HELLO ALL!! This is Ravell! You know, the beta reader/ co-writer?
Anyways, your splendidly talented writer, Kane, is on vacation,
Specifically a road trip practically all over the US (literally, if you
Didn't read what she said.) And. Well. she has camp, so I'm sorry
about it all. But she'll be back next month! (It shouldn't be much of
a shock) Meanwhile I'll be writing from here on till she gets back! Which
Will be pretty slow because she needs to check what I write. That takes a
While. Back to the story:
********Lily and the Marauders ********
Lily looked worriedly at Carr, hesitating, then left the room without a word.
-Carr, please get better, you're my best friend, but you don't even know who I am.- Lily thought quietly on the verge of tears.
She stopped and leaned on the wall. Carr was her only friend but now she doesn't even remember her. She tipped her head back and sighed, staring up at the blank ceiling.
Lily drifted off into her own world until she heard Madam Pomfrey's heavy footsteps by the door. She snapped, gasping, and ran into the nearest room as she closed the door quietly and waited for Madam Pomfrey to leave. She breathed heavily, cheeks burning, then poked her head out when the sounds of her footsteps were gone. -I have to see how Carr was doing- Lily whispered quietly to herself.
She tiptoed back to Carr's room and struggled as she put her ear up to the door. She could hear Dumbledor talking to Carr about something.
".mom's dead. I'm so sorry."
"WHAT?! NO WAY!" Carr exploded. "You've got to be kidding me. You really think I believe all that crap?!" Carr sounded pretty desperate. "I HATE YOU! YOU DID IT, DIDN'T YOU?! And that girl. WHO IS SHE? SOME GOODY-GOODY WHO THINKS SHE CAN INVADE MY PRIVACY??"
Lily was shocked, she was so hurt. All she wanted to do was make Carr feel better. If she knew that Carr would. Dumbledor started talking again.
"No, calm down Carr, it's all right. Lily's there to help you, and your mom was in a car wreck."
"NO! It's NOT okay!"
"Listen.I'll let you off for this year so you can find out who you are on your own. But by the end of this year before you leave, I'll cast a remembrance spell on you. Is THAT ok?"
The room was silent. Lily couldn't hear anything after that. but she could tell by Dumbledor's relieved voice that Carr must have agreed.
What is she supposed to do, be happy? There was no way she could smile or laugh again. Not without Carr. Not when Carr seems to hate her right now. Lily walked sadly out of the hospital wing and made her way to the common room. She climbed slowly, maybe one step per minute. It was tiring and her legs already ached by the time she made it all the way upstairs to greet the fat lady.
"What are you doing, Lily? You should be downstairs! It's lunch time! Go! Hurry up! You don't have all day you know!"
Lily groaned. Damn it, she just HAD to walk all this way. She just HAD to take so damn long.
"I'm sorry to disturb you." She replied miserably.
Actually she was NOT sorry. She was NOT walking back downstairs. Lily stopped.
"Well you know what??!! TOO. FREAKIN. BAD. I DON'T CARE. I CAN STARVE AND NO ONE WOULD KNOW, WHY WOULD THEY?"
-Why should they care.- she thought.
The fat lady just pursed her lips and shut up. Lily sat down stubbornly, arms crossed. Just then, she realized she was really hungry. But she couldn't go back.
She looked down and saw four guys walking upstairs hurriedly- It was James, Sirius, Remus, and Peter.
"Hey Lily!" James smiled sweetly, "We were wondering where you were, so we brought our lunches to look for you! Wow, you look awfully pale, are you hungry?"
Lily nodded, she couldn't help it. She took the sandwich gratefully and wolfed it down. The marauders laughed.
-Great. Being laughed at by four stupid pimps. How degrading.- she ate and thought.
"Hey, what's with the sad face?" Sirius asked.
Lily finished her sandwich and sniffed. "Carr." she replied, and she looked down. She didn't want them seeing her cry. Not them.
