2 chapters= 2 reviews. It equals up but I would like for more reviews per chapter. As for why it took so long... For one of the weeks, it was all snow. And then I got into my period of Neoquest 2 addiction. Well, now it's over. On with the story.
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"The Legend Of the Elite Four"
Chapter 3
"Matt's Rival"
"Can we please take a break, Harmony?" Matt begged, his voice cracked and strained. "For the fourth time, no! The quicker we get out of here, the quicker we get to the Pokemon League and I can show Zac how good I am!" Matt sighed. He'd never have a chance with Harmony.
Matt sat down. He couldn't walk anymore. Harmony growled in frustration,"Matt, what are you doing?" No answer. "Fine, I'll just drag you the whole way."
Suddenly a voice said, "My, my Matt. Having a rough day?"
"Huh?" Harmony looked around, "Where are you?"
The person stepped out and faced Harmony, "Hello, my lady. My name is Tom. I am Matt's--"
"Didn't I tell you not to follow me??" Matt said thorugh gritted teeth.
"Matt, how do you know him? Is he a friend of yours?" Harmony asked. Before Matt could say something in response, Tom walked over to him and said, "Still having to let girls boss you around?"
"No! Shut up, Tom!"
Harmony sweatdropped, "Thier rivalry must go deep..."
"That's it, Tom. Let's have a Pokemon battle to see who's stronger!"
"Agreed." Tom threw a Pokeball, "Let me start off with Dustox. Go!"
"A Dustox. Easy enough. Let's go, Torkoal!"
"Tor!"
"Dustox, use your Sleep Powder!"
"Dogde it, Torkoal and use your Flamethrower!
"Dustox!" Tom yelled. The Flamethrower was heading to the moth Pokemon but at the last minute Dustox had used Reflect. It then countered with a Mirror Coat.
"Torkoal!" Matt ran to the fire turtle, "Return, Torkoal," then looked up at Dustox, "How...? My Torkoal should've Dustox to a crisp! But with one attack it was defeated."
"Another win for Dustox. My Dustox has never lost a battle. It's been my favorite Pokemon ever since it evolved from a Cascoon..."
*FLASHBACK*
Tom stood in fear. He couldn't move. The hoard of Linoone were charging toward him. A Tackle attack. That's what it was. But then he saw a bright light. "Cascoon!" Tom yelled. But it wasn't a Cascoon he was looking at. "A... Dustox?"
*END OF FLASHBACK*
"...and he defeated the Linoone."
"Hooray for you." Matt said sarcastically, "Let's go, Girafirig!"
Harmony looked at Girafirig, remembering what happened last time she saw it.
"Girafirig!" Matt yelled, "Do what you did to Harmony. Sorry, Harmony, no offense."
Harmony waved her head, "No biggie."
Dustox dogded the Psybeam and used Poison Powder. A Gust won that match. "See what I mean? Unbeatable." Tom said confidentally.
"Unbeatable my foot. Alright. One more Pokemon left. *And one more chance to get Harmony to like me.* "Ok now, you're in for some trouble. Geodude, go!"
"Geodude?" Tom said, "Is that the same one you had when you just started?"
"Yes.. But believe me, this battle will end fast. Emphasis on fast."
"What?" Harmony said, surprised, "Is it possible for a Geodude to have extraordinary speed?"
Matt looked at her and smiled, "You haven't seen anything yet."
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A/N: Will Matt win the battle even against Tom's Dustox? It'll be a rocking good ending to the battle next chapter!
The chapter's short. Well, shorter than most of the others. When I write all of my stories, I have the plot idea in my head and I plan when I end the chapters and so forth. I just couldn't think of alot details to add to this battle yet. It'll be dragged on(to the best of my ability) next chapter. And I'm still thinking of how I'm going to do the Elite Four battles... LOL
Sorry it took so long for the chapter to come out. It's kinda hard to be happy to type a story when there's no one who wants to read it... No offense Paladin Dragoon. I meant like, alot of people. I mean, even just 2 different people who review every chapter would be nice. LOL. Well, review and I'll see when I'm able to get the next chapter up.
