*gets on knees and begs you not to hate me*
I am SO sorry! Don't worry I'm not giving up on this story, I HATE it when
stories do that! But also this story is NEVER over UNTIL I say so at the
end, so although at some points it may look like it's the end it really
isn't. this IS going to be a long story, I think around 20-25 chappies,
soooo there actually is a really big plot that is going to fall into place
in the upcoming chapters.
This is mainly a note to say that I won't be posting till 2 weeks. I no I
no, but I just don't have the time at the moment, I have really big year 9
exams and stuff which I can't fail unless I actually want to fall into the
intermediate class..
BUT: I haven't left you in a cliffy therefore it's alright, right????
(hehe)
I"VE: written a few poems and so I've dedicated this author's note for
poetry cause then it gives you at least something to read.
Disclaimer: no wait. I don't need this because I do actually own them, WHO
HOO!
MUST READ NOTE: too all who read: these are the terms that I ask offa you:
you can call them your own, and you can use them on assignments or friends
which ever suits you, but you must write a review and say so. I wont mind
and you don't have to wait for a reply back from me.
YOU MUST WRITE A REVIEW!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!! POETRY IS HARD TO WRITE AS YOU
MUST KNOW!
please let this be an encouragement to you all and I think you should all
write a poem and write it in the review, even If its just a limerick.
PLEASE READ THE ABOVE NOTE! Luv elven ice angel:
POETRY:
A writing-lust inside her goes grow,
A twinkle in her eye,
There filed with wild, exiting emotions,
That may make you cry,
The paper and pen is drawn from her pocket,
Her imagination goes wild,
The expression and meanings can mean so many things,
Although her attention and brain-span is mild.
I leave you know to read her work,
Although some are quite old,
The twinkle in her eye brightens,
As her poems begin to unfold.
bree Gregory (hehe, I wrote that just then ;) hehe)
You are becoming an endangered species Dani,
For you are very rare,
To find a good friend like you,
We must have something to share,
We both hide our natural qualities,
Although you do more then me,
So let yourself go a little,
And show the Dani we love to see,
You give yourself so little credit,
You are gorgeous, pretty and cleaver too,
You give out love and joy,
Don't admire me, cause I admire you.
Bree Gregory (this was written to a good friend of mine, who had like
motional problems.)
You say our friendship will last forever,
But do you mean what you say?
If I was to die tomorrow,
Would you remember me each day?
I often wonder what my life would be like,
Is I didn't have you,
And every night I get the same answer,
Which makes me believe its somewhat true.
If you weren't in my life,
I don't know where I'd be,
For you are very special,
And you complete me,
Yet somehow I get the feeling,
That you don't feel the same way,
Will you remember my final words?
And everything I say?
Bree Gregory (this was written a long time ago, it changes speed throughout
the poem, and I was trying to get that across, although I don't think it
worked. (. oh well.)
Your touch and hugs is what I will miss,
I'm sitting here crying, pleading for another kiss,
You could have picked anyone but instead you picked me,
We had memorable times together which will last an eternity.
It feels like the word is over now that I'm not with you,
I have now had enough, and I know what I must do.
~who do we run to when we are in pain?
~ and in our hearts, our loved, ones have left a terrible stain?
I went to the bathroom and took out my shaver,
Thinking it over while I looked at my razor,
I gripped it tight and began to quiver,
I slit my wrist and began to shiver.
A deep crimson colour came pouring out of the cut,
My knees buckled under me as my eyes began to shut,
Five minutes later the phone began to shake,
It was you that was calling saying the break-up was a mistake,
Little did you know that I was on the floor,
With blood all around me and breathing no more.
Bree Gregory (its sad but it happens)
Taking aim and tightening the string,
He knows he has the skill,
With eyes dancing, raging with fire,
He releases and goes for the kill,
His aim was true the target was hit,
The blood-stained man found the ground,
The crimson colour poured onto the grass,
With making little sound.
He turned his head and found what he wanted,
The satisfaction clear within his eye,
He prepared his bow for his next target,
But instead it was his turn to die.
Bree Gregory (this is one that I used for my history test, it was on world
war one, and I just changes some lines so that instead of it being a bow it
was a gun that the man was using to kill the people.)
WELL: that's it for the poetry, I'm now going to reply to reviews, oh AND
peoples if I do this now, it means next chappie I wont have as much so bare
with me.
