youReviews:
Pupulupk: ROTFL (roll on the floor laughing) I laughed so hard. Thank you so much for your reviews, in both lotr and now hp. I really appreciate you reading both stories even though your are more the lotr fan. My lotr story is coming, I'm just having troubles with fanfiction at the moment. Thanks again.
Isolde: WOW. * looks at you in amazement * I thank you so much. You are just so fantastic! You helped me so much. I can't thank you enough. All I can say is thank you, oh and (hehe) I LOVED your story. I said it in your review but I'll say it again. If there are any readers out there that has not read this author stories I really encourage you to. (Did you mind me saying that?)
Meg: I Thankyou also for your help. I am continuing with this story. Although I'm grounded, yes grounded. * Hangs head in shame * and I don't even know what for. I'm not suppose to be on the Internet, but what mum doesn't know wont hurt her ;). hehe.
Totaloser: yes I must agree with you, he is more then a hottie and he is a hunk. Although I'm not to sure about YOUR Draco. hehe, but I'm sure if I lend him to you there should be no problems with that... ;)... jj.
Draco's girl: Thanks for your support, I'm glad you agree with me. I think Draco (tom felton) (thanks for telling me his name) she win the next quiditch match next time, and teach that harry a lesson! And make a fool out of him. * Evil grin * damn there I go again, protecting Draco. * hides under table *
Farseer: I'm glad you said it wasn't a flame. Therefor I didn't take it as one. J hehe. Well I have not read the books. I'm sorry that I haven't. I just need my sis to find them. Thank you for tell me the brown haired boys name.. (Justin Finch-Fletchy.) although I just put in that he's another character. Soz if that upsets you.
Silver Dragon Goddess: I LOVE you name! I absolutely LOVE it. Where did you think it up? Ahhhhhh, its now 6:49am and the sun just blinded me. * covers eyes * I've been up from 12:00am writing this chapter plus playing with my dog. hehe. (she's sooo cute) geez I got off track. Thank you sooo much for your review. Harry does suck. That goodie goodie. curses him, curse them all. Sorry my lotr side is showing. * looks shyly at you * eeep.
Sake: awwwwww, I'm glad you think I did great. You make me happy. I see you obviously don't like Hermione then. well you'll be glad to know that.. no wait I don't want to give any hints about the ending do I? Or did I? Oh well, I haven't decided on the full ending yet. And draco hasn't dies. yet. well not in the last chapter. mwu haahahahahaha.
water demon: OH PEOPLES. GO SEE THIS AUTHORS STORY, ITS SOOOOO GOOD, I ABSOLUTLY LOVED IT. (Was I aloud to say that?) I'm your fav reviewer. awwwwwwwww * turns head and blushes * I'm glad I could help you. Oh and. I have another piece of advise for you.. WRITE YOUR 5th CHAPTER I'M DYING!. ok I'm alright.
beckie13: Last but not least. does that make sense? Sorry if it doesn't. As I said before I've had no sleep. Thanks for you review, I really appreciated it. Hehe, gives you a tissue, you must be drooling a lot. :D I'll say his name. tom felton. are you drooling yet? Oh damn, I am :S. hehe
Thanks for all that reviewed:
Hope you like this chapter. it hasn't been proofed read. * Puts hands in the air * not yet anywaz, so I'm sorry if that upsets you in anyway. Sorry for the grammar and spelling mistakes, I really am hopeless at English. And writing this chapter at 12:00am till 6:00am with some brakes is NOT a good idea. (a little tip for all you people that were going to try it.)
NOTE: PLEASE ANYONE ONE TELL ME HOW TO SPELL THERE NAMES RIGHT. I WOULD LOVE TO KNOW, AS I AM SURE I HAVE GOTTEN THEM WRONG, SO DON'T GIVE ME A FLAME SAYING I SPELT THEM WRONG! AND NO FLAMING PLEASE, IT ONLY BRINGS PEOPLE DOWN.
On a happier note: please right and review for reviews make my day, as I'm sure they do for you. I have not read the books. I repeat I have not. I will, but my sis is currently hidden them. Actually she just can't find them. Hehe. This is set in there 2nd year at Hogwarts. As you can tell, by the scene I have chosen in the first chapter.
Disclaimer: Runs away with Draco, a rope in his mouth and his hands tied. ' I got him I got him.' Wakes up. * sis walks in * 'so you've been having that dream again?' damn! Ok I don't own any charracters, except in my dreams. Can I own them there?
Harry potter 2nd chapter: More angst. I can't help myself.
