Here it is, I finally posted it...I have no faith in my writing skills.
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Love Hina Fan fiction
This fan fiction is placed between volume six and volume seven. It will introduce a new character to the story line and get Keitaro so what closer to finding out who his '15 years ago promise girl' is. For those of you who didn't read that far or read those volumes here is a quick recap: Mutsumi has been introduced and Naru seems to be the only one in the house to put together that Mutsumi is Keitaro's '15 years ago promise girl.' Since Naru now knows that it is not in fact her but this incredibly smart klutz she is trying to hook the two up and get them into Tokyo University as well. I'm not going to answer the cliffhanger because it is possible that I might get side tracked for my Fan fiction idea and go off and do a different one about the cliffhanger.
Prologue
He kept running, his legs were giving out and his throat burned but he had to keep running from them. His feet stomped through the ally way smashing the puddles of water. He looked back and saw that they were still after him, they were relentless. He saw that he couldn't out run them for long or fight them in this state. He saw his opportunity and jumped in a full trashcan containing who-knows-what. He was fortunate that they ran past him without even looking back or having a notion that they weren't chasing him. After they all passed by he began to think I gotta hide somewhere to get away from these guys. But all the places I go to know that they're after me and say the same old thing 'Sorry kid no rooms are vacant right now. Sorry kid ' He had to find a place that wasn't well known, obvious, or too big. He'd figure a way to pay the rent later. He begins to climb out of the trashcan but hears a footstep and jumps right back into the trashcan. He lifts up the lid of the trash can and sees a cat walking down the alley, the sight and thought of a cat frightening him angers him and jumps out of the trash can and shouts a the cat "You stupid cat! You made me get into a trash can AGAIN!!!" Then proceeds to throw a soda can at the cat and the cat runs off. Now that that's solved where the hell am I?
Part 1
Arrival
What am I gonna do? With this whole Naru might love me and Mutsumi might also love me. While both are possibly the girl I made a promise to 15 years ago. Keitaro pondered to himself in the lounge area of the Hinta House, which he now owned thanks to his Grandmother. "Urashima," Motoko walked toward Keitaro and got his attention. Keitaro looked back at her acknowledging he presence. "I think some one is at the door." Keitaro turned to look at the door but didn't see anyone, then looked back at Motoko. Motoko stared back at Keitaro with a gaze that sent shivers up his spine. He got up and went toward the door, before he could reach the door there was a knock at the door. Keitaro stared back at Motoko and answered the door. At the door was a boy about up to Keitaro's shoulders in black tattered rags that resemble a Gi. I hope this place lets me stay and I hope he's the owner or manager. "Sir are you in charge of this place in any way" He managed to spit out. "Yes I am, please come in," Keitaro responded with a soft voice letting the kid in. "I'm Keitaro Urashima and I own and manage the Hinta house." Keitaro motioned for the kid to sit as he sat. "Mr. Landlord I was wondering if you could give me a room, just for a while. Don't worry I'll pay you eventually for the room and food." The boy bowed and waited for a response. " First off I'm not concerned with rent right now, more importantly this is an all girls dormitory." Keitaro stated and saw the boy's spirit fall, "But first things first, what's your name???" The boy's spirit jumped, as did his head and a smile. "Kuzimicu Mr. Landlord!"
"Well Kuzimicu, I'll let you in," Keitaro did his best mysterious look. "But...first the girl have to!" And as if he called them mentally all the girls of the Hinta house appeared. So these girls have the power to decide if I stay here or am thrown out on my ass. Some guys would be furious but me...it's cool and understandable. It's a girl dorm and the girls should decide if another guy stays here with them. The girls already had begun to examine Kuzimicu. Kuzimicu just realizes that his personal space is being invaded and uses his basic instinct which is to do a back flip off the couch and land three feet away from the girls and up against a wall in a semi-defensive position. This natural reaction catches Motoko's keen warrior eye. "Oh, I'm sorry I should have introduced the girls first. Heh heh heh." Keitaro scratches the back of his head realizing his fault. "The tall blond girl that looks like a fox is Mitsune Konno. We usually call her drunk or Kitsune. (Since kinda looks like a fox, huh?)" Kuzimicu made a bowing motion towards Kitsune. " The short tanned blond girl is Kaolla Su or just call her Su," Kuzimicu made a bowing motion toward Su. "The short shy looking girl's name is Shinobu Maehara," Kuzimicu made a bowing motion toward Shinobu. So far they're all beautiful but Shinobu is so far the most astounding. Wait got to start being polite; Ms. Maehara is the most astounding looking so far. "The tall kind of frightening..." Keitaro continued. "Urashima! Stop, I can introduce myself to this possible new tenant. And who said I'm frightening!?" Motoko interrupted and started to draw her sword, " I am Motoko Aoyama and as Urashima said I am tall for my age and sex but I take my martial arts very serious so I don't care what you think of me! Got it little boy?"
"Yes I understand you are devoted to your training and respect it," Kuzimicu made a bowing motion toward Motoko, "Ms. Aoyama." Motoko's anger vented, it's something about that kid that ticks me off. Some how I know he does some sort of martial arts and it annoys me. If he turns out to be a man or at least more than Urashima than I can't make fun of males. "As I was saying... The girl over here's name is..."
"Keitaro, I can introduce myself ya know." Naru proceeded to knock Keitaro over the head with her fist. "Hello Kuzimicu, my name is Naru Narusegawa. Pleased to meet you and if you are going to stay here I advise that you don 't hang around Keitaro. He's a pervert, a pantie-pincher, a peeping tom, and stupid. I wouldn't want another guy around, especially if he's like Keitaro, or as you call him 'Mr. Landlord'." After Naru finished her speech Kuzimicu was on the ground laughing and Keitaro was embarrassed to tears. "Naru!! I haven't done anything like that for...um...I can't remember the last time. SO HA!!!" I can't believe this guy. He must have had the worst first introduction with there girls possible. But I understand were Na...Ms. Segawa is coming from, an all-girls dorm run by a 'perverted' guy. " Well aside from Naru's opinion I say we let the voting begin!!' Keitaro said after he recovered from the embarrassing statement. But Keitaro doesn't look that perverted to me or capable to over power any of these girls. Aside from maybe Ms. Konno, if she's drunk or Ms. Maehara. If he has done anything like that to Ms. Maehara...! Kuzimicu clenched his fist tight at just that thought.
Note: Well there you have it...I'm open to suggestions on what should come up later. As for the near future, I've got most of that planed out. Also if you like Naruto fanfics or Suna Nins, keep your eyes out for my up coming fanfic: Sand in your eyes! Luego chicas!