Chapter 3: My Immortal
Disclaimer: Don't own TMNT. I only own the sisters, the new girls, and the new boys. And I want to own Leo, but I can't. I can dream, though... The song " My Immortal" is a song owned by Evan Escence. So yeah.
A/N: This is an improtant bonding chapter between Lin and Raph. Raphael fans will be very suprised. DO NOT SKIP THIS CHAPTER IT'S VERY IMPORTANT!
Now, to humiliate Raph and Lin and ruine Raph's rep!
Raph and Lin
Me: On with the show!
Raph: No, you have to answer the nice reviewers!
Me: This is going to be a while.
Lenniluvsbrian: Hola gal! I know, I take sooo long to update. But, look who's talkin'? lol And girl, it's TCRI, I'm sure of it. I dunno if on the old series it'sTGRI, or whatever. But in an episode of the new series Donny clearly says TCRI. That's ok though- I can tell you'll be very helpfull later on when we come to proof reading, right? About Victoria, she was abducted by aliens. Just kiddin', she went off with the other little girls. Sorry I confused you.
Vic:I'd be better off with aliens than you.
Me: Watch your tongue young lady! I brought you into this fic, and I can take you out!
Vic: 00
Anyway: Your story was soooo inpiring, and you're welcome again! heehee I just loooooved Understanding Brother. And, about the deal, It's done. i swear, when you're done reading this, i had better see you gettin' on chapta 11 on UB, kk? Alright!shake hands, and you squeeze mine so hard it falls off. I glare)
Raphangela: Now, how did I know that you wolud read this? Maybe the fact that it's, based on raph? lol glad ya' like my baby girls, nobody can have them! bwahahahaha! Oh, you liked the opinions? lol well, you know how teenagers' minds work. I thought Loe's opionion was tottally him, dontcha think? hehe- Oh, raph and Linda? Yeah, major hateness! Not even a little liking. Well,that opionion about them might change in this chapter... Yeah, I have no flames so far! YYYYYEEEESSSSSSS!
Dory's Human Replica: Hi there! Oh, the fmaily nly gets as large as Natlaie getting added on, but in later storys they get childrne and everything, but lets not build tnesion, shall we? Yup, Splinter was much more in characer in chapter two. I found myslef making Splinter sound like Mike(ugh!) but then I thought: what would DHR think? lol And I know, you never read much about Mikey and Leo! I feel they're pretty close actually. Maybe Mike doesn't like Leo as much as Don, or maybe even raph, but they still have one of those bonds, ya' know? Thanx for readin' again!
Dona Tello625: Geez, cool it D.T, Raph hasn't even asked Katie out yet! it's ok you didn't review sooner. i don't mind. It serves me right for not posting sooner! OMG, HURRICANE FRANCES?! E-MAIL ME AND TELL ME YOU'RE OK! I don't know how anything is going, I live in Michigan! Argh!
Raph: Ok, I'll let you let them read now.
Me:Nope, I got another author's note, hun.
Raph: Hey, who you callin' Hun?
Me:Not that hun, you moron!
A/N again: A paragraph in regular print goes with the song lines below it in these things(). I hope you don't get confused. Argh, I'm working hard not to confuse people!
Me:oops, one more!
A/N: yet again: Yes, Linda had a boyfriedn that she kissed and loved when she was fourteen! I do! I'm supposed to get married next year! I'll tell you why if you e-mail me!
Okay, now I'm going to show you the story.
Leo: About time.
Me: Hey, do you wnat me to tell them about the tme when I caught you and raph hugging?
Leo: Okay, okay.
Me: Haha, I love you honey Leo:Love you too You guys: Oh please Me:Alright, I'll get on with it. Here's chapter three!
Linda ran into her bedroom, shaking and crying. She whipped around and closed her door. Befor e she closed it, she glimpsed Raphael and Josh staring bewilderdly at each other. They obviously had no idea why she was so miserable. And that suited her just fine. She didn't want anyone to know that she was remembering...that boy...and the day she vowed she would never love again...
I'm so tired of being here. Supressed by all of my childish fears. And if you have leave, I wish that you would just leave. because your presence still lingers here, and it won't leave me alone. These wounds won't seem to heal, this pain is just too real. There's just too much that time can not erase.
