(A:N) Me: (Faints)
Jack: Okay she's in shock because people actually liked her story!
Me: (Gets up) I just wanna say... THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU I LOVE YOU ALL SO MUCH, I'VE NEVER FELT SO LOVED BEFORE!! (Faints again)
Jack: If your wondering, yes we are currently trying to get her a place in a mental home but no one's brave enough!!
Me: (Gets up)
Jack: Are you over the shock yet?
Me: No but I have to do my thank you notes okay in order:
LoneWolfPrincess: You think I've got potential! Thanks : ), Don't worry Clay's all yours I had a feeling you might read my story and knew you'd hunt me down if I paired him up with Kimiko! And by the way I LOVE your fic it rocks!! And guess what I can't drive or play musical instruments ether!! (I can draw though) And the thing I really suck at is MATHS argh!!!! And can I ask you something? Can I add you to my Bishies list?
Krumsthedmg: Thanks for your review!! I really appreciated it!! As for the spelling and grammar I'm soooo sorry but I have three good explanations for that!! (1) I'm dyslexic (Don't ask) (2) My computer keeps changing all my spellings!! and (3) I'm from Derry!! We talk a load of rubbish I'm sorry it's the Derry lingo I was born and bread hear so I talk really strange but I DON'T have an accent!! And I LOVE your fics you rock!! And may I please add you to my Bishies list?
Cartoonhottie200: Thank you, and tell lizzie hands off!! Raimundo is MINE!! Lolz!! And tell Josh I love him he's just as mad and stupid as me!! You are supper nice, and I love you can I please add you (And Josh) to my Bishies list please (Puppy dog eyes)
Black Malva: Thank you and yes I'am crazy (just letting you know) your review meant a lot to me!!
Desiredstorm: I'm so glad you like it and your pretty close something like that happens but I can't say any more or I'll give the story away!! Thanks again.
DeathRealm: (Faints of 5 secs then jumps back up) I'am a BIG fan of yours you rock!! I'm on your favourite Authors list!! Oh my god!! With that lousy chapter!! (Cries) I feel so loved!! I thought no one would like it!! You don't know how much that review meant to me!! Can I please put you on my Bishies list too!!
Rune-spirit: Thanks and that would be telling, you'll just have to wait and see who's going with who!! Lolz I like to keep you guessing!! (Though I'm crap at keeping the plot to myself)
Me: Okay I did that in the order I got the reviews in!! And I still can't believe my favourite authors LWP, KRUMS, CH and DR all like my story I feel so loved!! (Cries again) also I just like to say if anyone else has reviewed and I didn't mention you I'm sorry your loved too (As long as you didn't flame me!! :( !!)
Jack: I still think it sucks!!
Me: Well that's you!! My people like it and I thank them for that, anyway your just pissed coz you weren't in that chapter
Jack: (mumbling) stupid author!!
Me: So true I' am stupid coz I'm doing foundation maths, intermediate English and high level science!!
Jack: So you're good at science?
Me: Must be if I' m in the high class!! I had my first chemistry lesson today!! I think they made a mistake by putting me in their coz I only got question one done in 45mins!!
Jack: How did that happen?
Me: (smiles) I was getting my secret weapon ready so if you do any thing bad Jackie I'll use it on you!!
Jack: You were day dreaming again weren't you!!
Me: Yes!! And I snuck onto during double I.T and read spicydounut185 review!!
Jack: Okay fine but what about me?
Me: I'm not sure if you're in this chapter yet!! I'm making this up as I go along!! Okay on with the chapter!!
My Story
Chapter two
Kimiko stirred and opened her eyes the sun was shining threw her window she groaned as the light hit her eyes, grumbling she got out of bed. She wondered what to wear she opened her wardrobe and started digging when she found something she hadn't seen in a long time she smiled, maybe it's time to revive it? She thought getting dressed. Clay and Omi were sitting eating breakfast when they heard footsteps.
"Hear she comes" Clay said, Omi and Clay watched the door as Kimiko came in when they saw what she was wearing they gasped. She had left her hair black and down she was wearing eyeliner, a black sports bra with a black net off the shoulder long sleeved top and a pair of very baggy black hipsters.
