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Ch5 _A_Question_That_Worries_Me_
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He held me tightly in his arms for the next few minutes,then pulled me away. I stared at the ground,not even
taking notice that he was looking me over. I was taken by surprise when he tilted up my head and wiped a tear
from my eye. His eyes showed emotion like I had never seen before. His eyes looked sad,comforting,worried,rebelous,
hurt...
"Raiko?Are you alright now?" He had never spoken to me ,in the short time I knew him, like he was now. It was
as if he could,...,feel what I was feeling,and was....worried about me. I took a quick glance to the ground again,but
forced myself to look into his eyes. They were growing wide now,and I had realized that I hadn't answered him.I
gathered myself,trying desperately to think of something to say,
" I....think so....,nasai hiei...."
"Sorry for what?What is there to apologize for?"
I found myself caught in the question. I starred at him,now with my eyes growing as wide as his were in thought.
Why did I apologize?This was pathetic,I couldn't even think of why I did what I did. My heart started skipping beats.
"I....I....don't know.I,dragged you into one of my stupid emotional battles,my own battle,you just....looked worried.
I'm sorry if I.....did."
He looked at me with a smirk.
"What?Why are you smirking like that?" I questioned angrily.I had just cried part of my soul to him,and even APOLOGIZED
for it,yet he was looking at me in mere amusement.
"Do you actually think I'd be worried for YOU? Of course not."
I starred at him in bewilderment. How could I be so ... stupid in beliving he was worried over a wench like me.
Or was he actually worried and just lying to cover for it?I hadn't known him long enough to tell...
"Hn.You'd better get your priorities straight,before I change my mind on letting you go."
I gasped. He didn't lie to me,did he? He couldn't take me back,I wouldn't let him! But I didn't have much choice
did I? So I decided going down with a bang was better than just going down alone.
"Well,my fate is in your hands.I am certainly not strong enough to fight you,so,I leave your choice to decide what
happens to me *smirk* To be a prisoner,or to be free,it is up to you."
I was smiling like crazy and it was definately taking its toll,for he looked as confused as ever.
He gave me a mean stare.I was not totally sure of what I was doing,but it seemed to be working a little.
"Hn,freedom is yours to claim,FOR NOW,at least. I'll be back to check upon you,so don't do anything stupid
unless your forced to it."
I nodded at him,thankful as ever he let me go.I hardly saw the black after-image he left as he went...wherever
he was going. I gave a relived sigh and looked around. The tree I was standing under gave protection from the rain,
and I wasn't worried about freezing,for Hiei's cloak still lay to the side of me,so the only worry I had was food.
At the mere thought of food,my stomache gave a loud growl. I clenched it,but soon forgot about it as my mind wandered
to other questions and theorys. What about that weird flash-back? Why did Hiei look so worried if he wasn't in the first
place? And how he held me,I felt so safe. I kinda wished he were still here,yet some of me were glad he was gone.
He DID seem scary,but not as scary as that flash-back,for the girl,looked almost exactly like me,and that was scary.
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whew!im done with chappie 5!!! hope you like,and if u don't,please tell me *hint,hint,review!* well,ja ne!
example and review me! I enjoy writing this story,but its not as fun knowing other people don't enjoy it
too! so...on with my story!!
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Ch5 _A_Question_That_Worries_Me_
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He held me tightly in his arms for the next few minutes,then pulled me away. I stared at the ground,not even
taking notice that he was looking me over. I was taken by surprise when he tilted up my head and wiped a tear
from my eye. His eyes showed emotion like I had never seen before. His eyes looked sad,comforting,worried,rebelous,
hurt...
"Raiko?Are you alright now?" He had never spoken to me ,in the short time I knew him, like he was now. It was
as if he could,...,feel what I was feeling,and was....worried about me. I took a quick glance to the ground again,but
forced myself to look into his eyes. They were growing wide now,and I had realized that I hadn't answered him.I
gathered myself,trying desperately to think of something to say,
" I....think so....,nasai hiei...."
"Sorry for what?What is there to apologize for?"
I found myself caught in the question. I starred at him,now with my eyes growing as wide as his were in thought.
Why did I apologize?This was pathetic,I couldn't even think of why I did what I did. My heart started skipping beats.
"I....I....don't know.I,dragged you into one of my stupid emotional battles,my own battle,you just....looked worried.
I'm sorry if I.....did."
He looked at me with a smirk.
"What?Why are you smirking like that?" I questioned angrily.I had just cried part of my soul to him,and even APOLOGIZED
for it,yet he was looking at me in mere amusement.
"Do you actually think I'd be worried for YOU? Of course not."
I starred at him in bewilderment. How could I be so ... stupid in beliving he was worried over a wench like me.
Or was he actually worried and just lying to cover for it?I hadn't known him long enough to tell...
"Hn.You'd better get your priorities straight,before I change my mind on letting you go."
I gasped. He didn't lie to me,did he? He couldn't take me back,I wouldn't let him! But I didn't have much choice
did I? So I decided going down with a bang was better than just going down alone.
"Well,my fate is in your hands.I am certainly not strong enough to fight you,so,I leave your choice to decide what
happens to me *smirk* To be a prisoner,or to be free,it is up to you."
I was smiling like crazy and it was definately taking its toll,for he looked as confused as ever.
He gave me a mean stare.I was not totally sure of what I was doing,but it seemed to be working a little.
"Hn,freedom is yours to claim,FOR NOW,at least. I'll be back to check upon you,so don't do anything stupid
unless your forced to it."
I nodded at him,thankful as ever he let me go.I hardly saw the black after-image he left as he went...wherever
he was going. I gave a relived sigh and looked around. The tree I was standing under gave protection from the rain,
and I wasn't worried about freezing,for Hiei's cloak still lay to the side of me,so the only worry I had was food.
At the mere thought of food,my stomache gave a loud growl. I clenched it,but soon forgot about it as my mind wandered
to other questions and theorys. What about that weird flash-back? Why did Hiei look so worried if he wasn't in the first
place? And how he held me,I felt so safe. I kinda wished he were still here,yet some of me were glad he was gone.
He DID seem scary,but not as scary as that flash-back,for the girl,looked almost exactly like me,and that was scary.
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whew!im done with chappie 5!!! hope you like,and if u don't,please tell me *hint,hint,review!* well,ja ne!