Diclamer: don't own it. want to. but don't. *cries* see what you've made
me do! You big meanies!
(hehe)
A/N OMG! 105 reviews :O. please keep them coming. I got 20 for last chappie :O. *faints* you don't know how much that ment to me. I need some cheering up at the moment. So please write something happy and say: elven ice angel please be happy. That would be much appreciated. even if you hate his chappie or story, pease write something nice. Do something nice for someone else.
THIS HASN"T BEEN CHECKED FOR SPELLING AND STUFF SO BE WARNED!!! (hehe) AND DON"T FLAME ME CAUSE OF IT! IT WILL EB CHEKCED I PROMISE!
Chapter 9:
'Don't defend or help her again. I will not only kill her, but you, and believe me Draco I would make it painful and take pleasure in it, like I do with all my victims.' His voice was hard and the warning was made clear. Draco's throat burned and his body was now shaking violently. Lucious heard footsteps and took this opportunity to leave.
Not now. Draco thought whilst clutching his hand on his chest and using his free hand to steady himself with the nearby wall. Oh please, not now. He stumbled over towards Hermione. His breathing came out in rough, irregular gasps, and he began to fall to his knees next to Hermione on the stony ground. His mind was reeling, and continually thoughts popped into his head on what his father had ment by his words.
'That girl is not completely dead yet and I will take no chances with you forming a relationship with her. I would rather see you die then let that happen. Therefor I am here to stop that from that relationship come to pass.'
His stormy grey eyes fell apon the breathless girl. What did he mean? His heart ached to be touched by those soft lips that he had gently kissed in the hospital not many hours ago. He lent over, trying desperately to get hold of his shaking body, and pressed his lips on hers. Although her lips were cold, a serge of energy ran through him. A spark had entered his heart and as he pulled his lips free he tried desperately to hold onto it.
Madam Pomfrey came to a complete stop as she saw the sight infront of her. Blood covered the floor and made its way, in a water like pattern, towards her feet. Her racing heart skipped as beat as her eyes layed apon the collapsed girl in the middle of the crimson. She quickly made her way towards the girl and to her displeasure she noticed the girls face was pale and her chest held a lifeless heart.
Just then Draco lifted his held slowly and made eye contact with the nurse. 'She's not completely dead.' His body stopped shaking and his breathing became back into a normal rhythm. He found strength within him and so, in one quick movement, he scooped up the blood-covered girl and made his way towards the nurse and into the hospital wing.
'What happened Mr Malfoy?'
Draco shuddered at the name. His father had punished him many times before with many different spells, but this time Draco felt that his father had made Hermione slit her wrist. His heart desperately fought against his head. A battle in which his head won. His heart wanted not to believe his father would do such a thing, and yet his head knew it to be true that his father was a snake, a terror, a death eater and above all else held no heart and compassion for anyone, not even his own son. His line of thoughts were broken as a voice called out his name.
'Mr Malfoy I need to know what happened?'
He couldn't tell her about his father, it would only make matters worse for himself. 'She tried to kill herself. with a knife.' His words were shaky and he kicked himself for having cared for the Griffindor. If only I had stayed in bed and ignored the dream. Then I wouldn't be involved and my father wouldn't be suspecting a never-going-to-be romance. He placed one of his fingers on his lips and gently, while holding her with his spare hand, moved Hermione to re-grip. He placed the breathless girl in a nearby bed. Leaving Madam Promfrey to try and save the girls life.
Jus then the door smashed open and there stood two figured in the doorway.
'Maybe you should knock next time.' Draco sneered at both Harry and Ron who made there way towards him quickly.
Ron had reached Draco first. His eyes darted tearfully between Hermione to Doco. 'Y.you did this, t.to her?' his eyes turned from watery to dancing with fire. His lip curled up and he sneered at Draco as he made his way towards Hermione. He placed his quivering hand on the pail girl's cheek. He was stunned and saddened to find it to be icily cold. 'No' he whispered, but loud enough for Draco to hear. 'I repeat what did you do to her?.' A silvery tear rolled down his cheek and yet his hard fiery eyes remained the same.
