Thank you all very much for your comments! I'm very happy you liked my story so, since I made Akemi come up naked in the last chapter, I'll let her answer!!! (the comments, I mean XD)
Akemi O.o : really?
earthfairy: hmhm!
Akemi: Oh yay! Thanks!! "claps hands" ok, let's get started!
JAy: Thanks! And earthfairy's sorry it was too short, she promises to work on it pokes earthfairy won't you?
earthfairy: nodnod of course I will big smile
Nakashima-Michiyo: Thank you! And yeah, we just updated
Mystica-Mochi: We will oh, and the chapters will be longer, don't worry :D
darkice-angel-Kinyak: Oh, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it so much! blush I think my name is pretty too It's from one of the characters from the book "Musashi". It's really good, you should read it O.o I'm funny? Thank you!
zeromaveric: ..ok…..erth's not really sure she's gonna put Meilin in this story, so….but thanks for the comment!
thai-spirit: oh, erth's sorry, she never meant to keep you in suspense (not) lol
Dark-Hodded Eriol the Mag: Yes, I'm an oc than I know of, at least….O.o thanks for commenting!
earthfairy: pats Akemi on the head good girl!
And now to business! First I'd like to explain about the CCS timeline! This is the first season, so Eriol won't come up! But I really wanted Yue to be in it, so I put him anyway XD so it's just like the first season, but as if Yue had appeared a little earlier!
And please comment! I feel as if no one even reads this, so if you already gave yourself the trouble to read the whole thing, just drop a comment! I'm kind of starting to be disincouraged to write because of the lack of comments. So please, it's not that hard! And thank you for the ones who actually did comment, it meant a lot!
And now for the story
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"Ah, Yoh!!" Manta tried to run over to his friend, but was held back by Akemi's shield. Wincing, he turned to her.
Realizing what had happened, Akemi shut her book with a snap, making all shields disappear.
Yoh, Horohoro, Ren and Ryu were all passed out on the field. Manta ran as quickly as he could to Yoh, but Akemi stayed were she was. Who was that girl?
"Yoh, Yoh, wake up!!" Manta shook his friend as hard as possible, but he didn't react. "Yoh!!!"
"Hm? What is it Manta?" Yoh sat up, looked at Manta and grinned his usual grin, as if nothing had happened.
"Yoh!" Manta scrambled to his feet.
The Shamans started stirring awake. Slowly they rose to their feet and, to Mantas surprise, started laughing.
"It's been a while since I had such a battle! It was good to stretch out my powers once in a while" said Ren, swinging his Quan Dao over his shoulder and grinning uncharacteristically.
"That pile of dirt didn't even have a CHANCE against us!!" Horohoro jumped to his feet and looked around eagerly, as if looking for another potential enemy.
Ryu just fixed his hair, looked around and smiled "We sure showed them!"
"Uh, actually guys…"
Buy no one wanted to listed to Manta. They all started speaking at once, their excited voices echoing thru the field.
"I'm just glad their ok, I don't even care what happened" thought Manta, joining in the laughter.
Akemi slowly approached the girl, whose back was turned to her.
"She looks so young." Thought Akemi, noticing the girls early age. To her surprise, there was a winged lion next to the girl, staring at her with harsh eyes. And suddenly, Akemi understood. Or at least so she thought.
"Hi, I'm Akemi. Might I just say, your shamanic powers are amazing. I mean, I thought Yoh and the others were strong, but you!! Is that your guardian spirit? He's just adorable! Though he does look kind of mad…so, were did you learn to fight?" Akemi stared at the girl expectantly, not even slightly aware of her confusion.
"Oh…" the girl glanced at the lion, who nodded. "I'm Sakura. And this is Kero. I'm sorry, but…what was that of a guardian spirit?"
"It's Kerberus, actually." Said the lion in a rather proud tone.
Ignoring the lion completely, Akemi started talking again.
"Your guardian spirit! Mine is Bartholomew. He was a librarian when he was alive, so he knows about a lot of stuff. He's really nice, though her can get really annoying sometime. Ups!…oh my, I hope he didn't hear that…"
"As a matter of fact, I did." A longhaired man appeared out of think air next to Akemi. He looked at her rather harshly but kept quiet,.
Sakura turned instantly white.
"A.a.a.a. gost…..Aiaiaiaiai!!!!" she backed away slowly.
"What's wrong? Its just Bart! He won't hurt you!" seeing her words had no effect on Sakura, she added pointing at Kero "You have one to, ya know?"
Sakura quickly glanced at Kero, but kept backing away.
Akemi sighted, and started waving her hand "Beat it Bart, your making her uncomfortable."
Bartholomew let out a low humpf and disappeared, muttering something of "my name is Bartholomew" and "Bart…how vulgar".
"I am not a ghost!" Kero looked offended. "I am the guardian of sun, a guard of the cards."
"Uh….sure you are. What the hey is a "guardian of the cars"? Aren't you a shaman?" she looked puzzled at Sakura.
"No…I'm not. What is a shaman, exactly?"
Yoh ran up to Akemi.
"Hey there! Thanks for protecting us! I-" he spotted Sakura. "Hey! Your that girl!!"
Ren and the others caught up. When they saw Sakura and Kero, they just stared.
"This is Sakura and Kero" introduced Akemi "Sakura, these are Yoh, Manta, Horohoro, Ren and Ryu. They're my friends! Guys, Sakura and Kero are some kind of aliens who come form a "card planet". Don't ask me, I didn't get it ether"
Sakura: = =U
Kero: = =U
Sakura recomposed herself.
Yoh looked around "hm…" then her grinned "I'm sorry for Akemi, she get's over excited sometimes. So, I'm Yoh, I'm a shaman. So are these guys. We use the powers of our guardian spirits to fight! Are you a shaman too?"
Sakura whispered something into Kero's ear.
"No, I think they can help us" her whispered (quite audibly) back.
Sakura nodded and smiled "I'm Sakura, and I'm the Card Captor. It's a rather long story, maybe we should go in for me to explain!"
Ren turned to Akemi "Alien hu? What sun fried your brain?"
Akemi stuck out her tong at Ren "Haha, your so funny! Anyways, you didn't win, it was Sakura who saved you. So there"
Ren kept his stern face "Oh yeah? And you didn't even fight! So don't come to me saying things like-"
But Akemi wasn't paying attention anymore. She was just staring at a point behind Ren's back.
"Uh…Akemi?" Ren waved his hand in front of her face. Then her looked around.
All of the others were staring in awe at something next to Sakura.
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O.o suspense!! Haha, but you'll know soon enough . And please comment, I mean, you've already had the trouble to read it all!! So please!!
And was it long enough or still too short?
