paula wang
i wish you would keep on writing about magic mirror on the wall to course a fairy tale i think it is a great story and i think you should keep on writing

Me:Thanks since it is thanksgiving I'm going to update.I'll TRY to update.

jennifer011121
hey you kilala are you going to keep writing all of your stories

Me:Ya

Elfin Kagome
hums along to No More Words I'm hooked on this song! Anyhow, I think Kikyou should be paired with...thinks...Aw, heck, why pair her with anyone?

Me:You must be hooked up to No More Works.I won't pair Kikyou with many one then.

CrystalGemMaker
Hey, that was good. I think you rushed it a bit but it's still great. Maybe just a few more details.

Did you know that song was a remake of an all girls band's song? It was about an affair too. Sorry I watch VH1 way too much. (Are Lips Are Sealed.)
Anyway, I thought that was cool information even though you probably couldn't care less and I'm going to shut up now.

Okay, so update soon!

ME:Ya I did rushed.And NO I did not know that.

trixie-trix
i love this story! nope...i don't think miroku will learn. i love that song. well, i can't wait to read more! I'll review every chapter from now on! i hope it helps! bye!

Kat Rose's Petals
great story i love the plot. i stink at writing stories. when i read your story it fasinated me! keep going your doing a great job!

Me: I sink at writing stories.

crystal
interesting chap.hope u update soon,very interested to see wat the next chap will be like.

Me:Then NO MORE WAITING!Lets get on with the story.
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The magic mirror
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"I soooooooooo sorry Keade!We ran into someone on the way."Kagome wined.

"(Sigh)Okay BUT next time don't do that again."The lady claimed as Keade began to walk.Kagome and Sango followed.

(meanwhile at a place)

"Mirror Mirror on the wall!

who should be the the person I drain there soul from?

To seek there there youth and live forever young appearance?"A EVIL grin appeared on a beautiful womans face.There the women stood or as we see she looks like a woman.Is she a women?She wore a beautiful lice dress.

"THE PERSON YOU SEEK IS ....SATAIN!"The woman went away and the mirror asked to herself,"I hate this job.Telling her young souls.But that is my job,It is the only way my children lives."

Back to Kagome

Today was like before.Me practicing bow and Sango with the boomerang.Then learning about herbs.Hi as you know I'm Kagome.I'm 16.I live with my wick stepsister.I'm the 1st daughter of Higerlashi's.

I walked down the path with Sango.We reached my house/

"By Sango!See you tomorrow!"I entered the house.

"Stupid girl!Where have you been?Come help me sew this dress"A Beautiful lady came down and thew her dress to Kagome"Oh and by the way we're out of thread so go out and buy some............Also fix yourself"With that Kagome's stepsister left Kagome.

Normal pov.

Indeed Kagome was a mess.Her hair was a mess because of practicing.Her old clothes are more torn and dirty then it used to be.Kagome looked in the mirror and said ,"What did I do to deserve this?Mirror ,mirror why me?Why me?" as she left the mirror shined bright blue."Daughter,my daughter.Life is going to be better.Trust me."

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Ahhhhhhhhhhhh(Dodges weapons)I'm sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sorry!I hate my teacher!She gives as too much homework.So I'm not online that much.I'll try to update faster.If I don't update in 2 weeks email me with "HEY WOMAN GET YOUR BUTT OVER HERE AND UPDATE!" or something like that.again I'm soooooooooooooooooo sorry!

This chapter sucked!it was only soo little but I ran out of ideas.I got the other chapters written on my book but it takes me a while to type it on computer.

until next time

-je ne