REVIEWS!thanks so much lonewolf and ukera!! ya'll have given me encouragement for this chappie!also,
if ya'll have anything or suggestions you wanna see,lemme know and i'll definately consider them! ok,this is
ch6....wow... O_O
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Ch6 _Rinse_From_the_World_
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I sat down against the trunk of the tree for perhaps,a minimum of ten minutes,before I stood up to stretch
my legs. I looked down at the black cloak,not laying more than a cenimeter from my ankle,and slowly picked it
up. I ran the smooth material through and across my fingertips. I put it to my face and ran it along my cheeks.
It smelled like trees and something else I couldn't place. I let out a sigh,and looked down at myself. I had smuges
of dirt here and there and smelled like ... well ...dirt.
I couldn't stand the dirty smell coming from my body,it made me naucious when I hadn't even eaten anything.
I took in a deep breath and walked to the farthest branch out. I reached out my hand and let the water flow rapidly
down my hand,wrist, and arm. The water felt so good,it wasn't cold,yet not warm,it felt perfect. I pulled Hiei's shirt
over my head,and slipped out of my panties. I closed my eyes and walked into the rain. My full body exosed for
the world to see,but I didn't care. All my troubles just seemed to accumalate in puddles at my feet,rinsing my
body clean of everything.
I started to hum a song in the rain as I let it rinse my body clean...
" She'd do anything to sparkle in his eyes.She would suffer,she would fight and compromise.Shes been wishing
on the stars that shine so bright,for answers to questions that will haunt her tonight..."
I looked up at the sky,the raindrops hitting the top of my face,I had never felt better in my life,...,or at least I
think...
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KILL HER! KILL THE TRAITOR HALF-BREED!!,Vulan shouted.It echoed in my mind...
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I continued to just hum the chorus,thinking about anything and everything,whirling around in my head like a
tornado.
"She.Must.Rinse,this all away.She can't hold,him this way.She must rinse,this all away. She can't love him...this way."
One salty tear-drop mixed in with the rain that surrounded me,,just one,that was all I could manage.
"How she'd be soothed,how she'd be saved,if he could see. She needs to be held in his arms,to be free..."
*sniffle* My hair was soaking wet and clung tightly around my shoulders,where the longer of the layered pieces
hung over the top of my breast. I wrapped my arms around my waist and sang the next part...
" But everything happens for reasons that she will never understand....till she knows that the heart of a woman will
never be found in the arms of a man..."
My voice was now sore from chocking back tears and singing the song. I stepped out further from the large tree and
was taken over by an incredible force,I started to dance in the rain on my tip-toes and continued singing,not soft,
but LOUD.
"And as she runs away,she fears she won't be followed,what could be worse than leaving,something,behind?
And as the depth of oceans slowly become shallow,its loneliness she finds.....if only he was mine...."
I jumped in the air,hitting the ground hard. Tears threatened,and I gave in. My hair turned every way possible.
I felt like I had gone crazy. I was so depressed,yet so gaw dang fricken happy about it! I finally stopped,and collasped on the ground.
I dug my finger-nails in the mud that now covered every inch of my body,and murmured the last part of the song..
"She'd do anything to sparkle in his eyes,she would suffer,she would fight,and compromise.Shes been wishing on
the stars that shine so bright...for answers to questions that will haunt her tonight..."
I stood myself up,letting the rain reclean my body to a pale shine...
"She must rinse him....she must rinse him....."
Something then took over my body again,...,was it another flash-back?
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"VULAN!Why won't you belive me? Has your hatered of my other half made you mad!?! *sniffle*"
"No,of course not! You know what you did,don't try to fool me!"
"NOOOOO!Why don't you understand?!? She was the only other person I had left,why would I KILL her!?!"
Tears strolled down the look-a-like's face.
"I do understand.........your the one who does not understand!"
"Leave her alone!She did NOT kill Vixan!",cried the voice of a girl the look-a-likes age.Her balck and red tipped hair
waving and her eyes fluttering with anger.
"SILENCE!Guards,away with her!",shouted Vulan
"NO,please no!Sheadrin!!",the look-a-like cried.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!",Sheadrin cried.
"Raikou!!" she shouted in her last desperate attempt to reach me,she ran and grabbed Raikou's hand.
"Yes!?!",Raikou shouted clasping hold.
"Never forget us!No matter what happens,remember! Remember me and Zard,remember Vixan!Come back to us
and get revenge for all of us!"
"Ok,I will,I promise Sheadrin! But please don't leave me!Sheadrin!?!" The scream echoed in my mind....
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Pain filled my head as a serious headache started to form. I stood completely up,now clean,and walked back under
the tree. I shook myself off and pulled my clothes back on (or,um,mine and Hiei's clothes *o~). I sat down near
the trunk of the tree and pulled my legs against my chest. 'Who the h-e-l-l was this girl!?!her name even sounds
like mine! who is she?' As I was thinking about this I let out an exaughsted scream. "stupid,stupid,stupid" ,I kept
murmuring to myself,but then all of a sudden,I heard a twig go 'Snap!' behind me.!.
