As of May 1st, 12:40AM, I have just replaced the content of chapters 50, 51 and 52.

What I have changed:

1. La La land no longer exists as a plot element.

2. Therefore Tashigi's and Zoro's bit have changed a little drastically.

That's probably all I've really changed, actually. I've added more to the other bits.

Here's a quick nutshell of all 52 chapters so far:

Everyone: Who are we? I wonder what we're doing here?

Kale: You're here to go back to the other world.

Nami: That's retarded.

God: Tough.

Luffy: I'm hungry.

Bad Guys: BWAHAHAHA!

Everyone: Oh crap.

Zoro: Where did that dumbass go?

Tashigi: That's not nice.

Kale: Luffy's a moron.

Rendel: So are you.

Sanji: Aaaaaaaangst.

Nami: Aaaaaaangstangst relief.

Bad Guys: What the hell?

Demons: Nyehehehehe.

Bad Guys: Ahhhh! We're possessed!

Everyone: Ahhhh! They're possessed!

And I say, well, there you go. If you forgot.

Bunny: That was about as helpful as pouring salt down someone's throat to make the medicine go down.

Aaa, the hell with it.

I'll update sometime later.