Note: As requested by the few, here is the update to my 1st fan fic. Be truthful if you review, thank you.
Part 2
Democracy
"So we'll go with Democracy and vote on the matter! or at least the girls of the house will..." Keitaro exclaimed. "All in favor of Kuzimicu staying say something!"
" Yep, pey! I say yah! let little Kuzimicu stay! I think he's cute!" Su shouted. Ms. Kaolla seems to be foreign and the type of girl who likes everyone. I'll have to remember that she allowed me to join them in this house. Now that I take a look at her. A red dot on her forehead, a schoolgirl outfit that doesn't fit, how does she get past the dress code?, and she must like walking around with no shoes because she's not wearing any now. "Sure, why not help the poor kid out Keitaro!" Kitsune added. Ms. Konno, thank you. She's kinda cute, even though she's probably older than I am and according to Keitaro a drunk. I like the way she has her hair, short and spread out. She's also well proportioned...hmmm...can't act like Keitaro!!! "I also would like for Kuzi-chan to stay here with us!"
"Oh, I forgot about you Mutsumi! sorry..." Keitaro realized that Mutsumi had arrived. "It's alright Kei-chan" Mutsumi replied. "Oh yeah, this is Mutsumi Otomai and she loves water melons." She's pretty tall and that long black hair doesn't help...nice pair of knockers too! ♥ What am I saying!!! And what am I staring at! "Last time I checked, Mutsumi was only here temporally and is leaving as soon as she finds somewhere else to live? So why does she get to vote!?" Naru pointed out annoyed
"Anyone else think that it would be ok for another guy to stay here?" Keitaro was desperately trying to encourage the other girls to help him. Man, I need a guy around to talk guy things too. These girls are just good for staring at and hitting me. And doing the first one gets them to do the second one. "Well I guess now it's time for those against letting Kuzimicu stay, say something." What about Mutsumi's vote? "It shouldn't count you idiot! Stop!" Naru shouted and was preparing to thrash Keitaro. "Well any way I vote no, I wouldn't want another guy here and we can't take the chance that he'll be anything like you, Keitaro."
"But Naru I thought that might be a good thing since you seem to be getting along with Keitaro pretty well," Kitsune shot down Naru while she became red faced and pissed off. "I don't personally care about Naru's feels toward Keitaro,"
"Thank you Motoko," Naru says somewhat calmer.
"But I will not let this boy stay here, regardless of a silly vote!" Kuzimicu's face froze from shock and Keitaro was prepared to shout at Motoko for attempting to take his job while Naru cheered her on. "Unless, he can defeat me in a match!" Motoko announced while drawing her sword.
"Mr. Landlord, if you would permit me to, I will engage Motoko in combat for her vote in the matter." Kuzimicu asked as he put down his backpack and stretched his right and left hand.
"Um...I guess that be alright just don't either of you get hurt." A worried Keitaro replied to Kuzimicu while he began to draw his weapon, a spear with a heavy looking blade that had characters carved into it, known as a tumbo-giri. Motoko did the same drawing her sword from its kendo sword sheath.
And magically the whole group is transported to the usual battle scene, a lake area with a medium sized landmass in the middle complete with a beach area for viewers and water fall view from the beach area. Motoko and Kuzimicu had their weapons drawn and were both at opposite sides of the land mass. "Very well then, I'll be the referee of this and Su will keep score!" Keitaro proclaimed, I hope he wins or at least lives through this. I of all people should know how good Motoko is with her sword, she could of killed me numerous times by now... "This match will be a three point match or until Motoko either makes Kuzi cry or is about to kill him!" Su shouted. No one knows that I know how to use this thing, Kuzimicu tightened his grip on his spear, Too bad for Motoko, I've already read her and I think I can win this without blood shed. Kuzimicu began to smile, already smiling!? I'll wipe it off his face but to thoroughly humiliate him I won't use the full extent of my strength! Poor little boy, get ready to be thrown out on your ass!