The poison had an immediate effect. His body felt cold and clammy, and began to tremble. He watched as Hermione panicked and cast a few spells. He could feel the poison slow, but the venom was to powerful. It caused the spell to backfire and after a few moment it made the venom speed up faster. Slowly the world began to fade and shutting his eyes he fell into a soundless sleep.
Seconds later the large, heavy door flew open with great speed. Darkness followed the dark, cloaked figure that walked irritably into the great hall and pushed through the crowd that had formed a circle around the fallen student.
Hermione looked up only to wish she hadn't. Holding Draco in her arms, she gripped him tighter, which only caused him to make a slight sharp, pain- filled cry. She delicately settled him back onto the floor and placed her quivering hand on his burning forehead. Snape had attempted to take him off her, but Hermione was determined not let go until the nurse came with the antidote that would save Draco. The students had been surprised to see that Hermione would not submit to the professor. Snape turned sharply, and with long strides made his way out of the door to get the nurse.
The room turned icy cold, making the students tremble, and worsening Draco's condition. His life was hanging on by a thread and with every passing minute his conditioned deteriorated.
A hand reached downs and grabed Hermiones robes, pulling her away from Draco. A clocked man took off his hood to reveal his face and attempted to take his son from Hermione. The girl only looked up at him with surprised and determination and without so much of a hint of fear, turned back to Draco. Lucious grin evily.
'Get away from him you dirty mudblood.' Lucious eyes locked with Hermiones. 'Give him to me.' His strong arms held onto his son as he began to make his way back towards the door to make his exit.
'What are you going to do with him? He needs to be treated. Madam Pomfrey will be here soon with the antidote. He is dying, and...and with each minute I fear he is getting worse.' Hermione voice faltered as she desperately tried to hold on to Draco but did not succeed and now felt as though her saviour was in the wrong hands. Standing up she ran and followed Lucious towards the door and yelled at him to stop. Both glared at the other, their eyes dancing with fire, neither daring to be the first to look away.
Draco gradually regained his consciousness but could only make out a blurred form and that he was no longer on the floor but in somebody's arms.
Lucious broke the contact with Hermiones eyes and made his way quickly outside and over to a hidden corner at the back of Hogwarts. There he began a countering spell, which made the poison in his son's body cease.
Draco could now make out the form of his father. Immediately he began to scramble back against the wall and placed his hands over and covered his moistened face.
'I have slowed down the poison. I over perceived Professor Snape discussing to the nurse about the situation that happened in the grand hall. You are pathetic Draco. You better have a good justification for saving that mudblood.' With folded arms he lent down and forced Draco to look into his accusing eyes.
'Snake..about to bite Granger. Would have been my fault. Didn't..want to get expelled.' Every word was a struggle. His breathing was hitched and his vision struggled to stay focused on his fathers' form. Draco had spent six years at Hogwarts and every year his father would continually punish him for wrong behaviour and each day his father would gladly remind him that his destiny was to give his soul and life to Voldermort.
'You have destroyed the Malfoy's reputation. You will be punished for your senseless behaviour.' Removing his cloak and placing it on the stony rock next to him, he took at his wand. Standing up tall he pointed his wand at the cowering boy in the corner. 'Stand up!' Wide eyes filled with disgust and humiliation fixed with the weak exhausted ones.
Gradually Draco pulled himself to a standing position with help from the wall. He braced himself for what was next. There was nothing he could do; he was to weak to fight back and to exhausted to call for assistance. An unexpected wave of fear washed over him with an evil intent. He just stood there with his hands on his chest, hoping his father would not be too severe on him but he doubted that for in his fathers eyes he could see the heated flames.
'You will not disappoint me again.' He shouted. Keeping one eye on his son, Lucious waved his wand in the air. 'Pendartay extingray.' A great bolt of lightning filled the air like a tornado. The night sky became starless as a dark cloud covered the night sky around Hogwarts. The lightning soared over Lucious's head and with one quick flick of the wrist flew with great velocity towards Draco.
'Where could he have taken him?' Hermione had not stopped searching for Draco as had none of the students either. Hermione suddenly stoped and collapsed to the ground. Black spots danced before her eyes and after a few moments of taking in deep breaths she fell out of consciousness.
When she awoke a group of people stood silently around her. Focussing on the task at hand, she cautiously got to her feet. 'I know where he is.' Without another word she gradually made her direction to the back and outside the school.
Turning the corner the sight she saw was horrible and left her shocked and frozen.
Look down towards the bottom of your screen. a little lower. lower. Bingo, there you go you found it. Now all you have to do if push that little go button and make this angel a happie chappie angel. (Oh please no flames) I'm sure you don't appreciate them for your stories, and if you do. no comment.
