Reviews:
SerpentStar: I'm glad you don't care if I haven't read the books. :D. a lot of people do care and I thankyou for saying you don't. I too hope this story shows a lot of promise. I know.. I HATE it when people leave their stories unfinished. So I wont do that to you. :D. this story is going on to your favourite lists :D. YEY, thankyou :D. you've made this angel very happy indeed.
Melanie: was this soon enough for you? Hehe, good to here you want it to be updated :D. awwwwwww, you luv my story, :D. your so sweet. Eeep, theres this big spider looking at me.* runs away from computer * ok its gone soz about that. Where was I, oh yes, can't wait to read your story.
Cinnamon: I like cinnamon. :D.. yummm. On toast is nice. :P. ROTFL- stick me too my computer * stares at you with worried look on face * well lucky for me you haven't done it yet, and I've now got myself off the hook for posting this then ;). Kill draco, would I ever do that? Mwu ahahahahahaha, u'll just have to find out.
Reverie: heeeeee heeeeeeee heeeeeeeee. YOU ARE SO NICE! It's a shame you put it as an a anonamas review, I would luv to read your stories. I'll track you down some how though mwu hahahahaha you wait and see. :P your adding me to your fav's awwwwww. 'Your first chapter is on fire!' eeep, I hope that's a good thing.. :S lol, thanx :D I liked the first chappie too, I just hope I don't disapoint you and everyone else with the rest of the chapters. Tom hasn't even read a harry potter book yet either :O. lol. he's like me. :D we were ment to be together ;) I've got pictures of him in and out of his Draco M persona' whats that? If its good I wont one ;) lol. Thanx for your review sweety.
treachery89: OMG!!!! I just had a look at your stories, and I must say I AM SOOOOOOOO going to read them. don't worry this is a draco fic and he will try to. no wait don't want to give it away ;), me and my big mouth :P. lol. I'm glad its getting great, I really don't wont to disappoint you guys, and I always when ever I post them up feel that I am. But you will find out where this is going in the next few chappies, well I'm off to probably read you stories. Ok I'm back. I read your story. DON'T YOU DARE DO A RUNNER ON IT! ITS FANTASTIC! OMG! Eeep, are they going to find Draco in time? Ahhh, Hermione look in the forest! Ahhhh, you don't know what your story has done to me. I'm not posting up chappie 5 till you post up your next chapter!!!! Please post it! I can't stand ti when people give up on FANTASTIC stories.. ok so you haven't written a chappie in 3 weeks, and I know it could be for a reason, but I don't care! You get on your computer and type your story! Ahhhhhhh.. I'm dieing over here. eeep. * explodes from thinking about you not continuing your story * *ghost comes back * I will forever haunt you if you don't continue!
Totaloser: LOLOLOLOL. no I have decided to lend you Draco, you can't lend him back to me ;). LOLOLOLOL. Your so cool. I'm glad you liked the 2nd chapter, and thankyou for reviewing both chappies I really appreciate it .. :D. 'i love stories were his father tortures him then Hermione saves him' - so do I :D. and odn't worry there will be more Lucious torturing MY Draco later on. LOL
Steph: hehe, I think they did get a freakish connection, and no draco is not dead yet. or is he going to survive.. dun dun dun, you'll find out in chapter 4. I've written it. * looks at you with proud face * lol. TragicPixie@aol.com. oh I like. where did you think it up, or did you get it off something else?
tom4eva: tom4ever. I TOTALLY AGREE! I agree with you that I need to develop the chapters more, I'll give it a try, thanx for the advise :D. and I'm glad I'm spelling the characters right I had a guess. Lol.