Ah, finally! FF actually let me login! LOL
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"The Legend Of the Elite Four"
Chapter 3
"Matt's Rival"
"Can we please take a break, Harmony?" Matt begged, his voice cracked and strained. "For the fourth time, no! The quicker we get out of here, the quicker we get to the Pokemon League and I can show Zac how good I am!" Matt sighed. He'd never have a chance with Harmony.
Matt sat down. He couldn't walk anymore. Harmony growled in frustration,"Matt, what are you doing?" No answer. "Fine, I'll just drag you the whole way."
Suddenly a voice said, "My, my Matt. Having a rough day?"
"Huh?" Harmony looked around, "Where are you?"
The person stepped out and faced Harmony, "Hello, my lady. My name is Tom. I am Matt's--"
"Didn't I tell you not to follow me??" Matt said thorugh gritted teeth.
"Matt, how do you know him? Is he a friend of yours?" Harmony asked. Before Matt could say something in response, Tom walked over to him and said, "Still having to let girls boss you around?"
"No! Shut up, Tom!"
Harmony sweatdropped, "Thier rivalry must go deep..."
"That's it, Tom. Let's have a Pokemon battle to see who's stronger!"
"Agreed." Tom threw a Pokeball, "Let me start off with Dustox. Go!"
"A Dustox. Easy enough. Let's go, Torkoal!"
"Tor!"
"Dustox, use your Sleep Powder!"
"Dogde it, Torkoal and use your Flamethrower!
"Dustox!" Tom yelled. The Flamethrower was heading to the moth Pokemon but at the last minute Dustox had used Reflect. It then countered with a Mirror Coat.
"Torkoal!" Matt ran to the fire turtle, "Return, Torkoal," then looked up at Dustox, "How...? My Torkoal should've Dustox to a crisp! But with one attack it was defeated."
"Another win for Dustox. My Dustox has never lost a battle. It's been my favorite Pokemon ever since it evolved from a Cascoon..."
*FLASHBACK*
Tom stood in fear. He couldn't move. The hoard of Linoone were charging toward him. A Tackle attack. That's what it was. But then he saw a bright light. "Cascoon!" Tom yelled. But it wasn't a Cascoon he was looking at. "A... Dustox?"
*END OF FLASHBACK*
"...and he defeated the Linoone."
"Hooray for you." Matt said sarcastically, "Let's go, Girafirig!"
Harmony looked at Girafirig, remembering what happened last time she saw it.
"Girafirig!" Matt yelled, "Do what you did to Harmony. Sorry, Harmony, no offense."
Harmony waved her head, "No biggie."
Dustox dogded the Psybeam and used Poison Powder. A Gust won that match. "See what I mean? Unbeatable." Tom said confidentally.
"Unbeatable my foot. Alright. One more Pokemon left. *And one more chance to get Harmony to like me.* "Ok now, you're in for some trouble. Geodude, go!"
"Geodude?" Tom said, "Is that the same one you had when you just started?"
"Yes.. But believe me, this battle will end fast. Emphasis on fast."
"What?" Harmony said, surprised, "Is it possible for a Geodude to have extraordinary speed?"
Matt looked at her and smiled, "You haven't seen anything yet."
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A/N: Will Matt win the battle even against Tom's Dustox? It'll be a rocking good ending to the battle next chapter!
The chapter's short. Well, shorter than most of the others. When I write all of my stories, I have the plot idea in my head and I plan when I end the chapters and so forth. I just couldn't think of alot details to add to this battle yet. It'll be dragged on(to the best of my ability) next chapter. And I'm still thinking of how I'm going to do the Elite Four battles... LOL
Sorry it took so long for the chapter to come out. It's kinda hard to be happy to type a story when there's no one who wants to read it... No offense Paladin Dragoon. I meant like, alot of people. I mean, even just 2 different people who review every chapter would be nice. LOL. Well, review and I'll see when I'm able to get the next chapter up.
Ah, finally! FF actually let me login! LOL