'Why Weasley, what wouldn't I do to her?' he facial expression turned dark as his face now held lines and features of his famous smirk that it was usually plastered on his face.
Ron's temper flared and yet he could not hold back the tears the he had contained in his now red-rimmed eyes. 'Why you. His eyes flashed dangerously. He lunged quickly at the platinum haired boy but was held back by Harry in the process.
Draco looked plainly at Ron and just rolled his eyes. He turned to walk away and yet he found himself remaining on the spot, whether it was from the lack of exhaustion or from wanting to see what will become of this he did not know.
Time rolled on like a snail walking across a quiditch ( A/N how do I spell quiditch? ) field. And finally Madam Promfrey made some motion into telling the three boys on the situation of their friend but in one case enemy. Madam Pomfrey locked her eyes on both Harry and Ron. 'There is little chance I will be able to save Hermione. Her heart has already stoped beating and although I have managed to stop the bleeding and bandage up her hand,I am afraid there is little hope.' Her head bowed as she waited for a reply.
'There is always hope.' Came the reply.
She was surprised to find that the voices she was expecting to hear was silenced by the lonesome voice that had spoken.
Draco felt a hot liquid drip from his eyes onto his cheek. He moved his hand up and wiped it away quickly before anyone or himself realised what it had been.
Madam Pomfrey had made chants from both ancient and recent spells, yet none seemed to be working. She gave up and backed away.
Draco tensed as he realised the nurse had given up. He sharply stood next to the bed in which held Hermione and placed his hand on her chest. 'Wake up!.' He screamed. 'Get up you stupid mud blood!' He felt himself being pulled back and away from Hermione. In one quick, flowing movement he raised his hands in the air and brought them back down with a mighty thrust onto Hermione's chest above her heart. He heard a sharp gasp and a breath being inhaled deeply.
Harry and Ron both stood there wide-eyed and frozen with both eyes dangerously on Draco. The pair had not yet realised that their so-called enemy had just saved their best friend.
Reviews:
Pyrie: hehe, yes when you said the name (draco) I drooled too. LOL YOU WERE SO HELPUL! I mean thankyou so much for telling me his eye AND his hair colour. there so much better to say then just plain old boring blond and grey :D hehe. I wish I had silver eyes too. That would be sooo nice, but instead I'm left with poo brown ( (hehe). my b/f has like silver/grey/blue eyes. They are SO nice! I want them.
Katieshaz: I've updated now :D, hope you liked it. :D
treachery89: LOLOLOL, don't tare out to much hair ;), actually I'm now glad that you can't swim from singapour to australia . hehe ;). I am SO hooked on your story! Well this wasn't a cliffe this chappie :D, so I hope that its alright. hehe. you casting a spell on me??? Oh no you don't missy! *grabs Draco and sends him after you using flue powder* lol. Well actually let me think, if he is over there with you. that means I don't have him here with me :O.* calls draco back *
draco_hunter: eep! You odn't know HOW worried you got me there! I thought you were goanna say how bad it is and blah blah blah, but then you made such a good and encouraging review. *gives you a hug* thankyou! LOL, well maybe you can go after Ron if you thing the blond hair is just to much :P, hehe, I think I'd rather stick with Draco. ;). ALTHUOGH: draco will have to get out of character. (I know I know) it's a shame isn't it (, but he and hermione are going to like each other, therefor he has to get out of character, but don't worry I wont make him out of character to much :D. other wise it just wouldn't be the same draco.
green smurf: well, well, well. I know you probably didn't think about this when you made your name but. I LOVED THE SMURFS WHEN I WAS YOUNGER. (hehe) *blushes* hummm, soz about that. Awwwwww, you'd be surprised at what people flame at And about. If anyone ever recieves a flame from anyone, just tell me and I'll rip that person to shreds. *coughs* hehe. you're a hermione/snape. WOW, I never thought up those two together thing, maybe its cause he's like a teacher, but I suppose it works :D, I'll be reading that story.
