review time again!!
chapter 8
Blaze Jaganshi: Kool. Thankies.
Shippo303: Hey, You did? Kool. What happened with the whole passing out thing?
Miroku-has-darkness: I will.
Chapter 9
Reaka; Oh, that's where. I torture you all cuz it's fun. Glad to repay the favor, i look forward to reviewing anything else that i can get my pewny little hands on.
Inuyashatotallyobsessed: Thanks. u r the first to say anything about them. She was almost, but was saved by Joslin. sorry for the confusion.
InuObsessed: Boy, i have a lot of Inuyasha obsessed reviewers... Thankies! i told you i was evil! Sorry bout the shortness, i'll try to keep that to a minimum.
Mysoku-loves-sesshomaru: Much cliffies. Mebe.
Kie-san: Thanks.
Obsessor-of-inuyasha: see lots of inu-obsessed peoples... Wow. I write as much as my twitch will allow. Twitching hurts.
Gohan/videlgoten/trunkslover: Sure.
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Miroku-has-darkness: Thankies.
Oh! we reached the fifty review mark!!!!!! Yayness! It's the most reviews i have ever gotten! Thank you all for your support!
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not that i don't appreciate it, but where are all of yall coming from? I'm just curious. I aint seen much of yall before this year.
I know a few of yall personally, but still.
Anyways, i'm updating my profile, there is a message to everyone who reads my stuffs. it's to all yall people who like to gripe about misspellings, not that yall do. and yalls that gripe about me spelling peoples names wrong.
When i get four in the same chapter, it makes me mad.
It wasnt' on this, it was on Roses in the rain, i think. i'll have to check.
But still.
Anyways. I am gonna quit griping so yall can get to the story.
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Kouga raced from the shrine, kagome's blood soaking him.
He had to help her, but where?
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"You promised you would go to hell with me!" Kikyou screamed.
"I did." inuyasha said, his eyes showing no emotion now.
"Inuyasha." Joslin warned, one hand on Inuyasha's shoulder.
Sesshomaru's hand was also on one shoulder. He was silent, as always.
"I know what i have to do, now." Inuyasha said, his voice low.
"Come to hell with me!" she shreiked.
"Kikyou." inuyasha said, stepping toward Kikyou.
He took kikyou into his arms, holding her there.
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Kagome was in a dark place, her head was spinning and the world was swaying.
Then it all stopped.
She opened her eyes to see someone over her.
She didn't know him.
"W..Where..am....I?" she asked, she felt like her mouth was full of cotton
"Shh. It's alright." he said, his eyes were warm, freindly.
She closed her eyes and let the gentle rocking lull her back into sleep.
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inuyasha embraced the miko, holding her close to him.
a bright light started to swirl around the two.
as the lights grew blinding, inuyasha shifted and drew tetsuaiga.
He plunged the sword into her heart, letting her slide down onto the dirt.
he stood over her, as moments passed.
Kikyou stood again, staring up at him as the hole in her chest filled.
"You said you would go to hell with me, inuyasha." She said, stepping toward him.
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Sesshomaru sped in front of his brother.
He may be an insolent half-breed, but he was still blood.
"leave now, wench." He said, glaring down at the pale dead miko.
"Come to hell with me Inuyasha!" She screetched.
She was somehow faster than him.
He looked down to find her hand in the soft flesh of his side, digging into his body.
Blood poured out onto the floor, gathering with Kagome's in small pools.
Mingling together.
When Kikyou pulled her hand out, he sunk down onto his knees, clutching at the gaping hole in his side.
Tensuaiga glowed, making the already fast healing process go faster, but the miko had purified the surrounding area, keeping the wound open.
He felt the world tilt and he woke a moment later in Inuyasha's arms.
"Stay out of this." Inuyasha said down to him, laying him against the wall.
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Blood watched all of this from the corner.
He stepped from the shadows and grabbed Kikyou from behind.
"I'll take you to hell." He whispered in her ear.
She immediately began thrashing about, trying to release herself as he drug her down.
With a bright flash, they were gone.
He drug her down, down, toward the blood red lights, toward hell.
They landed in fire.
They stayed in fire.
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Inuyasha and Sesshomaru stared at the spot where the miko and demon had disappeared.
No trace.
Suddenly Inuyasha snapped out of his daze.
He looked up toward the hole in the roof.
"Kagome." he whispered, jumping out and racing toward the exit.
He slammed against the closed doors.
