~I'm so..sry that it took me so...long but I had so much that was going on
and had such little time to do anything and if I did it was pry to write
new ideas for new stories. Well here goes nothing I hope that you will
enjoy the next chapter and please leave a review thanks!
Chapter 4: Betrayal
The calm morning brought a sense of warm sunlight into Mulan's room and the soft wind brushed past her clear whit curtains. Mulan was already out of her bed now getting dressed and ready for the day. She had been noticing some changes around the town as if something was going but she didn't made no notice of it. Mulan walked out of her room and into the kitchen her parents were already out and so was her grandmother, but why? Why were they gone? She paced around trying to remember if they had said something to her that they were leaving, but nothing. "Well I better go see if they are in town somewhere." She said talking to Little Brother began to wage his tail and bark. Mulan smiled and began to walk out to the front. But as she was beginning to leave the house she heard screams and horses coming. She heard out of the door but all of a sudden she then jumped out of the way as arrows came through her house. She ducked down for cover, while also covering Little Brother. As she was about to get up and run out side to see what was going on she stopped immediately in her tracks as flames of fire began to rise up from the front door and roof. Smoke quickly began to fill the room and Mulan began to cough immensely.
"Someone please help me!" Mulan pleaded out load, in hopes that someone or her family would hear her. There was no response. She began to weakly walk out of the house, things began to fall and get in her way. She fell and yelled once more trying to get help from someone, anyone. She began to feel really dizzy, but just then she could hear someone from outside trying to get to her, it was her father. "Baba!" She yelled for him weakly.
Fa Zhou could hear his daughter yelling for him, he did what he could but there was no way in, then he saw the window. He tried with all his might with his weak leg to get over to it and fast. He took his wooden cane and broke the window letting it crash into tiny pieces. He then lifted himself off the ground and plunged into the house. "Mulan!" he waited, and searched. "Mulan if you can hear me yell!" He scanned the area and then saw his daughter on the floor; he limped over to her as fast as he could. Then taking her in his arms he found a safe route to get out and began to escape. Once they got outside he sat her down and called to her trying to wake her up. Nothing. "Mulan, please.." tears formed in his old eyes, pleading for his daughter to come back to him. He watched around him as the solders began tarring down homes and killing people, their own solders were responsible for the acts too, he wondered why? It was as if they had gone mad or something.
Mulan began to cough; Fa Zhou hugged her and helped her to her knees. "Baba?" she asked in a weak and hurtful voice full of smoke. "What's happening?" She asked.
"I don't know?" I heard that it was the Emperor he sent them." He tried to explain.
"Who? Why?" Mulan asked.
"The solders! Look..." he pointed to the other homes that were being tarred down and families killed. Mulan couldn't believe her eyes. Why? How? So many questions left unanswered.
"Where are Grandma, and Mom?" She feared.
"I don't know?" Fa Zhou shook his head. "But I am fearful that they took them."
"No!......" She began to get up, but Fa Zhou brought her down and close to him.
"No my child we can't, you can't..."
"Why Baba? They need our help?"
"There are too many and they are looking for you!"
Mulan's heart almost stopped, in surprise. Why would they want her? "Why?"
"I don't know? But I heard them and they want to find you then kill you..I can't let that happen.not to you...not my daughter." Tears began to form in both their eyes, eyes of sadness and fear.
Mulan wiped away her tears and said, "Then what do we do?"
"I don't know?" Then all of a sudden an arrow hit Fa Zhou in the leg, He cried of pain. Mulan screamed and looked over to the direction that it came in. She then saw at least five solders now aiming at the two of them. Mulan pulled her father up quickly and began to run as fast as they could. Fa Zhou needed help and fast he was bleeding and it was serious. He then fell, Mulan leaned over trying to help him but he pushed her away. "Go Mulan, just go!" He yelled to her.
"Baba, No! I'm not leaving you..we have a chance..." She pleaded. As he began to get up with the help of Mulan the sound of arrow pierced the wind, and plunged into her father's back. He screamed then began to slowly fall, Mulan looked at her father, not believing what her eyes were witnessing. The horror, the sight of her father now losing his life. She rushed over to him and held him. "Baba...please.come on...Baba"
He brushed Mulan's hair out of the way and tried to talk but had trouble even getting a single breath of air. "I..love you..Mulan.go." With that he slowly closed his eyes and fell on his back.
