Disclaimer: I don't own any of the J.K Rowling settings or characters!!! My
loss!
**Ok everyone thanks so much for the reviews!! Okay I know there are a lot of mistakes and people keep suggesting a beta reader, BUT WHAT IS THAT??? Also I'll take my time more describing stuff and leave more suspense!! Thanks for the suggestions, KEEP ON REVIEWING!!
**to: stasiamez: Ok, if you think this story is a let down, THEN STOP READING IT. I know not everyone is going to like this story, but calm yourself! As for Lily, she is only seeing James in a different point of view! I know she won't fall in love with him with a corny line!! Oh, and I'm probably a bigger Harry Potter fan than you! But thanks and I will try to use your CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, because I agree with you in that area.
Chapter 5: Welcome to Hogwarts (part 2)
Narcissia Black stood directly in front of Lily.
"Lily! I'm just sooo sooo sorry about the Head Girl Mix-up!" Narcissia apologized sarcastically.
"Whatever Black!" sneered Lily.
"Why Lily, you should watch your mouth! I am the Head Girl. I guess the Professors just picked the better person!"
Lily held up her had and swung it hard across Narcissia's pale face, leaving a read mark. Lily went to take another swipe but Sirius and James tackled her down so she could get herself into more trouble. Using their strong muscles, they carried Lily up to the castle while she cursed back down on Narcissia.
Lily knew what she was doing wrong but she couldn't stand the smirk on her face, her boney cheeks or her crooked teeth. Lily was going to get in BIG trouble for this!
"Ms, Evans!"
Lily turned around. Professor McGonagall glided towards her.
"I am shocked Ms. Evans! I thought you could deal with your temper, but obviously NOT!! 10 points from Gryffindor for giving the students a horrible display of manners and Detention!"
"But Professor!" Lily began.
"6:00, Thursday night. Be there!" Professor McGonagall said as she stormed off.
"Lily, what was that display back outside?? What did Narcissia ever do to you?" Morgan asked.
"I'll tell you what that little b."Lily began.
"Remember Lily, we're in school now!" Remus warned.
"You're right, sorry!" Lily apologized, "ok. Well when I was taken outside by Professor McGonagall?"
"Ya," said Jeannie.
"It turns out that there was a mistake with the choosing of Head Girl!"
"What do you mean?" Remus asked.
"They also asked Narcissia Black. Well you saw what happened outside, they choose Narcissia over me because of 'points of views'"
"WHAT?!? They can't do that!" Sirius shouted.
"But can they?" Morgan asked.
"I guess so." Lily pouted.
"Awww.sweetie!" said Morgan as she ran to hug Lily, as did Jeannie. Lily's tears ran down her shivering face and on to her friend's shoulders.
"Come on; let's go down to the banquet. Lily, you'll feel better once you eat something." James explained.
"Hey, you guys. I really don't feel like eating anymore." Lily said.
"Lily, you have to eat. It might get your mind off things. Let's go," Jeannie grabbed Lily's hand and dragged her into the great hall.
The Great Hall had a high enchanted ceiling that showed the weather outside. At the moment the sky was clear and full of stars. There were four tables that had been set with plates, forks, knives and spoons. At the end of the room stood one long table where the teachers sat, waiting for the students to enter.
Lily, Morgan, Jeannie, Remus, Sirius and James all sat down together at the Gryffindor table. Peter rushed in the door of the great hall and sat himself down beside Sirius.
"Oy! Where have you been?" Sirius questioned.
"Oh! I got the last carriage up to the castle with Tom Lovegood and Elton Bart."
"I'm surprised your not friends with them! They're just like you!" joked James.
"Shut it," Peter squeaked.
At that moment Professor McGonagall carried out a ragged old pointed wizard's hat. She placed it out on a rickety wooden stool. First years students gathered at the front of the hall waiting to be sorted into a house. The hat on the bench creaked open it's mouth and sang:
If you walked through these doors, It is most likely you have never been here before.
Place me on your head, And then you will see, The answer to the question: Where should they put me?
Hogwarts has four houses, I will pick just one, The place where you learn magic, And have lots of fun.
Into Gryffindor, Whose courage is aglow, A shred of fear, they never show.
If chosen into Hufflepuff, You have great loyalty, And always work as hard as can be.
If chosen into Ravenclaw, You are very well read, Your books are like water and your bread.
And last but not least, there is Slytherin, Whose cunning minds, Make them find, Their real selves do show.
And know you'll see, When you put on me, Your destiny!
The great hall erupted into a loud, thunderous cheering! Professor McGonagall started with the calling of names.
"Albot, Jesse"
Lily looked around the Hall. She glanced around and her eyes set on a boy. He had greesy black hair, a crooked nose, piercing cold eyes and many pimples had sprouted on his nose. His name was Severus Snape. Lily had once tried to stick up for him in their 5th year, when James and Sirius were picking on him.
