(A:N) Raimundo, Jack, Omi, Clay and Kimiko are standing outside Dannii's house, they walk in and listen for the nutty 14 year old to start playing rock music, or shout, or drink doctor pepper to get hyper or something but nothing happens.
Raimundo: It's quite.... too quite!!
Jack: Your right it is far too quite....
Kimiko: I don't like this I don't like this at all....
Clay: Is she all right?
Omi: Has she done a Kimiko stunt and tried to kill herself?
All: Don't say that!
They then hear banging noises coming from upstairs and go to investigate. They all peer into Dannii's room to see her banging her head of the wall.
Dannii: I (bang) hate (bang) School (bang) Stupid (bang) Teachers (bang) Must (bang) Blow (bang) it (bang) Up (bang) And (bang) Blow (bang) Up (bang) Cartoonnetwork (bang) with (bang) My (bang) Reviewers (bang) help!! (bang) Must (bang) Come (bang) Up (bang) With (bang) New (bang) Chapter (bang) Aaaaaaarrrrrrrrrggggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhh.............(Bangs head full force of wall and knocks herself unconscious)
Raimundo walks over and picks Dannii up bridal style, carries her over to her bed and lays her down. Everyone looks at the authoress guilty looks on their faces.
Kimiko: Poor thing!!
Raimundo: Yeah!!
Jack: I feel bad for leaving!!
Clay: me two!!
Omi: Let us write her next chapter for her to show her how sorry we are!!
All: Yeah!!
They all run over to computer and start writing.
Dannii: (Jumps up) HIYA!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your too late I've already wrote a chapter!! It just needs uploaded!!
Raimundo: Your awake.... (Dannii falls unconscious again) Or not!!
Kimiko: Okay here's all her thank you notes!!
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Jack: Okay so she wrote the thank you notes all ready!! That was good of her!!
Kimiko: Okay on with the chapter....
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My story
Chapter five
Clay was watching Kimiko very closely just in case she collapsed again. They had figured out what had made her ill it was Rocky Mountain Spotted Fever and Kimiko was lucky to be alive. Master Fung had giving her some weird potion that had heeled her straight away, it had even heeled the cut on her arm. She was sitting under a willow reading a book, Omi was training and Clay was just sitting watching everyone.
"Shen Gong Wu time kids" Dojo shouted shivering head to toe the two boys ran over to him right away.
"What is it Dojo?" Clay asked.
"It's the stone of Chai Mei" Dojo informed them, "If you come into physical contact with someone while using the stone you can feel how the other person feels, but it can't tell you why there feeling that way!"
"So it's kinda like a souped up mood ring then" Kimiko said.
"Yup! Now hop on!" Dojo cried as they took off.
Some were in Alaska.
"Man it's cold here," Kimiko said.
"Yah should've dressed warmer Kimiko" Clay said looking at the girl, "Especially if you don't wanna get a relapse".
"Clay.... I'm NOT a baby! I can take care of myself!" She snapped before walking ahead of them.
"Kimiko has been more moody lately," Omi said.
"Maybe it's lady problems!" Clay said.
"I heard that!" Kimiko shouted, "And it's not lady problems okay, Geeze why is it that guys always think its lady problems when its not" she cried out angrily.
"Shen Gong Wu that way" Dojo said pointing to a small filed. They were searching through the filed when they heard a snarl they turned around and saw a wolf growling at them.
"Nice doggie" Clay said backing away slowly.
"Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr" it growled at them again before it barked madly at them, they heard footsteps and a strange crying noise the wolf stopped growling and lay down.
"Sorry about that" a girl called coming into focus she had chocolate brown curly hair just below her shoulders and jade green eyes.
"Wow" Clay whispered.
"Katie?" Kimiko said.
"Kimiko?" the girl asked they both smiled and let out a scream before running over and hugging each other.
"I've missed you" Kimiko said.
"I missed you too" the girl smiled, "So what are you doing here?"
"Were looking for a Shen Gong Wu" Kimiko said.
"Kimiko" Omi cried out.
"It's okay Omi I know all about the Shen Gong Wu" Katie said Omi and Clay started at her.
"How did you know my name?" Omi asked gob smacked.
"Please Kimiko never shut up about you guys! Until the day Raimundo betrayed you then she went quite!" Katie replied.
