OMG! I'm sorry you guys! I had this chapter all ready to roll in my head and totally forgot about it! Here is a personalized disclaimer for Anonymous (the bastard/bitch) saying I don't own the script for down with love seeing as how they hated the story enough to read every chapter before reviewing saying I ripped off the whole movie and everything is exactly the same! I have sinned! SO I'LL SEE YOU IN HELL ANONYMOUS! Ahem! (big smile) on with da fic!
Disclaimer: Hell I don't own it OKAY!
-----------------------------------------------------------------------
Down with Love
Chapter 17
Party over Here! Part 1
----------------------------------------------------------------------- (Amy pov)
I looked at the gift sitting before me with tentative eyes. I knew it was rude but it was necessary. Any gift from Mina was to be handled with extreme care. I slowly opened the wrapping hanging on by the edge of my seat. Inch by cautious inch I unfolded the haphazard wrapping.
I could see her expression out of the corner of my eye. By the looks of it she was having trouble sitting still. Unprepared I stilled in my actions. Was this really safe? Surely I could just open her gift last. I'm sure she wouldn't mind.
"Amy, hurry up and open the damn thing!"
Nevermind.
I ripped open the package and held my breath as I removed the lid. The deep breath left my lungs in a whoosh.
"No."
-------------------------------------------------------------------------- (Greg pov)
This was crazy! What the hell was I thinking when I said yes to this? I down yet another beer only to spit it all back out when yet another nearly naked girl went by. I ignored the cheers of my ever gentlemanly companions and excused myself.
I watched as Andrews eyes roomed every two seconds his eyes found another young woman to admire from afar. "Alright, but you'd better hurry Greg! You haven't seen anything yet!"
That was what scared me.
My nose couldn't take much more of this torture. I stumbled through the dark and neon lights trying to find any sign of a bathroom. Seeing a door I headed in that direction. Walking straight after a few beers was the hardest thing to accomplish. I ran into a few dancers giving a slurred apology.
I reached my destination with no time to spare. I waited patiently as a few men exited excitedly speaking of things that just flew over my head. Entering the dark room I scratched my head wondering why the bathroom was almost darker than the other room. Best to just let it go. I walked farther back shutting out the sounds of the other men in the vicinity. Knowing it was better not to know what was causing those sounds.
I stood there for what felt like hours going around in circles. Feeling another wave of nausea I decided it was time to go back. I tripped cursing the alcohol in my system. I awaited the fall that never came. Something broke my fall. Whatever it was I had fallen face first into it. I felt around grabbing hold to whatever it was and straightening myself up.
I should have just stayed where I was. I looking up revealed two brown eyes and the most seductive smirk I had ever seen. I now knew what the same cushion I was still holding onto was. I watched fascinated as her tongue jetted out to wet two full lips.
"You have to pay extra for that type of attention mister!" Knowing enough was enough I ran as fast as my legs could carry me bloody nose in full action.
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- (Raye pov)
I could never look at her the same way again. I had confronted Amy with the grocery escapade. She had blushed ten shades of red before informing me of the truth. I was embarrassed beyond belief and we both agreed to never utter a word to anyone.
I looked around the room at all the familiar faces. Serena was grasping her present for Amy chatting incessantly about her mystery man. Molly was hanging on to her every word. Every other sentence she would interject giving her own little comments on her date with Maxwell and the ritual would begin again.
My gaze traveled over to Mina. Ever ecstatic. She wiggled every which way as Amy took her time delicately unwrapping the horrendous wrapping job. I giggled as I saw the look she kept giving the package compared to the look Mina was giving the package.
A gasp of surprise filled the room as the box was finally opened. My groan was heard as I put my head in my hands.
She wouldn't.
Would she?
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------- (Mina pov)
Amy's eyes glazed over as she opened her present. I throw my hands around her shoulders to give her the biggest hug of the century. "SURPRISE! Do ya like it Amy? I knew it was be perfect for you! I grabbed it as soon as I saw it in the window. They're to wear on your honeymoon!" I beamed. Satisfaction coursed through me at the look on her face. She pulled out my gift and stared at it quizzically.
"But Mina…there are only a pair of heels in here." I nodded my head emphatically.
The looks I got around the room were priceless. Serena looked at me and her smirk mirrored mine. She agreed with my present. Molly looked a tad bit confused. She leaned over to whisper to Sere who whispered back and the look was gone. Raye's smile had been replaced with a frown as she rubbed her temples. I chuckled knowing that was not the same gift I told her I was considering. She may not know it but Amy and Greg would thank me for them later.
"Happy Honeymoon Ames!"
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- (Chad pov)
We were worried. Greg had gone off on his own almost 10 minutes ago and hadn't been seen since. Andrew had agreed to go find him but I knew that would lead to a dead end. Being the only sober one I bribed the bartender to watch Andy while I went to look for Greg.
