not one review yet...even flames...oh well!im so stubborn,that im gonna keep writing!oky-doky!on with my story!
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chappie 3_Escaping_Plans_Lead_to_Pain_
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Kurama just stared for a few moments when I didn't answer,then he walked away from me to join some miscellaneous chit-chat. I felt nervous,and very out of place. I didn't know what to do,or who to talk to,or anything. I decided going for a walk,or just plainly going outside,would be the best thing at the moment. "Ummmm....Excuse me?" As soon as my voice came out,it seemed as if all motion occuring at the time,had completely stopped.
"Yeah?",said Yusuke in a questioning voice,even accusing,or maybe I was just paranoyed,I couldn't tell. I fidgeted for a few seconds,quickly regained my thought,and popped the question that I had desperatly wanted since I had entered the room.
"May I go outside,or take a walk,or something?Please?"
"Oh,..."Botan stammered abit."I don't know if Koenma would want us to let you out alone.Many rumors are flying around Makai.It might not be safe,its not that we want to keep you locked up,you just need an escourt." I stared at her.An escourt?
Why would I need an escourt?Are they afraid that a wondering demon was gonna try to kill a dead girl?Kurama noticed my reaction again,and tried to explain,
"You see,demons are always,whats a good word,greedy." I shook my head,implying for him to continue,hoping there was more to it than just that,and he took the hint.
"Many would think your immortal,a perfect weapon,one that could not be broken,or knocked out of existence,yet still being
able to cause damage.They would try to kid-nap,and force you into fighting for them,yet from seeing you be knocked out,we realize you can be hurt."
I nodded in agreement for the second time,and looked off to the side with a sad,pouty,expression.
"Oh,dear,please don't be like that," I cut her off.
"QUIT CALLING ME DEAR!WHAT IS IT WITH YOU AND 'DEAR'!I'M NOT AN ANIMAL!"
She looked at me with round,hurt eyes,and I had just realized how hurtful my out-burst was.
"I'm sorry Botan!I just....don't know what I was thinking...."
"No,your right.I need to call you by your name,we're practically keeping you prisoner...I have no right to call you by a
pet-name."
"Your just looking after me,I shouldn't be so cruel,ya'll don't even know me,yet ya'll are trying to protect me..."
I whinced at guilt,I had no right to be yelling at them. I gathered myself and retreated to the room I had awoken in.
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*10 min. later*
I lay spread out on the matress I was sleeping in not too much earlier. I tear glided down my cheek and onto the cushiony
pillow that rested under my head. I had lain sidways,just staring at the blue canopy that stretched over the poles of the bed.
'I need to get out of here,I've only been here for such a short time,and I already dispised it for some odd reason'
"D*** it.." I cursed aloud."What am I supposed to do to get out of this wannabe hell hole?" Then my eyes drifted to the balcony. My body shook at the idea that floated in my head. "To jump,or not to jump?Jump!Hell yeah!" I scurried out of the bed,and onto the balcony. It was beautiful. The sun was just starting to set,and the golden railing shimmered. I stared,lost in thought and awe,but just for a few seconds. I slowly approached the edge,inch by inch,and grasped the railing for dear life.
*gulp* I looked over the top of the golden railing,a hard thing for a short person to do,and grimaced at the thought of the long drop as I hardly realized that the things that looked like ants,were trees.
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*30 or so min. later*
'Ok.I'm really gonna do it this time.' After,like,20 attempts to jump,I was getting tired. I climbed on the rail,and sat on it horse-style. I closed my eyes,and slowly balanced myself where I could stand,at least. I opened my eyes and mentally congragelated myself for not falling to my...2cond death! I stood there motionless,just happy to be there,for it gave me,a wierd and calming feeling. I took a DEEP breath,getting ready to jump,when all of a sudden,
"RAIKO!What are you doing!" A very panicked Botan screamed.
"Huh?!?"
At the sudden jolt of surprise,I lost my much needed balance. My foot slipped,and I was sent over the side to a definately life threating fall.
"EPPP!AAHHHH!HUH?WHOA!"
The loose skirt I was wearing caught onto the railing,and,was RIPPING!Botan raced out to the balcony.She held out a really tempting hand.I was on the absolute VERGE of grabbing it,but then I remembered the object of what I was doing,escape.
"Sorry Botan!" I screamed out. I grabbed the loose skirt,and ripped it completely off. My panties were completely showing but I didn't care,I let out a high-pitch scream as I went tumbling and turning through the air. I expected my horrid and frightning fall to never end,but,to my relief,it didn't. I crashed harshly into a HUGE tree. It had huge berries hidden in its branches of all colors,but mainly orange.*eeeeeewwwww.Kuwabaka....* (sre kuwa fans!but u cant escape truth!)
I looked around. My whole body ached. "And I thought dead people don't feel pain...what false advertising.." I thought
grudgingly. Just as those words escaped my mouth,a large,orange, berry,came colliding with my head. I held my head in tears,"Owwwwwwwwwwwwwwwch". I repositioned myself to where my legs were hanging off the side of the branch.
"Here goes..EPP!"
I jumped from the branch,and hit butt-first into the ground. "WHY IS THIS HAPPENING TO ME!" I screamed. I curled up next to the tree-trunk in a little ball and silently cried a few,emotionally disturbed,tears.
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YEAH!its over!now 4 another painful chappie!which will not be coming for awhile....unless i get some encouragement! please someone review for me!even if its flames.....PLEASE!i've decided that the romance should start up soon,but i dont have any ideas.and you'll never guess who she falls for!*everyone guesses his name* *i stick tounge out at random people* PLEASE!