Pupulupk: ROTFL (roll on the floor laughing) I laughed so hard. Thank you so much for your reviews, in both lotr and now hp. I really appreciate you reading both stories even though your are more the lotr fan. My lotr story is coming, I'm just having troubles with fanfiction at the moment. Thanks again.
Isolde: WOW. * looks at you in amazement * I thank you so much. You are just so fantastic! You helped me so much. I can't thank you enough. All I can say is thank you, oh and (hehe) I LOVED your story. I said it in your review but I'll say it again. If there are any readers out there that has not read this author stories I really encourage you to. (Did you mind me saying that?)
Meg: I Thankyou also for your help. I am continuing with this story. Although I'm grounded, yes grounded. * Hangs head in shame * and I don't even know what for. I'm not suppose to be on the Internet, but what mum doesn't know wont hurt her ;). hehe.
Totaloser: yes I must agree with you, he is more then a hottie and he is a hunk. Although I'm not to sure about YOUR Draco. hehe, but I'm sure if I lend him to you there should be no problems with that... ;)... jj.
Draco's girl: Thanks for your support, I'm glad you agree with me. I think Draco (tom felton) (thanks for telling me his name) she win the next quiditch match next time, and teach that harry a lesson! And make a fool out of him. * Evil grin * damn there I go again, protecting Draco. * hides under table *
Farseer: I'm glad you said it wasn't a flame. Therefor I didn't take it as one. J hehe. Well I have not read the books. I'm sorry that I haven't. I just need my sis to find them. Thank you for tell me the brown haired boys name.. (Justin Finch-Fletchy.) although I just put in that he's another character. Soz if that upsets you.
Silver Dragon Goddess: I LOVE you name! I absolutely LOVE it. Where did you think it up? Ahhhhhh, its now 6:49am and the sun just blinded me. * covers eyes * I've been up from 12:00am writing this chapter plus playing with my dog. hehe. (she's sooo cute) geez I got off track. Thank you sooo much for your review. Harry does suck. That goodie goodie. curses him, curse them all. Sorry my lotr side is showing. * looks shyly at you * eeep.
Sake: awwwwww, I'm glad you think I did great. You make me happy. I see you obviously don't like Hermione then. well you'll be glad to know that.. no wait I don't want to give any hints about the ending do I? Or did I? Oh well, I haven't decided on the full ending yet. And draco hasn't dies. yet. well not in the last chapter. mwu haahahahahaha.
water demon: OH PEOPLES. GO SEE THIS AUTHORS STORY, ITS SOOOOO GOOD, I ABSOLUTLY LOVED IT. (Was I aloud to say that?) I'm your fav reviewer. awwwwwwwww * turns head and blushes * I'm glad I could help you. Oh and. I have another piece of advise for you.. WRITE YOUR 5th CHAPTER I'M DYING!. ok I'm alright.
beckie13: Last but not least. does that make sense? Sorry if it doesn't. As I said before I've had no sleep. Thanks for you review, I really appreciated it. Hehe, gives you a tissue, you must be drooling a lot. :D I'll say his name. tom felton. are you drooling yet? Oh damn, I am :S. hehe
Thanks for all that reviewed:
Hope you like this chapter. it hasn't been proofed read. * Puts hands in the air * not yet anywaz, so I'm sorry if that upsets you in anyway. Sorry for the grammar and spelling mistakes, I really am hopeless at English. And writing this chapter at 12:00am till 6:00am with some brakes is NOT a good idea. (a little tip for all you people that were going to try it.)
NOTE: PLEASE ANYONE ONE TELL ME HOW TO SPELL THERE NAMES RIGHT. I WOULD LOVE TO KNOW, AS I AM SURE I HAVE GOTTEN THEM WRONG, SO DON'T GIVE ME A FLAME SAYING I SPELT THEM WRONG! AND NO FLAMING PLEASE, IT ONLY BRINGS PEOPLE DOWN.
On a happier note: please right and review for reviews make my day, as I'm sure they do for you. I have not read the books. I repeat I have not. I will, but my sis is currently hidden them. Actually she just can't find them. Hehe. This is set in there 2nd year at Hogwarts. As you can tell, by the scene I have chosen in the first chapter.
Disclaimer: Runs away with Draco, a rope in his mouth and his hands tied. ' I got him I got him.' Wakes up. * sis walks in * 'so you've been having that dream again?' damn! Ok I don't own any charracters, except in my dreams. Can I own them there?
Harry potter 2nd chapter: More angst. I can't help myself.