Silver Dragon Goddess: every time I see your name I melt at the sight of
it. I always say this but I LOVE IT! You've made this angel jealous. (hehe)
LOL, yeah I know, that last line I wrote was like . ummm. it summed up what
I was trying to say within 2 lines, hehe. It realy defines that harry and
ron are like stunned and stuff. well I really appreciate your reviews
sliver dragon, keep them up. I will write a better review back to you next
time.
AndinaOfRivendell: hehe LOTR fan :D. maybe that last poem I wrote has
something to do with elves and stuff. Yes draky is a weird and hated name,
I suppose that's why pansy, in stories, usually call him. and what do you
mean by YOUR Dracky?? Hummmm?? Sorry sweetie but this draco is mine, of
corse you can own some Dracy but draco Malfoy is MINE ;) hehe.
treachery89--sick of logging in: hehehehehehe, fair enough, I mean I think
its horrible to have to log in all the time, and I know who your are anywaz
:P, hehehe, never fear I am coming and I am going to write a review with
your story, I have read it and I must say :O,WOW:O its sooooo good! You
MUST write another story! You must you must you must. Hehehe you hang your
cloths upside down? LOL, I think that's a talent :P lol. Thanx for telling
me how to spell 'Quidditch'.
Pupulupk: OMG! What can I say? You've asked me t be your better reader,
when infact your work doesn't need much better reading, am HONERED! I
really am. I will do everything in my power to help you and your story,
thanx for asking you little legend. LOL. Well I suppose I should be talking
to you more ;) hehehe.
PyRei: LOLOLOLOL, your so funny, I LOVE your reviews :D, yeah I read heaps
of fanfics but for some reason all the little like hair and eye info I
don't pick up, and if I do it doesn't stay in my head/mind/brain for very
long. My dog is sooooooo cute at the moment, she's sleeping on my lap :D
hehe, you prob didn't need to know that now did you? Hehehe. I'm sur you'll
get a b/f soon just look in his eyes and check the color before you pick
him ;) make sure there a slivery colour :D.
two insane chixs: hehe I LOVE your story and I'm going to come over and
read some more. Thanx for your emails girlies, I love your work and your
review. At first I though the 'we' was confusing (hehe)
Kitty: first of all, I'm coming to read, and I must say I like the sounds
of you x-men story too, I love x-men I love ice-man and rogue, and pyro.
There my fav, so if you could include them. pretty please :D. hehe. WOW,
I've always wanted to know what would happen if pyro and iceman have a face-
out cause there 'powers' are the complete opposite! I mean in x-men2 all
iceman had to do was freeze the flames in which pyro was sending out and
killing the cops and stuff (understand what I mean?) anywaz I WANT YOU TO
POST THE STORY UP! Hehe. About your review to mine, thanx heaps, it was
bloody and stuff i lOVE to make things like that ;) hehe, I think blood
adds to the drama. Well you'll have t find out in like 1-2weeks to find out
what happens soz.
tom4eva: hehe, well I'm soz but this isn't the update that you were looking
for, but the next chappie will come soon. I wasn't sure I liked chappie 9,
no wait what was chappie nine again? Geez I should really get back on this
story. I just have so many things on at the moment. Although I have
written half of chappie 10 :D, hehe, I'll give you aclue on what its about.
poor draco, stupid lucius!
Codie: lol, heart-wrentching WOW I like that word.. :D. LOL, yeah imagine
what his father is going to do with Draco now. Hehehehe, yes I hope
everything will be able to turn out for the better also :P I love your
reviews.
Hermione-amy: was that a cliff hanger??? You ain't seen nothing yet :P
hehehehe. I'm glad you like this story. actually I'm really glad cause
with a name like yours it must mean you really like Hermione/hp therefore
to have your approval on this story is comforting. (hehe did that make
sense? :P )
green smurf (too lazy to sign in) : hehe well sometimes lazy is being good
;). hehe I know I have the smurfs turn in my head right now. la la la-la-la-
la la la-la la-la. hehe. Ohhhhh yeah I know, snape and Hermione not many
people know of (like me) but I suppose it would be an interesting concept
like teacher/student griffindor/slytherin hate hate relationship turns int
o love.. ok I'll stop now, and also with draco/giiny yeah I can see that I
mean the whole family hating thing, kinda reminds me of romeo and Juliet.
