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Kyoyama Kita: I'm working on chapters as fast as I can! (Kuronue: No shes not.) (Youko: Yea shes plotting ways to prove to her mother that being gothic doesn't make her a baby eating satanist.) (Kuronue: And dont' forget the part about her being seperated from her best friend!) OK fine! I'm quite tramatized at the moment considering the fact that all my pretty dark clothes have been taken from me and so have all my nice emotionaly unstable yet accepting friends! ;-;
FLuffys dragon: Yes, but for future child bearing reasons I'd hate to have anyone damage Kuronue's (or Youko's) "Family Jewels."
Koluno1986: BUT I DONT' WANNA DIE!!!! O wait you'll only kill me if I DON'T update...that shouldn't be a problem as long as I can keep thinking up shit and taking suggestions when ever I'm out of ideas! o
Colddarkness69: Thank you SO much for your suggestions..I shall use them and give you full credit!
Sexy Kitsune: (kuronue: THANK YOU SOME ONE LOVES ME! I don't have to commit suicide afterall!!!!!) (Kurama: O crap, you should have let him die would have saved us all alot of oxygen...) You know Kurama, your not half as nice as everyone thinks you are....your really really mean AND YOUR A SUCKY KISSER! (Kuronue: You kissed Kurama?) Well maybe a bit more then that...buts its not like no one else has...
Kawaii Hyper Dragon: Yea hear that Kuronue? (Kuronue: looks up Wha?) Someone else wants you to live! (Kuronue: I now have renewed faith in my fan girls!) (Kurama: You are the only person who could love their fan girls!) Considering the fact that Kuronue's known personality is very limited I'm trying my hardest to build on stuff, so glad its working!
If your review isn't included wait till nest time, I'm sorry for the long update...I've had this play and if I had know I was going to end up devoting every waking moment to the thing I wouldn't have gone out for it!
Now more of the fic!
And I didn't go inside...ok so I did but just to take another shower and change. Seeing how I couldn't stomach being in the same house or 5 mile area of that thing sleeping in my closest I decided it best to go out to eat and blow some of my hard earned cash shopping!
Slipping into a red tanktop and a black net shirt and securing all the bondages, chains, and other ordanments onto my black pants I pulled on my trench coat and set out. (If you not goth then forgive me for this is the only style I know) Climbing into the car was quite a struggle, not that it is every morning, its just that on this particular morning I was beginning to feel like an isonimac.
The Rasmus still blared from me speakers as I pulled off the interstate and into the mall parking lot. I looked arouned before turning off my car and stepping out, a girl can never be to careful! I shoved the car keys into my pants pocket and zipped it closed. (I Love zippers!) Rummaging through my trench coat pockets I found my check book, drivers liecenese, and a pen while I walked up to the gaint glass doors of the mall.
"First is a trip to Hot Topic..." I muttered to myself, it was times like these that made me wish I had a boy friend to take shopping with me. Speaking of boyfriends! I noticed a rather attractive man making his way in my direction. He was tall...or atleast with those combat boots, his tight black shirt had a zipper on the left shoulder, and his pants dripped with chains. I about melted when I saw him, he was gorgeuos!
"Excuse me, do you work here?" He stopped right in front of me and peered down at me with his light blue eyes.
"Um....no, I'm sorry, but could I help you with something anyways?"
"I was looking to fill out an application for work." O crap now I'd never be able to help him!
"Theres a phone number on the wall, maybe you should call it." It was something obvious, I know, but there really was a sign on the wall saying to call there for an application....
"Thank you." He walked off and I was left sighing at his beauty, o shap out of it!
Shopping, shopping, and more shopping. I went into stores I never knew existed just to keep me out of that house! Even though I gawked at the God awful clothes, stared at the preppy people who weren't worth my stares, and talked to a few of my own I kept thinking about the cute little bat huddled up in my closet asleep expecting me to be home at dark so I could tell him I had forgiven him.
Feeling bad I hesitated when I passed the food court, telling myself he must be hungry I should get him something. I didn't hesitate long for before I knew it I was back in my car driving home. I struggled to pull a cd from the bag and unwrap it will I drove, Godsmack? I shrugged struggling to get it out of the case.
Thirteen seconds into the song I looked up and watched a bat fly straight at my car. Not wanting to hit it, I swerved to the left veering into traffic and then everything went black.
Despite the fact I tried to make that a cliff hanger you can tell what is going to happen, will you die? Be put in a comma? Lose your memory? Or safely avoid hitting traffic and realize that the blackness was a build up caused by the adreanal glands?
Kuronue: Apologies for the late update, the authoress is lazy
Authoress: I AM NOT I'M JUST STUDYING FOR SEMESTER TESTING!!!!
Kurama: Sure....
Authoress: Whatever....I'm starting the next chapter right after I post this one so it should be up REAL soon! O and thank you Colddarkness69 (I think) for the suggestion about food!
