Chapter 20
Later on that day Fred and I were sitting on the stone wall surrounding Malfoy Manor, when a limo pulled up. We jumped down and meet the person at the gate. Well it turned out to be my mother, what a surprise.
"Hello, MOTHER." I said with emphasis on 'mother.
"Hello, Marie. So how has your stay here at the Manor been. It looks like they've been treating you well enough."
"Good, I suppose, and yes they have been treating me well."
"Where is you're darling, fiance?"
"Oh, what fiance?"
"What do you mean by that, you ignorant child?"
"Well for one I'm not ignorant, I just love to piss you off, and two the wedding is off. And Draco and I are through until I decide otherwise."
"What? You cannot do this to me, there are 200 people coming to this wedding, Saturday. There is no way I can tell them the wedding is off."
"Well, you have to. Because unless by some odd miracle Draco can fix this screw up, which he probably can't, then there wont be a wedding. And if by some chance you were in on this then you can just forget about me ever getting back together with Draco." I stormed off with Fred at my heels.
"Good lord, Marie. You really don't like your mum. Do you?"
"No, I don't."
"Why not?"
"Because, don't you see how she treats me and on top of that the was she acts. She thinks she's all High and Mighty. Just because her daughter is one of the strongest witches in this world."
"Marie, I know you probably don't want to hear this, but -"
"But what? Are you going to tell me I'm a lot like her. That I sometimes think that I'm High and Mighty; that I treat people the same way she treats me."
"Well, yes."
I broke down. "How could I become like her? Everything I've worked hard not to be and yet look at what I've become." I just sat there crying and Fred just looke at me.
"Marie, I'm sorry. I never realized -" he sat down nect to me and took me into his arms.
"Never realized what?" I said, looking into his green eyes.
"I never realized how much I actually love you until now." I was amazed 'Fred loved me'
I leaned forward quickly and forcibly pressed my lips against his in a long, lustful, passionate kiss. When it ended, he hugged me close and kiss my cheek. "Oh, Marie," he murmured into my hair, "I love you, I love you, I love you so much."
I grinned at him. "It feels good to say it, doesn't it?"
Fred nodded slowly, staring at me. "Yes it does."
I smiled at him and his apparednt innocense. "And it feels good to hear you say it." I kissed him again.
AND SO IT BEGINS...
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Kristen: I know this has become a very confusing story. I will try to fix that problem in the sequil.
Miko: Yeah I even got a littly confused arounf Chapter 18 & 19.
Akida: Why does it matter, Kristen. You know how it's supposed to be.
Kristen: Yes but I want my readers to know, too.
Miko: So, how are you gonna fix it?
Kristen: Oh, I have a few ideas.(smiles evil smile)
Akida: All I got to say is you need to figure out who Marie is going to be with. So either Fred or Draco.
Miko: Hey don't forget about Shane. Remember he did kiss her in Chapter 18.
Akida: Yeah or Shane. So have you decided yet?
Kristen: Well she's not going to be with Shane, I will tell you that right now. But you will have to read "This Love" (the sequil) to find out.
Miko: Aw... come on Kristen you gotta tell us.
Kristen: No, I don't.
Miko: Yes, you do.
Akida: Shut up, Miko. No she doesn't cause you will find out once you read the sequil.
Miko: But I don't want to read it. I will most likely get confused again.
Kristen: No you wont, cause I already have "This Love" planned out in my head.
Akida: Yeah well that's what you said the last time.
Kristen: Hey get off my back. Alright this was my first FanFic. and I think it was pretty good. Yes the plot could have been better and yes I could have left out some of the drama that was in the later chapters. But I didn't and this is how it turned out. So if you don't like it, Akida, then you can kiss me white butt. Please review.