Episode one
The Forgotten Prince
Devil-Catcher
TROY
The Trojans arrive at Troy early in the morning and all and sundry was pleased to see their Princes again but almost all of them were more trilled to look at the whore they call... Queen Helen of Sparta.
Prince Hector and Prince Paris enter the gate of Troy with Helen and when they stopped they entered a big citadel and there they saw an old man both hands raised to welcome his sons and that man they call is no one but The King of Troy, Priam.
The man kisses his sons audacity and when he saw Helen he was astonished to see King Menelaus' beautiful wife. He gazes at her with his eyes then smile.
"Ahh... If I am not mistaken you are Queen Helen of Sparta. "The old man said but swiftly Paris cuts in. "Princess Helen of Troy. "He abruptly said. Priam was astonished by his son's words then he smile. "Well then Princes of Troy, Welcome to your new country. " He said then continues as he kisses her cheeks as a sign of giving her the freedom to stay whenever she wants.
"I heard rumors about your beauty and all of them are true. "The King said.
Moment later a tall and skinny woman with curly hazel brown hair came in and starts to embrace hector.
"Welcome home. "The woman said smiling. Hector was pleased to see his wife Andromache again. "I am so happy to see you again. "He said kissing her wife's forehead when another girl with curly and auburn hair came in again and that caught the princes' attentions.
"Briseis! "The two man said happily. Paris kissed her first then next was Hector.
"Briseis, It is very nice to see you again. "Paris said smiling. The girl replied with a cheerful smile then said. "I am glad you two are back." She replied sweetly. "Are you serving to gods? "Hector asks. The girl nods yes then spoke. "Yes cousin "She replied softly.
ACHILLES
Achilles is preparing his things for the war when Eudorus came.
"Milord. "Achilles turned around after hearing Eudorus call him. "Do you need something? "Achilles asks gritting his teeth and making loud clamor. "Milord, King Odysseus requests to have an utterance with you. "Eudorus said firmly yet politely. Achilles rolled his eyes slowly before speaking. "Tell him I'll be right over after a few. "He said ordering him. Eudorus convexes then leave.
LATER
Achilles enters Odysseus big gazebo while the king's gazing at his wife's canvas. Achilles looked at him then starts coughing to make loud clatter. Odysseus was startled by the noise so he turned around and saw the greatest warrior of the Greeks, Achilles son of Peleus.
"One of my men told me that you want to have a word with me. Is there anything you want to tell me? "He asks plainly looking straight at the man's eyes who's in front of him. Odysseus, King of Ithaca gazes at him seriously as he walks closer to him.
"You who's fighting for no country, for no king and for no woman..." He stops to look at his eyes directly reading his thoughts then continues. "What do you deem? Are you deeming of having every glory? Deeming of having all the might in this world? Or is it happiness you are deeming of? "He asks franticly.
Achilles was disclosure by his questions but then he answers firmly. "I am not deeming of anything my dear friend. But if I am... I'll be deeming and inclinations to be remember by people. "He answers. " Remember? Oh yes indeed, all will remember you for being the greatest warrior of Greece but... they will remember you only as the killer of all century. "Odysseus said.
"Then killer shall I be. "He said arrogantly then starts to leave but Odysseus stopped him. "Did I offend you Achilles? "He asks. Achilles smirked as he turns. "Offending is not your talent my dear friend. I think you better work on that. "He said plainly then he was gone.
TROY
Briseis and Hector were talking when Macarious came and borrowed Briseis.
"Do you need anything Milord? "Briseis asks plainly but then irritated by Macarious presence. He smiles sweetly, using her charm and staring at Briseis' eyes straightly. "Nothing in particular Milady Briseis. "He answers sweetly. "If you need nothing... why did you want to talk to me in private? "She asks looking at his brown eyes. "I... I came here to ask for you hand "He proposes firmly hoping she'll say yes as he puts a golden ring with pearl in her finger.
Briseis couldn't believe what she just heard.
Briseis looked away quickly asking herself if she should say yes or no for she does not love Macarious.
Macarious knew what her answer is so He smiles then said. "It's ok Milady, It's silly of me to ask you that. "He said plainly not looking at her eyes. Briseis gazes at him then spoke. "I'm sorry Macarious... It doesn't mean I resist your proposal...that does not mean that I don't feel the same way... it's just that... I vowed to serve the son god, Apollo. "She explains, Macarious slyly smiles.
"I understand... I was just... never mind Milady. "He stops then swiftly continues. "I have to go now... "He excuses himself then swiftly walks away. "What have I done? I hurt him... I am so sorry Macarious. "
DAYSLATER
A man came running to Prince Hector when He saw Sparta's Ships heading their country.
"My Lord's we have bad news. "The soldier said trying to catch his breath. Prince hector, Prince Paris and King Priam were worried by the man's presence. "What is it? "Prince Hector asks. "The Greeks.... They're here.... "The young man said scared. "the Greeks? "
"Brother... "Paris called his brother's name with his shaking voice. " Don't worry Paris. "He said shortly then turned to the man. " Tell AEGYPTUS to get the men ready. " Hector ordered, the man widens his eyes then nods yes then left. " No worried father... The Greeks won't reach our high walls. " Hector said calming his dear father and his dear Brother.
WAR
Briseis and the other Priests and Priestesses are running away, scared by the Greeks presence.
"Milady, I think you better hide in a safe place before the Greeks reach this temple. "One of Apollo's worshiper said. Briseis nods no then speaks. "No Mella, If The Gods want be to die today then I'll accept that. "She said strongly yet fearful. "But Milady, what will King Priam and The Princes say? "
"No worries Mella now go and tell the others to hide while they still can. "She said but Mella just nods no. "GO! "She said loudly making her leave. But after a while she stepped backwards then run away.
After Mella left with some worshipers and Priestesses, The Greeks came and one spotted her beauty.
"Ah, look what we have here, a very beautiful worshiper of the son god Apollo. "The man said lustily and flirting with her but she just ignored it. "What's wrong lady? Scared? "The man asks again, his hands traveling around Briseis' lower back, She quickly clouts his left audacity angrily. Her furiousness angered the man and made him slap her twice back but Briseis' wasn't scared so she spit on the man.
"Why you little slut! "the man said angrily, He took his blade but someone grabbed his hand then said. "STOP! We can give her to Achilles. "The man said then the man who wants to kill Briseis smiles evilly. "That's a good Idea, after he's done playing with her maybe he will give her to us. "The man said laughing.
TOBECONTINUED
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