Hiya everyone. This is my pirate story. I had the idea for it while I was
in Spanish (what does that tell you about my Spanish class). I worked
really hard on it soo please review and no flames
The Deadly Rose.
Chapter 1- The Stranger
Captain Jack Sparrow was sitting in the Faithful Bride in Tortuga. (I think that is how it is spelled) He was in a bottle of rum. Will Turner came into the Faithful Bride looking for Jack. Will spotted Jack in his corner. Will sighed and walked to him.
Jack looked up at Will, "Will, how are you?"
"Fine."
"How's Elizabeth?" Jack wondered.
"Getting sicker." Will sighed.
"Don't worry mate. She'll live." Jack reassured him.
"I hope your right."
"Will, why are you here?" Jack questioned him.
Will sat down next to Jack. "Just making sure where you were."
"The Pearl is still in port. The crew is making repairs." Jack took another drink of his rum.
"Are you still looking for a new crew?"
"I'm keeping my old crew. I'm just picking up some more," Jack told Will.
Will chuckled at Jack. Then he noticed someone across the room. A pirate was sitting at a table alone watching the room. Will didn't know why he was noticing him, but he couldn't help it. He had long, brown hair braided much like Jack's. He was wearing a tri-point hat like Jack. He had a green bandana. His hat was down over his eyes covering his face. He was dressed with a loose fitting shirt, pants and boots. In fact, he was dressed much like Jack. He had his pistol with a sword. He must have noticed Will watching him because he looked up at Will, then got up and left the room.
Will leaned next to Jack within whispering range. "Jack, who is the pirate that just left the room?"
Jack whispered back to Will, "Not much is known about him. They call him the Deadly Rose. Because, that is his tattoo above the pirate brand. No one knows his real name. He is feared but not as much as the Pearl. Why?"
"Just wondering," Will looked back at the pirate leaving the room.
"I tell ya mate. If he showed up tomorrow he would be on my boat right away," Jack sat while taking another drink of his rum.
Will got up and headed back up to his room where Elizabeth lay sick.
Jack had a strange dream that night. He didn't know what started the dream. A pirate was walking toward him in mist. The pirate was walking up to Jack. The pirate started to lift his head. Then, Jack woke up before he saw the person's face. Jack was woken up by Will. "Don't you know not to wake a man when he's sleeping?" Jack said practically yelling at him.
"You don't really believe that do you?" Will said. He smiled at Jack.
"How did you get into my room?" Jack changed the subject.
"The girl that left the room let me in."
Jack smiled.
"Was she good?" Will asked.
"Oh yea," Jack said pulling his pants on. "Why again did you wake me up?"
"It is time to go pick the new crew," said Will. Will left the room. He called over his shoulder, "I'm going take Elizabeth to the Pearl now. So we can take her to her father."
Jack finished dressing and walked out of the Faithful Bride toward the docks.
End Chapter
I hope you all like my first chapter. I promise update soon. PLEASE REVIEW Prongs
The Deadly Rose.
Chapter 1- The Stranger
Captain Jack Sparrow was sitting in the Faithful Bride in Tortuga. (I think that is how it is spelled) He was in a bottle of rum. Will Turner came into the Faithful Bride looking for Jack. Will spotted Jack in his corner. Will sighed and walked to him.
Jack looked up at Will, "Will, how are you?"
"Fine."
"How's Elizabeth?" Jack wondered.
"Getting sicker." Will sighed.
"Don't worry mate. She'll live." Jack reassured him.
"I hope your right."
"Will, why are you here?" Jack questioned him.
Will sat down next to Jack. "Just making sure where you were."
"The Pearl is still in port. The crew is making repairs." Jack took another drink of his rum.
"Are you still looking for a new crew?"
"I'm keeping my old crew. I'm just picking up some more," Jack told Will.
Will chuckled at Jack. Then he noticed someone across the room. A pirate was sitting at a table alone watching the room. Will didn't know why he was noticing him, but he couldn't help it. He had long, brown hair braided much like Jack's. He was wearing a tri-point hat like Jack. He had a green bandana. His hat was down over his eyes covering his face. He was dressed with a loose fitting shirt, pants and boots. In fact, he was dressed much like Jack. He had his pistol with a sword. He must have noticed Will watching him because he looked up at Will, then got up and left the room.
Will leaned next to Jack within whispering range. "Jack, who is the pirate that just left the room?"
Jack whispered back to Will, "Not much is known about him. They call him the Deadly Rose. Because, that is his tattoo above the pirate brand. No one knows his real name. He is feared but not as much as the Pearl. Why?"
"Just wondering," Will looked back at the pirate leaving the room.
"I tell ya mate. If he showed up tomorrow he would be on my boat right away," Jack sat while taking another drink of his rum.
Will got up and headed back up to his room where Elizabeth lay sick.
Jack had a strange dream that night. He didn't know what started the dream. A pirate was walking toward him in mist. The pirate was walking up to Jack. The pirate started to lift his head. Then, Jack woke up before he saw the person's face. Jack was woken up by Will. "Don't you know not to wake a man when he's sleeping?" Jack said practically yelling at him.
"You don't really believe that do you?" Will said. He smiled at Jack.
"How did you get into my room?" Jack changed the subject.
"The girl that left the room let me in."
Jack smiled.
"Was she good?" Will asked.
"Oh yea," Jack said pulling his pants on. "Why again did you wake me up?"
"It is time to go pick the new crew," said Will. Will left the room. He called over his shoulder, "I'm going take Elizabeth to the Pearl now. So we can take her to her father."
Jack finished dressing and walked out of the Faithful Bride toward the docks.
End Chapter
I hope you all like my first chapter. I promise update soon. PLEASE REVIEW Prongs