"No!......." Mulan screamed tears fell upon her face; the pain was just too much she felt anger and hurt in her heart. She sat by her father and kissed his head, and said good bye. "I love you..Baba.." She then looked up at the solders that were running towards her..she gritted her teeth; she squeezed her fists and screamed. She looked around her house was still in flames and her whole yard was destroyed. She saved China, and now they killed her, they killed her father and her home and she lost her mother and grandmother. She was in furry, the rage began to build and the solders kept coming closer and closer. She looked at her house and darted in. She ran inside not caring if she got burnt she was in search for her sword and she wanted it now! She got into the room and maneuvered around the fire and got her sword. Once outside she lifted her sword and began to fight off her fellow comrades that she thought she knew but they pushed her to the point where there was no mercy. She wiped her bald around back and forth, slicing and piecing the solders bringing them down to the ground. As she continued a black horse with a long black main with black eyes came galloping towards her, with a rider on top. Mulan just then got the guy on the ground and leaned over and brutally gabbing the sword into his stomach. Mulan looked in front of her and watched as the rider came closer and closer as if it was slow motion. She watched as he took out his shiny blade and twirled it around and around making a noise as if it was cutting the wind in many pieces. Mulan got into a stance ready for him to come closer, her hair was flying in front of her and back. Tears stained her face; she gritted her teeth ready for what ever came next.
As he got closer and closer she noticed that his face and body were covered in black. As if he came from hell and he was here to kill all the innocent and make them suffer. Just the thought made her want to kill him even more. As she swung she hit his blade but his blade came back slicing her back, and leaving a hug red line. She screamed in agony of pain. She turned and faced him; he now just stood their staring at her as if waiting for her to make her move. "Why?" She paused. He didn't respond, he just continued starring. "You killed my father! You destroyed my home!" She breathed heavily.
Suddenly she began to felt pain in her neck, she had just realized that she had been hit with a small arrow, and arrow that was meant to only put her asleep. They got her! As she fell she kept her eyes on the dark black figure until he got blurry to the point where she saw no more.
~So...how is that? I hope you liked it! I know it's sad, it gets even better! I had the longest writers block for this story, lol. Well please review and tell me what you think! Oh.and ill be writing more chapters soon! And that goes the same for my other stories! Hehe, I got break! Hehe! Hope to hear from you soon! Thanks!
Chapter 4: Betrayal
The calm morning brought a sense of warm sunlight into Mulan's room and the soft wind brushed past her clear whit curtains. Mulan was already out of her bed now getting dressed and ready for the day. She had been noticing some changes around the town as if something was going but she didn't made no notice of it. Mulan walked out of her room and into the kitchen her parents were already out and so was her grandmother, but why? Why were they gone? She paced around trying to remember if they had said something to her that they were leaving, but nothing. "Well I better go see if they are in town somewhere." She said talking to Little Brother began to wage his tail and bark. Mulan smiled and began to walk out to the front. But as she was beginning to leave the house she heard screams and horses coming. She heard out of the door but all of a sudden she then jumped out of the way as arrows came through her house. She ducked down for cover, while also covering Little Brother. As she was about to get up and run out side to see what was going on she stopped immediately in her tracks as flames of fire began to rise up from the front door and roof. Smoke quickly began to fill the room and Mulan began to cough immensely.
"Someone please help me!" Mulan pleaded out load, in hopes that someone or her family would hear her. There was no response. She began to weakly walk out of the house, things began to fall and get in her way. She fell and yelled once more trying to get help from someone, anyone. She began to feel really dizzy, but just then she could hear someone from outside trying to get to her, it was her father. "Baba!" She yelled for him weakly.
Fa Zhou could hear his daughter yelling for him, he did what he could but there was no way in, then he saw the window. He tried with all his might with his weak leg to get over to it and fast. He took his wooden cane and broke the window letting it crash into tiny pieces. He then lifted himself off the ground and plunged into the house. "Mulan!" he waited, and searched. "Mulan if you can hear me yell!" He scanned the area and then saw his daughter on the floor; he limped over to her as fast as he could. Then taking her in his arms he found a safe route to get out and began to escape. Once they got outside he sat her down and called to her trying to wake her up. Nothing. "Mulan, please.." tears formed in his old eyes, pleading for his daughter to come back to him. He watched around him as the solders began tarring down homes and killing people, their own solders were responsible for the acts too, he wondered why? It was as if they had gone mad or something.