The poison had an immediate effect. His body felt cold and clammy, and began to tremble. He watched as Hermione panicked and cast a few spells. He could feel the poison slow, but the venom was to powerful. It caused the spell to backfire and after a few moment it made the venom speed up faster. Slowly the world began to fade and shutting his eyes he fell into a soundless sleep.
Seconds later the large, heavy door flew open with great speed. Darkness followed the dark, cloaked figure that walked irritably into the great hall and pushed through the crowd that had formed a circle around the fallen student.
Hermione looked up only to wish she hadn't. Holding Draco in her arms, she gripped him tighter, which only caused him to make a slight sharp, pain- filled cry. She delicately settled him back onto the floor and placed her quivering hand on his burning forehead. Snape had attempted to take him off her, but Hermione was determined not let go until the nurse came with the antidote that would save Draco. The students had been surprised to see that Hermione would not submit to the professor. Snape turned sharply, and with long strides made his way out of the door to get the nurse.
The room turned icy cold, making the students tremble, and worsening Draco's condition. His life was hanging on by a thread and with every passing minute his conditioned deteriorated.
A hand reached downs and grabed Hermiones robes, pulling her away from Draco. A clocked man took off his hood to reveal his face and attempted to take his son from Hermione. The girl only looked up at him with surprised and determination and without so much of a hint of fear, turned back to Draco. Lucious grin evily.
'Get away from him you dirty mudblood.' Lucious eyes locked with Hermiones. 'Give him to me.' His strong arms held onto his son as he began to make his way back towards the door to make his exit.
'What are you going to do with him? He needs to be treated. Madam Pomfrey will be here soon with the antidote. He is dying, and...and with each minute I fear he is getting worse.' Hermione voice faltered as she desperately tried to hold on to Draco but did not succeed and now felt as though her saviour was in the wrong hands. Standing up she ran and followed Lucious towards the door and yelled at him to stop. Both glared at the other, their eyes dancing with fire, neither daring to be the first to look away.
Draco gradually regained his consciousness but could only make out a blurred form and that he was no longer on the floor but in somebody's arms.
Lucious broke the contact with Hermiones eyes and made his way quickly outside and over to a hidden corner at the back of Hogwarts. There he began a countering spell, which made the poison in his son's body cease.
Draco could now make out the form of his father. Immediately he began to scramble back against the wall and placed his hands over and covered his moistened face.
'I have slowed down the poison. I over perceived Professor Snape discussing to the nurse about the situation that happened in the grand hall. You are pathetic Draco. You better have a good justification for saving that mudblood.' With folded arms he lent down and forced Draco to look into his accusing eyes.
'Snake..about to bite Granger. Would have been my fault. Didn't..want to get expelled.' Every word was a struggle. His breathing was hitched and his vision struggled to stay focused on his fathers' form. Draco had spent six years at Hogwarts and every year his father would continually punish him for wrong behaviour and each day his father would gladly remind him that his destiny was to give his soul and life to Voldermort.
'You have destroyed the Malfoy's reputation. You will be punished for your senseless behaviour.' Removing his cloak and placing it on the stony rock next to him, he took at his wand. Standing up tall he pointed his wand at the cowering boy in the corner. 'Stand up!' Wide eyes filled with disgust and humiliation fixed with the weak exhausted ones.
Gradually Draco pulled himself to a standing position with help from the wall. He braced himself for what was next. There was nothing he could do; he was to weak to fight back and to exhausted to call for assistance. An unexpected wave of fear washed over him with an evil intent. He just stood there with his hands on his chest, hoping his father would not be too severe on him but he doubted that for in his fathers eyes he could see the heated flames.
'You will not disappoint me again.' He shouted. Keeping one eye on his son, Lucious waved his wand in the air. 'Pendartay extingray.' A great bolt of lightning filled the air like a tornado. The night sky became starless as a dark cloud covered the night sky around Hogwarts. The lightning soared over Lucious's head and with one quick flick of the wrist flew with great velocity towards Draco.
'Where could he have taken him?' Hermione had not stopped searching for Draco as had none of the students either. Hermione suddenly stoped and collapsed to the ground. Black spots danced before her eyes and after a few moments of taking in deep breaths she fell out of consciousness.
When she awoke a group of people stood silently around her. Focussing on the task at hand, she cautiously got to her feet. 'I know where he is.' Without another word she gradually made her direction to the back and outside the school.
Turning the corner the sight she saw was horrible and left her shocked and frozen.
Look down towards the bottom of your screen. a little lower. lower. Bingo, there you go you found it. Now all you have to do if push that little go button and make this angel a happie chappie angel. (Oh please no flames) I'm sure you don't appreciate them for your stories, and if you do. no comment.