'I guess he didn't like the fact I was Muggle born,' Lily thought. It still hurts when the Slytherins call her a Mudblood. Lily knew she felt stupid thinking this. It was only a word, right?
"Flockheart, Amanda"
James was staring at Lily; strands of her red hair lightly touched her face. Her green eyes were glassy and tearful. How he wanted to jump from his seat and comfort her, he wanted to give her the world.
Lily looked up from her thoughts and saw James staring at her. James quickly looked down at his plate.
'OMG! I hope she didn't notice me!' thought James to himself.
"Snapple, Jane"
Sirius was awoken by the loud cheering from the Hufflepuff table. He quickly drifted back into a light slumber dreaming of a certain girl. Hard to guess which one, he has been with so many. Sirius snorted in his sleep. Remus gave him a hard nudge in the rib cage. Sirius woke up suddenly.
"Zydroid, Kellen" Professor McGonagall called.
"Slytherin" The hat called out. There was a sudden outburst by the Slytherin table.
The whole student body hushed down like a light rain as Professor Dumbledore, the Head Master at Hogwarts, rose out of his seat. His long white beard trailed behind him as he surveyed the crowd with his twinkling eyes under his half-moon spectacles.
"Welcome to another year at Hogwarts," He began, "for some of you, your last."
There was a wimper from the Hufflepuff table continued by sobs.
"Do not worry, Ms. Adams. We still have a year together. Anyways, before you eat, I would like to remind you that: 1. No magic is allowed in the corridor and 2. The forbidden forest is out of bounds to ALL students. That includes you Mr. Black and Mr. Potter.
"I would also like to congratulate Mr. Potter who has become Head Boy and to Ms. Evans, for Head Girl! Both from Gryffindor! Well done!"
Noticing the mistake, Professor McGonagall stood up and whispered something politely in Dumbledore's ear. With confusing looks, Dumbledore whispered back into the ear of Professor McGonagall. This seemed to go on for a few moments until Dumbledore spoke again.
"Excuse me students, but I have made a mistake, Narcissia Black is our Head Girl this year, my apologies. Now I hope we all have a wonderful year together! I have kept you waiting long enough! Tuck in!"
**ok guys, hope you enjoyed this chapter!! Sorry for the wait and excuse my errors. Please Review, CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISISM!! LoL! Anyways, till next time! TTFN
A/N: I did not make all of the sorting hat song; I did it with help from fellow writers!
**Ok everyone thanks so much for the reviews!! Okay I know there are a lot of mistakes and people keep suggesting a beta reader, BUT WHAT IS THAT??? Also I'll take my time more describing stuff and leave more suspense!! Thanks for the suggestions, KEEP ON REVIEWING!!
**to: stasiamez: Ok, if you think this story is a let down, THEN STOP READING IT. I know not everyone is going to like this story, but calm yourself! As for Lily, she is only seeing James in a different point of view! I know she won't fall in love with him with a corny line!! Oh, and I'm probably a bigger Harry Potter fan than you! But thanks and I will try to use your CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, because I agree with you in that area.
Chapter 5: Welcome to Hogwarts (part 2)
Narcissia Black stood directly in front of Lily.
"Lily! I'm just sooo sooo sorry about the Head Girl Mix-up!" Narcissia apologized sarcastically.
"Whatever Black!" sneered Lily.
"Why Lily, you should watch your mouth! I am the Head Girl. I guess the Professors just picked the better person!"
Lily held up her had and swung it hard across Narcissia's pale face, leaving a read mark. Lily went to take another swipe but Sirius and James tackled her down so she could get herself into more trouble. Using their strong muscles, they carried Lily up to the castle while she cursed back down on Narcissia.
Lily knew what she was doing wrong but she couldn't stand the smirk on her face, her boney cheeks or her crooked teeth. Lily was going to get in BIG trouble for this!
"Ms, Evans!"
Lily turned around. Professor McGonagall glided towards her.
"I am shocked Ms. Evans! I thought you could deal with your temper, but obviously NOT!! 10 points from Gryffindor for giving the students a horrible display of manners and Detention!"
"But Professor!" Lily began.
"6:00, Thursday night. Be there!" Professor McGonagall said as she stormed off.
"Lily, what was that display back outside?? What did Narcissia ever do to you?" Morgan asked.
"I'll tell you what that little b."Lily began.
"Remember Lily, we're in school now!" Remus warned.
"You're right, sorry!" Lily apologized, "ok. Well when I was taken outside by Professor McGonagall?"
"Ya," said Jeannie.
"It turns out that there was a mistake with the choosing of Head Girl!"
"What do you mean?" Remus asked.
"They also asked Narcissia Black. Well you saw what happened outside, they choose Narcissia over me because of 'points of views'"
"WHAT?!? They can't do that!" Sirius shouted.
