A/N: ok peeps, I am submitting this poem to a contest, and I NEED feedback NOW! I want you to read this and tell me you HONEST opinion and CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISICM. Don't just flame me, and if you absolutely truly cannot think of anything to make it better then say that. If you do have an idea as to how to make it better then don't hold back. Now read and REVIEW!!!!

Disclaimer: I don't own the titans, but this is MY poem, so don't take it.

A Different kind of Hero-not

When I was a little girl,

I would donne on a cape,

Rush about all smiles and giggles,

Playing superhero

Today, thousands, when asked

name me as their hero.

They imitate me- my everything.

moves, clothes, words, personality.

But what they do not know

is that I am not really a hero.

That though my acts seem selfless,

They are truly selfish.

Because though it may seem otherwise,

I gain from my so-called heroic acts.

And I will never know

If I would do them even without this gain.

So I guess you could call me

a different kind of hero.

I am, quite simply put,

a hero that's not.

I am just a little girl,

donning on a cape,

Rushing about with pain and tears,

playing

superhero.

-Slayergirl1362

A/N: so I bet you're wondering why this is in the teen titans section huh? Because the speaker is Raven. Only you don't know that. see cuz I didn't mention Raven or the titans at all throughout the poem so that it won't be plagiarism (sp?). So pretend you don't know it's raven and review now.