Totaloser: hehe, fair enough about the name, don't get me wrong I like it.. I just thought you were callign yourself a loser, but now I just made an embarrassment of myself. (as usual) hehe. your drakie:OO:O::O, NO WAY MISSY! *pulls you out of my story* I'm kissing and tending to his wounds :P, lol. Awwwww, your aunt and uncle sound very sweet :D., hehe. OMG! I've once sat in a bullants nest before, and I got bitten all over.. it was horrible. humm that was random ;) LOL.LOVE your reviews
~*Stella*~ : I LOVE the way you've done your name. *cheers on all the people that love lotr and hp* hehe. thanx for the review. I hope that this story is alright sinse I haven't read the books, and you confirmed that it is. so thanks heaps :D.
frodo_potter: I'm good thankyou, and yourself :D.. I've never been asked that in a review before, its very sweet and nice of you. I don't know if I can't stop Draco dieing.. its all to do with my mind :S (I've got a crazy mind aswel) hehe. but I'll try to make sure he doesn't. :P, cause I don't want to see draco dead either :D. are you a frodo fan? Cause if you are. I LOVE his big eyes :D.. hehe.
Cinnamon: LOL awwwww, yes I am 14 years old :P, thanx for the compliment.. causei always read stories and then I read that like the person is only like 15 and I think, geez they write heaps older, so I'm glad somebody thinks that of me too :D. I will read fire'n'ice, and I will write a long review too :D hehe. I don't like star warz either. and I've once read a fic, (cause someone reviewed my story so I had to read it) and I got NONE of the actual plot. tis very confusing I say ;). LOL, that's the same with me :D I'm crazy :D lol. I know. DIE LUCIUS DIE! Wait.. I'm writing this story, I can make him die.. *thinks* hehe, nah you'll just have to find out if he dies or not :P mwu hahahaha. ILOL, I am obsessed with guys too :P, I think olando bloom (Ilove the charracters he plays) tom felton :D *drools* and shawn ashmore. (bobby of x-men) not sure if that his name :P. hehe. lol, I am OBSESSED with your story too :D
Blackdragonofdeath13: eepers. I LOVE your name! Although tis abit creepy .. hehe. no I think its REALLY good! I LOVE dragons... I've drawn a few myself :D. awww, you wuv my story..awwwwwwwww that's good, cause with a name like yours I'd hate you to hate it ;). Lol.
Starre: OK I will get it right. thanx for the info. although! I don't think it REALLY matters.. I mean can't you see I haven't read the books? I have told you so many times. Thanx for the review though, and I will remember that in the future ;D.
Codie: yes I agree. he should be hurt and hurt badly! I mean fancy him doing that to his own son. and to think of what he actually does to his son in later chappie. (I shouldn't have told you that ;)) hehe, your on he edge of your seat.. well I hope this chappie pushes you back abit so that you don't fall over, ;). I LOVE oyur review and I LOVE the word spellbounding, I mean its so HP isn't it ;). Well as you know by now.. I haven't let hermione die as of yet.. mwu hahahahhaa. Hehe.
Silver Dragon Goddess: awwwwww. *gives you a bear hug* hehe. I know, I will try to update quicker, It's just hard sometimes :P. hehe, well I've now updated so I don't have to find out what the 'or else' would have been. (thank god) hehe. I would hate it if you sent one of your dragons over to do somethiing to me. (ok I got that from your name ;)) hehe. I WUV dragons :D. I WUV you too :D. KEEP WRITING! Or else. hehe. ;')
Snitch's glint: WOW, I thought I didn't capture to much attention although I try too :D. thanks for giving me that point :D. hehe, oyu claped for me. *cheeks goes red* hehe. your very sweet, yes you are. Well I don't think chappie was AS complicated. Hehe, but I think next chappie will be nice fun and happy :D so I hope you read it and enjoy :D
Pupulupk: LOLOLOLOLOL, I'm glad you learnt something that day ;). Why is it that I nevr have anything good to say to you? (don't take that the wrong way) but its just like I have so much to say to others but never you.. I am so sorry, all I can say is thankyou and that you are sooo sweet and you put a smile on my face when a receive a review from you :D.
