Author's Notes: Okay, I am probably the most happiest writer out
there right now! I am getting the BEST feedback, and even though some of it
was a little pushy, it wasn't mean, and I like that. It gave me a good
push, and that's why I'm updating right now. ^_^; I have some stuff to say
to reviewers just as a holiday treat! I'm really sorry if Enishi appears to
be so mean in this one. GOMEN!
Sadness Lurks Behind Everyone: Hey. Thank you SO much for saying that my story is worth reading. That makes me * tear * so * tear * happy. . . YOU'RE SO COOL! . . . .ahem. You asked a question. "Why is Enishi all spooky now? How come he isn't the same old Enishi Kaoru once knew? What made him change?" those are very good questions, and I love you for that! I'm so happy! * dances around room * ahem. . . I will answer your questions in this nice long chapter. ^_^ Please review again!
kikikikikikikikiki*mimimimimimi : I'm really sorry if it appears that I'm giving Aoshi the stiff shoulder. GOMEN! ^_^ I am a HUGE fan of Aoshi- sama, cuz you know everybody loves him. *drools all over keyboard * ahem. . . So I'll try to do what you said. To lay off him a little. ^_^ I'll make him crack a smile or something. . .lol. Please review again!
Tis the season to be jolly. . . : HI!!! Thank you so much for reviewing! Nice question you had. "When will Kenshin turn into a human?" well, afraid I can't make him turn into a human in THIS chapter, but I will tell you this : Kenshin WILL turn into a human eventually, and just between you and me. . . * well some other people might be reading this but I doubt it, not many people read stupid author's notes and all that crap * Kenshin will turn into a human somewhere in the chapters of the late teens or early twenties. I wanna make this a long story! ^_^ Please review again!
Fluffy is my cat;) : Hello and THANK YOU FOR REVIEWING!!! You make me so happy. * sniff * Chibi feels. . . * sniff * so loved. . .* cries and hugs Fluffy * YOU ARE SO COOL!!!! * still crying * ahem. . . * sniff * Please review again! . . . oh and I'll make Kenshin act like a donkey * cough * I mean * cough * let Rurouni take over. ^_~
Disclaimer: I don't own my muses, I just play with them.
On with the story! YAY!
Chapter Six
Kaoru still couldn't put her finger on it. Kenshin was acting weird, she knew it. It was the morning after the fight with Enishi that Kaoru and Kenshin ate breakfast together. They watched tv.
But Kenshin wasn't listening. (This is so stupid. . .)
[What is?] Rurouni demanded.
Battousai sighed. (The fact that we're even here!)
[And why is that so stupid?]
(Because. . .well. . .) Battousai growled, (I don't know! It's just. . .STUPID!)
Rurouni sighed, and looked down at his hands. [I suppose you're right. I mean, what are we supposed to do here?]
Battousai got an evil grin on his face. (Well. . .)
[BESIDES flirting with Kaoru-dono.]
(Kaoru-DONO?!?)
Rurouni blushed. [Well yes. As far as I'm concerned, that's what you would say to a person you just met.]
Battousai frowned, (But we didn't JUST meet her! We met her . . .) he thought about it for a moment or two. . .or maybe it was three. . .(Four days ago!)
Rurouni sighed, [Has it really been four days?]
(I dunno, it could be three. . .I've lost track. . .)
Rurouni growled, very out of character. [This story isn't going anywhere!!! We've got to do something!] he turned to Battousai. [I know! To make this story ACTUALLY move around a bit I'll. . .]
Battousai looked confused. (What story?)
Rurouni sat back down, annoyed. [The story we're in.]
(We're in a story?)
Rurouni rolled his eyes. [Yes!]
(Uhhh. . .I'm not following you.)
Rurouni sighed. He leaned closer to Battousai and whispered something into his ear. Battousai's face went from confused to a grin. (OHHHHHH!!!!! THAT story!)
Rurouni sighed once more and whipped the sweat from his forehead. [Finally you understand.]
Battousai suddenly stood up. (HEY! What am I getting paid for this contract? Awww what a bunch of. . .)
Rurouni shushed him.
Battousai was near tears. (But. . .but but. . . . this isn't enough of a salary!)
Rurouni rolled his eyes. [Talk about it with the boss LATER!!!! We're on the air!!!]
