor. I can not blame them for something they had no hand in."
Amida Maru looked less confused now. "I see, but you could have gone up...and your family would have joined you very soon. I thought you..." he was lost for words.
"I understand what you are saying Amida Maru, but Miss Jun is also like my family. I have to protect Miss Jun because she cares for me very much and I care for her. She is like my little sister. I think it was fate that I was killed and controlled by the Tao's, just so I could guide Miss Jun. She is very kind to me. She was going to take me to my house but..." Pailong looked down in great sorrow.
"What happened?" asked Amida Maru.
"Master Len got to us first before we had a chance to even try to get there. That is why I am so hurt. This was all...no I should not blame this on anyone. I brought it upon myself. If only I had not asked to see my house. This would have never happened." He said in great misery.
They talked and talked, and they did not hear Yoh approach them.
"Hey guys, what's up?" he said in his usual cheerful voice.
"Yoh is it time to go?" asked Amida Maru.
Yoh shook his head. "Nah, Jun has invited us to stay for dinner. She asked if you two can come inside. Just in case Len comes back and sees you and Amida Maru here. Then there would be a real fight." Yoh laughed. Amida Maru nodded and all three of them went inside.
When the entered the room Yoh's eyes lit up as he saw the table outspread with different types of food. Yoh's mouth drooled as he saw everything in large quantities.
"Yoh, I suggest you keep your mouth shut before the flies make their new home in it." Anna said, although she was impressed at the amount of food they had on offer.
Everyone laughed, especially Jun and Pailong. They sat down and started eating. After a while Anna gave up on her 4th plate.
"I don't think I can eat another bite." Said Jun. Pailong laughed.
"Good, then more for me! Can you pass the milk?" smiled Yoh and he ate the contents of her plate and drank a small bottle of Len's milk. Everyone laughed.
"If you don't watch out Yoh, next time we get attacked you'll be too stuffed to move." Joked Amida Maru. Everyone laughed but Yoh was too busy stuffing his face to even notice what he had said.
There was a knock on the door. Jun ran hurriedly to get it. "O, hello, Len. How was training?"
"It was hard work as usual. Are you ok, sister? You look pale." He said putting his stuff in his room.
"Yes, I am fine. So are you going to bed now?" she asked.
"No, I'm going to get some milk."
"Ok." Jun thought hard. What would Len say if he saw Yoh and Amida Maru here...in their house...drinking his milk. Len was about to walk past her into the dining room. She had to think of something to keep him away from there.
"Len! DON'T GO IN THERE!" she shouted. Len turned around in confusion, wondering what was going on.
"And why not?" he asked. She thought hard. She had to say something which wouldn't make him suspicious. Then an idea hit her like a bolt of lightening.
"You must be tired from your hard day at training. Let me get it for you. Just go to your room and I will bring it to you very soon." Len stared at her for a moment then agreed. He lay on his bed waiting for his milk to be brought to him.
Jun tried to rush Yoh, Anna and Amida Maru out the door and on their way home. They managed to get through the front door without Len coming out to check what she was doing. Len started to get impatient and went to check what his sister was doing. He saw the mass number of plates and wondered whether Jun just had some friends over for dinner and she didn't want him to meet them. But then Jun hadn't a lot of friends so that made him doubt his sister. Len then saw the front door opened and heard many voices. He trailed after them and was very surprised to see the very person he wanted to fight.
"Well, well, well, what do we have here? Yoh and Amida Maru, the friendly ghost. Funny running into you at my own house." He turned to Jun. "So you were planning on letting Yoh get away without me having a little game with him? No matter, the day is not done. Get ready, Yoh Asakura, because its time to end this!" he said.
"Great! A battle! Maybe I can work off some of the Calories I just put on," he joked.
They stood, facing each other looking ready to charge.
"Get ready Yoh, he seems to have gotten stronger." Cautioned Amida Maru.
"Uh huh. Don't worry Amida Maru, I am ready." A smile crept onto Yoh's face. He'd been waiting until the day he fought Len again.
End of Chapter 8
I hope you all like mi ficci. Thank you for all your reviews. Reviews make me feel a lot better. I do not want people to be misunderstood. I know some of you are just trying to give me advice. Thank you all. I'd like to say thank you to Chaos control (nice to see you like shadow too), flashpichu, bOw-doWn-tO-KeiKO, X37, Lilz, jade Chan, Itako No Anna Asakura, and Jun Tao for the great reviews you gave me.
Chapter 8
Amida Maru and Pailong left Anna, Yoh and Jun to talk. They went outside into the garden. Amida Maru was looking very curious and Pailong wanted to know why.
"Amida Maru, are you troubled?" asked Pailong in confusion.