Mulan began to cough; Fa Zhou hugged her and helped her to her knees. "Baba?" she asked in a weak and hurtful voice full of smoke. "What's happening?" She asked.
"I don't know?" I heard that it was the Emperor he sent them." He tried to explain.
"Who? Why?" Mulan asked.
"The solders! Look..." he pointed to the other homes that were being tarred down and families killed. Mulan couldn't believe her eyes. Why? How? So many questions left unanswered.
"Where are Grandma, and Mom?" She feared.
"I don't know?" Fa Zhou shook his head. "But I am fearful that they took them."
"No!......" She began to get up, but Fa Zhou brought her down and close to him.
"No my child we can't, you can't..."
"Why Baba? They need our help?"
"There are too many and they are looking for you!"
Mulan's heart almost stopped, in surprise. Why would they want her? "Why?"
"I don't know? But I heard them and they want to find you then kill you..I can't let that happen.not to you...not my daughter." Tears began to form in both their eyes, eyes of sadness and fear.
Mulan wiped away her tears and said, "Then what do we do?"
"I don't know?" Then all of a sudden an arrow hit Fa Zhou in the leg, He cried of pain. Mulan screamed and looked over to the direction that it came in. She then saw at least five solders now aiming at the two of them. Mulan pulled her father up quickly and began to run as fast as they could. Fa Zhou needed help and fast he was bleeding and it was serious. He then fell, Mulan leaned over trying to help him but he pushed her away. "Go Mulan, just go!" He yelled to her.
"Baba, No! I'm not leaving you..we have a chance..." She pleaded. As he began to get up with the help of Mulan the sound of arrow pierced the wind, and plunged into her father's back. He screamed then began to slowly fall, Mulan looked at her father, not believing what her eyes were witnessing. The horror, the sight of her father now losing his life. She rushed over to him and held him. "Baba...please.come on...Baba"
He brushed Mulan's hair out of the way and tried to talk but had trouble even getting a single breath of air. "I..love you..Mulan.go." With that he slowly closed his eyes and fell on his back.
"No!......." Mulan screamed tears fell upon her face; the pain was just too much she felt anger and hurt in her heart. She sat by her father and kissed his head, and said good bye. "I love you..Baba.." She then looked up at the solders that were running towards her..she gritted her teeth; she squeezed her fists and screamed. She looked around her house was still in flames and her whole yard was destroyed. She saved China, and now they killed her, they killed her father and her home and she lost her mother and grandmother. She was in furry, the rage began to build and the solders kept coming closer and closer. She looked at her house and darted in. She ran inside not caring if she got burnt she was in search for her sword and she wanted it now! She got into the room and maneuvered around the fire and got her sword. Once outside she lifted her sword and began to fight off her fellow comrades that she thought she knew but they pushed her to the point where there was no mercy. She wiped her bald around back and forth, slicing and piecing the solders bringing them down to the ground. As she continued a black horse with a long black main with black eyes came galloping towards her, with a rider on top. Mulan just then got the guy on the ground and leaned over and brutally gabbing the sword into his stomach. Mulan looked in front of her and watched as the rider came closer and closer as if it was slow motion. She watched as he took out his shiny blade and twirled it around and around making a noise as if it was cutting the wind in many pieces. Mulan got into a stance ready for him to come closer, her hair was flying in front of her and back. Tears stained her face; she gritted her teeth ready for what ever came next.
As he got closer and closer she noticed that his face and body were covered in black. As if he came from hell and he was here to kill all the innocent and make them suffer. Just the thought made her want to kill him even more. As she swung she hit his blade but his blade came back slicing her back, and leaving a hug red line. She screamed in agony of pain. She turned and faced him; he now just stood their staring at her as if waiting for her to make her move. "Why?" She paused. He didn't respond, he just continued starring. "You killed my father! You destroyed my home!" She breathed heavily.
Suddenly she began to felt pain in her neck, she had just realized that she had been hit with a small arrow, and arrow that was meant to only put her asleep. They got her! As she fell she kept her eyes on the dark black figure until he got blurry to the point where she saw no more.
~So...how is that? I hope you liked it! I know it's sad, it gets even better! I had the longest writers block for this story, lol. Well please review and tell me what you think! Oh.and ill be writing more chapters soon! And that goes the same for my other stories! Hehe, I got break! Hehe! Hope to hear from you soon! Thanks!