Eclipse
Disclaimer: I don't own HP except for my characters that you don't see in the HP books.
A/N: First Off thnks 4 the review there was one that was I don't Mary Sue stinks o.k. thnks your right I probably suck at grammer which I do because I just suck at grammer and me spelling nOoOo we don't go together. Second the name LaLaLa said that I dissed the name Krystal which I can't diss tht name cause tis mines as well so fuck tht too. Thts my response to those reviews thnk u 4 listening...Moving on I would lik to thnx to the following pplz:
Soccer-Bitch- (Yea U Rock cuz U play soccer and me too n 4 the reviews!!!)
FanJimmy- (Thnx 4 liking mah chapters.)
Crazygoth5- (4 just being mah best friend)...
If I didn't say more names then mah bad I had to finish this ch. By tonight and its lik late at night so really really really sorry!!! (
Ch.4-Another Part Of The Prophecy
Krystal was running and jumped into her bed. Kicking her shoes to the floor and started crying on her pillow. She missed Arlen, her abuela, she missed Greg. Why did she let him kiss her? It was wrong she knew it but why? She cried herself to sleep.
The next morning she changed and wore a denim mini and a pink shirt with a monkey blowing bubblegum and in the bottom it said I Love Bubblegum!!! She put on her pink boots (crazy really) and went down to the Great Hall to eat breakfast.
"Krystal why is your face so red," Hermione came up to her. "Huh... Ooh ... nothing I guessed I slept with my face on the pillow," she lied.
"Man this Saturday is going to be our first practice this year can't wait," Ron yawned.
"I can if you're gonna be on the team," Harry started eating his cereal. "What the fuck is that supposed to fucking mean?"
"You miss the ball to much and that means the other team gets ten points," Harry spoke with his mouth full. Ron threw him a death glare but soon forgot it when the Slytherin groupie decided to show up with Draco leading them. He looked her way and kept looking at her till one of the chubby guy hit him for attention.
"Slimeballs," Hermione said disgusted. "Yea," Krystal nodded without know what else to say.
"'Mione what class do we have today," Ron poked his oatmeal with his spoon.
"Hmmm...Transfiguration with Ravenclaw, then Potion with... greaaaat ... Slytherin, Charms... what!!! Slytherin again Damn! And then History again with Ravenclaw," Hermione said disappointed.
"Sltyherin for two classes well lets look at this in a good point a view...we could rank on them more often," Ron laughed.
"Ron no Slytherins we want to be very far away from," Harry placed his hand on his forehead.
"Whatever...let go to Transfiguration already," Krystal said getting up and grabbing her books. The other three followed her. She took a glance over Slytherin table and saw Draco was watching her closely. She frowned and shook her head.
...Dumbledore watched the tension between Krystal and Draco closely they like each other maybe more but he still had guilt that he should of told her the other half of the prophecy and not that only.
"and the way to truly defeat this evil lord is to recapture the book of the Eclipse in the cave by a wizarding town. If this book falls in the lords hand the world would only be at the palm of his hand. To reclaim this book the moon child must find the key that will be given to her by an old love. Then only she can open the book of the Eclipse."
...Krystal paused; thinking of the word Eclipse. It just popped into her head Like if someone was giving her direction. Chills came up her spines making her drop her books. It made a large clattering sound.
"What happened," Harry got down and picked up her books. "I don't know." Her moon amulet started vibrating more like bouncing on her bare skin. Now it was glowing right through her shirt.
"Why is that thing glowing!" Ron asked horrified. Not knowing what to say she clasped onto the charm feeling the soft motion between her hands. It suddenly stop slipping through her and falling back against her chest.
"There's an unknown presence that's why it's telling me someone's here but can't be seen," she tried to figure this out. You can't apparate(don't know if thts right let me know) here to Hogwarts. If you're a ghost then you would be seen in a transparent view right? Hermione interrupted her thoughts, "Let's go to Transfiguration." "Yea, sure," They walked out in silence not talking about the vibration of the amulet.
This chapter suxs really it does the next one is going to be better. I give you a thing for the next ch. I'm gonna bring one new pplz in.
