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I have decided to make the R-rated version just a little spin-off from this chapter. This chapter talks about what's going on with Kyou, Shigure, and Tohru. The R-rated version is just a lemon with Ayame and Hatori, that's all.
I'm really happy to see how many people wanted the lemon, so please be patient. Since that would be my first lemon, I'm taking the time to make sure it's ok. I'll try to finish it as soon as possible and send it to you all.
To the following reviewers:
Fire - in your review, you said that you want to R-rated version, right? You forgot to add your e-mail address to it so please remember to add it on your next review or else I can't send it to you.
Ichigo12 - man... I feel sad for you - how your mom checks your e-mails. I'll try to post it up on a site for you, it might take a while though - sorry! = )
/…../ = Yuki's thoughts
[…..] = Inner Yuki' s thoughts (true feelings)
….. = Kyou's thoughts
(…..) = Kyou's mind (reason)
Chapter Thirteen
Downstairs in the dining room…
Kyou, Shigure, and Tohru were peacefully eating the delicious breakfast Tohru made for them when then they suddenly heard a lot of loud moaning and screaming coming from upstairs.
"They are going at it again? Didn't they just do it yesterday, aren't they tired?… damn, it's hard trying to eat when every time I heard a moan or scream, a image of Ayame and Hatori comes into my mind."
"What do you expect, Kyou-kun? It's Aya we are talking about… you should know by now how much energy he has."
"But you know what is surprising and shocking, I never would have expect that Hatori would be the uke in the relationship. God… look at how loud he screams from pleasure, and normally he's so quiet and calm."
"Let's see how loud you would be screaming if someone was ramming their cock up your ass."
Kyou's face turned red as dirty images of Yuki doing exactly that to him filled his mind.
"Ooo... Kyou-kun, I bet you're having really naughty thoughts right now, aren't you?"
"SHUT UP, you stupid perverted dog!"
As the two continue to talk about Ayame and Hatori, they forgot that Tohru was also in the room with them so after a while they heard a loud thump. When they turned toward the noise, they saw a fainted Tohru who had a burning red face filled with embarrassment.
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This would have been where I would insert the lemon between Ayame and Hatori but since I really don't want to have my fic taken off, I would just have to send it to you all... so please just wait, it's coming along.
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
After Tohru was conscious again, the three decided to leave the two lovebirds on their own to do whatever they want. So they all went to the hospital to visit Yuki, but since Shigure couldn't drive, they had to ride the bus which took them a long time to get to their destination.
As the three stepped out of the bus, out came a young boy and girl with a dog by their side.
"Stupid Shigure!"
"No... Kyou-kun! It's not Shigure-san's fault, if I wasn't so clumsy, I wouldn't have tripped and fell on Shigure-san, gomen. = ("
"It's ok, Tohru. At least we were lucky the bus was completely empty and that the bus driver didn't notice anything."
In the hospital…
"Excuse me, I was wondering if I could talk to Dr. Takahashi about a patient of his - our family member. May I ask if he is free right now?
"Yes, Dr. Takahashi is free, he is now in his office on the second floor, third door down the hall to your left. Also... sorry but animals are not allowed in here."
"oh.. ok, I'll take him outside then. Thank you very much."
Later after Shigure turned back into a human again…
"Dr. Takahashi, we were wondering if you could tell us if Yuki Sohma's conditions changed at all."
"Well… I have very good news, Yuki has made it past the night with no problems whatsoever. I am estimating that he would wake up in around a week or two, it really just depends on him. His body really seems to be recovering pretty well, let's just hope for the best"
After Dr. Takahashi finished talking, three loud sighs of relief filled the office.
So to give each other privacy, the three decided to go in to see Yuki one at a time.
When it got to Kyou's turn which was the last one because Shigure and Tohru knew that Kyou wanted to stay with Yuki for a long time.
Kyou walked into the room and was happy to see that some machines and needles were taken off of Yuki. He sat down next to the bed and took Yuki's hand into his.
"Hey, Yuki… I hope you quickly wake up and get better so I can tell you everything. I'm so tired of hiding, I will just have to get myself ready for rejection just incase you don't feel the same. But if you do feel the same, I was hoping that we can start a relationship and you would make me so happy"
"Oh yeah... you know what's really funny, your brother and Hatori are together but what's really weird is that Hatori is the uke. Everyone probably thought that he was the type to be seme. = ) I don't really feel like talking right now, I just want to stay here with you and stand by your side watching over you. = )"
A hour or two later, Shigure and Tohru came into the room to tell Kyou that they had to leave and go home.
When they finally got back to the house, moaning and screaming could still be heard coming from the Yuki's room.
Kyou got into his bed, thinking in his mind, planning what he would say to Yuki when Yuki finally wakes up. When the sounds from Yuki's room finally stopped, thankful of the silence, he slowly drifted off to sleep, heading to dreamland…
End of Chapter Thirteen
Note:
Chapter 14 is going to take a while to update because I have to actually write the chapter since the last 13 were already done but they just needed to be fixed, that's all.
Just wanted to tell you all to not give up on this story even if my next update takes a little longer!