The year before,Linda had had an amazing boyfriend, Cedric. He'd been a turtle too( ever wonder juut how many of them there are?). Cedric had been the most caring, loving, honest guy that Linda had ever met. They had really loved each other, and they'd spent lots of time together. He'd been very handsome, too, with that winning smile that never faded, and his cheeriness even when things were at their worst. He had been Linda's angel when she had been having a nightmare of a day. Until that night, when everything went wrong...
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears. Whey you screamed I'd fight away all of your fears. I held your hand through all of these years, but you still held...on me...
One night, Cedric had snuck out to Linda's place. Linda had snuck out of her room, and tiptoed past her brother Leonardo's open doorway. She'd tried not to make a single sound; her brother's ears were sharp. She'd finnally gotten to cedric. "Wanna go to the park, babe?" She had agreed, and the two had left for the park. Once the couple had been in park for much more than just a while, it started rain. Really hard. The couple had run under a big tree, laughing and sputtering water. They'd leaned onto the trunk, and gazed into the stars. They had pointed out constellations, laughing at how different each other's point of view was. Once, Cedric had pointed out a special one. "Look," he'd said, pointing upward," That one looks like a heart, doesn't it Lin?"
You used to captivate me by your resignating light. Now I am bound by the life you left behind. Your face it wounds. My once pleasant dreams your voice has chased away, and all the sanity in me. These wounds won't seem to heal. This pain is just too real. There's just too much that time can not erase.
Linda stared up twords the heavens, where Cedric was pointing. "Oh, yeah I see it..." She'd looked down at him, and was quite embaressed when he looked at her at the same time. She'd blushed furiously, and turned away. Cedric's hand found it's way on top of hers, and she looked up again. Suddenly, almost unwillingly, the two leaned towrds each other, closer and closer until...
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears. When you screamed I'd fight away all of your fears. And I held your hand through al of these years. but you still held...on me...
The foot had shown up then. Linda sobbed louder and harder into her pillow as she remebered what had happened. The foot had been numorous, there must have been at least fifty of them. Linda had tried to fight, but this resulted in only a kick to the stomache. She had fallen, and been stunned from the kick. While recovering from the shock of being knocked to the ground, Linda looked up. Hun, the big oaf of a man that lead the foot, had her poor Cedric by the kneck, and was holding a sword to his chest. "CEDRIC!" she had cried out, but this did no good. She watched in horror as the sword's blade passed through Cedric's body to the hilt. "NOOOOO!" Blood had spattered everywhere, and Hun had dropped her dear Cedric's lifeless body to the ground to rot...
I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone. But though you're still with me. I've been alone, alone...
Linda looked up from her tear dotted pillow when she heard a kncok on her door and a gruff voice calling,"Linda, you've missed dinner, what are you doing in there?" Linda turned her back twords the door and yelled," Go away, Raphael." The knocking stopped, but Linda heard the groan of the door opening. She rolled her tear filled eyes, and drew in a shuddering breath. The bed creaked as her brother sat on it, and she could feel his eyes on the back of her head. "Linda. what's wrong? Are you crying...?" Linda noticed the concern in her big brother's voice and felt touched, but nonetheless wiped her tears the best she could and replyed,"No..." Linda noticed the doubt in the silence her brother gave her. "What's wrong, Lin?" He asked in a more demanding voice. She huffed. "If you really must know, I was remebering Cedric." But she felt her eyes getting round. Raph had called her Lin... he NEVER called her Lin... Linda felt her brother's hand on her shoulder. He turned her twords him. 'Little incident with Josh not helping things, is it?" Lin shook her head no. "Lin, Josh's a good guy. You sholud say yes to him..." Linda broke down crying then, and she collapsed onto Raph's shoulder. 'Oh, Raph, but I miss Cedric so much! It wouldn't be so bad if I didn't have to witness it when he...he..." She sobbed harder, not caring who it was she was sobbing on, but she just wanted let it out. Raph stroked Linda's hair like he did with Vic when she was having a bad day. Neither noticed their father lurking in the shadows of the open doorway, smiling proudly...
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears. When you screamed Id fight away all of your fears. And I held your hand through all of these years. But you still held...on me...
The part where I talk: I looooved writing this chapter. I'm sooooo sorry I didn't post sooner. being grounded sucks. LYLF!