Water demon: lol. I wuv all your reviews and everything :D, hehe. you're so sweet and gorgeous :D (although I don't know you, you sound it) :O:O:O I will forgive you if you do't post, but only cause you reviewed mine. I NEED YOUR CHAPPIE WATER DEMON! Every day I come to see if its there and then its not :'(. Cries 0000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 0000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 0000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 0000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000. LOLOLOLOLOL.. my dog stepped on the keyboard soz.. :D. awwwww, well atleast you now found out if she lived or not. well I think you did :D. and its not a cliffe :O. whats the world coming too :O. LOL ;) WHY R U READING THIS??? WRITE YOU!
Sabriel4: hehe, yes it will be interesting to see where his dreams take him. :D. LOL, yes your right. a pulse is very more noticable when it is taken offa the neck but as you said, (hehe) it makes it more. hummmm, ummm, its like a clue for. ummmm. ah I don't want to give anything away (. So you think this should become romance? Lol, well it is going that waqy ;), but what do you think?
Elf gal: ok, ok, I'm so sorry. Of corse I would LOVE to give you the lotr story, but but I just can't. lotr people are so mean :'(. They gave me bad reviews, and I know it doens' t really matter but I mean 7 bad reviews in one day :O LOL, doesn't give a girl much confidence in a story does it? I am very glad you liked it though. But I have taken it off for its own protection ;) (hehe). oHH your doing this story in shifts :O. LOL, well then you wont get this review back in ages ;), hehe, oh well. when you do, you'll find out what happened to the story (. I LOVE your reviews I truly do, please keep them coming :D. oh and: you can do anything you want with that poem. you can even say you wrote it ;). Hehe. :D. there will be another poem coming up shortly although the poem at the end of this chappie is not one of them.
Draco master: LOL, no you don't own him :P, I will kill him just so you will make a story, and then when your story comes out, I'll write another story and claim him for myself once more. (did that make sense? I think not ;P) hehe. awwwwww. your reviews are always very encouraging :D, and very happy :D. It is my pleasure to bring this story to you and others, I enjoy writing it, and when I get good feedback like yours It makes it all worth while. So THANKYOU SO MUCH DRACO MASTER :D
Ok guys can you do this for me? Do what I tell you to do:
Step 1: take your left arm and wrap it around the oposite side of your body Step two: repeat that action with your other arm Step 3: sqeeze tightly and say: 'elven ice angel thanx me for reading and writing a review.
(just incase you didn't realise what you doing. I'm giving you a hug from me)
your reviews always help and brighten my day. and I need them at the moment. Thanx a lot all of you..
please write a review, even if you've done so.. soz if this chappie doesn't live up to your expectation. and I repeat have not read the books as of yet. and I am only 14. Please be kind and don't' flame me :D.
next chappie will be fun :D LOL. I promise, and don't faint but: its not going to have any angst, well not much :P. hehe.
luv ya all.
till next time.
Lucky last, and I made you last cause you are so special:
SithPelladal: I have written a poem. although (hehe) its not too good.
WE have never met although we talk about many things, Not only about fanfic or lord of the rings, You are a friend, that I would love to met, For you are very special, kind and sweet, You've stuck by my stories from the very start, And now, even fanfics you are going to start, We have a lot in common, from what I can see, Please don't stop reading and e-mailing me.
See its not that good, but hey. :P. thanx so much becky! And each chappie I forget to thankyou, so I'm really soz.
p.s another pom will be in the next chappie or the one after that! It will be one like the other one, although it might not be as sad. Infact I'll go and try to write that one right now. enjoy peoples.