"Morning" she said picking up a piece of toast Omi and Clay just gawped at her, "What?" she said seeing the expressions on their faces.
"Um...Kimiko what are you wearing?" Clay asked looking at her.
"What don't you like it?" she said looking down at her clothes.
"It's just...well...um there a bit reviling don't ya think?" he said.
"Not really" she said, "I've worn worse outfits than this y'know this is one of my favourites" she added.
"You remind me of Jack Spicer!" Omi said looking at her sports bra, "Only with as Clay said earlier cleavage!" Clay blushed slightly kicking Omi under the table Kimiko just laughed at this remark.
"Yeah I probably am a better Goth than Jack" she said still laughing, "I didn't even know you guys had noticed I had cleavage" she smiled at Clay who blushed even darker.
"Shen Gong Wu time people" they heard Dojo call, they all sprinted outside.
"What've we got?" Kimiko asked as Dojo opened the ancient scroll of the Shen Gong Wu.
"Ah the chain of thoughts" Omi said, "It allows you to read other people thoughts and it also lets you go into other peoples memories"
"Wow" Clay said.
"I hope we get this one coz I don't want Jack, WuYa or Rai to go into my memories" Kimiko said a worried look on her face.
"Well stop dilly dallying and hop on" Dojo said growing to forty feet, they hoped on and took off. I really don't want anyone to use that Shen Gong Wu on me, she thought, I don't want the guys to find out about my dark past!
They arrived some were in southeastern America in some sort of forest. They had decided to split up. Kimiko was determined to find the Shen Gong Wu before anyone else; she was looking behind a small bunch of bushes when she heard something she turned around quickly to see a boy leaning up against a tree watching her. All of a sudden all the pain flooded back to her.
"So you guys are looking for the Shen Gong Wu too then? Seriously Kim I thought you could do better than hang around that stupid temple" the brunette said to her.
"Well I'm not a quitter unlike some people" she retorted feeling a sudden flicker of anger. The brunette shook his head and chuckled.
"Is that the best you can do? Why don't come over hear and throw a few punches then I can gloat when I bet you to the ground" he said coldly.
"No thanks, I think I'll save my energy for something more worth while!" she said turning her back on him and walking away. She felt something grab her hair and pull her back she yelped in pain when she felt a hand grab her throat and slamming her into she nearest tree.
"Don't ever turn your back on me!" he snarled at her tightening his grip, she started to suffocate as he keep squeezing her neck she couldn't get any oxygen she was gasping she couldn't breath, he saw the fear in her eyes as her head started swimming she raised her hands to her throat trying desperately to pull his hands away, this is it! She thought, I'm gonna die! No one knows were I am! I'm gonna die! Then she heard and almighty thump and she felt Raimundo let go of her throat and fall to the ground. She started coughing and spluttering trying to recover.
"Are you alright?" she heard the voice of her saviour.
"I...I'll be...f...fine" she managed to cough out. The person knelt down beside her and when she saw who it was she gasped.
"Jack?" she said in disbelief, He smiled at her.
"You sure you'll be okay?" he asked concerned, she nodded holding her throat.
"I've no idea why Raimundo attacked you!" Jack said looking down at the unconscious Raimundo, "One minute he's saying how much you mean to him, then he got this strange look on his face and ran off, then I find him trying to murder you!"
"Jack? Why did you save me?" she asked.
"Um...well...I...um...you see I...um couldn't let him kill you because I like you" he said flushing red. She smiled at him and hugged him.
"Thanks" she whispered in his ear he felt a fluttering in his stomach having her so close was so painful because he knew she didn't feel the same way. She started to move away but stopped a few inch's in front of his face she smiled warmly at him and leant in closer, finally pressing her lips against his. Jack was shocked at this she broke away.
"Thanks again" she said smiling they both heard a sudden noise and turned around, "Where'd Raimundo go?" Kimiko said as the brunette had disappeared.
"Dunno," said Jack looking away from her she pulled his face towards her so he could look at her and kissed him yet again. This time it was a lot softer and more heart felt he slowly wrapped his arms round her waist and kissed her back all of a sudden she jumped up.