Monica
Disclaimer: Don't own TMNT. I only own the sisters, the new girls, and the new boys. And I want to own Leo, but I can't. I can dream, though... The song " My Immortal" is a song owned by Evan Escence. So yeah.
A/N: This is an improtant bonding chapter between Lin and Raph. Raphael fans will be very suprised. DO NOT SKIP THIS CHAPTER IT'S VERY IMPORTANT!
Now, to humiliate Raph and Lin and ruine Raph's rep!
Raph and Lin
Me: On with the show!
Raph: No, you have to answer the nice reviewers!
Me: This is going to be a while.
Lenniluvsbrian: Hola gal! I know, I take sooo long to update. But, look who's talkin'? lol And girl, it's TCRI, I'm sure of it. I dunno if on the old series it'sTGRI, or whatever. But in an episode of the new series Donny clearly says TCRI. That's ok though- I can tell you'll be very helpfull later on when we come to proof reading, right? About Victoria, she was abducted by aliens. Just kiddin', she went off with the other little girls. Sorry I confused you.
Vic:I'd be better off with aliens than you.
Me: Watch your tongue young lady! I brought you into this fic, and I can take you out!
Vic: 00
Anyway: Your story was soooo inpiring, and you're welcome again! heehee I just loooooved Understanding Brother. And, about the deal, It's done. i swear, when you're done reading this, i had better see you gettin' on chapta 11 on UB, kk? Alright!shake hands, and you squeeze mine so hard it falls off. I glare)
Raphangela: Now, how did I know that you wolud read this? Maybe the fact that it's, based on raph? lol glad ya' like my baby girls, nobody can have them! bwahahahaha! Oh, you liked the opinions? lol well, you know how teenagers' minds work. I thought Loe's opionion was tottally him, dontcha think? hehe- Oh, raph and Linda? Yeah, major hateness! Not even a little liking. Well,that opionion about them might change in this chapter... Yeah, I have no flames so far! YYYYYEEEESSSSSSS!
Dory's Human Replica: Hi there! Oh, the fmaily nly gets as large as Natlaie getting added on, but in later storys they get childrne and everything, but lets not build tnesion, shall we? Yup, Splinter was much more in characer in chapter two. I found myslef making Splinter sound like Mike(ugh!) but then I thought: what would DHR think? lol And I know, you never read much about Mikey and Leo! I feel they're pretty close actually. Maybe Mike doesn't like Leo as much as Don, or maybe even raph, but they still have one of those bonds, ya' know? Thanx for readin' again!
Dona Tello625: Geez, cool it D.T, Raph hasn't even asked Katie out yet! it's ok you didn't review sooner. i don't mind. It serves me right for not posting sooner! OMG, HURRICANE FRANCES?! E-MAIL ME AND TELL ME YOU'RE OK! I don't know how anything is going, I live in Michigan! Argh!
Raph: Ok, I'll let you let them read now.
Me:Nope, I got another author's note, hun.
Raph: Hey, who you callin' Hun?
Me:Not that hun, you moron!
A/N again: A paragraph in regular print goes with the song lines below it in these things(). I hope you don't get confused. Argh, I'm working hard not to confuse people!
Me:oops, one more!
A/N: yet again: Yes, Linda had a boyfriedn that she kissed and loved when she was fourteen! I do! I'm supposed to get married next year! I'll tell you why if you e-mail me!
Okay, now I'm going to show you the story.
Leo: About time.
Me: Hey, do you wnat me to tell them about the tme when I caught you and raph hugging?
Leo: Okay, okay.
Me: Haha, I love you honey Leo:Love you too You guys: Oh please Me:Alright, I'll get on with it. Here's chapter three!
Linda ran into her bedroom, shaking and crying. She whipped around and closed her door. Befor e she closed it, she glimpsed Raphael and Josh staring bewilderdly at each other. They obviously had no idea why she was so miserable. And that suited her just fine. She didn't want anyone to know that she was remembering...that boy...and the day she vowed she would never love again...
I'm so tired of being here. Supressed by all of my childish fears. And if you have leave, I wish that you would just leave. because your presence still lingers here, and it won't leave me alone. These wounds won't seem to heal, this pain is just too real. There's just too much that time can not erase.
The year before,Linda had had an amazing boyfriend, Cedric. He'd been a turtle too( ever wonder juut how many of them there are?). Cedric had been the most caring, loving, honest guy that Linda had ever met. They had really loved each other, and they'd spent lots of time together. He'd been very handsome, too, with that winning smile that never faded, and his cheeriness even when things were at their worst. He had been Linda's angel when she had been having a nightmare of a day. Until that night, when everything went wrong...
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears. Whey you screamed I'd fight away all of your fears. I held your hand through all of these years, but you still held...on me...
One night, Cedric had snuck out to Linda's place. Linda had snuck out of her room, and tiptoed past her brother Leonardo's open doorway. She'd tried not to make a single sound; her brother's ears were sharp. She'd finnally gotten to cedric. "Wanna go to the park, babe?" She had agreed, and the two had left for the park. Once the couple had been in park for much more than just a while, it started rain. Really hard. The couple had run under a big tree, laughing and sputtering water. They'd leaned onto the trunk, and gazed into the stars. They had pointed out constellations, laughing at how different each other's point of view was. Once, Cedric had pointed out a special one. "Look," he'd said, pointing upward," That one looks like a heart, doesn't it Lin?"
You used to captivate me by your resignating light. Now I am bound by the life you left behind. Your face it wounds. My once pleasant dreams your voice has chased away, and all the sanity in me. These wounds won't seem to heal. This pain is just too real. There's just too much that time can not erase.
Linda stared up twords the heavens, where Cedric was pointing. "Oh, yeah I see it..." She'd looked down at him, and was quite embaressed when he looked at her at the same time. She'd blushed furiously, and turned away. Cedric's hand found it's way on top of hers, and she looked up again. Suddenly, almost unwillingly, the two leaned towrds each other, closer and closer until...
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears. When you screamed I'd fight away all of your fears. And I held your hand through al of these years. but you still held...on me...
The foot had shown up then. Linda sobbed louder and harder into her pillow as she remebered what had happened. The foot had been numorous, there must have been at least fifty of them. Linda had tried to fight, but this resulted in only a kick to the stomache. She had fallen, and been stunned from the kick. While recovering from the shock of being knocked to the ground, Linda looked up. Hun, the big oaf of a man that lead the foot, had her poor Cedric by the kneck, and was holding a sword to his chest. "CEDRIC!" she had cried out, but this did no good. She watched in horror as the sword's blade passed through Cedric's body to the hilt. "NOOOOO!" Blood had spattered everywhere, and Hun had dropped her dear Cedric's lifeless body to the ground to rot...
I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone. But though you're still with me. I've been alone, alone...
Linda looked up from her tear dotted pillow when she heard a kncok on her door and a gruff voice calling,"Linda, you've missed dinner, what are you doing in there?" Linda turned her back twords the door and yelled," Go away, Raphael." The knocking stopped, but Linda heard the groan of the door opening. She rolled her tear filled eyes, and drew in a shuddering breath. The bed creaked as her brother sat on it, and she could feel his eyes on the back of her head. "Linda. what's wrong? Are you crying...?" Linda noticed the concern in her big brother's voice and felt touched, but nonetheless wiped her tears the best she could and replyed,"No..." Linda noticed the doubt in the silence her brother gave her. "What's wrong, Lin?" He asked in a more demanding voice. She huffed. "If you really must know, I was remebering Cedric." But she felt her eyes getting round. Raph had called her Lin... he NEVER called her Lin... Linda felt her brother's hand on her shoulder. He turned her twords him. 'Little incident with Josh not helping things, is it?" Lin shook her head no. "Lin, Josh's a good guy. You sholud say yes to him..." Linda broke down crying then, and she collapsed onto Raph's shoulder. 'Oh, Raph, but I miss Cedric so much! It wouldn't be so bad if I didn't have to witness it when he...he..." She sobbed harder, not caring who it was she was sobbing on, but she just wanted let it out. Raph stroked Linda's hair like he did with Vic when she was having a bad day. Neither noticed their father lurking in the shadows of the open doorway, smiling proudly...
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears. When you screamed Id fight away all of your fears. And I held your hand through all of these years. But you still held...on me...
The part where I talk: I looooved writing this chapter. I'm sooooo sorry I didn't post sooner. being grounded sucks. LYLF!
Monica