"Good luck Kuzi-chan! and don't hurt him Motoko!" Mutsumi shouted.
"Go get her kid! Don't be to hard on him Motoko!" Kitsune shouted. Yeah, they're real confident...by the way their talking it sounds like Motoko's better than I thought...damn!
"Kick his Keitaro wanna be ass, Motoko!!!" Naru shouted viciously as everyone began to stare at her awkwardly with worried looks.
"...good luck..." whispered Shinobu, 'good luck' to who Ms. Maehara? Kuzimicu wondered reading Shinobu's lips. Forget it! I'll just win and move in. Then I'll build a relationship with Ms. Maehara. Kuzimicu shifted his focus from Shinobu to Motoko, his present opponent, get outta my way Motoko or ya ganna get hurt!
Well, he seems angry about something, better get this thing started, sigh... "Get in positions, face each other...begin!!!" Kuzimicu started to spin his spear in front of him with his left hand while Motoko prepared to charge. One good stab through that stupid defense should send him home. Maybe the shoulder, that should be easy enough. Motoko started to run at Kuzimicu, with her sword's blade at eye level. Kuzimicu's only obvious response was him spinning his spear faster and slightly staring at Motoko. Motoko was now about five feet away and Kuzimicu was still steadily increasing the speed of which he was spinning the spear. Motoko was in range and thrusted her sword at Kuzimicu's shoulder, just as she was going to pierce skin Kuzimicu batted away with his spear as he ducked down. He brought his spear and swung it at Motoko to take off her head or at least hit her, thus making him the victor of the match. But Motoko blocked Kuzimicu's attack with her sword and locking their weapons. "You're not really trying, are you Ms. Aoyama?"
"For your sake not really, I'm actually testing you," Motoko answered snickering, "to see how dangerous you might be, yah know, to us girls." Motoko smiled,
"Hmm...thought so, I can see that your better than this," Kuzimicu said while his head fell down. "Thank you Ms. Aoyama, I really appreciate your kindness ♥!" Kuzimicu brought his head up and smiled warmly at her. Motoko peered back at him with a frightening look of almost hate. "I guess your, um welcome...but that doesn't mean I'll let you win this match, got it? I got a reputation to maintain, got it?" Kuzimicu nodded, then broke the lock of weapons, jumped into the air while Motoko slashed at the spot where Kuzimicu had been. Motoko stopped her blade at her stomach height and began looking for where Kuzimicu had gone. She then felt an additional weight on her sword and looked forward where her blade was. She saw Kuzimicu standing on her blade with less weight than his body seemed to be, along with his spear blade about two centimeters from her nose and a almost demonic glare in his eyes. "You're a lot better then I first thought." Motoko lowered her blade, Kuzimicu stepped off the blade but still had his spear tip close to Motoko's face. "I admit defeat, for now Kuzimicu."
"Well I guess Kuzimicu wins...and not Motoko..." Keitaro hesitantly announced.
"I was sure Motoko was gonna win," Kitsune rubbed her chin. I can't believe this!! How was he able to beat Motoko!? Naru thought while she grinded her teeth together. No matter what I'm gonna get him outta the house before he does any damage. That or make sure he doesn't turn into anything like Keitaro.
"Well we should head back and tally the votes,"
"Yeah! Little Kuzi gets to staaay!!" Su shouted
"I'm so happy for you Kuzi-chan!" Mitsune began clapping.
"I really appreciate your ok's for me to stay here with you and I hope that we can get along." Kuzimicu put away his spear. "Even you Ms. Segawa, I have a feeling you don't like me already but that doesn't matter to me. Same with you Ms. Aoyama, I would like to better know you and get on your good side. Even though this happened." Kuzimicu said with a smile.
Author's note: I have no idea what are OOCs or whom The Vampire Story Hunter is talking about.
Next Chapter: Moving In.
