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Harry walked off grinning, good old Myrtle had flooded the girls toilet just as McGonagall walked past, an adequate distraction and a good way to delay the rest of the detentions.
As he walked down the halls a sudden tiredness swept over him, So he decided to head back to his dormitory, unfortunately it was not to be.
"Hey potty!" sneered a voice from behind him, Harry had his wand out and was facing Malfoy in a second of course.
"We need to finish something..."
The obvious queue for his two goons to start laughing was missed as they just stood there staring at the air in front of their faces.
He elbowed them hard.
"Huh wazat?"
"uuuuh… mehehehehe?"
"….uhuhuhuhuhuhuhuh?"
Draco face palmed at their stupidity and raised his wand.
Harry figured he was in enough trouble without using his magic.
"Put that wand down and you'll walk away with two legs!" said Harry.
Whoop, that didn't come out quite as planned.
Malfoy let out a cry of "OCTET!" purple light shooting out of Malfoy's wand and zooming towards Harry, but when it was two centimeters from Harry's nose it froze in midair and, pop, it was gone.(the spell not Harry's nose)
Malfoy was so shocked that his spell didn't work and Potter didn't even do anything that Harry was able to just walk off, stray dust bunnies twirling playfully in his wake only to be swept into oblivion by his robes.
Hermione sighed, Ron had just said, by his own math, that phoenixes lived in Antarctica!
When Harry came in thru the portrait Hermione gladly rushed over to him.
"Oh thank goodness you're here, Ron just isn't trying, maybe you can help him, is detention over alrea-ah! Harry, oh Merlin! What happened to your face!?"
It took him a moment to understand what Hermione was saying.
He had a large black gash, right on his scar.
He dropped to his knees, suddenly overwhelmed, god it was too hot!
"What happened to him Hermione!" yelled Ron.
"I don't know! Oohh I don't know!" sobbed Hermione frantically calling the other students to get help.
They dragged Harry too the hospital wing, when madam Pomfrey saw him it looked like she was going too faint as well, she ran to get help and came back with Dumbledore, McGonagall and Missus Weasley, who fussed over him.
They all talked hurriedly while Harry started to black out.
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