(Hello all it is I Ren Asakura here with chpater three of Defeated! Before we go to the story I have the following reviewers to thank:
Mir- Thank You for such a kind review. I don't have any plans to take this story off anytime soon. Keep reviewing! ()
Fieryred20- Yes you will be seeing more of AJ in future chapters. He sounds hot doesn't he?
qtpie314- Don't worry I will keep this story going. I will try to update every 2-3 days a week if I can. My sechudle is very cramed.
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Also no Draco Hermonie. HermoniexAJ
Recap:
Hermonie looked around the compartment.
"Draco there's no one in here! What the fuck-" she was cut short as Draco lips came crashing down onto hers.
Chapter Three
Hermonie tried to push Draco off of her but nothing would work. She soon began to kiss him back.
'What about AJ??!!!!!!!!!!!!!!' her mind screamed. Hermonie pushed Draco off of her with all of her strength.
"You better not ever try that with me again Malfoy or else I'll bite through your tounge and watch you drown in your own blood" she said coldly. Draco stared at her angrily and got himself off of the floor.
Hermonie turned onto ther heel and walked out of the compartment door shutting it with a quick snap.
"Fucking Malfoy" she muttered to herself. She walked back to the compartment where she had been with her bestfriends.
"I'm back" she said grinning broadly.
"What took you so long?" asked Ron slightly annoyed.
"Where you in there making-out with Malfoy?" asked Ginny smiling at her evily.
'Yes that is exactly what I was doing!' her mind screamed.
"Oh for crying out loud don't make me vomit" she sadi grimicing. She took a seat next to Harry.
"So what did I miss?" she said looking around at her friends.
"We were talking about Quiditch" said Harry smiling down at her.
"Oh I've played it over the summer." she said smiling.
"Really?" said Harry stunned. "What position did you play?"
"Chaser" she said simply. "My cousin was so happy that she went out and brought me a broom."
"She what?!" said Ron.
"She brought me a broom" she said slowly. "Honestly Ronald sometimes I think that you were deaf."
"Har Har Har" he said glaring playfully.
Hermonie yawned rathery loudly and began to drift off to sleep. No longer able to fight it she put her head on the window and took a long needed nap.
Hermonie's Dream
Hermonie stood atop of a balcony railing. It was pouring down rain. Three more immortals stood on either side of her. All dressed in black. Hermonie's leather lace up corset, leather black pants, knee length lace up black boots, and her long black leather coat. The boy on her left looked so fimaliar that it was almost scary. His face was hidden by the shadows. As was the other one on her left. Were they waiting for something? If so, what they were waiting for was the question. A flash of light was seen and the dream showed her another room. It was only Hermonie and the boy that had been on her left and a hooded dark figure with glowing red eyes and large pale spider like hands. He seemed to be fighting with the boy. He mumbled something and the boy went flying back into the wall. He turned toward Hermonie and shouted "Crucio!"
She screamed in pain and feel to her knees. She was shaking vioently. He reached dwon and lifted up her chin and loked deep into and eyes. A smile playing on its lips. She flet as though her head was going to split in two. The pain was un-bearable. She suddenly had a burst of energy. Her eyes glowed red and she bared her fangs at him. With one swipe she slashed his face with her claws. And then began to scream as he shouted 'Crucio' once more. She then felt someone shaking her shoulders.
End Dream
"HERMONIE" shouted Harry trying to wake her up.
Her eyes snapped open. She was shaking vioently and sweating quickly. Her breaths were coming out qucik and un even.
"Are you okay?!" asked Ron towering over her.
"What happened?" asked Ginny worridly tears forming up in her eyes.
Harry brushed her hair out of her face. Tears began to flow down her face. Harry hugged her close to him. She wrapped her arms around his neck and cried softly.
"It's okay Hermonie" he whispered into her ear. Ron and Ginny both walked over to her and wrapped their arms around her. Whatever had upset her like this? What happend in the dream? These thoughts were racing through each of her three friends heads.
(Yay end of chapter three! Chapter four is up next! Might be out today or tomorrwo I'm ont sure depends on my mood. You guys know what to do! Click on the button and review! Ren is signing off!)
