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5 Reviews or maybe not a chp.7..srry I keep doing this but I wanna know when ppl lose interest of my story
Im not trying to be rude and hold my story "hostage" catiedids.
Setting: Continued from chapter 5
Chapter 6 "The attack"
Lizzie's POV
Oh what's that horrible smell..Oh my gosh It's me..Well I do have the same pair of ripped clothes that I got kidnaped in a week ago. I need a shower. Or some perfume.Maybe my keeper will let me out just long enough to take a shower..Maybe there is windows in the bathroom..and if there's a lock on the door..maybe just maybe I could make a run for it...But not tonight because it's getting late and I can sense it's dark outside. And I can't run away in the dark..But then he couldn't see where I was at though..No, I can't run away tonight..but if I wait to long, no telling what'd he do to me tomorrow.
I got off of the chair and walked to the door, trying to pull it open, but it was locked again. When does he ever Unlock it.
Gordo's POV
"Matt, just go hide behind a bush..Hurry!!" I yelled
"What about you?" He said
"Don't worry, I can handle it" I yelled
''But-"
''GO!" I said...he finally obeyed
When the car was coming closer I shoved my cell phone in my pocket and threw the purse into the bush. The guy stepped out of his car and walked over to me. It was night time so I couldn't really see him that close. He was tall, and was wearing black clothes.
"Hey kid what are you doing out here all alone?" He asked
"What are you doing following us around?" I asked.. Ok maybe I was a little bit snobby. But I was freaking out. First Lizzie is Kidnaped here and then Matt and I are being followed
"I suggest you don't get bitchy about this" He said
Bitchy?! I don't think so
"Who are you and what do you want?" I said
"You don't need to know, and all I want to know is what are you doing here?" He said
"You don't need to know" I said
Suddenly he launched towards me. I yelped and leaned to the side, watching him fall to the ground. He got back up and started at me, I took off running telling Matt to go home and get help.
"Come back here you little child!" The guy screamed
I turned the corner and ducked behind a trash can. I heard no sound or footsteps and after a couple of minutes went by I slowly inched my head around the trash can and looked up. I seen nobody so I slowly got out of my position and started walking. Somebody grabbed my shoulder so I looked around and saw that same guy. I threw my arm up to meet his head and poke his eye. He screamed and let go of me, but soon caught me when I tried to run. I tried fighting but he punched my face.
"Why are you doing this to me?!" I yelled
"Because I know why your outside" He said
"I'm outside looking for something!" I yelled
"More like someTHING, look GORDO, stop trying to find your precious Lizzie, because trust me, your not going to!" He screamed
I looked at his wrist and I finally realized...This was the guy...
"Where is she!" I yelled
"Finally realized who I am now huh" He said
"I don't know who you are but I know your Lizzie's kidnaper, and you better let her go!" I said
"No, she's mine now, I can do anything I want with her" He said
That made me so mad
"Don't hurt her!" I said
"I can if I want" He yelled
That ticked me off, I punched him and tried to run when he grabbed me and threw me into his trunk.
Matts POV
I ran home as quick as I could.
"MOM!! DAD!!!!"I yelled running into the kitchen
"What Matt?" My mom screamed
"The kidnaper....He took Gordo..I think he has Lizzie too..HURRY WE gotta go fine them!" I yelled out of breath
"OK MATT HURRY LETS GO!!" Said my mom taking me with her running out the door
"Where was he Matt?" ASked my mom
"This way!" I said leading her to where Gordo once stood
"Where'd he go, he was just here..and that car...the car isn't here either...OH NO HE TOOK GORDO!!"
Lizzie's POV
I miss my home...I should just try and escape..but how.. I looked around the room, spotting a big metal thing that my 'master' had dropped when he hit me. I ran over and picked it up. Holding it, I thought up a idea. I got up and walked over to the door. I banged the weapon into the wall trying to make a hole.
After about 10 hits, I finally made a hole. I reached my hand through and unlocked the lock and turned the doorknob and opened it. I was free!
I slowly tiptoed out of my chamber and up the stairs into his house. Part of me wanted to just run straight out of the house, but the other part wanted to look around the house to see who it was. As I kept walking I found the kitchen. There was nothing important so I walked through the hall and into a small bedroom. I saw a bed,dresser and closet. I decided to investigate, so I walked over to the dresser and opened a drawer. I saw pictures of me. Pictures of me skating, and pictures of me sitting on a bench. I started wondering where I was at and who I was with when the pictures were taken and I realized I was with Ronnie.
A chill ran down my spine as I shut the drawer. It could have been somebody following us too. I looked in his closet and found a backpack. I unzipped it, pulled out a binder and opened it. Inside it had many dividers so whoever it was probably went to a high school. I pulled out a paper and read the name on it. I went back and read it again several times. Oh my god...My kidnapper *IS* Ronnie!!
~End of Chappie 6~
Ok I really don't like leaving cliffhangers..Ok I do..It's fun but what I have in mnd to write next would be better if it was in its own chapter. Don't worry guys I'll have it up in no time. But I would really like to hear from all of you and see if you like it or not..so please please please review. I like reading all ur *interesting* and *helpfull* comments.