"Katie! That's personal stuff don't tell them" Kimiko said, "And don't try any of that psychology stuff on me either!" she added.
"Psychology?" Dojo said, "Aren't you a little young"
"Nope got a degree and everything!" Katie replied she looked over at Clay who was staring at her mouth hanging open.
"You okay cowboy?" she asked.
"Huh? Oh yeah sorry ma'am I'm Clay" he said taking off his hat and introducing himself.
"Katie" she said and tried not to giggle when he took her hand and kissed it. Kimiko stood in the background making pucking faces.
"That's nice and all but we do have a Shen Gong Wu to find and it's coming from her," Dojo said shaking and pointing at Katie.
"Who's her the cats mother" Katie said frowning.
"Katie sorry" Dojo said shaking.
"Thank you and yes it's my necklace!" she said taking it off, "Its quite useful"
"You know how to use it?" Clay asked.
"I know a little Chinese," she said shrugging and was about to hand it to Clay when she was knocked to the ground.
"I'll take that" they all looked up at Jack.
"Its you!" Clay said angrily.
"Aw miss me?" Jack smirked at him before throwing Kimiko a poisonous stare; she just looked at her feet.
"YOUR DEAD!" Katie cried flipping back onto her feet and getting into her fighting stance. She threw a flying kick at his head sending him flying into a near by tree.
"Got it," Omi cried happily caching the stone of Chai Mei.
"Oh really" they heard another voice behind them who sent Omi flying though the air. They all turned around to see Raimundo smirking at them throwing the stone from hand to hand teasingly.
"Hand it over Rai" Clay said.
"Come and get it cowboy" Was Raimundo's response, Clay charged at him but Raimundo flipped away and Clay ran straight into Katie. Omi tried to get it but Jack shot a net at him pinning him to the tree both boys then turned their attention to Kimiko who was standing still and looking straight at the ground. They both walked over to her Jack stood behind her and Raimundo stood in front of her.
"Aren't you gonna fight us?" Raimundo asked but he got no response.
"Hello!" Raimundo waved a hand in front of her face still no answer Raimundo lifted his hand and pulled away the hair that was covering her face to see tears flowing down her face.
"Kim what's wrong?" Raimundo asked her his green eyes full of concern.
"Like you care," she mumbled.
"I do," he said moving closer.
"Leave me alone, I don't want you so close to me" she said turning her head away.
"Why not?" Raimundo asked moving even closer.
"Just" she said steeping back but she bumped into Jack, she turned to look at him and when she turned back round Raimundo was right up close to her he was about five centimetres away from her. She was breathing heavily now and she could feel her stomach do a somersault he saw a flash of desire in her eyes.
"I know how you feel" he whispered in her ear wrapping his arms around her waist and began kissing her neck. She felt the longing inside her she needed him, she craved him, she yearned for him to take her some were quite and peaceful were they could be alone but alas.... Happiness was her enemy it hated her and always gave up on her just like love.
"Get you filthy hands of her!" Katie yelled running towards them.
"Yeah you dirty snake" Clay added getting his lasso out Raimundo let go of Kimiko and she suddenly felt empty.
"Bring it" he smirked at them
"EARTH" Clay cried.
"WIND" Raimundo cried. The two boys started fighting Katie joined in she could fight just as well as Omi Kimiko watched as Clay and Katie had the upper hand.
"FIRE" she cried.
"Good call Kimiko I recon we could use the help" Clay shouted before getting the wind knocked out of him by Raimundo. Kimiko jumped in and grabbed Raimundo around the waist they both fell to the ground and started rolling Kimiko didn't know what happened after that she felt a heavy blow to her head and then everything went dark....
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(A:N) Dannii: (lying on her bed ice pack held to her head) Owie!
Kimiko: you feeling all right?
Dannii: (Bursts into tears) NO!! I'm under a lot of Pressure with school and all and then all the people tell me to update soon or else so NO I'm not feeling all right!!
Jack: so what know?
Dannii: they'll have to wait to next Friday for an update!! Coz this is a very important year as I'm doing half of my GCSE's (Models1 & 2 ect ect) And I've got loads of course work and stuff!! So suffer until next Friday everyone!! I LOVE ALL MY REVIEWERS BUT PLEASE BE PAISENT!! Love ya all xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxxoxoxoxoxxo
.::Dannii::.