"What's wrong?" Jack asked confused he thought she'd wanted him to kiss her back.
"I'm not used to this," she said.
"Used to what?" he asked now he was really confused.
"This kind of attention okay I'm not used to boys being so...interactive with me" she said.
"Well if you didn't want me to kiss you why didn't you just say so" Jack said angrily getting to his feet, "And you might not want to dress so damn sexy if you don't want me to look!" he shouted storming off.
"Jack! Wait that's not what I meant! Jack..." she watched him disappear into the forest, "God DAMIT!" she yelled hitting the tree.
"Kimiko Toho I can't believe what just came out of your mouth" she heard Dojo's voice behind her, she spun around and saw Omi, Clay and Dojo (who was sitting on Clay's shoulder) all looking at her.
"Whatever! Did you get the Shen Gong Wu?" she asked.
"Nope WuYa got it" Clay said.
"Oh this day just gets better and better!" Kimiko said sarcastically.
"Kimiko what's that on your neck?" Clay said pointing.
"It's nothing to worry about know can we just go home please" she said in a depressed tone.
"Sure hop on" Dojo said as they flew back to the temple.
As soon as they had reached the temple Kimiko had gone off to her room and lay on her bed. Why did Rai act so strange? Why did Rai try to kill me? Why did Jack save me? Why did I kiss Jack? Why did I freak when Jack kissed me back? These were some of the thoughts she had been pondering for a while they were driving her crazy! She began to cry again she new how to cry without making any noise for when she was little if she cried she'd get a slap. She lay there painful memories flooding back to her she cried harder. I can't stand this! She thought she got up and searched her room pulling everything out until she found what she was looking for she opened up the pen knife and held it to her arm she slowly dragged the blade across her skin in stung like hell but when she saw the blood she felt better I'll listen to some music she thought turning on her radio she lay on her bed watching the blood run down her arm tears still falling from her eyes a song came on and she listen to the words.
Now I will tell you what I've done
for you
50 thousand tears I've cried
Screaming Deceiving and
Bleeding for you
And you still won't hear me
(I'm going
under)
Don't want your hand this time I'll save myself
Maybe
I'll wake up for once
Not tormented daily defeated by you
Just
when I thought I'd reached the bottom
I'm dying again
I'm
going under
Drowning in you
I'm falling forever
I've got to
break through
I'm going under
Blurring and Stirring the
truth and the lies
So I don't know what's real and what's
not
Always confusing the thoughts in my head
So I can't trust
myself anymore
I'm dying again
I'm going under
Drowning
in you
I'm falling forever
I've got to break through
So
go on and scream
Scream at me I'm so far away
I won't be
broken again
I've got to breathe I can't keep going under
The lyrics really describe how I'm feeling right now she thought she looked at her arm blood was still coming out and pretty heavy too most of her arm was blood stained, maybe I cut too deep she thought, good maybe I'll bleed to death and then all the pain will go away! She closed her eyes wishing she would just die in her sleep the dark was creeping up on her and finally she feel asleep not knowing if she'd ever wake up.
(A:N) Okay I'm gonna stop it there and I know that chapter is crap but I was doing it for a good while I'm kinda brain dead and I've got stacks of homework to do mostly for Double award I.T (sigh) so I'm gonna do my homework and then I'll start writing chapter 3 Okay!!
SpicyDonut185: Thanks for the review!! Though I'm sure you'll all be disappointed with this chapter I'm sorry but I had to rush it!! I really like your story!! And thanks again.
Jadebell: (Faints for 5 secs, gets back up) I can't believe YOU read my story and liked it coz you probably know by now that I love your stories the land of muses is hilarious and the lost dragon just so totally ROCKS!! Oh and tell Rex to leave you alone or I'll come over and sort him out!! Lolz!! And your also one of my FAVOURTIE authors too!! Can I please, please, please add you to my Bishies list?
Okay that's a thank you to all my reviewers I love you all!! I'm sorry if this chapter is disappointing!! Love ya all!! Bye!! xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox