Hi. This is my first fic so it might suck so tell me if it does ...NOW!!!
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Chapter 1: The DOOM begins
"Come on. Tell me were we are going?!" Shippo said in his usual little voice.
"I already told you I cant tell you till we get there," growled Inuyasha.
"There is hopefully a "celebration" when we get there," Moroku said with a perverted smile on his face that he was trying to hide.
WHACK!!!!!!!
Sango smacked him with her boomerang and said, "That's the twentieth comment the monk has made today."
"I hope they like where we are taking them," Kagome whispered to Inuyasha.
"Finally we are here," says Inuyasha .
They all examine a large castle that looked very familiar. (we all know where this is going)It had a very large staircase leading to a huge door.
(I'm talking the size door a giant would use) So Shippo (of coarse) runs up the stairs and knocks on the door.
"Is anybody home," yelled the young kitsune. Then fhooosh he falls through a trap door into what seems to be an infinite abyss.(I don't have anything against Shippo it just fits better with the story)"SHIPPO!!!!!!!" shouts the two girls. They all run up to try and find him and are unsuccessful
"We were too late," the girls said in unison just before they all get knocked out( along with Kouga where ever the hell he is)
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I hope you liked the story. I had a shortage on time so if you want it longer just put it in the reviews. The next chapter will be out soon so don't bring out the geuteen(not sure on the spelling) on me.
Friend gives it a 7 because it is lacking more shippo parts,
I like SHIPPO!!!!!!
GET OFF THE COMPUTER, NICK!!!!!!!!!!!But don't worry. Shippo will have a BIG part later.