"Kagome!" he shouted.
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Kouga was alone with kagome.
He didn't know what to do.
He wrapped her in a cloak, covering her chest and arms.
She had lost a lot of blood, and was still losing it.
He had trapped the others in the shrine.
He found the camp set up by Sango and Miroku.
He sat her down against a tree and began digging into her backback.
"Please.." he whispered, digging for bandages.
he found them what seemed like an eternity later.
He tore the cloak off of her and began to wrap her, carefully so as not to wake her.
He sensed something and jumped out of the way, taking kagome with him.
He barely missed the giant boomerang as it cut down the tree and was caught by it's owner: Sango.
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Sango watched as Kouga tore the cloak off of Kagome.
Inuyasha had told her and Miroku that kouga was wanting to keep her.
as soon as she saw the bloody gashes, she flew into a blood feueled rage.
"Kouga!" She screamed. "Give Kagome back!" She yelled.
"Help her!" Kouga yelled back.
She was preparing to throw hirakotsu again but a hand on her shoulder stopped her.
"Please. Hear him out." Miroku said, his eyes were strangely clear.
Sango lowered Hirakotsu.
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Kouga landed near Sango, Laying kagome down again.
"It was Kikyou, She kidnapped her and did this. She's lost a lot of blood. Can you help her?" Kouga asked, his breathing harsh.
sango finished binding Kagome's wounds.
"She has to go back to her time. She'll die here if she doesn't." Sango said, standing.
'I'll take her!" Kouga said, rising to take Kagome up again.
"You cant. She'll just end up lying in her own time, waiting for someone to find her. She'll die before they even know about her." Miroku said, watching Kagome.
kouga cursed. "Who can help her?" he demanded.
"Inuyasha." Sango whispered, turning toward the sky.
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"Kouga, you bastard!" He screamed, beating against the door.
They couldn't get out.
Sesshomaru apeared beside him.
"Stop." He heard his brother say.
"Kagome'll die if i do." He said, slamming himself agianst the door again.
"Stop, i will get us out." He said, drawing tensuaiga.
Inuyasha stopped.
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That's it for this chapter, on to the next one.
hope you enjoyed it!
My name is death, i have come for your mind. -me
chapter 8
Blaze Jaganshi: Kool. Thankies.
Shippo303: Hey, You did? Kool. What happened with the whole passing out thing?
Miroku-has-darkness: I will.
Chapter 9
Reaka; Oh, that's where. I torture you all cuz it's fun. Glad to repay the favor, i look forward to reviewing anything else that i can get my pewny little hands on.
Inuyashatotallyobsessed: Thanks. u r the first to say anything about them. She was almost, but was saved by Joslin. sorry for the confusion.
InuObsessed: Boy, i have a lot of Inuyasha obsessed reviewers... Thankies! i told you i was evil! Sorry bout the shortness, i'll try to keep that to a minimum.
Mysoku-loves-sesshomaru: Much cliffies. Mebe.
Kie-san: Thanks.
Obsessor-of-inuyasha: see lots of inu-obsessed peoples... Wow. I write as much as my twitch will allow. Twitching hurts.
Gohan/videlgoten/trunkslover: Sure.
10
Miroku-has-darkness: Thankies.
Oh! we reached the fifty review mark!!!!!! Yayness! It's the most reviews i have ever gotten! Thank you all for your support!
----
not that i don't appreciate it, but where are all of yall coming from? I'm just curious. I aint seen much of yall before this year.
I know a few of yall personally, but still.
Anyways, i'm updating my profile, there is a message to everyone who reads my stuffs. it's to all yall people who like to gripe about misspellings, not that yall do. and yalls that gripe about me spelling peoples names wrong.
When i get four in the same chapter, it makes me mad.
It wasnt' on this, it was on Roses in the rain, i think. i'll have to check.
But still.
Anyways. I am gonna quit griping so yall can get to the story.
--------
Kouga raced from the shrine, kagome's blood soaking him.
He had to help her, but where?
-----
"You promised you would go to hell with me!" Kikyou screamed.
"I did." inuyasha said, his eyes showing no emotion now.
"Inuyasha." Joslin warned, one hand on Inuyasha's shoulder.
Sesshomaru's hand was also on one shoulder. He was silent, as always.
"I know what i have to do, now." Inuyasha said, his voice low.
"Come to hell with me!" she shreiked.
"Kikyou." inuyasha said, stepping toward Kikyou.