. *whispers* hey you. *points to you* yes you. you forgot to push the 'go' button and write a review.
(hehe)
A/N OMG! 105 reviews :O. please keep them coming. I got 20 for last chappie :O. *faints* you don't know how much that ment to me. I need some cheering up at the moment. So please write something happy and say: elven ice angel please be happy. That would be much appreciated. even if you hate his chappie or story, pease write something nice. Do something nice for someone else.
THIS HASN"T BEEN CHECKED FOR SPELLING AND STUFF SO BE WARNED!!! (hehe) AND DON"T FLAME ME CAUSE OF IT! IT WILL EB CHEKCED I PROMISE!
Chapter 9:
'Don't defend or help her again. I will not only kill her, but you, and believe me Draco I would make it painful and take pleasure in it, like I do with all my victims.' His voice was hard and the warning was made clear. Draco's throat burned and his body was now shaking violently. Lucious heard footsteps and took this opportunity to leave.
Not now. Draco thought whilst clutching his hand on his chest and using his free hand to steady himself with the nearby wall. Oh please, not now. He stumbled over towards Hermione. His breathing came out in rough, irregular gasps, and he began to fall to his knees next to Hermione on the stony ground. His mind was reeling, and continually thoughts popped into his head on what his father had ment by his words.
'That girl is not completely dead yet and I will take no chances with you forming a relationship with her. I would rather see you die then let that happen. Therefor I am here to stop that from that relationship come to pass.'
His stormy grey eyes fell apon the breathless girl. What did he mean? His heart ached to be touched by those soft lips that he had gently kissed in the hospital not many hours ago. He lent over, trying desperately to get hold of his shaking body, and pressed his lips on hers. Although her lips were cold, a serge of energy ran through him. A spark had entered his heart and as he pulled his lips free he tried desperately to hold onto it.
Madam Pomfrey came to a complete stop as she saw the sight infront of her. Blood covered the floor and made its way, in a water like pattern, towards her feet. Her racing heart skipped as beat as her eyes layed apon the collapsed girl in the middle of the crimson. She quickly made her way towards the girl and to her displeasure she noticed the girls face was pale and her chest held a lifeless heart.
Just then Draco lifted his held slowly and made eye contact with the nurse. 'She's not completely dead.' His body stopped shaking and his breathing became back into a normal rhythm. He found strength within him and so, in one quick movement, he scooped up the blood-covered girl and made his way towards the nurse and into the hospital wing.
'What happened Mr Malfoy?'
Draco shuddered at the name. His father had punished him many times before with many different spells, but this time Draco felt that his father had made Hermione slit her wrist. His heart desperately fought against his head. A battle in which his head won. His heart wanted not to believe his father would do such a thing, and yet his head knew it to be true that his father was a snake, a terror, a death eater and above all else held no heart and compassion for anyone, not even his own son. His line of thoughts were broken as a voice called out his name.
'Mr Malfoy I need to know what happened?'
He couldn't tell her about his father, it would only make matters worse for himself. 'She tried to kill herself. with a knife.' His words were shaky and he kicked himself for having cared for the Griffindor. If only I had stayed in bed and ignored the dream. Then I wouldn't be involved and my father wouldn't be suspecting a never-going-to-be romance. He placed one of his fingers on his lips and gently, while holding her with his spare hand, moved Hermione to re-grip. He placed the breathless girl in a nearby bed. Leaving Madam Promfrey to try and save the girls life.
Jus then the door smashed open and there stood two figured in the doorway.
'Maybe you should knock next time.' Draco sneered at both Harry and Ron who made there way towards him quickly.
Ron had reached Draco first. His eyes darted tearfully between Hermione to Doco. 'Y.you did this, t.to her?' his eyes turned from watery to dancing with fire. His lip curled up and he sneered at Draco as he made his way towards Hermione. He placed his quivering hand on the pail girl's cheek. He was stunned and saddened to find it to be icily cold. 'No' he whispered, but loud enough for Draco to hear. 'I repeat what did you do to her?.' A silvery tear rolled down his cheek and yet his hard fiery eyes remained the same.
