Ok, I wasn't planning on writing another one but seeing as I actually got reviews for my first one I though I might try writing another one. Ah well suffer through it if ya dare.
I wonder, I wonder as I sit here and gaze upon your perfect face, if someday, somewhere, I will have the strength, the bravery, to confess my feelings to you. I mask how I truly feel, how when you and I are apart you're all I can think of. And I wonder if I'm destined to be apart from you forever, because you deserve someone better, you are more than I could ever be. You're always there, happy and cheerful. I never know what to say to you. Every time your around I realise just how much better you are than me. I long every time you're around to run to you, pick you up and kiss you, hold you for all eternity. But instead I'm too afraid to tell you, and so I'm here, I write down how I feel, stuck writing, never to hold, and I hope that someday, I can tell you - that I Love You.
Review Responses
Total-Otaku - Thanks, and ya im gonna beat him though
funny man - not quite sure what ya meant there?
Kit Wilson - thanks, and no, you never take up my time telling me I did a good job
sesshygirl3 - nice to hear that, im sure your good at poetry too at least in comparison to this stuff, oh and I will read your stories when I have time, prolly not for a while sorry :(
Flaming Soul - will do and thanks
Myriadragon - its in my nature - self hating artist - I don't deserve to weald a pen, somebody stop me now
Anyway thanks for reading it If I get people who like this one too I may try to do some others. So lemme know
Ja ne
- Junepi