Ok now I only got 1 review but that might be because like it's the first
chappie and it was boring. I need characters for the blader breakers, all
starz ect to battle so if you could email me their names and what they look
like it will really help me with the story.
Now Marc in the story is now on fanfiction.net so watch out for stories by cloud.
Right here's the story sorry if it's naf coz it's late and I though I'd better update so here I go.
Only 2 More Battles To Go
"That was a top battle people but will our next blader be like? Here's Marc!"
Marc walked up to area. He was focused on his battle. He knew that he had to win to make it to the final round. If he wanted to show that he hadn't changed in the past year he would have to win.
"Marc and Billie are best mates so always train together. Although they may train together, their style of battle is very different. Marc is an in ya face guy but can change to a defences move in 2 seconds flat. This makes him very hard to beat, I wouldn't be surprised if this kid made it to the top of the tables with his skills."
"Yes, he has got some great moves but so has the person he's facing up against. Nathan is one kick-ass kid. He likes to get straight into the battle and not hang about. We have seen him not blade outta the disc in one attack, will he be able to beat Marc this way? Let's hang over to Robert to get this red hot battle started!"
"You've all been waiting for this now let me be the one to say .3.2.1.LET IT RIP!!"
Once again, two blades laded in the disc. Both went into a head on attack. The two blades were in a lock, not showing any sign of moving apart. Marc's blade backed off. "I'm getting bored, I wanna go out with my mates so lets get this over and done with! Beyblade full head on attack!" After this, Nathan's blade was hit head on and flew into the air. He was in shock that he was being batted about the disc like that. "If I can land it I might have a change. Come on!" Nathan's blade with the floor or the disc. It was still in one piece but had stopped spinning and was laying on its side.
"We have a winner.Nathan's blade had stopped spinning.the winner is Marc!"
A huge smile came across Marc's face. 'I proved I haven't changed' "Nice one" Marc heard a voice from behind him. It was Billie. "Thanks, that was easy. The trainings paid off. Now there's only one match left each." "Yeah, good thing to coz this battling is doing me in. I'll be glad when I can have a lay in."
"Now we only have 2 battle's left till we find our two best bladers. Will it be the hometown kids? Or the visits trying to take our town by storm? Find out next time."
"Bye people and remember.LET IT RIPE!"
How was that?
Rai: You make the battles sound easy
Well I'll get Marc to right them next time coz im naf at writing the battle parts.
Kai: Well as long as when im battling you make it go.
Yeah yeah what ever.
Ok well that's it please R+R thanks
Now Marc in the story is now on fanfiction.net so watch out for stories by cloud.
Right here's the story sorry if it's naf coz it's late and I though I'd better update so here I go.
Only 2 More Battles To Go
"That was a top battle people but will our next blader be like? Here's Marc!"
Marc walked up to area. He was focused on his battle. He knew that he had to win to make it to the final round. If he wanted to show that he hadn't changed in the past year he would have to win.
"Marc and Billie are best mates so always train together. Although they may train together, their style of battle is very different. Marc is an in ya face guy but can change to a defences move in 2 seconds flat. This makes him very hard to beat, I wouldn't be surprised if this kid made it to the top of the tables with his skills."
"Yes, he has got some great moves but so has the person he's facing up against. Nathan is one kick-ass kid. He likes to get straight into the battle and not hang about. We have seen him not blade outta the disc in one attack, will he be able to beat Marc this way? Let's hang over to Robert to get this red hot battle started!"
"You've all been waiting for this now let me be the one to say .3.2.1.LET IT RIP!!"
Once again, two blades laded in the disc. Both went into a head on attack. The two blades were in a lock, not showing any sign of moving apart. Marc's blade backed off. "I'm getting bored, I wanna go out with my mates so lets get this over and done with! Beyblade full head on attack!" After this, Nathan's blade was hit head on and flew into the air. He was in shock that he was being batted about the disc like that. "If I can land it I might have a change. Come on!" Nathan's blade with the floor or the disc. It was still in one piece but had stopped spinning and was laying on its side.
"We have a winner.Nathan's blade had stopped spinning.the winner is Marc!"
A huge smile came across Marc's face. 'I proved I haven't changed' "Nice one" Marc heard a voice from behind him. It was Billie. "Thanks, that was easy. The trainings paid off. Now there's only one match left each." "Yeah, good thing to coz this battling is doing me in. I'll be glad when I can have a lay in."
"Now we only have 2 battle's left till we find our two best bladers. Will it be the hometown kids? Or the visits trying to take our town by storm? Find out next time."
"Bye people and remember.LET IT RIPE!"
How was that?
Rai: You make the battles sound easy
Well I'll get Marc to right them next time coz im naf at writing the battle parts.
Kai: Well as long as when im battling you make it go.
Yeah yeah what ever.
Ok well that's it please R+R thanks