Amida Maru nodded. "I am. I have always wondered why you returned to the Tao's. They did so many bad things to you. You didn't have to go back."
Pailong smiled. "Yes they did many bad things to me indeed, but I learnt to forgive and that was very good. What is done is done, and whether I go back to the Tao's or not will not rewrite history. My life was taken away, not by Master Len or Miss Jun, but by the ancestor. I can not blame them for something they had no hand in."
Amida Maru looked less confused now. "I see, but you could have gone up...and your family would have joined you very soon. I thought you..." he was lost for words.
"I understand what you are saying Amida Maru, but Miss Jun is also like my family. I have to protect Miss Jun because she cares for me very much and I care for her. She is like my little sister. I think it was fate that I was killed and controlled by the Tao's, just so I could guide Miss Jun. She is very kind to me. She was going to take me to my house but..." Pailong looked down in great sorrow.
"What happened?" asked Amida Maru.
"Master Len got to us first before we had a chance to even try to get there. That is why I am so hurt. This was all...no I should not blame this on anyone. I brought it upon myself. If only I had not asked to see my house. This would have never happened." He said in great misery.
They talked and talked, and they did not hear Yoh approach them.
"Hey guys, what's up?" he said in his usual cheerful voice.
"Yoh is it time to go?" asked Amida Maru.
Yoh shook his head. "Nah, Jun has invited us to stay for dinner. She asked if you two can come inside. Just in case Len comes back and sees you and Amida Maru here. Then there would be a real fight." Yoh laughed. Amida Maru nodded and all three of them went inside.
When the entered the room Yoh's eyes lit up as he saw the table outspread with different types of food. Yoh's mouth drooled as he saw everything in large quantities.
"Yoh, I suggest you keep your mouth shut before the flies make their new home in it." Anna said, although she was impressed at the amount of food they had on offer.
Everyone laughed, especially Jun and Pailong. They sat down and started eating. After a while Anna gave up on her 4th plate.
"I don't think I can eat another bite." Said Jun. Pailong laughed.
"Good, then more for me! Can you pass the milk?" smiled Yoh and he ate the contents of her plate and drank a small bottle of Len's milk. Everyone laughed.
"If you don't watch out Yoh, next time we get attacked you'll be too stuffed to move." Joked Amida Maru. Everyone laughed but Yoh was too busy stuffing his face to even notice what he had said.
There was a knock on the door. Jun ran hurriedly to get it. "O, hello, Len. How was training?"
"It was hard work as usual. Are you ok, sister? You look pale." He said putting his stuff in his room.
"Yes, I am fine. So are you going to bed now?" she asked.
"No, I'm going to get some milk."
"Ok." Jun thought hard. What would Len say if he saw Yoh and Amida Maru here...in their house...drinking his milk. Len was about to walk past her into the dining room. She had to think of something to keep him away from there.
"Len! DON'T GO IN THERE!" she shouted. Len turned around in confusion, wondering what was going on.
"And why not?" he asked. She thought hard. She had to say something which wouldn't make him suspicious. Then an idea hit her like a bolt of lightening.
"You must be tired from your hard day at training. Let me get it for you. Just go to your room and I will bring it to you very soon." Len stared at her for a moment then agreed. He lay on his bed waiting for his milk to be brought to him.
Jun tried to rush Yoh, Anna and Amida Maru out the door and on their way home. They managed to get through the front door without Len coming out to check what she was doing. Len started to get impatient and went to check what his sister was doing. He saw the mass number of plates and wondered whether Jun just had some friends over for dinner and she didn't want him to meet them. But then Jun hadn't a lot of friends so that made him doubt his sister. Len then saw the front door opened and heard many voices. He trailed after them and was very surprised to see the very person he wanted to fight.
"Well, well, well, what do we have here? Yoh and Amida Maru, the friendly ghost. Funny running into you at my own house." He turned to Jun. "So you were planning on letting Yoh get away without me having a little game with him? No matter, the day is not done. Get ready, Yoh Asakura, because its time to end this!" he said.
"Great! A battle! Maybe I can work off some of the Calories I just put on," he joked.
They stood, facing each other looking ready to charge.
"Get ready Yoh, he seems to have gotten stronger." Cautioned Amida Maru.
"Uh huh. Don't worry Amida Maru, I am ready." A smile crept onto Yoh's face. He'd been waiting until the day he fought Len again.
End of Chapter 8
I hope you all like mi ficci. Thank you for all your reviews. Reviews make me feel a lot better. I do not want people to be misunderstood. I know some of you are just trying to give me advice. Thank you all. I'd like to say thank you to Chaos control (nice to see you like shadow too), flashpichu, bOw-doWn-tO-KeiKO, X37, Lilz, jade Chan, Itako No Anna Asakura, and Jun Tao for the great reviews you gave me.