They both turned to the audience, blushed, smiled weakly, giggled really girly, then ran off stage.
Kenshin nearly growled. Kaoru turned to him with wide eyes. "What's going on Kenshin? What's wrong? Geesh I swear it's like you have personal battles inside that head of yours!"
Kenshin sighed, "You have NO idea. . ."
(What was it you were talking about?)
[About what?] Rurouni asked.
(About making this story move along?)
Rurouni smiled. [OHHH!!!] he coughed. [Yes well. . .ahem. . . as I was saying : to make this story move along, I'll take over!]
Battousai's eyes widened. (YOU'LL WHAT????)
[I'll take over!]
(Oh NO you don't!)
[Let go of me!]
(There's no way I'm letting you near Kaoru!)
[Stop the tickling!!! Stop the. . .ORORORORORORORO!!!!!] he faints from laughing so hard.
Battousai snickers. (Hahah. . .works every time. . .)
Kaoru raised an eyebrow. 'I swear there's something wrong with this guy. . .'
Kaoru jus then realized she had to go to dance class that day. She sighed. "Well, gotta go dance with Sanosuke. . ."
Kenshin turned to her. "Oh yah! What about this 'Sanosuke' guy?"
Kaoru looked at him. "Well. . . I'm pretending to be his girlfriend."
Kenshin raised an eyebrow. "Pretending?"
Kaoru nodded.
Kenshin thought for a moment. "I could dance with you!" he smiled at
her.
Kaoru smiled back. "Really? Sanosuke isn't a very good dancer. . .so it would be GREAT if you would dance with me for a change!"
Kenshin frowned, "But what about Sanosuke? Wouldn't he get angry?"
Kaoru smiled, "Oh don't worry, he's not that type of person.
~ * ~
"YOU'RE DANCING WITH WHO????????" Sanosuke yelled.
Kaoru smiled, meakly. "With Kenshin. . ."
"And who's this Kenshin guy?"
"Uhh. . . a friend of mine. . ."
"What am I not good enough at dancing for you?"
"No no no! That's not it Sanosuke. . ."
"Why I oughta. . ."
Kenshin stepped in, and grabbed Sanosuke wrist. "That'll be enough of this argument, that it will, de gozaru yo."
Kaoru turned to him. 'What's with the manners? And his eyes. . . so violet! So pure and violet!'
Sanosuke frowned and growled at Kenshin, "So who are you? This 'Kenshin' I've been hearing about?"
Kenshin nodded. "Yes. My name is Kenshin Himura."
Sanosuke sneered, "Fine. Dance with her. She's all yours. I don't need her anymore."
Kaoru then lost her temper. "YOU? DON'T NEED ME???? I was the one who needed YOU!" she growled, "To get back at Enishi!"
Kenshin looked at her. "Enishi? You pretended to be Sanosuke's girlfriend to get back at Enishi?" he thought for a moment. "What would that do?"
Kaoru sighed. "I thought he'd get jealous." She blinked away a tear.
Her dance teacher stamped her feet. "Would you take it out in the hallway?" she asked.
Kaoru, Kenshin and Sanosuke stepped outside. Kaoru sighed again.
Kenshin frowned, "How did you and Enishi break up, anyway?"
Sanosuke turned soft, showing that he wasn't that big a bully. "Hey, hey, Jou-chan. Don't worry, you can tell us."
Kenshin nodded.
Kaoru looked at them with teary eyes. "Well. . .it all was such a beautiful relationship. He was so handsome, and I loved him so much!"
`~`~`~`~`FLASHBACK`~`~`~`~`
Enishi turned to look at Kaoru. "Kaoru-chan. . .darling. . .there's something I need to tell you."
Kaoru smiled. "What is it dear?"
Enishi frowned, and sighed. "Kaoru. . . I know that going back on everything I've said would be bad. Everything I said about loving you. . .about. . . wanting to be with you forever. . ."
Kaoru's smile was lost when she realized what was about to happen.
Enishi looked up at her. "I have really always loved you. . .but there is someone else who needs me more then you do. My sister. You remember her right?"
Kaoru's eyes widened with fear.
