I don't own Gundam Wing.
A/N: Jenihenpen. pUnK-RoCk's Sk8ter chic. devylzangyl. Neko. Hollis. Mitai. Satani-Purple-Onion.
Ie most of the people who have reviewed the latest chapter. Usually you'd have seen me writing your names before a reply to your review. As you can see there're no replies. Because you didn't submit reviews. You submitted votes when not asked to do so.
Now it might have came as much and upon rereading my little rant at the end it sure seems as though I'm asking for you people to let me know the couples you wanna see in the fic. I'm too lazy to change it, all I'm saying is that if that's the kind of review you have to give me… don't review me at all.
I find no value to these reviews whatsoever as they haven't mentioned a SINGLE aspect of the fic other than the couples in it, no, rather, the couples you want to see here.
First let me say that I mean you no disrespect, but I'm not an author who writes according to what the readers want. If I'll end up turning this into a Duo x Zechs, personally, there isn't anything any of you could say to stop me :o I'll write it no matter how many of you review and e-mail me and yell "BUT HE'S HEERO'S!" at me. You want Duo x Heero, there're tons of other fics out there to read. This is my fic and therefore mine to do with as I please.
Now the point of my rant.
I'm not pissed off you wrote what you want to see in the fic.
I'm not pissed off you wrote your reasons for hating the couplestripltes and treated them as absolute truths.
I'm not even pissed off at the slight air of threat I got from several reviews.
I AM pissed off, however, that other than the couples and tripltes… you people gave me no feedback about the fic. It's the same to me as receiving no reviews at all. Because you didn't even say stuff like "this fic is great I love it" or "this fic sucks yuck". I'd have appreciated slightly more in-depth reviews but at least then I know they actually read this fic seriously enough to have such an opinion.
Now. Why aren't ALL the people who reviewed mentioned?
rosethorn bloodlust was kind enough to reflect upon the fic when considering her answer. She took into consideration that Trowa must've done something horrible and therefore doesn't deserve anyone, and said it'd be nice to see Wufei get the guy cuz then it'd be somewhat original. A review showing me she actually read this fic and paid attention. I thank you from the bottom of my heart.
slytherin dragungurl was kind enough as to add "please" before putting in her choice. That instantly gives her points for at least being polite and taking into consideration the author's likings and personal views and the fact the author's a human being who doesn't only write what other people want her to. Also she was as kind as to let me know she loves this story and while I said these aren't my favorite reviews, they're hardly resented. Thank you, girl. Love ya too.
SuperSonicRhi had the decency of adding the little 'good story btw' at the end.
Susanna made me feel much better about this fic since it made her like a couple in it. But still, girl. I mean, TrowaQuatre… o.o; they're more official than what the people there tried to make Heero/Relena to be. Oh well, just because it's there doesn't mean you have to like it shrugs
And Ari, like rosethorn bloodlust gave the fic's plot weight when putting in her decision. God bless you.
And now if you're still reading, hf.
One Little Mistake
Chapter 7 – Overdue Conversations
The sunset was as spectacular as always. However, Chang Wufei missed most of it. His mind kept returning to his blond lover back at what the five of them managed to call 'home'.
"Think of anyone in particular?"
Sally asked as she sat down next to him.
"If this is why you asked me to come over…"
She smiled softly.
"I'm sorry. I'm being rude."
"No you're not."
The doctor had to raise an eyebrow.
"Oh?"
"You're being a woman."
She laughed heartily, and to her surprise, found that Wufei was half smiling as well.
"My, this sure is a nice surprise. It's not often that I get to see you wearing a smile."
"Anything wrong with that?"
The protective tone was more like the Wufei she knew. Her smile deepened.
"No, just different. In a good way."
He closed up again, staring at the setting sun.
"So, I suppose I have Duo to thank for the rare treat?"
Ever since that one joint mission the two were on in which she crossed paths with them, she knew something deeper than friendship was abound between the two long haired Gundam pilots. She didn't try to understand them and certainly did not judge or criticize them.
Heroes had the right to fall in love with whoever they deemed fit.
"Actually…"
"Yes?"
"Maxwell and I… parted ways… in a way… several months ago."
She missed the slightest of blushes which rose to his cheeks, and chose to ignore the bitterness in his voice.