= )
I have decided to make the R-rated version just a little spin-off from this chapter. This chapter talks about what's going on with Kyou, Shigure, and Tohru. The R-rated version is just a lemon with Ayame and Hatori, that's all.
I'm really happy to see how many people wanted the lemon, so please be patient. Since that would be my first lemon, I'm taking the time to make sure it's ok. I'll try to finish it as soon as possible and send it to you all.
To the following reviewers:
Fire - in your review, you said that you want to R-rated version, right? You forgot to add your e-mail address to it so please remember to add it on your next review or else I can't send it to you.
Ichigo12 - man... I feel sad for you - how your mom checks your e-mails. I'll try to post it up on a site for you, it might take a while though - sorry! = )
/…../ = Yuki's thoughts
[…..] = Inner Yuki' s thoughts (true feelings)
….. = Kyou's thoughts
(…..) = Kyou's mind (reason)
Chapter Thirteen
Downstairs in the dining room…
Kyou, Shigure, and Tohru were peacefully eating the delicious breakfast Tohru made for them when then they suddenly heard a lot of loud moaning and screaming coming from upstairs.
"They are going at it again? Didn't they just do it yesterday, aren't they tired?… damn, it's hard trying to eat when every time I heard a moan or scream, a image of Ayame and Hatori comes into my mind."
"What do you expect, Kyou-kun? It's Aya we are talking about… you should know by now how much energy he has."
"But you know what is surprising and shocking, I never would have expect that Hatori would be the uke in the relationship. God… look at how loud he screams from pleasure, and normally he's so quiet and calm."
"Let's see how loud you would be screaming if someone was ramming their cock up your ass."
Kyou's face turned red as dirty images of Yuki doing exactly that to him filled his mind.
"Ooo... Kyou-kun, I bet you're having really naughty thoughts right now, aren't you?"
"SHUT UP, you stupid perverted dog!"
As the two continue to talk about Ayame and Hatori, they forgot that Tohru was also in the room with them so after a while they heard a loud thump. When they turned toward the noise, they saw a fainted Tohru who had a burning red face filled with embarrassment.
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This would have been where I would insert the lemon between Ayame and Hatori but since I really don't want to have my fic taken off, I would just have to send it to you all... so please just wait, it's coming along.
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
After Tohru was conscious again, the three decided to leave the two lovebirds on their own to do whatever they want. So they all went to the hospital to visit Yuki, but since Shigure couldn't drive, they had to ride the bus which took them a long time to get to their destination.
As the three stepped out of the bus, out came a young boy and girl with a dog by their side.
"Stupid Shigure!"
"No... Kyou-kun! It's not Shigure-san's fault, if I wasn't so clumsy, I wouldn't have tripped and fell on Shigure-san, gomen. = ("
"It's ok, Tohru. At least we were lucky the bus was completely empty and that the bus driver didn't notice anything."
In the hospital…
"Excuse me, I was wondering if I could talk to Dr. Takahashi about a patient of his - our family member. May I ask if he is free right now?
"Yes, Dr. Takahashi is free, he is now in his office on the second floor, third door down the hall to your left. Also... sorry but animals are not allowed in here."
"oh.. ok, I'll take him outside then. Thank you very much."
Later after Shigure turned back into a human again…
"Dr. Takahashi, we were wondering if you could tell us if Yuki Sohma's conditions changed at all."
"Well… I have very good news, Yuki has made it past the night with no problems whatsoever. I am estimating that he would wake up in around a week or two, it really just depends on him. His body really seems to be recovering pretty well, let's just hope for the best"
After Dr. Takahashi finished talking, three loud sighs of relief filled the office.
So to give each other privacy, the three decided to go in to see Yuki one at a time.
When it got to Kyou's turn which was the last one because Shigure and Tohru knew that Kyou wanted to stay with Yuki for a long time.
Kyou walked into the room and was happy to see that some machines and needles were taken off of Yuki. He sat down next to the bed and took Yuki's hand into his.
"Hey, Yuki… I hope you quickly wake up and get better so I can tell you everything. I'm so tired of hiding, I will just have to get myself ready for rejection just incase you don't feel the same. But if you do feel the same, I was hoping that we can start a relationship and you would make me so happy"
"Oh yeah... you know what's really funny, your brother and Hatori are together but what's really weird is that Hatori is the uke. Everyone probably thought that he was the type to be seme. = ) I don't really feel like talking right now, I just want to stay here with you and stand by your side watching over you. = )"
A hour or two later, Shigure and Tohru came into the room to tell Kyou that they had to leave and go home.
When they finally got back to the house, moaning and screaming could still be heard coming from the Yuki's room.
Kyou got into his bed, thinking in his mind, planning what he would say to Yuki when Yuki finally wakes up. When the sounds from Yuki's room finally stopped, thankful of the silence, he slowly drifted off to sleep, heading to dreamland…
End of Chapter Thirteen
Note:
Chapter 14 is going to take a while to update because I have to actually write the chapter since the last 13 were already done but they just needed to be fixed, that's all.
Just wanted to tell you all to not give up on this story even if my next update takes a little longer!
= )