Yay!!! I got 6 reviews after only one day of it being on here! ok, here is the next chapter I do not own this poem. Everything that is in italics and is between is not mine
............................................................................................................Chapter 2
In the fell clutch of circumstance
The demon crashed through the forest and revealed itself. It was a large lizard like demon that was purple. It had razor sharp teeth and a spider on its back. . Goshenke thought Inu-Yasha. Kagome let her arrow fly and it hit the demon in the head. Goshenke stopped and pulled it out like a thorn was there
I have not winced nor cried aloud
Inu-Yasha leapt, seeing the scar of wind and started to cut it, but the demon stopped it with its claw. The Tetsusaiga still cut through it and Goshenke criend out in pain. Kagome shot another arrow into its eye before it swiped and knocked her into a tree, rendering Kagome unconscious.
Under the bludgeonings of chance
"Kagome!" shouted Inu-Yasha. He sheathed his sword and ran to her. After checking for a pulse, he picked her up and began running again. He looked down at Kagome to see how hurt she was. Kagome hit the tree hard on her head and she was bleeding, too much. Kuso Inu-Yasha tore a piece of cloth off of her shirt and tied it around her head, still running. If I don't find a way to get Goshenke off my tail, Kagome will die!
My head is bloody, but unbowed
............................................................................................................Sorry I took so long to update, first my computer wouldn't cooperate, then all that school work.... Anyways, thank you for all of the reviews. You have made a girl very happy
- but, just to keep things interesting. I'd like 12 reviews (all together, not new ones) I already have at least 6 that's just the same ppl reviewing on this chapter. I'll have the next one posted the moment I can (with 12 reviews -)