Lov ya'll
xoxo
~LilWhiteGurl89~
I own nothing...*sniff*
5 Reviews or maybe not a chp.7..srry I keep doing this but I wanna know when ppl lose interest of my story
Im not trying to be rude and hold my story "hostage" catiedids.
Setting: Continued from chapter 5
Chapter 6 "The attack"
Lizzie's POV
Oh what's that horrible smell..Oh my gosh It's me..Well I do have the same pair of ripped clothes that I got kidnaped in a week ago. I need a shower. Or some perfume.Maybe my keeper will let me out just long enough to take a shower..Maybe there is windows in the bathroom..and if there's a lock on the door..maybe just maybe I could make a run for it...But not tonight because it's getting late and I can sense it's dark outside. And I can't run away in the dark..But then he couldn't see where I was at though..No, I can't run away tonight..but if I wait to long, no telling what'd he do to me tomorrow.
I got off of the chair and walked to the door, trying to pull it open, but it was locked again. When does he ever Unlock it.
Gordo's POV
"Matt, just go hide behind a bush..Hurry!!" I yelled
"What about you?" He said
"Don't worry, I can handle it" I yelled
''But-"
''GO!" I said...he finally obeyed
When the car was coming closer I shoved my cell phone in my pocket and threw the purse into the bush. The guy stepped out of his car and walked over to me. It was night time so I couldn't really see him that close. He was tall, and was wearing black clothes.
"Hey kid what are you doing out here all alone?" He asked
"What are you doing following us around?" I asked.. Ok maybe I was a little bit snobby. But I was freaking out. First Lizzie is Kidnaped here and then Matt and I are being followed
"I suggest you don't get bitchy about this" He said
Bitchy?! I don't think so
"Who are you and what do you want?" I said
"You don't need to know, and all I want to know is what are you doing here?" He said
"You don't need to know" I said
Suddenly he launched towards me. I yelped and leaned to the side, watching him fall to the ground. He got back up and started at me, I took off running telling Matt to go home and get help.
"Come back here you little child!" The guy screamed
I turned the corner and ducked behind a trash can. I heard no sound or footsteps and after a couple of minutes went by I slowly inched my head around the trash can and looked up. I seen nobody so I slowly got out of my position and started walking. Somebody grabbed my shoulder so I looked around and saw that same guy. I threw my arm up to meet his head and poke his eye. He screamed and let go of me, but soon caught me when I tried to run. I tried fighting but he punched my face.
"Why are you doing this to me?!" I yelled
"Because I know why your outside" He said
"I'm outside looking for something!" I yelled
"More like someTHING, look GORDO, stop trying to find your precious Lizzie, because trust me, your not going to!" He screamed
I looked at his wrist and I finally realized...This was the guy...
"Where is she!" I yelled
"Finally realized who I am now huh" He said
"I don't know who you are but I know your Lizzie's kidnaper, and you better let her go!" I said
"No, she's mine now, I can do anything I want with her" He said
That made me so mad
"Don't hurt her!" I said
"I can if I want" He yelled
That ticked me off, I punched him and tried to run when he grabbed me and threw me into his trunk.
Matts POV
I ran home as quick as I could.
"MOM!! DAD!!!!"I yelled running into the kitchen
"What Matt?" My mom screamed
"The kidnaper....He took Gordo..I think he has Lizzie too..HURRY WE gotta go fine them!" I yelled out of breath
"OK MATT HURRY LETS GO!!" Said my mom taking me with her running out the door
"Where was he Matt?" ASked my mom
"This way!" I said leading her to where Gordo once stood
"Where'd he go, he was just here..and that car...the car isn't here either...OH NO HE TOOK GORDO!!"
Lizzie's POV
I miss my home...I should just try and escape..but how.. I looked around the room, spotting a big metal thing that my 'master' had dropped when he hit me. I ran over and picked it up. Holding it, I thought up a idea. I got up and walked over to the door. I banged the weapon into the wall trying to make a hole.
After about 10 hits, I finally made a hole. I reached my hand through and unlocked the lock and turned the doorknob and opened it. I was free!
I slowly tiptoed out of my chamber and up the stairs into his house. Part of me wanted to just run straight out of the house, but the other part wanted to look around the house to see who it was. As I kept walking I found the kitchen. There was nothing important so I walked through the hall and into a small bedroom. I saw a bed,dresser and closet. I decided to investigate, so I walked over to the dresser and opened a drawer. I saw pictures of me. Pictures of me skating, and pictures of me sitting on a bench. I started wondering where I was at and who I was with when the pictures were taken and I realized I was with Ronnie.
A chill ran down my spine as I shut the drawer. It could have been somebody following us too. I looked in his closet and found a backpack. I unzipped it, pulled out a binder and opened it. Inside it had many dividers so whoever it was probably went to a high school. I pulled out a paper and read the name on it. I went back and read it again several times. Oh my god...My kidnapper *IS* Ronnie!!
~End of Chappie 6~
Ok I really don't like leaving cliffhangers..Ok I do..It's fun but what I have in mnd to write next would be better if it was in its own chapter. Don't worry guys I'll have it up in no time. But I would really like to hear from all of you and see if you like it or not..so please please please review. I like reading all ur *interesting* and *helpfull* comments.
Lov ya'll
xoxo
~LilWhiteGurl89~