Kyoyama Kita: I'm working on chapters as fast as I can! (Kuronue: No shes not.) (Youko: Yea shes plotting ways to prove to her mother that being gothic doesn't make her a baby eating satanist.) (Kuronue: And dont' forget the part about her being seperated from her best friend!) OK fine! I'm quite tramatized at the moment considering the fact that all my pretty dark clothes have been taken from me and so have all my nice emotionaly unstable yet accepting friends! ;-;
FLuffys dragon: Yes, but for future child bearing reasons I'd hate to have anyone damage Kuronue's (or Youko's) "Family Jewels."
Koluno1986: BUT I DONT' WANNA DIE!!!! O wait you'll only kill me if I DON'T update...that shouldn't be a problem as long as I can keep thinking up shit and taking suggestions when ever I'm out of ideas! o
Colddarkness69: Thank you SO much for your suggestions..I shall use them and give you full credit!
Sexy Kitsune: (kuronue: THANK YOU SOME ONE LOVES ME! I don't have to commit suicide afterall!!!!!) (Kurama: O crap, you should have let him die would have saved us all alot of oxygen...) You know Kurama, your not half as nice as everyone thinks you are....your really really mean AND YOUR A SUCKY KISSER! (Kuronue: You kissed Kurama?) Well maybe a bit more then that...buts its not like no one else has...
Kawaii Hyper Dragon: Yea hear that Kuronue? (Kuronue: looks up Wha?) Someone else wants you to live! (Kuronue: I now have renewed faith in my fan girls!) (Kurama: You are the only person who could love their fan girls!) Considering the fact that Kuronue's known personality is very limited I'm trying my hardest to build on stuff, so glad its working!
If your review isn't included wait till nest time, I'm sorry for the long update...I've had this play and if I had know I was going to end up devoting every waking moment to the thing I wouldn't have gone out for it!
Now more of the fic!
And I didn't go inside...ok so I did but just to take another shower and change. Seeing how I couldn't stomach being in the same house or 5 mile area of that thing sleeping in my closest I decided it best to go out to eat and blow some of my hard earned cash shopping!
Slipping into a red tanktop and a black net shirt and securing all the bondages, chains, and other ordanments onto my black pants I pulled on my trench coat and set out. (If you not goth then forgive me for this is the only style I know) Climbing into the car was quite a struggle, not that it is every morning, its just that on this particular morning I was beginning to feel like an isonimac.
The Rasmus still blared from me speakers as I pulled off the interstate and into the mall parking lot. I looked arouned before turning off my car and stepping out, a girl can never be to careful! I shoved the car keys into my pants pocket and zipped it closed. (I Love zippers!) Rummaging through my trench coat pockets I found my check book, drivers liecenese, and a pen while I walked up to the gaint glass doors of the mall.
"First is a trip to Hot Topic..." I muttered to myself, it was times like these that made me wish I had a boy friend to take shopping with me. Speaking of boyfriends! I noticed a rather attractive man making his way in my direction. He was tall...or atleast with those combat boots, his tight black shirt had a zipper on the left shoulder, and his pants dripped with chains. I about melted when I saw him, he was gorgeuos!
"Excuse me, do you work here?" He stopped right in front of me and peered down at me with his light blue eyes.
"Um....no, I'm sorry, but could I help you with something anyways?"
"I was looking to fill out an application for work." O crap now I'd never be able to help him!
"Theres a phone number on the wall, maybe you should call it." It was something obvious, I know, but there really was a sign on the wall saying to call there for an application....
"Thank you." He walked off and I was left sighing at his beauty, o shap out of it!
Shopping, shopping, and more shopping. I went into stores I never knew existed just to keep me out of that house! Even though I gawked at the God awful clothes, stared at the preppy people who weren't worth my stares, and talked to a few of my own I kept thinking about the cute little bat huddled up in my closet asleep expecting me to be home at dark so I could tell him I had forgiven him.
Feeling bad I hesitated when I passed the food court, telling myself he must be hungry I should get him something. I didn't hesitate long for before I knew it I was back in my car driving home. I struggled to pull a cd from the bag and unwrap it will I drove, Godsmack? I shrugged struggling to get it out of the case.
Thirteen seconds into the song I looked up and watched a bat fly straight at my car. Not wanting to hit it, I swerved to the left veering into traffic and then everything went black.
Despite the fact I tried to make that a cliff hanger you can tell what is going to happen, will you die? Be put in a comma? Lose your memory? Or safely avoid hitting traffic and realize that the blackness was a build up caused by the adreanal glands?
Kuronue: Apologies for the late update, the authoress is lazy
Authoress: I AM NOT I'M JUST STUDYING FOR SEMESTER TESTING!!!!
Kurama: Sure....
Authoress: Whatever....I'm starting the next chapter right after I post this one so it should be up REAL soon! O and thank you Colddarkness69 (I think) for the suggestion about food!