"Who? Carr? Who's that?" Sirius puzzled over this.
Lily was confused, "CARR! My FRIEND! The GIRL you guys MET on the TRAIN!" she practically screamed at them.
They looked blankly at her. It was obvious. They don't even remember her. They're PIMPS. Why didn't she see it coming? All they care about is getting what they WANT and living up to their "reputation", which is to fuck every single girl in the school. And Carr and Lily were the only ones left.
"Ah. er. oh RIGHT! Carr! Yeah! Sure we remember! Why wouldn't we?" they all joined in and tried to laugh it off. All except for Sirius.
James then looked seriously at Lily.
"Well. I'm really sorry about Carr. You miss her a lot. I understand."
He looked like he really meant it. He reached over and put his arms lightly around Lily to give her a hug. Lily began to cry again. James tried to rub away the tears from her cheeks. Sirius and Remus elbowed each other.
"Oooooooooooooooohhhhhh."
Lily and James blushed shyly, but by then Lily already realized what she had just done. Her cheeks turned darker as she got angrier.
"DAMNIT! GET AWAY! LEAVE ME ALONE!" She pushed James into the others crossly. Sirius jeered.
"Aww. Potter rejection. AGAIN."
"SHUTUP, BLACK! THIS ISN'T THE TIME." James shot back violently. He turned to Lily again, "Lily, what's-"
"Don't TALK to me. EVER. AGAIN. I DON'T EVER WANT YOU OR YOUR FRIENDS COMING NEAR ME."
"Lily. please." James's glasses fogged.
Lily was torn. She couldn't turn back. Not for those marauders. They forgot about her best friend. They were PIMPS. Just then people started to appear in the halls one by one to walk back to their dorms. Lily hurried to get away from James and held on to the staircase for support, it was too hard to walk. Little black dots were flashing in front of her.
~Written By RAVELL (the co-writer)~ Hope you guys liked it! Enjoy!
********************************************** PLEASE REVIEW! It will be really REALLY appreciated if you REVIEW! BTW, EVERYBODY CHEER FOR KANE! SHE CALLED ME AND TOLD ME SHE WAS GOING TO CALL HER BF!! OOOOOOOOOHHHH. THEY'RE SO SWEET ( ::tear::
********Lily and the Marauders ********
Lily looked worriedly at Carr, hesitating, then left the room without a word.
-Carr, please get better, you're my best friend, but you don't even know who I am.- Lily thought quietly on the verge of tears.
She stopped and leaned on the wall. Carr was her only friend but now she doesn't even remember her. She tipped her head back and sighed, staring up at the blank ceiling.
Lily drifted off into her own world until she heard Madam Pomfrey's heavy footsteps by the door. She snapped, gasping, and ran into the nearest room as she closed the door quietly and waited for Madam Pomfrey to leave. She breathed heavily, cheeks burning, then poked her head out when the sounds of her footsteps were gone. -I have to see how Carr was doing- Lily whispered quietly to herself.
She tiptoed back to Carr's room and struggled as she put her ear up to the door. She could hear Dumbledor talking to Carr about something.
".mom's dead. I'm so sorry."
"WHAT?! NO WAY!" Carr exploded. "You've got to be kidding me. You really think I believe all that crap?!" Carr sounded pretty desperate. "I HATE YOU! YOU DID IT, DIDN'T YOU?! And that girl. WHO IS SHE? SOME GOODY-GOODY WHO THINKS SHE CAN INVADE MY PRIVACY??"
Lily was shocked, she was so hurt. All she wanted to do was make Carr feel better. If she knew that Carr would. Dumbledor started talking again.
"No, calm down Carr, it's all right. Lily's there to help you, and your mom was in a car wreck."
"NO! It's NOT okay!"
"Listen.I'll let you off for this year so you can find out who you are on your own. But by the end of this year before you leave, I'll cast a remembrance spell on you. Is THAT ok?"
The room was silent. Lily couldn't hear anything after that. but she could tell by Dumbledor's relieved voice that Carr must have agreed.