:P
sakura angel90: whats anime fanfic? Like whats it about? Is it like
animorphs? Hehehehehe. I'm glad you came back to hp fanfic then. :D, lol, I
swap between lotr and hp stories ALL the time and so I'll let you of ;)
hehehe. Yeah u spelt lucius right, but I ALWAYS spell him wrong. *shy
look* hehe. I just realized that where both angels :D hehehehe
Culf: hehehehe, well I haven't put the actual chappie up, but I will. I
promise :D, but it will be up in like 1 week. have have exams and stuff. :D
Cinnamon: hehe I'm eating chicken :D, lol its yummy :P. anywaz, I would
LOVE to write you a whole page answering your review although I can't cause
I'm too tired and I have to study therefore all I'm going to say is that
you're the bestest and I'm coming to write a review on your story but every
time I get on the computer I have to get off and study ( I know its sad.
well KEEP WRITING!
Fire 'n' ice: WOW look everyone, my competition has come and read my story
:P hehe, nah I am coming to read yours aswell I just need the time.
Hehehehehe, yes us three did get screwed with our eyes. poo brown is not my
colour ;) hehehehehehe LOL. I wish I oculd rip out my b/f's eyes and place
them in my eyes. :D. I know Hr/d paring are the best. I once read this
WHOLE story and it was a h/d story, well harry and draco were really close
friends and I waited till Hermione and draco would get together. but to my
angerment (:P) they never did! Infact harry and draco did! I was shocked!
Who wants to write slash :O.
Elf_gal. wow I am really honored that you've stuck by me throughout all my
stories. I really enjoy your reviews and feedback. I lOVE it how you review
each chappie. and yes I will continue, but I will be posting in like 1
weeks time. Hope you enjoyed the poetry in this A/N please tell me which
one you like the best and stuff. although I must say most of them only took
5-10min to write. (hehe) and now thanx to oyu, not only do I have 120
reviews but I have 125. :D thankyou so much!
Soz peoples, my review page has stuffed up. so I can not see la the reviews
from other chapiies so if I have left you out please forgive me. and I'll
get back to you in next chappie.
PLEASE WRITE A REVIEW: I KNOW THIS isn't THE STORY BUT ITS STILL SOME
WRITING THAT Requires SOME THINKING AND EFFORT
Luv ya all.
Elven ice angel.
AND I PROMISE NEXT CHAPPIE WILL BE UP INE EITHER ONE WEEK OR TWO WEEKS
TIME.
I am SO sorry! Don't worry I'm not giving up on this story, I HATE it when
stories do that! But also this story is NEVER over UNTIL I say so at the
end, so although at some points it may look like it's the end it really
isn't. this IS going to be a long story, I think around 20-25 chappies,
soooo there actually is a really big plot that is going to fall into place
in the upcoming chapters.
This is mainly a note to say that I won't be posting till 2 weeks. I no I
no, but I just don't have the time at the moment, I have really big year 9
exams and stuff which I can't fail unless I actually want to fall into the
intermediate class..
BUT: I haven't left you in a cliffy therefore it's alright, right????
(hehe)
I"VE: written a few poems and so I've dedicated this author's note for
poetry cause then it gives you at least something to read.
Disclaimer: no wait. I don't need this because I do actually own them, WHO
HOO!
MUST READ NOTE: too all who read: these are the terms that I ask offa you:
you can call them your own, and you can use them on assignments or friends
which ever suits you, but you must write a review and say so. I wont mind
and you don't have to wait for a reply back from me.
YOU MUST WRITE A REVIEW!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!! POETRY IS HARD TO WRITE AS YOU
MUST KNOW!
please let this be an encouragement to you all and I think you should all
write a poem and write it in the review, even If its just a limerick.
PLEASE READ THE ABOVE NOTE! Luv elven ice angel:
POETRY:
A writing-lust inside her goes grow,
A twinkle in her eye,
There filed with wild, exiting emotions,
That may make you cry,
The paper and pen is drawn from her pocket,
Her imagination goes wild,
The expression and meanings can mean so many things,
Although her attention and brain-span is mild.
I leave you know to read her work,
Although some are quite old,
The twinkle in her eye brightens,
As her poems begin to unfold.
bree Gregory (hehe, I wrote that just then ;) hehe)
You are becoming an endangered species Dani,
For you are very rare,
To find a good friend like you,
We must have something to share,
We both hide our natural qualities,
Although you do more then me,
So let yourself go a little,
And show the Dani we love to see,
You give yourself so little credit,
You are gorgeous, pretty and cleaver too,
You give out love and joy,
Don't admire me, cause I admire you.
Bree Gregory (this was written to a good friend of mine, who had like
motional problems.)
