Thankyou for bringing this up in your review. I did take the beginning
from the movie, but I didn't like what happened. So I plan to change it
some.. (I also forgot the name to put on the disclaimer)
So anyway, on with the story!
Disclaimer: I don't own Sailor Moon, or 'If the shoe fits'
Serena's POV
I don't know how, or why. But when I looked into Darien Shield's eyes, all my worries melted away, nothing mattered except me, and him. And then he said to me in this deep voice that had caused most woman to fall heads over heels in love with him for me to come with him. The next thing I knew, I was riding in a car. We stopped in front of a beauty parlor. Taking my hand all gentlemanly like, he led me inside. He instructed a team to work on me, and then left. A hair dresser came up to me, and introduced himself to be Pierre (couldn't think of a name here..) And then before I could say anything, they started to wash, and cut my hair and apply makeup and change everything about me.
Pierre's POV This person my friend brought me certainly is a fine specimen. But she hides her true beauty. I want to bring it out. Then she will be radiant. It will be hard though. Her hair is so coarse, her face covered in blemishes (pimples). I will do the best I can though.
A few hours pass..
Serena's POV Pierre has pronounced me to be done. I am really curious to see what I look like. They have not allowed me to see a mirror this whole time. I walked in front of a full-length mirror, and I hardly recognized myself. I had some dark eyeshadow to bring out my eyes. I had this beautiful long silky blonde hair now. My hair is what really changed; it used t to be all frizzy and untamable. My pimples were covered by foundation. Probably a thousand pounds though.But in anycase, I thought I looked great. But their was just one problem. How was I going to pay for it? I asked Pierre. He said the Mr. Shields had paid for it already. This surprised me. No one had ever given me the time of day before, and suddenly this rich and famous guy was doing something for lowly little me? I left the salon in a daze. I felt weird. I was getting stares from lots of people, but I figured it was a good thing. I was tired, so I went to sleep. I wonder what Amy will think in the morning!
Yeah.It's kind of awkward writing in different POV. I think I will just make them into diary entries or something. Tell me what you think!
-Snow_pheonix
Disclaimer: I don't own Sailor Moon, or 'If the shoe fits'
Serena's POV
I don't know how, or why. But when I looked into Darien Shield's eyes, all my worries melted away, nothing mattered except me, and him. And then he said to me in this deep voice that had caused most woman to fall heads over heels in love with him for me to come with him. The next thing I knew, I was riding in a car. We stopped in front of a beauty parlor. Taking my hand all gentlemanly like, he led me inside. He instructed a team to work on me, and then left. A hair dresser came up to me, and introduced himself to be Pierre (couldn't think of a name here..) And then before I could say anything, they started to wash, and cut my hair and apply makeup and change everything about me.
Pierre's POV This person my friend brought me certainly is a fine specimen. But she hides her true beauty. I want to bring it out. Then she will be radiant. It will be hard though. Her hair is so coarse, her face covered in blemishes (pimples). I will do the best I can though.
A few hours pass..
Serena's POV Pierre has pronounced me to be done. I am really curious to see what I look like. They have not allowed me to see a mirror this whole time. I walked in front of a full-length mirror, and I hardly recognized myself. I had some dark eyeshadow to bring out my eyes. I had this beautiful long silky blonde hair now. My hair is what really changed; it used t to be all frizzy and untamable. My pimples were covered by foundation. Probably a thousand pounds though.But in anycase, I thought I looked great. But their was just one problem. How was I going to pay for it? I asked Pierre. He said the Mr. Shields had paid for it already. This surprised me. No one had ever given me the time of day before, and suddenly this rich and famous guy was doing something for lowly little me? I left the salon in a daze. I felt weird. I was getting stares from lots of people, but I figured it was a good thing. I was tired, so I went to sleep. I wonder what Amy will think in the morning!
Yeah.It's kind of awkward writing in different POV. I think I will just make them into diary entries or something. Tell me what you think!
-Snow_pheonix