This was ALSO redone...to make things more clear.

A/N OMG!! you really like me!! ::tear:: I'm so happy!!!. Thank you to the Wonderful Reviewers:

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now (as in this Chapter) have Microsoft Word on this Computer so...I

have been Using WordPad and I cant spell worth crap! hee

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she just about the best you can get! She's gunna help me from Chapter

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You guys are wonderful! Anywho here is the story...

And if you don't get it Carr fell ASLEEP so her dream was a flashback...heh! ill make that clear!

(added 10/30/04) Maggie is no longer my beta/co writer...she's working on her own stuff now...but that's ok once again im redoing a lot of stuff trying to make it more clear and a better read to all.

Chapter 2- Flashbacks

Recap-

And With that Carr laid her Head down and Fell asleep.

Carr's Flashback

(Back in New York, 6:00pm)

"Momma! I'm goin' to Shay's Pick me up at 12 a'ight?" Carr

grabbed her coat and headed for the door.

"Ok dear have fun! And NO DRU-"Carr slammed the door, ignoring her mothers warnings, signifying she had left. It's not that she didn't care what her mom said, it was just the fact that she had been saying it for over a year now, after she turned 14 and hanged out with Shay, one of the most popular, beautiful black women... well Teenager, in all of Manhattan...at least in Carr's opinion.

She ran down the dim streets of Manhattan, cut through damp ally ways, jumped fences and trespassed property, till she finally got to her destination, Shay's house. Actually it was more of a run down apartment complex. Gently knocked on the door. Some rather large shuffling and a "alright I'm comin'! was heard when Shay opened the door.

"Oh! Hey Guh! You're early! Come on in" Shay laughed and added softly "Iif you wanna call this in..." She smiled.

"Shay! I heard that! I work very hard-"

"To keep this place runnin' and food on the table. I know, I know Ma..." The two girls giggled. "Ok. hold on guh, I need a little more time to get myself lookin' bootylishous! " Carr chucked at her friend's comment. Shay ran or you could say, took a few steps and turned really fast, into her room.

Bang, shuffle, crack, break

"Damn!"

"What's the matter Shay?" yelled Carr.

"Oh nothing just a piece uh glass" Shay opened the door revealing herself in a glittering purple tank top and a black mini skirt with silver sequence making it shine even in the dim light.

"Hey!! You haven't shown me YOUR outfit!! You've been hiding it

under that long coat of yours!!"

"Huh? Oh! ok!" Carr took off her jacket and the site just made Shay's mouth drop open. Carr was wearing a Green spaghetti string halter top and tight leather pants revealing her curves perfectly.

"What? Is there a spot?"(A/N ahaha typical) Carr looked at her top frantically.

"No." Shay replied simply in awe of her best friend.

"Alright then. If your ready lets go to that club of yours and shake some ass!!" Carr grabbed Shay's hand and dragged her out the door, laughter filled the air.

End Flashback

Back in reality

"Hey Carr...Carr" Lilly shook Carr in attempt to awake her.

James turned to look at Carr, who was already in her school robes. "She must be really tired. She's in her robes so no need to wake her up now"

"Alright then..." Lily smiled watching her friend sleep then turned her attention back to James and the others who were having a rather vigorous conversation of their pranks for the year. Carr still laid asleep on the couch dreaming of her past. She turned over moaning inaudibly to her friends.

Flashback

12:30 at Shay's House

"Yo, Carr, Where's your mom?" Shay commented.

"I dunno." Carr whispered and walked outside onto the front porch.

1:30

Carr ran home through the alleys and the fences with tears

staining her face. She knew her mom was out with her probable stepfather, but she never really thought that her mom would forget about her, about picking her up, she never had before...

She reached her home, at about 1:55, unlocked the door and stepped in. She closed her eyes, her breath ragged and short. She took a moment to compose herself before she yelled.

"Mom? You home?" After no response a smile crawled onto her face "she must have remembered to come get me and left, I'll just wait up for her," Carr flopped onto the ragged old couch and groped for the remote control she knew was somewhere on the couch, found it and flipped on the 2 o'clock news

"Welcome to the 2 o'clock news. I'm Shannon Barron. Around 12 tonight, A woman who was driving a 1960's Corvette is dead after an accident with a eighteen wheeler. Doctors say that the woman was killed instantly from severe impact to the head and had not suffered any pain. Police have identified the Woman as 40 year old Eliza Storms. We go now to Charles Lewis for the story."

Carr looked at the Television in disbelief, this couldn't be my mom, it...it cant be...she..she.." Tears silently fell down her cheeks. "NO I WON'T BELIEVE IT DAMNIT! IS THIS SOME FUCKING JOKE?! MY MOM ISN'T DEAD! She Can't Be!" she cried out desperatel, spasms wrenched her body with sobs trying to reason with herself that it wasn't her mom...Until they showed her moms picture on the screen.

In reality

"NOOOOO!! Carr fell from her seat screaming, hitting her head on the floor.

"CARR!!" Yelled Lilly who, was now on the other side of the compartment, ran over to her. Carr was breaking in a cold sweat, and blood seeping onto the floor, from her head. "Someone help her!!!!"

A/n ak!! I KNOW I KNOW BAD PLACE TO END!!!

So anywho please forgive me...and thanks to everyone!! Hope

you liked the little bit of what it is!!! And I hope I made it more clear!

(10/30/04)

I hope it is a little better now... I tried to make it a little more dramatic and less...immature so to speak...so I hope it is an improvement!

GoD