"She recently became sick. I love my sister with all my heart, and I would do anything for her. While I was away the other day, I went to see her. She had a friend there." Enishi breathed between his sentences. "She is my big sister, and she told me I shouldn't be with you. She told me I ought to be with her friend. I got to know her friend, and. . . I love her. I love her more then you. I'm sorry Kaoru, but . . . it's over. I can't disobey my sister."
Kaoru frowned. "If you really love me then you WOULD go against your sister's command! You would forget that girl and come back to me!"
Enishi frowned. "But that's the thing! Kaoru! I don't love you anymore! I never really loved you! I was just with you to try and get over the grief of my father's death! I never loved you! It was all a lie!"
Kaoru gasped. She stepped back a foot. "So. . .you never really loved me. . ."
"I never loved you Kaoru. In fact, you get on my nerves! I don't know how I put up with you!"
Kaoru shook her head. "You're not the Enishi I know and love. Something's wrong. . .something's terribly wrong!"
Enishi nodded and snickered. "Listen to me Kaoru! I hate you! I hate you and I hate you more each day! You don't deserve to be my girlfriend anymore!"
Kaoru frowned in anger. "I don't WANT to be your girlfriend anymore! I realize what you are now! You're just a slimy criminal! A scoundrel! A raper!!!"
Enishi hissed at her.
Kaoru let the tears flow from her eyes. "I believed in you Enishi Yukishiro! I really did! I thought we had it, together, dancing together, always together. But now? Your sister rules over you, doesn't she? You don't care about me do you?" ((AN: I was just watching Fushigi Yugi at the part where Yui is all screaming at Tamahome. * snicker * Sorry but I'm just in the mood for betrayal. . .^_^;))
"I don't care about you! I never did! In fact, remember when you cried so much over your parent's deaths????"
Kaoru gasped again.
Enishi laughed, manically. "I'm the one who killed them! That's right! I am the one!"
Kaoru shook her head, slowly. "No. . .no. . . no I don't believe you. . .NO I DON'T BELIEVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!"
To Be Continued. . .
Author's Notes: Hey there!!! Thank you for reading! I had a lot of fun writing the ending part. Never watch 'Fushigi Yugi' at the part when Yui is all "I wish I had died!!!" and all that stuff, * gesh what a cry baby -_-; * and THEN watch 'Dead Again' with Kenneth Branagh and Emma Thompson. If you do, THIS is the result. Lol ^_^ REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW!!! Tell me what you think minna-sama!!! ^_~
Sadness Lurks Behind Everyone: Hey. Thank you SO much for saying that my story is worth reading. That makes me * tear * so * tear * happy. . . YOU'RE SO COOL! . . . .ahem. You asked a question. "Why is Enishi all spooky now? How come he isn't the same old Enishi Kaoru once knew? What made him change?" those are very good questions, and I love you for that! I'm so happy! * dances around room * ahem. . . I will answer your questions in this nice long chapter. ^_^ Please review again!
kikikikikikikikiki*mimimimimimi : I'm really sorry if it appears that I'm giving Aoshi the stiff shoulder. GOMEN! ^_^ I am a HUGE fan of Aoshi- sama, cuz you know everybody loves him. *drools all over keyboard * ahem. . . So I'll try to do what you said. To lay off him a little. ^_^ I'll make him crack a smile or something. . .lol. Please review again!
Tis the season to be jolly. . . : HI!!! Thank you so much for reviewing! Nice question you had. "When will Kenshin turn into a human?" well, afraid I can't make him turn into a human in THIS chapter, but I will tell you this : Kenshin WILL turn into a human eventually, and just between you and me. . . * well some other people might be reading this but I doubt it, not many people read stupid author's notes and all that crap * Kenshin will turn into a human somewhere in the chapters of the late teens or early twenties. I wanna make this a long story! ^_^ Please review again!
Fluffy is my cat;) : Hello and THANK YOU FOR REVIEWING!!! You make me so happy. * sniff * Chibi feels. . . * sniff * so loved. . .* cries and hugs Fluffy * YOU ARE SO COOL!!!! * still crying * ahem. . . * sniff * Please review again! . . . oh and I'll make Kenshin act like a donkey * cough * I mean * cough * let Rurouni take over. ^_~
Disclaimer: I don't own my muses, I just play with them.
On with the story! YAY!
Chapter Six
Kaoru still couldn't put her finger on it. Kenshin was acting weird, she knew it. It was the morning after the fight with Enishi that Kaoru and Kenshin ate breakfast together. They watched tv.