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hahahaha!cliff hanger!so fun,even though i hate them myself! the next chappie i think is gonna be called,On the Run.
so if u wanna know what shes running from,review 4 me!and if u have any ideas on what she SHOULD run from,
tell me. r&r!! and if u have any questions (cause this might b confusing in some cases)ask me!
disclaimer:i dont own yyh OR vanessa carlton! 4 the song she was singing was indeed 'rinse' by v.c.
ja ne!
if ya'll have anything or suggestions you wanna see,lemme know and i'll definately consider them! ok,this is
ch6....wow... O_O
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Ch6 _Rinse_From_the_World_
___________________________________________
I sat down against the trunk of the tree for perhaps,a minimum of ten minutes,before I stood up to stretch
my legs. I looked down at the black cloak,not laying more than a cenimeter from my ankle,and slowly picked it
up. I ran the smooth material through and across my fingertips. I put it to my face and ran it along my cheeks.
It smelled like trees and something else I couldn't place. I let out a sigh,and looked down at myself. I had smuges
of dirt here and there and smelled like ... well ...dirt.
I couldn't stand the dirty smell coming from my body,it made me naucious when I hadn't even eaten anything.
I took in a deep breath and walked to the farthest branch out. I reached out my hand and let the water flow rapidly
down my hand,wrist, and arm. The water felt so good,it wasn't cold,yet not warm,it felt perfect. I pulled Hiei's shirt
over my head,and slipped out of my panties. I closed my eyes and walked into the rain. My full body exosed for
the world to see,but I didn't care. All my troubles just seemed to accumalate in puddles at my feet,rinsing my
body clean of everything.
I started to hum a song in the rain as I let it rinse my body clean...
" She'd do anything to sparkle in his eyes.She would suffer,she would fight and compromise.Shes been wishing
on the stars that shine so bright,for answers to questions that will haunt her tonight..."
I looked up at the sky,the raindrops hitting the top of my face,I had never felt better in my life,...,or at least I
think...
_____________________________________________
KILL HER! KILL THE TRAITOR HALF-BREED!!,Vulan shouted.It echoed in my mind...
_____________________________________________
I continued to just hum the chorus,thinking about anything and everything,whirling around in my head like a
tornado.
"She.Must.Rinse,this all away.She can't hold,him this way.She must rinse,this all away. She can't love him...this way."
One salty tear-drop mixed in with the rain that surrounded me,,just one,that was all I could manage.
"How she'd be soothed,how she'd be saved,if he could see. She needs to be held in his arms,to be free..."
*sniffle* My hair was soaking wet and clung tightly around my shoulders,where the longer of the layered pieces
hung over the top of my breast. I wrapped my arms around my waist and sang the next part...
" But everything happens for reasons that she will never understand....till she knows that the heart of a woman will
never be found in the arms of a man..."
My voice was now sore from chocking back tears and singing the song. I stepped out further from the large tree and
was taken over by an incredible force,I started to dance in the rain on my tip-toes and continued singing,not soft,
but LOUD.
"And as she runs away,she fears she won't be followed,what could be worse than leaving,something,behind?
And as the depth of oceans slowly become shallow,its loneliness she finds.....if only he was mine...."
I jumped in the air,hitting the ground hard. Tears threatened,and I gave in. My hair turned every way possible.
I felt like I had gone crazy. I was so depressed,yet so gaw dang fricken happy about it! I finally stopped,and collasped on the ground.
I dug my finger-nails in the mud that now covered every inch of my body,and murmured the last part of the song..
"She'd do anything to sparkle in his eyes,she would suffer,she would fight,and compromise.Shes been wishing on
the stars that shine so bright...for answers to questions that will haunt her tonight..."
I stood myself up,letting the rain reclean my body to a pale shine...
"She must rinse him....she must rinse him....."
Something then took over my body again,...,was it another flash-back?
__________________________________________
"VULAN!Why won't you belive me? Has your hatered of my other half made you mad!?! *sniffle*"
"No,of course not! You know what you did,don't try to fool me!"
"NOOOOO!Why don't you understand?!? She was the only other person I had left,why would I KILL her!?!"
Tears strolled down the look-a-like's face.
"I do understand.........your the one who does not understand!"
"Leave her alone!She did NOT kill Vixan!",cried the voice of a girl the look-a-likes age.Her balck and red tipped hair
waving and her eyes fluttering with anger.
"SILENCE!Guards,away with her!",shouted Vulan
"NO,please no!Sheadrin!!",the look-a-like cried.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!",Sheadrin cried.
"Raikou!!" she shouted in her last desperate attempt to reach me,she ran and grabbed Raikou's hand.
"Yes!?!",Raikou shouted clasping hold.
"Never forget us!No matter what happens,remember! Remember me and Zard,remember Vixan!Come back to us
and get revenge for all of us!"
"Ok,I will,I promise Sheadrin! But please don't leave me!Sheadrin!?!" The scream echoed in my mind....
___________________________________________
Pain filled my head as a serious headache started to form. I stood completely up,now clean,and walked back under
the tree. I shook myself off and pulled my clothes back on (or,um,mine and Hiei's clothes *o~). I sat down near
the trunk of the tree and pulled my legs against my chest. 'Who the h-e-l-l was this girl!?!her name even sounds
like mine! who is she?' As I was thinking about this I let out an exaughsted scream. "stupid,stupid,stupid" ,I kept
murmuring to myself,but then all of a sudden,I heard a twig go 'Snap!' behind me.!.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
hahahaha!cliff hanger!so fun,even though i hate them myself! the next chappie i think is gonna be called,On the Run.
so if u wanna know what shes running from,review 4 me!and if u have any ideas on what she SHOULD run from,
tell me. r&r!! and if u have any questions (cause this might b confusing in some cases)ask me!
disclaimer:i dont own yyh OR vanessa carlton! 4 the song she was singing was indeed 'rinse' by v.c.
ja ne!