Chapter Five: The flashback
Eleni and Freddy were sitting in the back of there parents BMW.They were being driven home and yelled at.
"WHAT THE FUCK, YOU GUYS ARE IN DEEP SHIT WHEN WE GET HOME AND DONT THINK IM KIDDING-" Dad was drunk again he was yelling and not paying attention, mom was asleep otherwise she would have stopped him.
"But dad we w-" Eleni started.
"Hush YOU WILL SPEAK WHEN I TELL YOU!" and he slapped her in the face. Seeing the look on her face, the bruise that was now forming and the bloody tears she was trying to hold back tore my heart out. I was just about to hit him when CRASH! Right into a truck! While my dad was yelling and hitting Leni he swerved into the wrong lane.
EnD oF fLaShBaCk
NeW fLaShBaCk
I woke up in a hospital. Leni was in the bed next to me watching Are you afraid of the dark?.She loved that show. I smiled, I always loved it when she was happy. It was always my job to make her happy too.Just then a nurse came running over to us.
"You finally woke up! You guys have been in a coma for three weeks! I better go call your Dad!" I looked over at Eleni when she said that. Leni was on the verge of tears, and I can't blame her. She was never hit by dad before, I was always the one who was hit. Now we had to go back there and she wasn't safe, but this time I'm ready! I won't let anything hurt her ever again.
EnD
New
We were in the car again with our dad. We were in the outfits from battle of the bands still, since that's what we wore to the hospital. The way home was quiet; no one talked. Eleni looked like she was crying but I still didn't say anything, I didn't wanna make my father any angrier. We got home and right when we walked in the door, Leni walked over to dad and wrapped her arms around him in a hug! BAD IDEA! He threw her against the wall.
"You two kill your mother and you expect me to hug you?! I dont even want you in my presence! You sicken me you murderers!"
I looked over at El. Every word he said I could tell her heart was breaking more and more. I went over to my dad he was gaining on El...I would never let him touch her again.
"YOU KNOW WHAT? YOU'RE AN ASSHOLE! EVERYONE KNOWS THAT IF YOU WEREN'T DRUNK MOM WOULD STILL BE HERE! AND DONT YOU EVER TOUCH MY SISTER AGAIN!" I screamed at him
"Excuse you! She's my daughter and I'll do what I want and there's nothing you can do about it!"
I lunged at him and started kicking him and punching him. I saw Leni's eyes grow wide, and I knew what was coming. SLAM! I went right into the front door, my head hit the door knob and I could tell it was bleeding. I had blood all over my clothes. My dad was turning into a monster. He kicked me in my stomach and I noticed that from loss of blood I was starting to pass out... The last thing I saw was Leni being kicked. I woke up in my bed and Leni explained how she helped me. After that day our dad never talked to us again.
End of flashback
As i remembered that I started crying, I was supposed to protect her, yet I was the reason El had two permanently broken ribs, and the reason she was semi brain damaged.
"Freddy! HELLO!!!!" I heard Katie call and I came out of my memories.
"Huh? Oh, uh, I got into a car accident that day. Don't you remember? And can we please not talk about it." Omg, I am so tired. I must sleep. Katie ran over to me and hugged me, she started crying too. Then all went black as I fell asleep crying in her lap.
PlEaSe reveiw i feel lyk no one likes the story. Oh and im gonna need new charactors soon so if ya wanna b in it review and/or im me on Princess Lolly x with what you wanna be and the name you want.
HeRe ArE tHe PaRtS::
1. I need a girlfriend for freddy(temporary)
2.I need a drummer(theres gonna be a new band)
3.A guitarist 4.Another guitarist 5.A bassist 6.A singer(u kan claim this part with one of the instruments to)
7. I will need 3 new groupies 8. I will need people from a diffrent place
you dont ACTUALLY have to be these parts in real life just claim one with a name and youll find out if you made it or not THANKIES and good night.
Eleni and Freddy were sitting in the back of there parents BMW.They were being driven home and yelled at.
"WHAT THE FUCK, YOU GUYS ARE IN DEEP SHIT WHEN WE GET HOME AND DONT THINK IM KIDDING-" Dad was drunk again he was yelling and not paying attention, mom was asleep otherwise she would have stopped him.
"But dad we w-" Eleni started.
"Hush YOU WILL SPEAK WHEN I TELL YOU!" and he slapped her in the face. Seeing the look on her face, the bruise that was now forming and the bloody tears she was trying to hold back tore my heart out. I was just about to hit him when CRASH! Right into a truck! While my dad was yelling and hitting Leni he swerved into the wrong lane.
EnD oF fLaShBaCk
NeW fLaShBaCk
I woke up in a hospital. Leni was in the bed next to me watching Are you afraid of the dark?.She loved that show. I smiled, I always loved it when she was happy. It was always my job to make her happy too.Just then a nurse came running over to us.
"You finally woke up! You guys have been in a coma for three weeks! I better go call your Dad!" I looked over at Eleni when she said that. Leni was on the verge of tears, and I can't blame her. She was never hit by dad before, I was always the one who was hit. Now we had to go back there and she wasn't safe, but this time I'm ready! I won't let anything hurt her ever again.
EnD
New
We were in the car again with our dad. We were in the outfits from battle of the bands still, since that's what we wore to the hospital. The way home was quiet; no one talked. Eleni looked like she was crying but I still didn't say anything, I didn't wanna make my father any angrier. We got home and right when we walked in the door, Leni walked over to dad and wrapped her arms around him in a hug! BAD IDEA! He threw her against the wall.
"You two kill your mother and you expect me to hug you?! I dont even want you in my presence! You sicken me you murderers!"
I looked over at El. Every word he said I could tell her heart was breaking more and more. I went over to my dad he was gaining on El...I would never let him touch her again.
"YOU KNOW WHAT? YOU'RE AN ASSHOLE! EVERYONE KNOWS THAT IF YOU WEREN'T DRUNK MOM WOULD STILL BE HERE! AND DONT YOU EVER TOUCH MY SISTER AGAIN!" I screamed at him
"Excuse you! She's my daughter and I'll do what I want and there's nothing you can do about it!"
I lunged at him and started kicking him and punching him. I saw Leni's eyes grow wide, and I knew what was coming. SLAM! I went right into the front door, my head hit the door knob and I could tell it was bleeding. I had blood all over my clothes. My dad was turning into a monster. He kicked me in my stomach and I noticed that from loss of blood I was starting to pass out... The last thing I saw was Leni being kicked. I woke up in my bed and Leni explained how she helped me. After that day our dad never talked to us again.
End of flashback
As i remembered that I started crying, I was supposed to protect her, yet I was the reason El had two permanently broken ribs, and the reason she was semi brain damaged.
"Freddy! HELLO!!!!" I heard Katie call and I came out of my memories.
"Huh? Oh, uh, I got into a car accident that day. Don't you remember? And can we please not talk about it." Omg, I am so tired. I must sleep. Katie ran over to me and hugged me, she started crying too. Then all went black as I fell asleep crying in her lap.
PlEaSe reveiw i feel lyk no one likes the story. Oh and im gonna need new charactors soon so if ya wanna b in it review and/or im me on Princess Lolly x with what you wanna be and the name you want.
HeRe ArE tHe PaRtS::
1. I need a girlfriend for freddy(temporary)
2.I need a drummer(theres gonna be a new band)
3.A guitarist 4.Another guitarist 5.A bassist 6.A singer(u kan claim this part with one of the instruments to)
7. I will need 3 new groupies 8. I will need people from a diffrent place
you dont ACTUALLY have to be these parts in real life just claim one with a name and youll find out if you made it or not THANKIES and good night.