MysticalWoodElf: LOL. I have one word for you, umm. no that's not it. T.H.A.N.K.S. lol, I couldn't think up a good one word.. * cries * I've read your story, well funny song thingy, and I must say I'm very impressed :D. another one word for you. C.O.N.T.I.N.U.E. lol.
b0ing: LOTFL. I like your name.. please don't take effence about me laughing about it. It really good and cute :D. I LIKE it. I'm glad you like my fic so far. thanx for you review :D
sakura angel90: ohhhhhhhhhhhhh, is that how you spell Lucius? LOL.. * looks shyly at you * lol yeah his dad is really really mean.. oh and I have a question for you, or anyone else. In the 2nd movie, was it Him that put the book in Ron's sisters.. (whats her name - mental blank) bag? To open the chamber of secrets. cause they made out they did. But I haven't read the book so I was just wondering :P
wow. thanx for all you guys who reviewed.. I really do appreciate them, they make me right another chappie each time.
Hope you like this chapter. it hasn't been proofed read. * Puts hands in the air * not yet anywaz, so I'm sorry if that upsets you
NOTE: PLEASE ANYONE ONE TELL ME HOW TO SPELL THERE NAMES RIGHT. I WOULD LOVE TO KNOW, AS I AM SURE I HAVE GOTTEN THEM WRONG, SO DON'T GIVE ME A FLAME SAYING I SPELT THEM WRONG! AND NO FLAMING PLEASE, IT ONLY BRINGS PEOPLE DOWN.
On a happier note: please right and review for reviews make my day, as I'm sure they do for you. I have not read the books. I repeat I have not. I will, but my sis is currently hidden them. Actually she just can't find them. Hehe. This is set in there 2nd year at Hogwarts. As you can tell, by the scene I have chosen in the first chapter.
Disclaimer: Well actually my friends and I have picked characters that we own... and guess what! I own Draco and Legolas. *faints *. but really for now I'll just say I don't. * Winks *
Well here it is.
Chapter three: Finding
Turning the corner the sight she saw was formidable and left her shocked and frozen.
There, lying face down on the stony concrete was Draco Malfoy pail and motionless. Blood flowed freely from a head wound and many other hidden cuts which caused a sticky, crimson puddle outlining his body.
As Hermione cautiously closed the gap between herself and Draco, more cuts and bruising on his face and chest was shown. A sharpened gasp could be perceived. She then found herself running across to her enemy/saviour. She layed her soft, delicate hand on his forehead but the heat caused it to burn so in one expeditious motion she tore it away and inclined his head so she could attempt and hopefully find a pulse. Sure enough there was one, but weak and elaborate. His shirt was still off, leaving his skin exposed like previously in the great hall. Hermione looked down at the snakebite and to her contentment the marks had stoped bleeding and now turned a brownish colour which ment the poison had stopped spreading freely throughout his quivering body. Gently rolling him into a sitting position she then attempted to carry the tall well built Draco Malfoy. She had only made it to a standing position, with Draco in her arms when she felt him slipping and her knees buckling under her.
Harry took in the situation quickly then raced to support Hermione. Holding her upright with Draco in her arms he felt himself, with one step at a time, walking slowly towards the hospital. He locked eyes with Hermione's and no words needed to be said. A silvery, wet tear rolled down her pail yet cheek. He tell that she felt it was her fault for Draco's life being on deaths door.
Blood dripped from the heavy individual they carried, causing a bloodied trail across the floor. The long silence had come to an end when Draco made a loud moan and shifted gently in their arms.
'He wakes.' Hermione said, anticipating that that was a sign that he would recuperate from the two traumatic events.
Harry did not respond, instead he looked straight-ahead; looking for any teacher that could aid them. They had not seen anybody since they had found Draco, which made them think that everyone must be searching for Malfoy elsewhere.
Lucious Malfoy left his son lying on the pavement unmoving as he heard someone make there way around the corner, which would give away what he had done. With no regret for what he had done he entered his mansion and walked towards his office. An evil smile appeared on his face, as a house elf asked how his young son was doing.
'Never better.' He replied coldly.
The small, green-eyed elf with decrepit attire followed his master into the room with slight hesitation.
He stopped abruptly 'You resist coming in. Why?' he said then continued walking.