I got sidetracked but I finally found him. He was huddled over a sink with his back to me. The water had been turned full blast and I tapped him on the shoulder to make my presence known. He snapped his head up and I tried my best not to laugh. He looked around frantically before finally relaxing. The two tissues stuffed up his nose only made the problem worse. The blood had seeped past the tissue in his nose and was now on part of the tissue on the outside of his nose.
He had gone deathly paled and was muttering about crazy strippers and how he would never trip again. Those laughs were surfacing again and I stifled them as best as I could.
I failed .
He looked at me desperately but I just led him back to the bar and took a incoherent Andrew with us back to my car.
This was going to be a long night!
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------
(gasp) no sere or dare! Not to worry the next chap. Will have more of them I promise. This is my two parter (wow I've never had one of those)
Now for the part I know you all love…RESPONSES!
Archangel Rhapsody- glad you like it!
Allimba- yes seduction can make the world go round to! Her is a new chappie! See ya at part 2!
Forever Tranquility- steamy goodness! Ahh…sorry I almost made you fall off a cliffe! Here is your part 1 see ya at part2
BradyBunch4529- yes we will take him down a peg or two. And if we fail….there is always my other story! CSTM! I love making him mad in that story. I thought it would be nice to part in that part form the movie. Except they weren't dancing when it happened in the movie! Yes.. the louse has to show he real self from time to time! Your great grandfather? Thanx for understanding btw! Action packed Lol. Here is part 1 see ya at the next part!
starzstruck-1- black and hot pink! Those colors always look good together. Those were almost my school colors if we had had our way! Lol. It was a close vote but other colors won! Navy blue and dark green ewie! May b I should email you sometime! I'm sure ppl don't like it when we babble like this! I'm sorry for the lack of action between our favorite dysfunctional couple. I am trying to finish the minor char. first so the rest of the story can be only about them with cameos from the other char. like the beginning of the story. U see? Makes things easier. Here are your personalizations! Give ya a shout sometime! See ya at part 2!
animerocksjapanrocks- yes and that part is coming sooner than you think. It comes a little after….well…I shouldn't spoil the surprise. I'll give you a hint on how to tell when it's coming! Look to the movie for guidance! Yes I speak a little Japanese nothing to be proud of but enough to make me happy for the moment. Konnichiw!a Ogenki desu ka? (sp?) and stuff like that! This year I am taking a class in jap. I hope to go there some day but I have never been there. I hear it's beautiful! Have you been there? See ya on part 2!
Chikara- yes sere/dare/catcher what a threesome! Part 2 will be longer. My friend next door is coming over to poke me with a stick every time I try to stop. She won't let me stop until I have written at least 10 pages instead of my regular 4-6 pages! Kami help me! see ya next time
amazing-jax- (hangs head) yes I know! But the shorter they are the more of them that come out! Think of it that way! I hope you will be here for my next chapter!
Moongirl5657- oh no! nonlowfat! I pity the person who left that there! Catch the traitor!
devilsheart- thanx
cerillion- I think you wouldn't have my chapters any other way..jp..jp..be paitent I will write a long chapter I promise!
emmastarz- I love seductive sere! Of course he will fall for it! She's SEDUCTIVE SERE DAMMIT! Lol!
xX Silver Cat Xx- here is an update! (big hug( of course you don't sound annoying! You don't know how important the was to my sanity that you said something. I have automatic spell check on Microsoft word. If a little red line doesn't appear under my words telling my something is wrong I leave it alone. Everytime I spelled minutes it looked wrong but when I asked spell check it said it was okay. I DO know how to spell it but when a machine that is supposed to know Japanese Spanish Chinese and all those other languages doesn't give me a suggestion of more than one word it makes me look dumb! Lol! No harm done at all.
Neonlights- it's good to know someone likes a story like that. lol. I thought someone was going to attack me if I didn't put sere and dare together right away! Lol I do the review history too. Either that or author alert. They both let me know fast when a story was last updated. I take no offense
PisxiePam- I already answered you in full detail. Hmmm. So tell AnonymousKitsune I say hi! And take care of yourself!
andraia- I hope I spelled it rite! No prob glad you like the story!
Don't eat yellow snow- omg. You have one of the best names I have ever seen! Lol! You live in tenn?! Kool! I wish I had known you sooner. I could have had then stargaze in tenn with your help!
Urmi- thanx! Lol! Glad u like! Lots of love!
pamela- lol! Yes you have told me before. That doesn't mean I ever get tired of hearing it! lol
jesa22- here is an update I can't wait to see you at part 2! Which character is more like me?....Raye and Sere I would have to say! If I had to pick from my other story it would definitely have to be SERE! Unless…you're talking about the anime…then I really don't know! Tee hee! I DEMAND TO SEE YOU AGAIN! Best of luck!
Anonymous- Screw You! Stay away from my story since you seem to hate it so much you little prick! GOD!