What is she supposed to do, be happy? There was no way she could smile or laugh again. Not without Carr. Not when Carr seems to hate her right now. Lily walked sadly out of the hospital wing and made her way to the common room. She climbed slowly, maybe one step per minute. It was tiring and her legs already ached by the time she made it all the way upstairs to greet the fat lady.
"What are you doing, Lily? You should be downstairs! It's lunch time! Go! Hurry up! You don't have all day you know!"
Lily groaned. Damn it, she just HAD to walk all this way. She just HAD to take so damn long.
"I'm sorry to disturb you." She replied miserably.
Actually she was NOT sorry. She was NOT walking back downstairs. Lily stopped.
"Well you know what??!! TOO. FREAKIN. BAD. I DON'T CARE. I CAN STARVE AND NO ONE WOULD KNOW, WHY WOULD THEY?"
-Why should they care.- she thought.
The fat lady just pursed her lips and shut up. Lily sat down stubbornly, arms crossed. Just then, she realized she was really hungry. But she couldn't go back.
She looked down and saw four guys walking upstairs hurriedly- It was James, Sirius, Remus, and Peter.
"Hey Lily!" James smiled sweetly, "We were wondering where you were, so we brought our lunches to look for you! Wow, you look awfully pale, are you hungry?"
Lily nodded, she couldn't help it. She took the sandwich gratefully and wolfed it down. The marauders laughed.
-Great. Being laughed at by four stupid pimps. How degrading.- she ate and thought.
"Hey, what's with the sad face?" Sirius asked.
Lily finished her sandwich and sniffed. "Carr." she replied, and she looked down. She didn't want them seeing her cry. Not them.
"Who? Carr? Who's that?" Sirius puzzled over this.
Lily was confused, "CARR! My FRIEND! The GIRL you guys MET on the TRAIN!" she practically screamed at them.
They looked blankly at her. It was obvious. They don't even remember her. They're PIMPS. Why didn't she see it coming? All they care about is getting what they WANT and living up to their "reputation", which is to fuck every single girl in the school. And Carr and Lily were the only ones left.
"Ah. er. oh RIGHT! Carr! Yeah! Sure we remember! Why wouldn't we?" they all joined in and tried to laugh it off. All except for Sirius.
James then looked seriously at Lily.
"Well. I'm really sorry about Carr. You miss her a lot. I understand."
He looked like he really meant it. He reached over and put his arms lightly around Lily to give her a hug. Lily began to cry again. James tried to rub away the tears from her cheeks. Sirius and Remus elbowed each other.
"Oooooooooooooooohhhhhh."
Lily and James blushed shyly, but by then Lily already realized what she had just done. Her cheeks turned darker as she got angrier.
"DAMNIT! GET AWAY! LEAVE ME ALONE!" She pushed James into the others crossly. Sirius jeered.
"Aww. Potter rejection. AGAIN."
"SHUTUP, BLACK! THIS ISN'T THE TIME." James shot back violently. He turned to Lily again, "Lily, what's-"
"Don't TALK to me. EVER. AGAIN. I DON'T EVER WANT YOU OR YOUR FRIENDS COMING NEAR ME."
"Lily. please." James's glasses fogged.
Lily was torn. She couldn't turn back. Not for those marauders. They forgot about her best friend. They were PIMPS. Just then people started to appear in the halls one by one to walk back to their dorms. Lily hurried to get away from James and held on to the staircase for support, it was too hard to walk. Little black dots were flashing in front of her.
~Written By RAVELL (the co-writer)~ Hope you guys liked it! Enjoy!
********************************************** PLEASE REVIEW! It will be really REALLY appreciated if you REVIEW! BTW, EVERYBODY CHEER FOR KANE! SHE CALLED ME AND TOLD ME SHE WAS GOING TO CALL HER BF!! OOOOOOOOOHHHH. THEY'RE SO SWEET ( ::tear::