'I mean no respect to you sir. I feel young Malfoy is in pain and that someone close had something to do with it.' He said with a scared yet hard tone. The house elf was not one who customarily spoke up especially not to a Malfoy. He knew precisely who and what had been done to Draco, he could sense it. He had served the Malfoy's for a long period of time now and his young master had never been too severe on him unlike his father. He stood now in the corner awaiting his masters' response and by the look on Lucious's face he had a conjecture that he would pay dearly for his words.
'Draco is fine.' He turned and faced the waist hight elf with cold eyes that darted between the elf and the door. Then sharply turning his back on the house elf he made his direction to the brown with gold adorned desk.
Lucious was not in the mood to be questioned by the elf, (which normally a house elf would not speak up and question his master at all.) and the elf knew this. Instead he took his maters hint and quickly left with his head down to appear he was remorseful about what he had said. He sealed the door behind himself. Leaving him in complete silence and alone in a room. With one snap of the fingers he went to find his young master.
Hermione perceptibly felt herself begin to loose hold of Draco. Her body was utterly exhausted. Just when she was about to collapse a house elf appeared infront of her and helped her maintain Malfoy.
The house elf named Mitty looked up and spotted Harry Potter, quickly she tore instantly her eyes away from Harry's scar. She had heard a lot about the boy-who-lived. Without another though she clicked fingers the three students appeared suddenly in the hospital.
Madam Pomfrey came around the bend to find Hermione falling to the floor with Draco in her arms looking as though his body had given up the fight for his life. While Harry was desperately trying to hold the both up and attempting to walk closer so he could place the two on a hospital bed.
'I have been looking for Mr Malfoy.' She quickly said and placed the blond haired boy on a bed. Then did the same to Hermione. 'Harry I must ask you to go wait outside.' There was no doubt that Draco had little hope to survive, but in the condition Hermione seemed to be in there seemed to be little hope for her also.
'But surely Hermione will be alright, she was fine about three minutes ago.' Harry could tell what was going through Madam Pomfrey's mind. He looked over towards one of his best friends and to his horror Hermiones face was pale and she trembled all over.
Well there it is :D. just when you thought the situation couldn't get any worse. now something is wrong with Hermione.. Mau hahahahaha.. Is this a cliffe? Lol
NO idea what a house elf powers have. soooo I just improvised. :S. was I alright? And I know he would not normally speeck up. I just wanted to show how cold hearted Lucious.
DO YOU WANT ME TO CONTINUE? OR GIVE UP? I MUST SAY I AM INJOYING THIS, BUT I DON'T WANT TO WRITE IT IF NO ONE IS ENJOYING IT.
I know this chapter was bit bad. was it? Well I would like the truth. but in no flame. I don't want to disapoint you guys, and I feel I am. I am trying, I really am. I'm not that bright. Infact I'm in the intermediate class at school. No one would pick me out for doing this. So I'm sorry if you hate this story, just don't review if you do.
See that little button at the bottom of the screen called 'GO' well don't be confused by it. it does not mean to go away from you computer at all. it actually means that you should click and do a nice happy review about this story :D. hehe. PLEASE.* puppy dog eyes * oohhh, and no flaming, they only bring people down, and who needs that? . Not me and not you. :P.
EXTRA: don't laugh: I thought I'd right a poem. Its sad but ow well. I'm not good at poems, but I would like you to review it, and tell me what you think. nicely.