You say our friendship will last forever,
But do you mean what you say?
If I was to die tomorrow,
Would you remember me each day?
I often wonder what my life would be like,
Is I didn't have you,
And every night I get the same answer,
Which makes me believe its somewhat true.
If you weren't in my life,
I don't know where I'd be,
For you are very special,
And you complete me,
Yet somehow I get the feeling,
That you don't feel the same way,
Will you remember my final words?
And everything I say?
Bree Gregory (this was written a long time ago, it changes speed throughout
the poem, and I was trying to get that across, although I don't think it
worked. (. oh well.)
Your touch and hugs is what I will miss,
I'm sitting here crying, pleading for another kiss,
You could have picked anyone but instead you picked me,
We had memorable times together which will last an eternity.
It feels like the word is over now that I'm not with you,
I have now had enough, and I know what I must do.
~who do we run to when we are in pain?
~ and in our hearts, our loved, ones have left a terrible stain?
I went to the bathroom and took out my shaver,
Thinking it over while I looked at my razor,
I gripped it tight and began to quiver,
I slit my wrist and began to shiver.
A deep crimson colour came pouring out of the cut,
My knees buckled under me as my eyes began to shut,
Five minutes later the phone began to shake,
It was you that was calling saying the break-up was a mistake,
Little did you know that I was on the floor,
With blood all around me and breathing no more.
Bree Gregory (its sad but it happens)
Taking aim and tightening the string,
He knows he has the skill,
With eyes dancing, raging with fire,
He releases and goes for the kill,
His aim was true the target was hit,
The blood-stained man found the ground,
The crimson colour poured onto the grass,
With making little sound.
He turned his head and found what he wanted,
The satisfaction clear within his eye,
He prepared his bow for his next target,
But instead it was his turn to die.
Bree Gregory (this is one that I used for my history test, it was on world
war one, and I just changes some lines so that instead of it being a bow it
was a gun that the man was using to kill the people.)
WELL: that's it for the poetry, I'm now going to reply to reviews, oh AND
peoples if I do this now, it means next chappie I wont have as much so bare
with me.
Silver Dragon Goddess: every time I see your name I melt at the sight of
it. I always say this but I LOVE IT! You've made this angel jealous. (hehe)
LOL, yeah I know, that last line I wrote was like . ummm. it summed up what
I was trying to say within 2 lines, hehe. It realy defines that harry and
ron are like stunned and stuff. well I really appreciate your reviews
sliver dragon, keep them up. I will write a better review back to you next
time.
AndinaOfRivendell: hehe LOTR fan :D. maybe that last poem I wrote has
something to do with elves and stuff. Yes draky is a weird and hated name,
I suppose that's why pansy, in stories, usually call him. and what do you
mean by YOUR Dracky?? Hummmm?? Sorry sweetie but this draco is mine, of
corse you can own some Dracy but draco Malfoy is MINE ;) hehe.
treachery89--sick of logging in: hehehehehehe, fair enough, I mean I think
its horrible to have to log in all the time, and I know who your are anywaz
:P, hehehe, never fear I am coming and I am going to write a review with
your story, I have read it and I must say :O,WOW:O its sooooo good! You
MUST write another story! You must you must you must. Hehehe you hang your
cloths upside down? LOL, I think that's a talent :P lol. Thanx for telling
me how to spell 'Quidditch'.
Pupulupk: OMG! What can I say? You've asked me t be your better reader,
when infact your work doesn't need much better reading, am HONERED! I
really am. I will do everything in my power to help you and your story,
thanx for asking you little legend. LOL. Well I suppose I should be talking
to you more ;) hehehe.
PyRei: LOLOLOLOL, your so funny, I LOVE your reviews :D, yeah I read heaps
of fanfics but for some reason all the little like hair and eye info I
don't pick up, and if I do it doesn't stay in my head/mind/brain for very
long. My dog is sooooooo cute at the moment, she's sleeping on my lap :D
hehe, you prob didn't need to know that now did you? Hehehe. I'm sur you'll
get a b/f soon just look in his eyes and check the color before you pick
him ;) make sure there a slivery colour :D.
two insane chixs: hehe I LOVE your story and I'm going to come over and
read some more. Thanx for your emails girlies, I love your work and your
review. At first I though the 'we' was confusing (hehe)
Kitty: first of all, I'm coming to read, and I must say I like the sounds
of you x-men story too, I love x-men I love ice-man and rogue, and pyro.