But Kenshin wasn't listening. (This is so stupid. . .)
[What is?] Rurouni demanded.
Battousai sighed. (The fact that we're even here!)
[And why is that so stupid?]
(Because. . .well. . .) Battousai growled, (I don't know! It's just. . .STUPID!)
Rurouni sighed, and looked down at his hands. [I suppose you're right. I mean, what are we supposed to do here?]
Battousai got an evil grin on his face. (Well. . .)
[BESIDES flirting with Kaoru-dono.]
(Kaoru-DONO?!?)
Rurouni blushed. [Well yes. As far as I'm concerned, that's what you would say to a person you just met.]
Battousai frowned, (But we didn't JUST meet her! We met her . . .) he thought about it for a moment or two. . .or maybe it was three. . .(Four days ago!)
Rurouni sighed, [Has it really been four days?]
(I dunno, it could be three. . .I've lost track. . .)
Rurouni growled, very out of character. [This story isn't going anywhere!!! We've got to do something!] he turned to Battousai. [I know! To make this story ACTUALLY move around a bit I'll. . .]
Battousai looked confused. (What story?)
Rurouni sat back down, annoyed. [The story we're in.]
(We're in a story?)
Rurouni rolled his eyes. [Yes!]
(Uhhh. . .I'm not following you.)
Rurouni sighed. He leaned closer to Battousai and whispered something into his ear. Battousai's face went from confused to a grin. (OHHHHHH!!!!! THAT story!)
Rurouni sighed once more and whipped the sweat from his forehead. [Finally you understand.]
Battousai suddenly stood up. (HEY! What am I getting paid for this contract? Awww what a bunch of. . .)
Rurouni shushed him.
Battousai was near tears. (But. . .but but. . . . this isn't enough of a salary!)
Rurouni rolled his eyes. [Talk about it with the boss LATER!!!! We're on the air!!!]
They both turned to the audience, blushed, smiled weakly, giggled really girly, then ran off stage.
Kenshin nearly growled. Kaoru turned to him with wide eyes. "What's going on Kenshin? What's wrong? Geesh I swear it's like you have personal battles inside that head of yours!"
Kenshin sighed, "You have NO idea. . ."
(What was it you were talking about?)
[About what?] Rurouni asked.
(About making this story move along?)
Rurouni smiled. [OHHH!!!] he coughed. [Yes well. . .ahem. . . as I was saying : to make this story move along, I'll take over!]
Battousai's eyes widened. (YOU'LL WHAT????)
[I'll take over!]
(Oh NO you don't!)
[Let go of me!]
(There's no way I'm letting you near Kaoru!)
[Stop the tickling!!! Stop the. . .ORORORORORORORO!!!!!] he faints from laughing so hard.
Battousai snickers. (Hahah. . .works every time. . .)
Kaoru raised an eyebrow. 'I swear there's something wrong with this guy. . .'
Kaoru jus then realized she had to go to dance class that day. She sighed. "Well, gotta go dance with Sanosuke. . ."
Kenshin turned to her. "Oh yah! What about this 'Sanosuke' guy?"
Kaoru looked at him. "Well. . . I'm pretending to be his girlfriend."
Kenshin raised an eyebrow. "Pretending?"
Kaoru nodded.
Kenshin thought for a moment. "I could dance with you!" he smiled at
her.
Kaoru smiled back. "Really? Sanosuke isn't a very good dancer. . .so it would be GREAT if you would dance with me for a change!"
Kenshin frowned, "But what about Sanosuke? Wouldn't he get angry?"
Kaoru smiled, "Oh don't worry, he's not that type of person.
~ * ~
"YOU'RE DANCING WITH WHO????????" Sanosuke yelled.
Kaoru smiled, meakly. "With Kenshin. . ."
"And who's this Kenshin guy?"
"Uhh. . . a friend of mine. . ."
"What am I not good enough at dancing for you?"
"No no no! That's not it Sanosuke. . ."
"Why I oughta. . ."
Kenshin stepped in, and grabbed Sanosuke wrist. "That'll be enough of this argument, that it will, de gozaru yo."
Kaoru turned to him. 'What's with the manners? And his eyes. . . so violet! So pure and violet!'
