Hey yall thanks to all the reviewers. Love you all!! To clarify what Vende ned Sere said in her review, I do not go around punching people in the nose!! It is just that Vende ned Sere is my best friend, and we go to sparring together! Well, I called her out to fight me and our instructor called "Fight!" we started to fight, we threw a couple punches and kicks. Then I thought she was going to punch me in the stomach, so I blocked, but she wasn't, her hand was not even there to protect her face, I guess you could say she faked me out. So when I did my block, I kind of accidentally back handed her nose... and I felt so bad, but she just likes to make me feel worse by saying it hehehe. Give her credit, she would have kept fighting if our instructor had not called time. She made me back into the wall before that so, yeah hehehe. I will never forgive myself for that hehehe! Her nose was not bleeding, we wear special gear, which I am very thankful for. This was just to inform everyone that looked at her review, in case they thought otherwise
Rumor ran fast, with Avi and Wiley close at his heels. "Wiley, have some horses ready when I return, we must leave at once!" shouted Rumor, as he took Eleanor into the nearest inn. Wiley and Avi quickly went to work, tacking up a few stable horses. "We must go rent these horses out, will you go deliver this money to the inn keeper." asked Wiley, throwing a bag of silver at Avi. "Yes, I will be back in a few seconds to help." whispered Avi, running to do the task. She stepped into the dark inn Rumor had entered moments before; shadows danced eerily in the dim candlelight "Hello, is anybody here?" Avi said nervously, but all she received as a response was her own lonely echo. "Umm, I just wanted to deliver some money so we could borrow your horses." Avi tried again. This time she heard a response, other than her echo, but it was not the voice she wanted to hear at all.
"Well, my dear how are we doing?" came a coy voice, from behind Avi. "Leave me alone Maverick, I do not wish to speak to you right now, or ever." Avi hissed, trying to hide how afraid she was. " Now aren't we the cocky one, do you have the action to back your words Princess?" Maverick cooed, like he had done earlier. "I thought I had already proven that to you, when I hit you." Avi growled, turning to face the man. He smiled, crossing his arms across his chest. "You only proved to be a little more difficult than most, but I will have my way in the end, as I always do." Maverick sighed dramatically.
"You monster, you will never have me!" screamed Avi, backing away nonetheless. "Yes, I will!" Maverick hissed, reaching for her. Avi screamed, smacking his hand away. Maverick laughed, and held a firm grip on her wrists, so that she could not punch him again. Avi went to kick him, but he evaded, and started to lead her to the second floor of the inn. Avi tried to wretch herself free from his grip, but this guy was bound and determined to not let her go, like his life depended on it. "Let me go this instance!!!!" Avi screamed at the top of her lungs, pulling away in a vain attempt to free herself. "Shut up girl, you are getting on my nerves!" Maverick whispered dangerously, glaring at her. In other circumstances this would have made Avi laugh, for he was taking someone against their will, and he expects them to be silent about it.
"Let her go, you madman!" came a voice from behind them. Maverick turned, wrenching Avi into a very uncomfortable position, since he had her in an arm lock. To Avi's surprise the person that had just shouted was, no other than Phineas. "And what are you going to do, my little lady?" Maverick sneered. "Well, I could go fetch my Rumor, but I think I can take you myself." Phineas responded coolly. This made Avi stare in bewilderment, and Maverick laugh, though he did not loosen his grip. "If you feel that way, I guess you learn the hard way." Phineas shrugged, and to both Avi and Maverick's surprise, she unsheathed a sword. This did, however, make Maverick loosen his grip. Avi took this opportunity to elbow Maverick in the ribcage. He let out a yelp, and doubled over in pain. Phineas ran up to Avi "Are you ok, I heard you scream and I came as quick as I could!" Avi nodded, eyeing Maverick, who was recovering from the elbow she gave him. "Let's give this guy a lesson, shall we?" Phineas spoke calmly, raising her sword in a defensive position. Maverick raised his hands up in the air "I'm done ok, no more please, I have had enough!" and before anyone could say anything, he was gone. "Thank you so much Phineas, I thought he had me for a second there!" Avi sighed, turning to Phineas "No problem, I just can't stand when men do that, and when I saw you try to kick him and scream bloody murder, I just couldn't leave you here, helpless!"
She added "I am sorry for being so rude to you, I just don't know what came over me." Avi smiled. "Well, what you did for me was apologies enough, anyways I do not think we were ever properly introduced, I'm Avi, as you know!" Avi smiled holding out her hand. Phineas took it " And as you already know, I'm Phineas, and now we are formely introduced!" Phineas laughed. "Come we must hurry, I will put this money on the inn desk, with a small note, we have to leave soon!" Avi shouted frantically, returning to the problem they faced. "Yes, let us hurry now, Wiley already has the horses ready to go!" Phineas sighed, rushing out the door. Avi followed, and she then saw Wiley. He ran up to her. "Are you ok Avi, I was about to run in after you, but Phineas gave me strict orders to stay here!" Wiley said, true worry etched in his face. Avi nodded "I am fine Wiley, do you have the horses ready to go?" Avi breathed, still a little out of breath from the Maverick ordeal. "Yes, they are all saddled up!" Wiley whispered, leading Avi to her mount. At this moment, Rumor came out with Eleanor "Hurry, we must leave now!" Rumor said, mounting his horse, while placing Eleanor in front of him.