They met one day by watching the stars, They exchanged phone numbers, and left in there cars. They had a lasting friendship for years and years, They have shared life secrets and had a few beers. Been through rough times and been through them together, They've relied on each other in the past and forever. They never gave up on there friendship at all, Cause if they did their friendship would fall. Their lives went on together like hand in hand, But one day she got married and moved to New Zealand. Everyday they would get letters in the post, Saying how they were going, and what they missed the most. Ten years has gone by without a letter or a note, Until one day she decided to post one by boat. Everything was wrong and his life was dim, He had no one to love, and no one loved him. Over in New Zealand her life has also been tough, And then the day she posted the letter she had had enough. She had gotten a divorce from her husband not long ago, And have been raped by supposedly friends and people she did not know. After she had posted the letter she gathered her things, She was now excited that she was going to meet him. The note said that she was coming over by plane, She had missed him a lot, and signed love Jane. The time had come, he had planned it for years, He entered the bar and had a few beers. Thinking it over while he sat there, A stranger had come and his life he did share. He told his life how it had been harsh and mean, But also how good with Jane it had been. With Jane in his head he left the bar, He got his things, and drove towards the airport - it wasn't far. Next to the airport there was a church, He hopped out of the car, and began to search. He found what he wanted and entered it quick, For what he was about to do made him feel dizzy and sick. Her plane had just hit the ground and now she felt ill, Something was not right, as she sat there completely still, 'The plane has stopped' the flight attendant said, She directed Jane, for Jane was bright red. 'Are you alright?' the attendant slowly asked, But Jane didn't reply, she just watched the t.v. her expression masked. Watching to the news, were many listening people, And there was her friend, pail, on top of a church steeple. Taking his life was the hardest thing he had to do, Without another thought he stood up and flew. Jane closed her eyes as he hit the ground, On her cheek, wet silvery tears flooded down. 'Did I not send the letter? I sent it by boat not long ago?' Jane asked the attendant trying not to let her feelings show. 'A post boat crashed, and the letters were lost and gone', Jane's knees buckled under her, as she began mourn. The loss of her greatest friend was just too much for her, But then a sound of a chopper made her look up and stir. 'The church is just next door' the attendant said, Having a guess on what was going on in Jane's head. Thanking the attendant and running outside and next door, Kneeling next to her friend, on the grassy floor. An ambulance came and took him away, But Jane did not move and there she did stay. A year went by and her life was good, But every year at the same date at the church she stood. Ten years had gone now, and the day had come, She got some flowers and outside the church she put thum. The wind blew her hair away from her cheek, She stood there for hours, she did not speak. Turning around to get back in the car, It was night by now so she looked up at a star. She promised herself she new she would never forget, Her best friend and how they first met.
Ok guys, hope you enjoyed it. Tell me what you think on this and the chapter. and if I should continue. cause chappie 3 and 4 I don't want to disappoint you guys with.
SerpentStar: I'm glad you don't care if I haven't read the books. :D. a lot of people do care and I thankyou for saying you don't. I too hope this story shows a lot of promise. I know.. I HATE it when people leave their stories unfinished. So I wont do that to you. :D. this story is going on to your favourite lists :D. YEY, thankyou :D. you've made this angel very happy indeed.
Melanie: was this soon enough for you? Hehe, good to here you want it to be updated :D. awwwwwww, you luv my story, :D. your so sweet. Eeep, theres this big spider looking at me.* runs away from computer * ok its gone soz about that. Where was I, oh yes, can't wait to read your story.
Cinnamon: I like cinnamon. :D.. yummm. On toast is nice. :P. ROTFL- stick me too my computer * stares at you with worried look on face * well lucky for me you haven't done it yet, and I've now got myself off the hook for posting this then ;). Kill draco, would I ever do that? Mwu ahahahahahaha, u'll just have to find out.
Reverie: heeeeee heeeeeeee heeeeeeeee. YOU ARE SO NICE! It's a shame you put it as an a anonamas review, I would luv to read your stories. I'll track you down some how though mwu hahahahaha you wait and see. :P your adding me to your fav's awwwwww. 'Your first chapter is on fire!' eeep, I hope that's a good thing.. :S lol, thanx :D I liked the first chappie too, I just hope I don't disapoint you and everyone else with the rest of the chapters. Tom hasn't even read a harry potter book yet either :O. lol. he's like me. :D we were ment to be together ;) I've got pictures of him in and out of his Draco M persona' whats that? If its good I wont one ;) lol. Thanx for your review sweety.