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chappie 3_Escaping_Plans_Lead_to_Pain_
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Kurama just stared for a few moments when I didn't answer,then he walked away from me to join some miscellaneous chit-chat. I felt nervous,and very out of place. I didn't know what to do,or who to talk to,or anything. I decided going for a walk,or just plainly going outside,would be the best thing at the moment. "Ummmm....Excuse me?" As soon as my voice came out,it seemed as if all motion occuring at the time,had completely stopped.
"Yeah?",said Yusuke in a questioning voice,even accusing,or maybe I was just paranoyed,I couldn't tell. I fidgeted for a few seconds,quickly regained my thought,and popped the question that I had desperatly wanted since I had entered the room.
"May I go outside,or take a walk,or something?Please?"
"Oh,..."Botan stammered abit."I don't know if Koenma would want us to let you out alone.Many rumors are flying around Makai.It might not be safe,its not that we want to keep you locked up,you just need an escourt." I stared at her.An escourt?
Why would I need an escourt?Are they afraid that a wondering demon was gonna try to kill a dead girl?Kurama noticed my reaction again,and tried to explain,
"You see,demons are always,whats a good word,greedy." I shook my head,implying for him to continue,hoping there was more to it than just that,and he took the hint.
"Many would think your immortal,a perfect weapon,one that could not be broken,or knocked out of existence,yet still being
able to cause damage.They would try to kid-nap,and force you into fighting for them,yet from seeing you be knocked out,we realize you can be hurt."
I nodded in agreement for the second time,and looked off to the side with a sad,pouty,expression.
"Oh,dear,please don't be like that," I cut her off.
"QUIT CALLING ME DEAR!WHAT IS IT WITH YOU AND 'DEAR'!I'M NOT AN ANIMAL!"
She looked at me with round,hurt eyes,and I had just realized how hurtful my out-burst was.
"I'm sorry Botan!I just....don't know what I was thinking...."
"No,your right.I need to call you by your name,we're practically keeping you prisoner...I have no right to call you by a
pet-name."
"Your just looking after me,I shouldn't be so cruel,ya'll don't even know me,yet ya'll are trying to protect me..."
I whinced at guilt,I had no right to be yelling at them. I gathered myself and retreated to the room I had awoken in.
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*10 min. later*
I lay spread out on the matress I was sleeping in not too much earlier. I tear glided down my cheek and onto the cushiony
pillow that rested under my head. I had lain sidways,just staring at the blue canopy that stretched over the poles of the bed.
'I need to get out of here,I've only been here for such a short time,and I already dispised it for some odd reason'
"D*** it.." I cursed aloud."What am I supposed to do to get out of this wannabe hell hole?" Then my eyes drifted to the balcony. My body shook at the idea that floated in my head. "To jump,or not to jump?Jump!Hell yeah!" I scurried out of the bed,and onto the balcony. It was beautiful. The sun was just starting to set,and the golden railing shimmered. I stared,lost in thought and awe,but just for a few seconds. I slowly approached the edge,inch by inch,and grasped the railing for dear life.
*gulp* I looked over the top of the golden railing,a hard thing for a short person to do,and grimaced at the thought of the long drop as I hardly realized that the things that looked like ants,were trees.
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*30 or so min. later*
'Ok.I'm really gonna do it this time.' After,like,20 attempts to jump,I was getting tired. I climbed on the rail,and sat on it horse-style. I closed my eyes,and slowly balanced myself where I could stand,at least. I opened my eyes and mentally congragelated myself for not falling to my...2cond death! I stood there motionless,just happy to be there,for it gave me,a wierd and calming feeling. I took a DEEP breath,getting ready to jump,when all of a sudden,
"RAIKO!What are you doing!" A very panicked Botan screamed.
"Huh?!?"
At the sudden jolt of surprise,I lost my much needed balance. My foot slipped,and I was sent over the side to a definately life threating fall.
"EPPP!AAHHHH!HUH?WHOA!"
The loose skirt I was wearing caught onto the railing,and,was RIPPING!Botan raced out to the balcony.She held out a really tempting hand.I was on the absolute VERGE of grabbing it,but then I remembered the object of what I was doing,escape.
"Sorry Botan!" I screamed out. I grabbed the loose skirt,and ripped it completely off. My panties were completely showing but I didn't care,I let out a high-pitch scream as I went tumbling and turning through the air. I expected my horrid and frightning fall to never end,but,to my relief,it didn't. I crashed harshly into a HUGE tree. It had huge berries hidden in its branches of all colors,but mainly orange.*eeeeeewwwww.Kuwabaka....* (sre kuwa fans!but u cant escape truth!)
I looked around. My whole body ached. "And I thought dead people don't feel pain...what false advertising.." I thought
grudgingly. Just as those words escaped my mouth,a large,orange, berry,came colliding with my head. I held my head in tears,"Owwwwwwwwwwwwwwwch". I repositioned myself to where my legs were hanging off the side of the branch.
"Here goes..EPP!"
I jumped from the branch,and hit butt-first into the ground. "WHY IS THIS HAPPENING TO ME!" I screamed. I curled up next to the tree-trunk in a little ball and silently cried a few,emotionally disturbed,tears.
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YEAH!its over!now 4 another painful chappie!which will not be coming for awhile....unless i get some encouragement! please someone review for me!even if its flames.....PLEASE!i've decided that the romance should start up soon,but i dont have any ideas.and you'll never guess who she falls for!*everyone guesses his name* *i stick tounge out at random people* PLEASE!