'Why Weasley, what wouldn't I do to her?' he facial expression turned dark as his face now held lines and features of his famous smirk that it was usually plastered on his face.
Ron's temper flared and yet he could not hold back the tears the he had contained in his now red-rimmed eyes. 'Why you. His eyes flashed dangerously. He lunged quickly at the platinum haired boy but was held back by Harry in the process.
Draco looked plainly at Ron and just rolled his eyes. He turned to walk away and yet he found himself remaining on the spot, whether it was from the lack of exhaustion or from wanting to see what will become of this he did not know.
Time rolled on like a snail walking across a quiditch ( A/N how do I spell quiditch? ) field. And finally Madam Promfrey made some motion into telling the three boys on the situation of their friend but in one case enemy. Madam Pomfrey locked her eyes on both Harry and Ron. 'There is little chance I will be able to save Hermione. Her heart has already stoped beating and although I have managed to stop the bleeding and bandage up her hand,I am afraid there is little hope.' Her head bowed as she waited for a reply.
'There is always hope.' Came the reply.
She was surprised to find that the voices she was expecting to hear was silenced by the lonesome voice that had spoken.
Draco felt a hot liquid drip from his eyes onto his cheek. He moved his hand up and wiped it away quickly before anyone or himself realised what it had been.
Madam Pomfrey had made chants from both ancient and recent spells, yet none seemed to be working. She gave up and backed away.
Draco tensed as he realised the nurse had given up. He sharply stood next to the bed in which held Hermione and placed his hand on her chest. 'Wake up!.' He screamed. 'Get up you stupid mud blood!' He felt himself being pulled back and away from Hermione. In one quick, flowing movement he raised his hands in the air and brought them back down with a mighty thrust onto Hermione's chest above her heart. He heard a sharp gasp and a breath being inhaled deeply.
Harry and Ron both stood there wide-eyed and frozen with both eyes dangerously on Draco. The pair had not yet realised that their so-called enemy had just saved their best friend.
Reviews:
Pyrie: hehe, yes when you said the name (draco) I drooled too. LOL YOU WERE SO HELPUL! I mean thankyou so much for telling me his eye AND his hair colour. there so much better to say then just plain old boring blond and grey :D hehe. I wish I had silver eyes too. That would be sooo nice, but instead I'm left with poo brown ( (hehe). my b/f has like silver/grey/blue eyes. They are SO nice! I want them.
Katieshaz: I've updated now :D, hope you liked it. :D
treachery89: LOLOLOL, don't tare out to much hair ;), actually I'm now glad that you can't swim from singapour to australia . hehe ;). I am SO hooked on your story! Well this wasn't a cliffe this chappie :D, so I hope that its alright. hehe. you casting a spell on me??? Oh no you don't missy! *grabs Draco and sends him after you using flue powder* lol. Well actually let me think, if he is over there with you. that means I don't have him here with me :O.* calls draco back *
draco_hunter: eep! You odn't know HOW worried you got me there! I thought you were goanna say how bad it is and blah blah blah, but then you made such a good and encouraging review. *gives you a hug* thankyou! LOL, well maybe you can go after Ron if you thing the blond hair is just to much :P, hehe, I think I'd rather stick with Draco. ;). ALTHUOGH: draco will have to get out of character. (I know I know) it's a shame isn't it (, but he and hermione are going to like each other, therefor he has to get out of character, but don't worry I wont make him out of character to much :D. other wise it just wouldn't be the same draco.
green smurf: well, well, well. I know you probably didn't think about this when you made your name but. I LOVED THE SMURFS WHEN I WAS YOUNGER. (hehe) *blushes* hummm, soz about that. Awwwwww, you'd be surprised at what people flame at And about. If anyone ever recieves a flame from anyone, just tell me and I'll rip that person to shreds. *coughs* hehe. you're a hermione/snape. WOW, I never thought up those two together thing, maybe its cause he's like a teacher, but I suppose it works :D, I'll be reading that story.