He took kikyou into his arms, holding her there.
-------
Kagome was in a dark place, her head was spinning and the world was swaying.
Then it all stopped.
She opened her eyes to see someone over her.
She didn't know him.
"W..Where..am....I?" she asked, she felt like her mouth was full of cotton
"Shh. It's alright." he said, his eyes were warm, freindly.
She closed her eyes and let the gentle rocking lull her back into sleep.
--------
inuyasha embraced the miko, holding her close to him.
a bright light started to swirl around the two.
as the lights grew blinding, inuyasha shifted and drew tetsuaiga.
He plunged the sword into her heart, letting her slide down onto the dirt.
he stood over her, as moments passed.
Kikyou stood again, staring up at him as the hole in her chest filled.
"You said you would go to hell with me, inuyasha." She said, stepping toward him.
-----
Sesshomaru sped in front of his brother.
He may be an insolent half-breed, but he was still blood.
"leave now, wench." He said, glaring down at the pale dead miko.
"Come to hell with me Inuyasha!" She screetched.
She was somehow faster than him.
He looked down to find her hand in the soft flesh of his side, digging into his body.
Blood poured out onto the floor, gathering with Kagome's in small pools.
Mingling together.
When Kikyou pulled her hand out, he sunk down onto his knees, clutching at the gaping hole in his side.
Tensuaiga glowed, making the already fast healing process go faster, but the miko had purified the surrounding area, keeping the wound open.
He felt the world tilt and he woke a moment later in Inuyasha's arms.
"Stay out of this." Inuyasha said down to him, laying him against the wall.
------
Blood watched all of this from the corner.
He stepped from the shadows and grabbed Kikyou from behind.
"I'll take you to hell." He whispered in her ear.
She immediately began thrashing about, trying to release herself as he drug her down.
With a bright flash, they were gone.
He drug her down, down, toward the blood red lights, toward hell.
They landed in fire.
They stayed in fire.
------
Inuyasha and Sesshomaru stared at the spot where the miko and demon had disappeared.
No trace.
Suddenly Inuyasha snapped out of his daze.
He looked up toward the hole in the roof.
"Kagome." he whispered, jumping out and racing toward the exit.
He slammed against the closed doors.
"Kagome!" he shouted.
-----
Kouga was alone with kagome.
He didn't know what to do.
He wrapped her in a cloak, covering her chest and arms.
She had lost a lot of blood, and was still losing it.
He had trapped the others in the shrine.
He found the camp set up by Sango and Miroku.
He sat her down against a tree and began digging into her backback.
"Please.." he whispered, digging for bandages.
he found them what seemed like an eternity later.
He tore the cloak off of her and began to wrap her, carefully so as not to wake her.
He sensed something and jumped out of the way, taking kagome with him.
He barely missed the giant boomerang as it cut down the tree and was caught by it's owner: Sango.
--------
Sango watched as Kouga tore the cloak off of Kagome.
Inuyasha had told her and Miroku that kouga was wanting to keep her.
as soon as she saw the bloody gashes, she flew into a blood feueled rage.
"Kouga!" She screamed. "Give Kagome back!" She yelled.
"Help her!" Kouga yelled back.
She was preparing to throw hirakotsu again but a hand on her shoulder stopped her.
"Please. Hear him out." Miroku said, his eyes were strangely clear.
Sango lowered Hirakotsu.
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Kouga landed near Sango, Laying kagome down again.
"It was Kikyou, She kidnapped her and did this. She's lost a lot of blood. Can you help her?" Kouga asked, his breathing harsh.
sango finished binding Kagome's wounds.
"She has to go back to her time. She'll die here if she doesn't." Sango said, standing.
'I'll take her!" Kouga said, rising to take Kagome up again.
"You cant. She'll just end up lying in her own time, waiting for someone to find her. She'll die before they even know about her." Miroku said, watching Kagome.
kouga cursed. "Who can help her?" he demanded.
"Inuyasha." Sango whispered, turning toward the sky.
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"Kouga, you bastard!" He screamed, beating against the door.
They couldn't get out.
Sesshomaru apeared beside him.
"Stop." He heard his brother say.
"Kagome'll die if i do." He said, slamming himself agianst the door again.
"Stop, i will get us out." He said, drawing tensuaiga.
Inuyasha stopped.
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That's it for this chapter, on to the next one.
hope you enjoyed it!
My name is death, i have come for your mind. -me