treachery89: OMG!!!! I just had a look at your stories, and I must say I AM SOOOOOOOO going to read them. don't worry this is a draco fic and he will try to. no wait don't want to give it away ;), me and my big mouth :P. lol. I'm glad its getting great, I really don't wont to disappoint you guys, and I always when ever I post them up feel that I am. But you will find out where this is going in the next few chappies, well I'm off to probably read you stories. Ok I'm back. I read your story. DON'T YOU DARE DO A RUNNER ON IT! ITS FANTASTIC! OMG! Eeep, are they going to find Draco in time? Ahhh, Hermione look in the forest! Ahhhh, you don't know what your story has done to me. I'm not posting up chappie 5 till you post up your next chapter!!!! Please post it! I can't stand ti when people give up on FANTASTIC stories.. ok so you haven't written a chappie in 3 weeks, and I know it could be for a reason, but I don't care! You get on your computer and type your story! Ahhhhhhh.. I'm dieing over here. eeep. * explodes from thinking about you not continuing your story * *ghost comes back * I will forever haunt you if you don't continue!
Totaloser: LOLOLOLOL. no I have decided to lend you Draco, you can't lend him back to me ;). LOLOLOLOL. Your so cool. I'm glad you liked the 2nd chapter, and thankyou for reviewing both chappies I really appreciate it .. :D. 'i love stories were his father tortures him then Hermione saves him' - so do I :D. and odn't worry there will be more Lucious torturing MY Draco later on. LOL
Steph: hehe, I think they did get a freakish connection, and no draco is not dead yet. or is he going to survive.. dun dun dun, you'll find out in chapter 4. I've written it. * looks at you with proud face * lol. TragicPixie@aol.com. oh I like. where did you think it up, or did you get it off something else?
tom4eva: tom4ever. I TOTALLY AGREE! I agree with you that I need to develop the chapters more, I'll give it a try, thanx for the advise :D. and I'm glad I'm spelling the characters right I had a guess. Lol.
MysticalWoodElf: LOL. I have one word for you, umm. no that's not it. T.H.A.N.K.S. lol, I couldn't think up a good one word.. * cries * I've read your story, well funny song thingy, and I must say I'm very impressed :D. another one word for you. C.O.N.T.I.N.U.E. lol.
b0ing: LOTFL. I like your name.. please don't take effence about me laughing about it. It really good and cute :D. I LIKE it. I'm glad you like my fic so far. thanx for you review :D
sakura angel90: ohhhhhhhhhhhhh, is that how you spell Lucius? LOL.. * looks shyly at you * lol yeah his dad is really really mean.. oh and I have a question for you, or anyone else. In the 2nd movie, was it Him that put the book in Ron's sisters.. (whats her name - mental blank) bag? To open the chamber of secrets. cause they made out they did. But I haven't read the book so I was just wondering :P
wow. thanx for all you guys who reviewed.. I really do appreciate them, they make me right another chappie each time.
Hope you like this chapter. it hasn't been proofed read. * Puts hands in the air * not yet anywaz, so I'm sorry if that upsets you
NOTE: PLEASE ANYONE ONE TELL ME HOW TO SPELL THERE NAMES RIGHT. I WOULD LOVE TO KNOW, AS I AM SURE I HAVE GOTTEN THEM WRONG, SO DON'T GIVE ME A FLAME SAYING I SPELT THEM WRONG! AND NO FLAMING PLEASE, IT ONLY BRINGS PEOPLE DOWN.
On a happier note: please right and review for reviews make my day, as I'm sure they do for you. I have not read the books. I repeat I have not. I will, but my sis is currently hidden them. Actually she just can't find them. Hehe. This is set in there 2nd year at Hogwarts. As you can tell, by the scene I have chosen in the first chapter.
Disclaimer: Well actually my friends and I have picked characters that we own... and guess what! I own Draco and Legolas. *faints *. but really for now I'll just say I don't. * Winks *
Well here it is.
Chapter three: Finding
Turning the corner the sight she saw was formidable and left her shocked and frozen.
There, lying face down on the stony concrete was Draco Malfoy pail and motionless. Blood flowed freely from a head wound and many other hidden cuts which caused a sticky, crimson puddle outlining his body.