"But can they?" Morgan asked.
"I guess so." Lily pouted.
"Awww.sweetie!" said Morgan as she ran to hug Lily, as did Jeannie. Lily's tears ran down her shivering face and on to her friend's shoulders.
"Come on; let's go down to the banquet. Lily, you'll feel better once you eat something." James explained.
"Hey, you guys. I really don't feel like eating anymore." Lily said.
"Lily, you have to eat. It might get your mind off things. Let's go," Jeannie grabbed Lily's hand and dragged her into the great hall.
The Great Hall had a high enchanted ceiling that showed the weather outside. At the moment the sky was clear and full of stars. There were four tables that had been set with plates, forks, knives and spoons. At the end of the room stood one long table where the teachers sat, waiting for the students to enter.
Lily, Morgan, Jeannie, Remus, Sirius and James all sat down together at the Gryffindor table. Peter rushed in the door of the great hall and sat himself down beside Sirius.
"Oy! Where have you been?" Sirius questioned.
"Oh! I got the last carriage up to the castle with Tom Lovegood and Elton Bart."
"I'm surprised your not friends with them! They're just like you!" joked James.
"Shut it," Peter squeaked.
At that moment Professor McGonagall carried out a ragged old pointed wizard's hat. She placed it out on a rickety wooden stool. First years students gathered at the front of the hall waiting to be sorted into a house. The hat on the bench creaked open it's mouth and sang:
If you walked through these doors, It is most likely you have never been here before.
Place me on your head, And then you will see, The answer to the question: Where should they put me?
Hogwarts has four houses, I will pick just one, The place where you learn magic, And have lots of fun.
Into Gryffindor, Whose courage is aglow, A shred of fear, they never show.
If chosen into Hufflepuff, You have great loyalty, And always work as hard as can be.
If chosen into Ravenclaw, You are very well read, Your books are like water and your bread.
And last but not least, there is Slytherin, Whose cunning minds, Make them find, Their real selves do show.
And know you'll see, When you put on me, Your destiny!
The great hall erupted into a loud, thunderous cheering! Professor McGonagall started with the calling of names.
"Albot, Jesse"
Lily looked around the Hall. She glanced around and her eyes set on a boy. He had greesy black hair, a crooked nose, piercing cold eyes and many pimples had sprouted on his nose. His name was Severus Snape. Lily had once tried to stick up for him in their 5th year, when James and Sirius were picking on him.
'I guess he didn't like the fact I was Muggle born,' Lily thought. It still hurts when the Slytherins call her a Mudblood. Lily knew she felt stupid thinking this. It was only a word, right?
"Flockheart, Amanda"
James was staring at Lily; strands of her red hair lightly touched her face. Her green eyes were glassy and tearful. How he wanted to jump from his seat and comfort her, he wanted to give her the world.
Lily looked up from her thoughts and saw James staring at her. James quickly looked down at his plate.
'OMG! I hope she didn't notice me!' thought James to himself.
"Snapple, Jane"
Sirius was awoken by the loud cheering from the Hufflepuff table. He quickly drifted back into a light slumber dreaming of a certain girl. Hard to guess which one, he has been with so many. Sirius snorted in his sleep. Remus gave him a hard nudge in the rib cage. Sirius woke up suddenly.
"Zydroid, Kellen" Professor McGonagall called.
"Slytherin" The hat called out. There was a sudden outburst by the Slytherin table.
The whole student body hushed down like a light rain as Professor Dumbledore, the Head Master at Hogwarts, rose out of his seat. His long white beard trailed behind him as he surveyed the crowd with his twinkling eyes under his half-moon spectacles.
"Welcome to another year at Hogwarts," He began, "for some of you, your last."
There was a wimper from the Hufflepuff table continued by sobs.
"Do not worry, Ms. Adams. We still have a year together. Anyways, before you eat, I would like to remind you that: 1. No magic is allowed in the corridor and 2. The forbidden forest is out of bounds to ALL students. That includes you Mr. Black and Mr. Potter.
"I would also like to congratulate Mr. Potter who has become Head Boy and to Ms. Evans, for Head Girl! Both from Gryffindor! Well done!"
Noticing the mistake, Professor McGonagall stood up and whispered something politely in Dumbledore's ear. With confusing looks, Dumbledore whispered back into the ear of Professor McGonagall. This seemed to go on for a few moments until Dumbledore spoke again.
"Excuse me students, but I have made a mistake, Narcissia Black is our Head Girl this year, my apologies. Now I hope we all have a wonderful year together! I have kept you waiting long enough! Tuck in!"
**ok guys, hope you enjoyed this chapter!! Sorry for the wait and excuse my errors. Please Review, CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISISM!! LoL! Anyways, till next time! TTFN
A/N: I did not make all of the sorting hat song; I did it with help from fellow writers!