Everyone else followed, and they were soon galloping through the paved streets. Avi shouted over the wind "How long till we reach Frell?" "Actually, it is only about a nights ride, at the pace we are going." Wiley shouted back, looking straight ahead. It was hard to avoid all the merchant cart, since there seemed to be thousands, and a gallop made it all the harder. They finally made it out of Pembroke, and down the hill. They traveled through a vast wasteland, trying to reach Frell as soon as possible, for Eleanor's sake. Finally, when the first lights of dawn could be seen on the horizon, and the horses could not travel much further, a huge castle came in sight. "Frell, at last!" Phineas sighed. They galloped up to the city gates. "Who are you, and what is your business here?" asked a serious but kindly looking man. "I am Rumor of Frell, and my friend needs medical attention immediatly!" called Rumor. The guard nodded, and almost instantly the huge iron gates rose. Once again the group started to gallop "We will stop at my guard legion, they have a wonderful doctor there, he will help Eleanor for sure" Rumor stated. They reached what Avi guessed was the legion very quickly. It was a huge field, with a fence all around, and in the middle of the training field was a round building, made of marble. "Rumor, Wiley, welcome back, please come in." sang an elderly looking man, with a white beard that ended in a triangular shape at the end of his chest.
He then looked at the Avi, Eleanor and Phineas, and sighed. "I am sorry ladies, but you may not enter, this is a training area for men only, and you would be a huge distraction to them, since well, you know!" the old man shouted. "Um, sir this is an emergency, our friend needs medical attention immedialty, and they must come in also!" Rumor whispered, out of respect. "Well, I am sorry, but sick or no, we cannot allow any lady, of any kind in!" the man hissed, giving the girls a disapproving look. This made Avi very angry, Eleanor needed medical attention and an old hoot was not going to allow them in, just because they were females. "Sir, I have done just as much, and have been through just as much as you, and I demand you let me in, for though I am sure later I will respect your rules when this ordeal is over, my friend is hurt, and no human being on this earth or the next is gonna stop me from coming in!" Avi said briskly, and made her horse trot right past the man, without even looking back. "Please let us through master, please!" came Wiley's frantic voice. "Yes you may pass, but I will speak with you two about this later, you understand me!" came the old mans voice. "Yessir!" Rumor and Wiley shouted in unison.
Avi heard galloping from behind her, and she turned. "Are you crazy Avi, that is the greatest warrior ever, and our teacher, and for you to speak to him in such a tone is well, is very disrespectful!" Rumor whispered, giving her a sideways glance. "Anyone who stand in the way of someone who needs desperate help, no matter how great a warrior, is not worth my time, or anyone's respect!" Avi hissed, her anger at the man evident. Phineas piped up "I agree, you can't stick to rules, when someone's life is at stake!" Wiley just nodded. They came to the round building, and the group dismounted their horses. "I will go give the horses some water, you guys go take Eleanor in!" Wiley shouted, while unharnessing the tired animals. Everyone nodded, and stepped through the wooden door of the building. Rumor held Eleanor, and led them down a dark hallway, lit by torches. They came to a door, it was bigger than most, with an eagle crest above it, symbolizing some medical room of that. "This is were the doctor usually stays, lets see what he can do for Eleanor. Rumor whispered, while knocking on the door. "Yes, I will be right there, give me a moment!" came a small voice, that sounded to have a stuffy nose. "It is me, Doctor Valersalisaaslytut!" Rumor said. "Rumor, oh my, I have not seen you for so long, how have you been my boy!!" sung the nasal voice. There was footsteps, and the door opened to reveal,, a very short man, that probably used to be handsome, in his younger days. "Oh my, what is going on here!" gasped Doctor Valersalisaaslytut (gosh, that is a mouthful isn't it?) "No time to explain, can you please see to this little girl, she is wounded, and you are the best doctor I know of!" cried Rumor, handing the man Eleanor. "Why of course my boy, I will start right away, but on one condition!" said the man. "Yes anything, Doctor Valersalisaaslytut!" Rumor sighed, impatiently. "Please call me, Valer, I hate my full last name!" said the man smiling. "Of course, Valer!" Rumor laughed.
A/N. Hey it's me once again. How did you like it. I just need a start for my next event, so thanks for readin. Now all of you that have stories, you know how special it makes you feel to recieve reviews, from praise to constructive criticisim, so please, make me feel good!!!!! Anyways, yes I have the main events of this story planned out, but all the little ideas i still need to make up, I have many ideas but it would be really awesome to get some from you guys!! So, since I really need your help, and my B-day is comin, can you give me a review, and an email with an idea. But as always, gifts are more than welcome, but not necessary at all, LOL you know I would appreciate it so much. Ok I am done blabbin, THANKS FOR READIN, AND ONCE AGAIN REVIEW