Totaloser: hehe, fair enough about the name, don't get me wrong I like it.. I just thought you were callign yourself a loser, but now I just made an embarrassment of myself. (as usual) hehe. your drakie:OO:O::O, NO WAY MISSY! *pulls you out of my story* I'm kissing and tending to his wounds :P, lol. Awwwww, your aunt and uncle sound very sweet :D., hehe. OMG! I've once sat in a bullants nest before, and I got bitten all over.. it was horrible. humm that was random ;) LOL.LOVE your reviews
~*Stella*~ : I LOVE the way you've done your name. *cheers on all the people that love lotr and hp* hehe. thanx for the review. I hope that this story is alright sinse I haven't read the books, and you confirmed that it is. so thanks heaps :D.
frodo_potter: I'm good thankyou, and yourself :D.. I've never been asked that in a review before, its very sweet and nice of you. I don't know if I can't stop Draco dieing.. its all to do with my mind :S (I've got a crazy mind aswel) hehe. but I'll try to make sure he doesn't. :P, cause I don't want to see draco dead either :D. are you a frodo fan? Cause if you are. I LOVE his big eyes :D.. hehe.
Cinnamon: LOL awwwww, yes I am 14 years old :P, thanx for the compliment.. causei always read stories and then I read that like the person is only like 15 and I think, geez they write heaps older, so I'm glad somebody thinks that of me too :D. I will read fire'n'ice, and I will write a long review too :D hehe. I don't like star warz either. and I've once read a fic, (cause someone reviewed my story so I had to read it) and I got NONE of the actual plot. tis very confusing I say ;). LOL, that's the same with me :D I'm crazy :D lol. I know. DIE LUCIUS DIE! Wait.. I'm writing this story, I can make him die.. *thinks* hehe, nah you'll just have to find out if he dies or not :P mwu hahahaha. ILOL, I am obsessed with guys too :P, I think olando bloom (Ilove the charracters he plays) tom felton :D *drools* and shawn ashmore. (bobby of x-men) not sure if that his name :P. hehe. lol, I am OBSESSED with your story too :D
Blackdragonofdeath13: eepers. I LOVE your name! Although tis abit creepy .. hehe. no I think its REALLY good! I LOVE dragons... I've drawn a few myself :D. awww, you wuv my story..awwwwwwwww that's good, cause with a name like yours I'd hate you to hate it ;). Lol.
Starre: OK I will get it right. thanx for the info. although! I don't think it REALLY matters.. I mean can't you see I haven't read the books? I have told you so many times. Thanx for the review though, and I will remember that in the future ;D.
Codie: yes I agree. he should be hurt and hurt badly! I mean fancy him doing that to his own son. and to think of what he actually does to his son in later chappie. (I shouldn't have told you that ;)) hehe, your on he edge of your seat.. well I hope this chappie pushes you back abit so that you don't fall over, ;). I LOVE oyur review and I LOVE the word spellbounding, I mean its so HP isn't it ;). Well as you know by now.. I haven't let hermione die as of yet.. mwu hahahahhaa. Hehe.
Silver Dragon Goddess: awwwwww. *gives you a bear hug* hehe. I know, I will try to update quicker, It's just hard sometimes :P. hehe, well I've now updated so I don't have to find out what the 'or else' would have been. (thank god) hehe. I would hate it if you sent one of your dragons over to do somethiing to me. (ok I got that from your name ;)) hehe. I WUV dragons :D. I WUV you too :D. KEEP WRITING! Or else. hehe. ;')
Snitch's glint: WOW, I thought I didn't capture to much attention although I try too :D. thanks for giving me that point :D. hehe, oyu claped for me. *cheeks goes red* hehe. your very sweet, yes you are. Well I don't think chappie was AS complicated. Hehe, but I think next chappie will be nice fun and happy :D so I hope you read it and enjoy :D
Pupulupk: LOLOLOLOLOL, I'm glad you learnt something that day ;). Why is it that I nevr have anything good to say to you? (don't take that the wrong way) but its just like I have so much to say to others but never you.. I am so sorry, all I can say is thankyou and that you are sooo sweet and you put a smile on my face when a receive a review from you :D.