Sanosuke frowned and growled at Kenshin, "So who are you? This 'Kenshin' I've been hearing about?"
Kenshin nodded. "Yes. My name is Kenshin Himura."
Sanosuke sneered, "Fine. Dance with her. She's all yours. I don't need her anymore."
Kaoru then lost her temper. "YOU? DON'T NEED ME???? I was the one who needed YOU!" she growled, "To get back at Enishi!"
Kenshin looked at her. "Enishi? You pretended to be Sanosuke's girlfriend to get back at Enishi?" he thought for a moment. "What would that do?"
Kaoru sighed. "I thought he'd get jealous." She blinked away a tear.
Her dance teacher stamped her feet. "Would you take it out in the hallway?" she asked.
Kaoru, Kenshin and Sanosuke stepped outside. Kaoru sighed again.
Kenshin frowned, "How did you and Enishi break up, anyway?"
Sanosuke turned soft, showing that he wasn't that big a bully. "Hey, hey, Jou-chan. Don't worry, you can tell us."
Kenshin nodded.
Kaoru looked at them with teary eyes. "Well. . .it all was such a beautiful relationship. He was so handsome, and I loved him so much!"
`~`~`~`~`FLASHBACK`~`~`~`~`
Enishi turned to look at Kaoru. "Kaoru-chan. . .darling. . .there's something I need to tell you."
Kaoru smiled. "What is it dear?"
Enishi frowned, and sighed. "Kaoru. . . I know that going back on everything I've said would be bad. Everything I said about loving you. . .about. . . wanting to be with you forever. . ."
Kaoru's smile was lost when she realized what was about to happen.
Enishi looked up at her. "I have really always loved you. . .but there is someone else who needs me more then you do. My sister. You remember her right?"
Kaoru's eyes widened with fear.
"She recently became sick. I love my sister with all my heart, and I would do anything for her. While I was away the other day, I went to see her. She had a friend there." Enishi breathed between his sentences. "She is my big sister, and she told me I shouldn't be with you. She told me I ought to be with her friend. I got to know her friend, and. . . I love her. I love her more then you. I'm sorry Kaoru, but . . . it's over. I can't disobey my sister."
Kaoru frowned. "If you really love me then you WOULD go against your sister's command! You would forget that girl and come back to me!"
Enishi frowned. "But that's the thing! Kaoru! I don't love you anymore! I never really loved you! I was just with you to try and get over the grief of my father's death! I never loved you! It was all a lie!"
Kaoru gasped. She stepped back a foot. "So. . .you never really loved me. . ."
"I never loved you Kaoru. In fact, you get on my nerves! I don't know how I put up with you!"
Kaoru shook her head. "You're not the Enishi I know and love. Something's wrong. . .something's terribly wrong!"
Enishi nodded and snickered. "Listen to me Kaoru! I hate you! I hate you and I hate you more each day! You don't deserve to be my girlfriend anymore!"
Kaoru frowned in anger. "I don't WANT to be your girlfriend anymore! I realize what you are now! You're just a slimy criminal! A scoundrel! A raper!!!"
Enishi hissed at her.
Kaoru let the tears flow from her eyes. "I believed in you Enishi Yukishiro! I really did! I thought we had it, together, dancing together, always together. But now? Your sister rules over you, doesn't she? You don't care about me do you?" ((AN: I was just watching Fushigi Yugi at the part where Yui is all screaming at Tamahome. * snicker * Sorry but I'm just in the mood for betrayal. . .^_^;))
"I don't care about you! I never did! In fact, remember when you cried so much over your parent's deaths????"
Kaoru gasped again.
Enishi laughed, manically. "I'm the one who killed them! That's right! I am the one!"
Kaoru shook her head, slowly. "No. . .no. . . no I don't believe you. . .NO I DON'T BELIEVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!"
To Be Continued. . .
Author's Notes: Hey there!!! Thank you for reading! I had a lot of fun writing the ending part. Never watch 'Fushigi Yugi' at the part when Yui is all "I wish I had died!!!" and all that stuff, * gesh what a cry baby -_-; * and THEN watch 'Dead Again' with Kenneth Branagh and Emma Thompson. If you do, THIS is the result. Lol ^_^ REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW!!! Tell me what you think minna-sama!!! ^_~