To her credit, she didn't show any signs of shock to be understood as weakness.
"I'm sorry."
"I'm not. Yuy and him… they get along well. It's better this way."
"So why the smile?"
The Chinese boy's smile deepened and his eyes got a distant, almost longing look to them. He whispered something which at first she didn't hear, but then he repeated it, much louder this time.
"Quatre."
Balink.
"Quatre? Winner?! Quatre Winner?!"
"Yes."
"But… he seemed so much closer to Trowa…"
At the mention of the brunette's name, Wufei's face darkened.
"Seemed. Past tense."
"I… I see. So. That's why you're so happy."
"That is none of your business. But since you won't leave me until I answer… I am."
She chuckled before putting on a rather concerned expression.
"But… is he?"
The glare he gave her was priceless.
'Is he really in-love?'
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"Um, Duo?"
"Hm?"
"Where are you taking me?"
Quatre asked, utterly confused. After dinner Duo had asked to talk to him and ever since then, the braided boy never stopped chattering. Now, the American was leading the Arab to the basement.
"The basement."
"Why?"
"Because I really want to show you something."
"Ok…"
They went down the last flight of stairs, and the sight made the blond glare at his friend. He then turned to leave, but was stopped.
"Wait, Quatre, you still haven't seen it!"
"Duo…"
Trowa and Heero were there, obviously to see 'the thing'.
"Now, Hee-chan, let's just go get that thing so we can show them the thing with the thing thing."
With a nod, Heero followed the braided one out, leaving the other two behind. Then they heard the lock click in a very unhealthy way.
"Um, Duo?"
Heero asked, on the better side of the door.
"The lock's stuck."
The silent one of the two raised an eyebrow, obviously not buying it.
"No, I mean it! It's really stuck!"
Heero slapped his forehead as he watched Duo try to put the lock back together.
"I swear it's much easier picking it apart… sorry, Q-man! We'll get someone to open this door in no time! You and Tro just stay cool!"
"Duo!"
"No worries, Q! Well, I think there're some blankets there. Ok? Ok. Bye!"
Dragging Heero away, Duo left his friends locked in the basement.
"Duo, you broke the lock on purpose."
"…not really…"
Heero blinked.
"You mean it really is broken?"
Duo smirked.
"It's a sign from above, I tell you."
"I thought you didn't believe in God."
"Eh, everyone deserves a second chance. Besides, those two need to talk to each other without Wuffers for Q to run to."
"Wuffers?"
"Huh?"
"You said… 'Wuffers'."
Heero said with growing worry.
"Did not."
"You just did."
"I… did?"
Sighing, the Japanese shook his head.
"I guess I'm just overstressed. I'm not good with this sort of thing."
That earned him a peck on the cheek from the self appointed Shinigami.
"Oh, Hee-chan, you know, you're so cute when dealing with emotions. That clueless look suits you real well."
"Wanna see something else I'm good at?"
"Oh, Hee-chan…"
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It took him about five minutes, but eventually Quatre gave up on the door, and limped back downstairs.
"Told you not to kick it."
The blond just sat down and rubbed his leg.
"How long do you think it'll take for them to get us out of here."
"A lot. But they mean well."
"…I suppose."
"…let me."
Trowa kneeled next to Quatre and gently touched the sore spot, causing Quatre to grimce.
"This is more than just today. You kicked anything else, lately?"
Truth was, he had. That night the mess started. He just had to vent. It hurt, but Wufei was right. Hitting other things sure helped.
'Wufei…'
Trowa caught the longing look in Quatre's eyes, but chose to ignore and simply concentrated on making Quatre feel better.
"…Thanks."
"No problem."
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"What do you mean by that, woman?"
Wufei asked through gritted teeth. Sally just smiled.
"Oh, I'm sure he is. He has to be, if you're so devoted to him."
"…You think so?"
"I know so."
The Chinese boy fell silent, deep in thought.
"We better get some rest so we could head out early tomorrow. We do have to send you back to that cute blond of yours."
She stood up, stretching.
"Sally?"
"Hm?"
"…thank you."
"No problem."
'Quatre, just you wait. I'll be back soon. Just… stay away from Barton. Please.'
And he went to sleep, troubled.