Water demon: lol. I wuv all your reviews and everything :D, hehe. you're so sweet and gorgeous :D (although I don't know you, you sound it) :O:O:O I will forgive you if you do't post, but only cause you reviewed mine. I NEED YOUR CHAPPIE WATER DEMON! Every day I come to see if its there and then its not :'(. Cries 0000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 0000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 0000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 0000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000. LOLOLOLOLOL.. my dog stepped on the keyboard soz.. :D. awwwww, well atleast you now found out if she lived or not. well I think you did :D. and its not a cliffe :O. whats the world coming too :O. LOL ;) WHY R U READING THIS??? WRITE YOU!
Sabriel4: hehe, yes it will be interesting to see where his dreams take him. :D. LOL, yes your right. a pulse is very more noticable when it is taken offa the neck but as you said, (hehe) it makes it more. hummmm, ummm, its like a clue for. ummmm. ah I don't want to give anything away (. So you think this should become romance? Lol, well it is going that waqy ;), but what do you think?
Elf gal: ok, ok, I'm so sorry. Of corse I would LOVE to give you the lotr story, but but I just can't. lotr people are so mean :'(. They gave me bad reviews, and I know it doens' t really matter but I mean 7 bad reviews in one day :O LOL, doesn't give a girl much confidence in a story does it? I am very glad you liked it though. But I have taken it off for its own protection ;) (hehe). oHH your doing this story in shifts :O. LOL, well then you wont get this review back in ages ;), hehe, oh well. when you do, you'll find out what happened to the story (. I LOVE your reviews I truly do, please keep them coming :D. oh and: you can do anything you want with that poem. you can even say you wrote it ;). Hehe. :D. there will be another poem coming up shortly although the poem at the end of this chappie is not one of them.
Draco master: LOL, no you don't own him :P, I will kill him just so you will make a story, and then when your story comes out, I'll write another story and claim him for myself once more. (did that make sense? I think not ;P) hehe. awwwwww. your reviews are always very encouraging :D, and very happy :D. It is my pleasure to bring this story to you and others, I enjoy writing it, and when I get good feedback like yours It makes it all worth while. So THANKYOU SO MUCH DRACO MASTER :D
Ok guys can you do this for me? Do what I tell you to do:
Step 1: take your left arm and wrap it around the oposite side of your body Step two: repeat that action with your other arm Step 3: sqeeze tightly and say: 'elven ice angel thanx me for reading and writing a review.
(just incase you didn't realise what you doing. I'm giving you a hug from me)
your reviews always help and brighten my day. and I need them at the moment. Thanx a lot all of you..
please write a review, even if you've done so.. soz if this chappie doesn't live up to your expectation. and I repeat have not read the books as of yet. and I am only 14. Please be kind and don't' flame me :D.
next chappie will be fun :D LOL. I promise, and don't faint but: its not going to have any angst, well not much :P. hehe.
luv ya all.
till next time.
Lucky last, and I made you last cause you are so special:
SithPelladal: I have written a poem. although (hehe) its not too good.
WE have never met although we talk about many things, Not only about fanfic or lord of the rings, You are a friend, that I would love to met, For you are very special, kind and sweet, You've stuck by my stories from the very start, And now, even fanfics you are going to start, We have a lot in common, from what I can see, Please don't stop reading and e-mailing me.
See its not that good, but hey. :P. thanx so much becky! And each chappie I forget to thankyou, so I'm really soz.
p.s another pom will be in the next chappie or the one after that! It will be one like the other one, although it might not be as sad. Infact I'll go and try to write that one right now. enjoy peoples.
. *whispers* hey you. *points to you* yes you. you forgot to push the 'go' button and write a review.