Jezrianna: 1)It was either that, or bring along a star ship, which isn't suited for road trips. 2) A touch unkindly said dear lady. It's not my fault the lawn fixture never updates the profiles. I do know the difference, but my girlfriends have been interested in neither. Most were only around to make someone else jealous. As for Adam, he's... not a good representative of me. The others all took to heart the memories, this one picked out what he wanted to believe, and tossed the rest. As for 'making love', and 'fucking' he doesn't make a distinction, and it taints what he does, and the way he does it. As for sticking around, that's something they all share. They don't walk away if a responsibility is there. Part of the reason for his internal protections. He doesn't want one where as the others enjoy those responsibilties. I'll admit, some of it did come from that part of my mind that I don't usually let loose. Why it did here, I can't say, but... In any case, it's usually him throwing himself at them. I know from experience, that doesn't always work. 3)She didn't regret it, but was disappointed that he built up to it, and then didn't deliver. 4)I knew you would.
The difference in style, is because it has to flow in a certain rythym, or else it just falls apart, and shatters the mood. The same way as a fight scene. And it was supposed to be freezing, not zero. True though, I'll re-write that a bit.
Thanks to all the rest of my reviewers for your comments, and compliments. I hope to see you all in the sequel.
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The next story will be entitled Road Trip, and pick up shortly after this one ends, following the graduation from high school of the younger three, and into new enterprises, as well as a stepping up in strength of the villians they face. Can they handle it? And without killing each other? Who knows, but really isn't wondering half the fun?