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Hey... I'm I quick enough... well actually that depends if I finish this as soon as I sit down to type it hehe... ITS NOT MY FAULT!!!! What? I have no idea... ok the reason I'm saying really random things is because I have nothing to say... erg! Oh I do ihave one thing to say: in chapter one, tiffany's last name was saffia then in chapter 5 I told you it was dolohov, none of you noticed but I have edited ALL the chapters so it should be fixed... YAY! Go me!
Disclaimer:
Kitty- hey ya'll! Its us again, and I'm happy to say I do not own wicked or elphie so she can't get mad at me.
Elphie- you forgot something ::hands her a package::
Kitty- huh? O thank you! ::opens the package and throws it out the window:: sorry can't own it
Elphie- why not?
Kitty- that wasn't signed by Takaya. Right?
Takaya- yup!
Elphie- b...b...but I g...gave it.... WHY ARE YOU PEOPLE DOING THIS TO ME?
Kitty- hey! I'm not a person!
Takaya- I am though!
Elphie- Shut up you two!
Kitty- enjoy the story!
New Characters This Chapter- Him (His, He, Him... etc, I will capitalize it, and italicize it) and Luke and maybe you'll meet Kai... I'll think about it : )
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Chapter 10: A Plot (a/n finally... lol)
In space, I'll try third Person k?
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Sounds of beeping and clicking issued from the small control room on the ship, you could hear His voice commenting on how His plan was going. In front of Him was a television screen, if that is what you would call it and He was watching some sort of movie on the screen that included a cast of many characters.
One with Black and white hair was walking towards a house, he was holding the hand of a small girl with goldenrod colored hair they entered the house. A few minutes later a small girl with short blond hair walked onto the screen. They were all in the house. Looking closer there was an orange haired youth sitting on the roof. Suddenly He yelled out.
"Damn oushi! He brought the usagi and tora with him too! LUKE! Get me a glass of milk please! And some cookies!" a small boy with rainbow colored locks and eyes that steadily changed color (red- orange- gold- bright green- aqua- bright blue- deep blue- dark purple- lighter purple- pinkish purple- magenta- salmon- red- orange...) rushed in carrying a tray of cookies and a glass of milk.
On the screen the young orange-haired boy was sitting on the roof of a house and talking to a girl with strawberry blond hair. Then everything gets dark.
A picture of a young girl with short-shoulder length brown hair appears on the screen. The girl looked very dazed and thoughtful then suddenly she took the pair of scissors she was holding and sliced her wrist.
The picture then scanned the room and on the other side of the room standing on the stairs was a girl who looked the same as the other, with lighter colored hair, crept back up the stairs.
"WHAT?!?!" He shouted out again, "This was NOT supposed to happen! Luke you are dismissed." He looked aggravated.
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Luke POV
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I left the room worrying whether He was mad at me, but I doubted it, he never paid attention to anybody but the screen. Then I started worrying about Kai, hoping They didn't beat her up too much. My life is full of worrying, that is ALL that my life is. I suppose I could blame it on Kai, but I chose this life, she didn't make me, well I came because of her, but I will not blame it on her.
I got to Kai's cell and with satisfaction noticed that they had left already. I ran up to her, and saw that she was sitting in her chair with a smile on her face. That's when I started wondering why they didn't beat her this time.
Kai was a eight year old girl with light green skin and striped blue/ aqua/ green hair to match as well as bright blue eyes. She is actually 35 years old, as well as I, but when I got my doctors degree invented a medicene to make you look younger. As my best friend Kai tried some and me, feeling bad drank the rest. She had taken too much and turned into an eight year old she had drunk more than half of it. So not having enough left to become an eight year old my self, drank the rest of it and am now a ten year old. That was about six months ago.
The Space League knew who Kai was and she apparantly had something they needed, so they took her into captivity. And me being the idiot that I was, came along offering to be a slave, as long as they feed me. They really aren't that bad, except they beat Kai everyday to see if she will tell them where whatever they want is, I still have yet to figure out what they want but I will at somepoint. Today they seem to have been nice to Kai, but why is she smiling? She NEVER smiles.
I ask her if they beat her today... she replies, "Why would they beat me? They never have before!" I'm thinking, 'what has gotten into HER?' but whatever, as long as they didn't hurt her. But what worries me even more is what she said next, "Who are you?"
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Tiffany POV
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Afterschool I meet up with Hana, Katie and Kerry. I tell Hana that I'm going to go pick up her DVDs at Shi's house and that they can go to my house and that I'll be there in not too long. They say okay and I run off to Kyo's locker. He is not there yet so I wait there for him. Almost fifteen minutes later he comes walking around the corner.
"Hey! Where have you been?" I say to him.
"I was at your locker waiting for you. Ya ready to go?"
"Oh... Yep! Lets go!" and so off we went to Shi's house.
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This is like my favorite chapter, so far... i LOVE totally original characters, like all the ppl you don't kno, that you've met so far are people in real life. i'll include character stuff on them at the bottom. Umm... ya I'm sorry ya'll I promise next chapter will be the Party, it was supposed to come up in this chapter. And Arisa and Saki weren't supposed to turn up till next chapter, I'm getting behind so there fore it will be longer than planned. Thanx for putting up with me!
FruitsBasketCase- I HATE WRITERS BLOCK, I have no idea how to make the story flow because of it. I did actually like last chapter, and I LOVE the beginning of this chapter. Before fanfiction, I NEVER used to use dialouge in my stories it was all discription like the first half or more like MOST of this chapter. Ya it was from earrings, and I actually love the earings I am wearing them... NOT right now but I wore them yesterday... hehe. I can't wait til you come out with another story! I would tell you you could try writing the rest of Onigiri's secret because I'm not really into writing it anymore but then I would tell you everything was wrong in it so I wouldn't recommend it but I think I've given upon it. So sad. Well ja! Thanx!
VindictiveGoddessOfPinkRabbits- no boyfriend, not hot/ cute/ gorgeous guy got it? You are hardly part of this story, get used to it! U're really really bugging me! but Thanx Anyway!
jdepp- ya kno johnny was on Opra yesterday, my mom made me watch it but i wanted to, jenna if you're reading this don't kill me. When johnny is in regular conversation he talks just like nick, and his scottish accent sounds just like the guy in bend it like beckham.... hehe... lets go see finding neverland k? YAY! anyway, when the muffins come into existance agin, i willl get you one, but they have kind of died, for now... erg! lol. review pweeze? thanx!
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Character Profile- Luke
eyes- always changing through the colors of the rainbow.
hair- looks like it is highlighted because like his eyes has all the colors of the rainbow in it.
age- 35, appears as a 10 year old
history- was a professional doctor like Ha'ri, was in the process of inventine an "ageing preventor" medecine but when he tested it on himself turned 10. Then volunteering as a slave on the ship that captured, or kiddnapped his best friend Kai.
Character Profile- Kai
eyes- bright blue
hair- striped blue/ aqua/ green... plus light green skin
age- 35, appears as an 8 year old
history- was a clothes designer, but then offered to try Luke's "medecine" and ended up as an 8 year old. some guys out to get the "soumas" kidnapped her and Luke came along to be a slave on the space ship. won't tell you what the "EVIL" guys wanted yet though! hehe!
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