Disclaimer: I don't own HP except for my characters that you don't see in the HP books.
A/N: First Off thnks 4 the review there was one that was I don't Mary Sue stinks o.k. thnks your right I probably suck at grammer which I do because I just suck at grammer and me spelling nOoOo we don't go together. Second the name LaLaLa said that I dissed the name Krystal which I can't diss tht name cause tis mines as well so fuck tht too. Thts my response to those reviews thnk u 4 listening...Moving on I would lik to thnx to the following pplz:
Soccer-Bitch- (Yea U Rock cuz U play soccer and me too n 4 the reviews!!!)
FanJimmy- (Thnx 4 liking mah chapters.)
Crazygoth5- (4 just being mah best friend)...
If I didn't say more names then mah bad I had to finish this ch. By tonight and its lik late at night so really really really sorry!!! (
Ch.4-Another Part Of The Prophecy
Krystal was running and jumped into her bed. Kicking her shoes to the floor and started crying on her pillow. She missed Arlen, her abuela, she missed Greg. Why did she let him kiss her? It was wrong she knew it but why? She cried herself to sleep.
The next morning she changed and wore a denim mini and a pink shirt with a monkey blowing bubblegum and in the bottom it said I Love Bubblegum!!! She put on her pink boots (crazy really) and went down to the Great Hall to eat breakfast.
"Krystal why is your face so red," Hermione came up to her. "Huh... Ooh ... nothing I guessed I slept with my face on the pillow," she lied.
"Man this Saturday is going to be our first practice this year can't wait," Ron yawned.
"I can if you're gonna be on the team," Harry started eating his cereal. "What the fuck is that supposed to fucking mean?"
"You miss the ball to much and that means the other team gets ten points," Harry spoke with his mouth full. Ron threw him a death glare but soon forgot it when the Slytherin groupie decided to show up with Draco leading them. He looked her way and kept looking at her till one of the chubby guy hit him for attention.
"Slimeballs," Hermione said disgusted. "Yea," Krystal nodded without know what else to say.
"'Mione what class do we have today," Ron poked his oatmeal with his spoon.
"Hmmm...Transfiguration with Ravenclaw, then Potion with... greaaaat ... Slytherin, Charms... what!!! Slytherin again Damn! And then History again with Ravenclaw," Hermione said disappointed.
"Sltyherin for two classes well lets look at this in a good point a view...we could rank on them more often," Ron laughed.
"Ron no Slytherins we want to be very far away from," Harry placed his hand on his forehead.
"Whatever...let go to Transfiguration already," Krystal said getting up and grabbing her books. The other three followed her. She took a glance over Slytherin table and saw Draco was watching her closely. She frowned and shook her head.
...Dumbledore watched the tension between Krystal and Draco closely they like each other maybe more but he still had guilt that he should of told her the other half of the prophecy and not that only.
"and the way to truly defeat this evil lord is to recapture the book of the Eclipse in the cave by a wizarding town. If this book falls in the lords hand the world would only be at the palm of his hand. To reclaim this book the moon child must find the key that will be given to her by an old love. Then only she can open the book of the Eclipse."
...Krystal paused; thinking of the word Eclipse. It just popped into her head Like if someone was giving her direction. Chills came up her spines making her drop her books. It made a large clattering sound.
"What happened," Harry got down and picked up her books. "I don't know." Her moon amulet started vibrating more like bouncing on her bare skin. Now it was glowing right through her shirt.
"Why is that thing glowing!" Ron asked horrified. Not knowing what to say she clasped onto the charm feeling the soft motion between her hands. It suddenly stop slipping through her and falling back against her chest.
"There's an unknown presence that's why it's telling me someone's here but can't be seen," she tried to figure this out. You can't apparate(don't know if thts right let me know) here to Hogwarts. If you're a ghost then you would be seen in a transparent view right? Hermione interrupted her thoughts, "Let's go to Transfiguration." "Yea, sure," They walked out in silence not talking about the vibration of the amulet.
This chapter suxs really it does the next one is going to be better. I give you a thing for the next ch. I'm gonna bring one new pplz in.