As Hermione cautiously closed the gap between herself and Draco, more cuts and bruising on his face and chest was shown. A sharpened gasp could be perceived. She then found herself running across to her enemy/saviour. She layed her soft, delicate hand on his forehead but the heat caused it to burn so in one expeditious motion she tore it away and inclined his head so she could attempt and hopefully find a pulse. Sure enough there was one, but weak and elaborate. His shirt was still off, leaving his skin exposed like previously in the great hall. Hermione looked down at the snakebite and to her contentment the marks had stoped bleeding and now turned a brownish colour which ment the poison had stopped spreading freely throughout his quivering body. Gently rolling him into a sitting position she then attempted to carry the tall well built Draco Malfoy. She had only made it to a standing position, with Draco in her arms when she felt him slipping and her knees buckling under her.
Harry took in the situation quickly then raced to support Hermione. Holding her upright with Draco in her arms he felt himself, with one step at a time, walking slowly towards the hospital. He locked eyes with Hermione's and no words needed to be said. A silvery, wet tear rolled down her pail yet cheek. He tell that she felt it was her fault for Draco's life being on deaths door.
Blood dripped from the heavy individual they carried, causing a bloodied trail across the floor. The long silence had come to an end when Draco made a loud moan and shifted gently in their arms.
'He wakes.' Hermione said, anticipating that that was a sign that he would recuperate from the two traumatic events.
Harry did not respond, instead he looked straight-ahead; looking for any teacher that could aid them. They had not seen anybody since they had found Draco, which made them think that everyone must be searching for Malfoy elsewhere.
Lucious Malfoy left his son lying on the pavement unmoving as he heard someone make there way around the corner, which would give away what he had done. With no regret for what he had done he entered his mansion and walked towards his office. An evil smile appeared on his face, as a house elf asked how his young son was doing.
'Never better.' He replied coldly.
The small, green-eyed elf with decrepit attire followed his master into the room with slight hesitation.
He stopped abruptly 'You resist coming in. Why?' he said then continued walking.
'I mean no respect to you sir. I feel young Malfoy is in pain and that someone close had something to do with it.' He said with a scared yet hard tone. The house elf was not one who customarily spoke up especially not to a Malfoy. He knew precisely who and what had been done to Draco, he could sense it. He had served the Malfoy's for a long period of time now and his young master had never been too severe on him unlike his father. He stood now in the corner awaiting his masters' response and by the look on Lucious's face he had a conjecture that he would pay dearly for his words.
'Draco is fine.' He turned and faced the waist hight elf with cold eyes that darted between the elf and the door. Then sharply turning his back on the house elf he made his direction to the brown with gold adorned desk.
Lucious was not in the mood to be questioned by the elf, (which normally a house elf would not speak up and question his master at all.) and the elf knew this. Instead he took his maters hint and quickly left with his head down to appear he was remorseful about what he had said. He sealed the door behind himself. Leaving him in complete silence and alone in a room. With one snap of the fingers he went to find his young master.
Hermione perceptibly felt herself begin to loose hold of Draco. Her body was utterly exhausted. Just when she was about to collapse a house elf appeared infront of her and helped her maintain Malfoy.
The house elf named Mitty looked up and spotted Harry Potter, quickly she tore instantly her eyes away from Harry's scar. She had heard a lot about the boy-who-lived. Without another though she clicked fingers the three students appeared suddenly in the hospital.
Madam Pomfrey came around the bend to find Hermione falling to the floor with Draco in her arms looking as though his body had given up the fight for his life. While Harry was desperately trying to hold the both up and attempting to walk closer so he could place the two on a hospital bed.
'I have been looking for Mr Malfoy.' She quickly said and placed the blond haired boy on a bed. Then did the same to Hermione. 'Harry I must ask you to go wait outside.' There was no doubt that Draco had little hope to survive, but in the condition Hermione seemed to be in there seemed to be little hope for her also.
'But surely Hermione will be alright, she was fine about three minutes ago.' Harry could tell what was going through Madam Pomfrey's mind. He looked over towards one of his best friends and to his horror Hermiones face was pale and she trembled all over.