There my fav, so if you could include them. pretty please :D. hehe. WOW,
I've always wanted to know what would happen if pyro and iceman have a face-
out cause there 'powers' are the complete opposite! I mean in x-men2 all
iceman had to do was freeze the flames in which pyro was sending out and
killing the cops and stuff (understand what I mean?) anywaz I WANT YOU TO
POST THE STORY UP! Hehe. About your review to mine, thanx heaps, it was
bloody and stuff i lOVE to make things like that ;) hehe, I think blood
adds to the drama. Well you'll have t find out in like 1-2weeks to find out
what happens soz.
tom4eva: hehe, well I'm soz but this isn't the update that you were looking
for, but the next chappie will come soon. I wasn't sure I liked chappie 9,
no wait what was chappie nine again? Geez I should really get back on this
story. I just have so many things on at the moment. Although I have
written half of chappie 10 :D, hehe, I'll give you aclue on what its about.
poor draco, stupid lucius!
Codie: lol, heart-wrentching WOW I like that word.. :D. LOL, yeah imagine
what his father is going to do with Draco now. Hehehehe, yes I hope
everything will be able to turn out for the better also :P I love your
reviews.
Hermione-amy: was that a cliff hanger??? You ain't seen nothing yet :P
hehehehe. I'm glad you like this story. actually I'm really glad cause
with a name like yours it must mean you really like Hermione/hp therefore
to have your approval on this story is comforting. (hehe did that make
sense? :P )
green smurf (too lazy to sign in) : hehe well sometimes lazy is being good
;). hehe I know I have the smurfs turn in my head right now. la la la-la-la-
la la la-la la-la. hehe. Ohhhhh yeah I know, snape and Hermione not many
people know of (like me) but I suppose it would be an interesting concept
like teacher/student griffindor/slytherin hate hate relationship turns int
o love.. ok I'll stop now, and also with draco/giiny yeah I can see that I
mean the whole family hating thing, kinda reminds me of romeo and Juliet.
:P
sakura angel90: whats anime fanfic? Like whats it about? Is it like
animorphs? Hehehehehe. I'm glad you came back to hp fanfic then. :D, lol, I
swap between lotr and hp stories ALL the time and so I'll let you of ;)
hehehe. Yeah u spelt lucius right, but I ALWAYS spell him wrong. *shy
look* hehe. I just realized that where both angels :D hehehehe
Culf: hehehehe, well I haven't put the actual chappie up, but I will. I
promise :D, but it will be up in like 1 week. have have exams and stuff. :D
Cinnamon: hehe I'm eating chicken :D, lol its yummy :P. anywaz, I would
LOVE to write you a whole page answering your review although I can't cause
I'm too tired and I have to study therefore all I'm going to say is that
you're the bestest and I'm coming to write a review on your story but every
time I get on the computer I have to get off and study ( I know its sad.
well KEEP WRITING!
Fire 'n' ice: WOW look everyone, my competition has come and read my story
:P hehe, nah I am coming to read yours aswell I just need the time.
Hehehehehe, yes us three did get screwed with our eyes. poo brown is not my
colour ;) hehehehehehe LOL. I wish I oculd rip out my b/f's eyes and place
them in my eyes. :D. I know Hr/d paring are the best. I once read this
WHOLE story and it was a h/d story, well harry and draco were really close
friends and I waited till Hermione and draco would get together. but to my
angerment (:P) they never did! Infact harry and draco did! I was shocked!
Who wants to write slash :O.
Elf_gal. wow I am really honored that you've stuck by me throughout all my
stories. I really enjoy your reviews and feedback. I lOVE it how you review
each chappie. and yes I will continue, but I will be posting in like 1
weeks time. Hope you enjoyed the poetry in this A/N please tell me which
one you like the best and stuff. although I must say most of them only took
5-10min to write. (hehe) and now thanx to oyu, not only do I have 120
reviews but I have 125. :D thankyou so much!
Soz peoples, my review page has stuffed up. so I can not see la the reviews
from other chapiies so if I have left you out please forgive me. and I'll
get back to you in next chappie.
PLEASE WRITE A REVIEW: I KNOW THIS isn't THE STORY BUT ITS STILL SOME
WRITING THAT Requires SOME THINKING AND EFFORT
Luv ya all.
Elven ice angel.
AND I PROMISE NEXT CHAPPIE WILL BE UP INE EITHER ONE WEEK OR TWO WEEKS
TIME.