Well there it is :D. just when you thought the situation couldn't get any worse. now something is wrong with Hermione.. Mau hahahahaha.. Is this a cliffe? Lol
NO idea what a house elf powers have. soooo I just improvised. :S. was I alright? And I know he would not normally speeck up. I just wanted to show how cold hearted Lucious.
DO YOU WANT ME TO CONTINUE? OR GIVE UP? I MUST SAY I AM INJOYING THIS, BUT I DON'T WANT TO WRITE IT IF NO ONE IS ENJOYING IT.
I know this chapter was bit bad. was it? Well I would like the truth. but in no flame. I don't want to disapoint you guys, and I feel I am. I am trying, I really am. I'm not that bright. Infact I'm in the intermediate class at school. No one would pick me out for doing this. So I'm sorry if you hate this story, just don't review if you do.
See that little button at the bottom of the screen called 'GO' well don't be confused by it. it does not mean to go away from you computer at all. it actually means that you should click and do a nice happy review about this story :D. hehe. PLEASE.* puppy dog eyes * oohhh, and no flaming, they only bring people down, and who needs that? . Not me and not you. :P.
EXTRA: don't laugh: I thought I'd right a poem. Its sad but ow well. I'm not good at poems, but I would like you to review it, and tell me what you think. nicely.
They met one day by watching the stars, They exchanged phone numbers, and left in there cars. They had a lasting friendship for years and years, They have shared life secrets and had a few beers. Been through rough times and been through them together, They've relied on each other in the past and forever. They never gave up on there friendship at all, Cause if they did their friendship would fall. Their lives went on together like hand in hand, But one day she got married and moved to New Zealand. Everyday they would get letters in the post, Saying how they were going, and what they missed the most. Ten years has gone by without a letter or a note, Until one day she decided to post one by boat. Everything was wrong and his life was dim, He had no one to love, and no one loved him. Over in New Zealand her life has also been tough, And then the day she posted the letter she had had enough. She had gotten a divorce from her husband not long ago, And have been raped by supposedly friends and people she did not know. After she had posted the letter she gathered her things, She was now excited that she was going to meet him. The note said that she was coming over by plane, She had missed him a lot, and signed love Jane. The time had come, he had planned it for years, He entered the bar and had a few beers. Thinking it over while he sat there, A stranger had come and his life he did share. He told his life how it had been harsh and mean, But also how good with Jane it had been. With Jane in his head he left the bar, He got his things, and drove towards the airport - it wasn't far. Next to the airport there was a church, He hopped out of the car, and began to search. He found what he wanted and entered it quick, For what he was about to do made him feel dizzy and sick. Her plane had just hit the ground and now she felt ill, Something was not right, as she sat there completely still, 'The plane has stopped' the flight attendant said, She directed Jane, for Jane was bright red. 'Are you alright?' the attendant slowly asked, But Jane didn't reply, she just watched the t.v. her expression masked. Watching to the news, were many listening people, And there was her friend, pail, on top of a church steeple. Taking his life was the hardest thing he had to do, Without another thought he stood up and flew. Jane closed her eyes as he hit the ground, On her cheek, wet silvery tears flooded down. 'Did I not send the letter? I sent it by boat not long ago?' Jane asked the attendant trying not to let her feelings show. 'A post boat crashed, and the letters were lost and gone', Jane's knees buckled under her, as she began mourn. The loss of her greatest friend was just too much for her, But then a sound of a chopper made her look up and stir. 'The church is just next door' the attendant said, Having a guess on what was going on in Jane's head. Thanking the attendant and running outside and next door, Kneeling next to her friend, on the grassy floor. An ambulance came and took him away, But Jane did not move and there she did stay. A year went by and her life was good, But every year at the same date at the church she stood. Ten years had gone now, and the day had come, She got some flowers and outside the church she put thum. The wind blew her hair away from her cheek, She stood there for hours, she did not speak. Turning around to get back in the car, It was night by now so she looked up at a star. She promised herself she new she would never forget, Her best friend and how they first met.
Ok guys, hope you enjoyed it. Tell me what you think on this and the chapter. and if I should continue. cause chappie 3 and 4 I don't want to disappoint you guys with.