The real reason-Chapter 6
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Noah was stood out side Kits hospital room, his hands were resting upon the glass and he was leaning forward desperately trying to see what was going on inside.
A frown was etched upon his face, he couldn't cry anymore he knew that it wouldn't help and even if he tried he doubted whether he could as his mind was set on worrying.
People had come and gone behind him talking and laughing with their companions but Noah hadn't moved a muscle, his facial expression was the same and his hands were in the exact same place, he was uncomfortable but he kept telling himself that it was nothing compared to what Kit was going through, why should he be allowed comfort when Kit was deprived of it in the other room?
He had tried to explain this theory to Hayley but hayley had just rolled her eyes and told him that he was being stupid. He ignored her reassuring himself that he wasn't being a drama queen and that Hayley didn't care for Kit in the same way he did, he remained where he was.
The nurses that were surrounding Kits bed were running around frantically, worry was all over their faces, Noah had gotten used to this however as they had looked like this since Kit had come in.
They were frantically mopping their brows and shouting to each other from opposite sides of the room. A few of them were shaking their heads but the majority were busy checking machines and changing tubes.
Noah was thinking the worst; his mind was jumping to conclusions, as he didn't know anything about hospitals or medicine.
There was one doctor that stood out to him, Noah had assumed that he was the doctor as he had not moved his place in the room and had the women running around after him. He looked determined, like he wasn't going to give up and Noah felt relived that he was performing the emergency operation.
The doctor was sweating uncontrollably and by the look on his face things weren't going according to plan, this made Noah increasingly worried.
More and more nurses were shaking their heads and the doctor seemed ready to give up. Noah found himself pushing his head against the glass, subconsciously nodding his head towards the Doctor, willing him to go on.
Noah saw the Doctor close his eyes and silently lift his hands from inside of Kit and shook his own head. The nurses silently lifted Kit's sheet and placed it over her head.
Noah's stomach dropped and his hands fell down floppily at his ides. His mind went blank.
One by one the nurses filtered out, each looking sympathetically at Noah as they swiftly brushed past him. Last of all the Doctor came out, looked at Noah and dropped his head.
Noah fell flaccidly to the floor and buried his head in his hands; he let go of all the tears that had been locked inside of him during Kits Emergency Operation and let out a low moan as he grieved for Kit.
This cant be happening, he thought to himself, this cant be happening he said over and over again. Wiping his eyes and raising his head he regained his posture and went into Kit's hospital room. He lifted the sheets and there, as clear as water was Kit, her eyes closed looking as if she was in a deep sleep. He reached out his arm and ran his hand down her face, all he could think about was how cold and numb she looked.
Then the realization dawned upon him, Kit, His friend, His rock, His other half, His girl, His soul mate...
Was dead...
"Noah!" he heard a voice say in his ear.
Noah opened his eyes to be greeted by a worried looking Hayley.
"Noah" she sighed dramatically, "You were dreaming, Noah, Calm down it was just a dream"
"Kit!" he exclaimed as he shot up accidentally knocking the cup of water out of Hayley's hand.
"Still no change" replied Beth who was being comforted by Rhys.
Noah breathed a sigh of relief, it was just a dream, he thought desperately apologising to Hayley for the water accident.
"It's okey Noah stop fussing" she told him, "I'm just ganna go and get another one for you"
"Don't bother" Noah replied, "I'll go and get one myself, anyway I think I'll need something a little bit stronger than a cup of water" he smiled at Hayley and the turned and walked away quickly down the corridor.
That reason was not true however, he really just wanted some alone time, his head was all over the place. First he thought that the girl he loved had died a painful death and then he had found out that she was exactly the same condition she was in when he fell asleep.
Come to think of the couldn't remember when he had fallen asleep. He knew he sounded a bit heartless but if he was completely honest with himself he wasn't sure whether he was happy that Kit hadn't died. At least in his dream Kit had been at peace and she looked more peaceful than she has looked for months, right now she was fighting for her life and all Noah wanted was for her to be happy and for her to be at peace.
He was shocked when he saw that he had reached the coffee dispenser, had he been gone that long? Noah reached out, grabbed the plastic cup, placed it under the tap and pressed the button.
Coffee gushed out but Noah wasn't paying attention and it leaked out all over him and the old woman behind him,
"Oh I'm so sorry" Noah apologized.
The woman threw his a look and batted her way through the caring doctors who were crowding around her. She hit the last doctor around the head with her handbag and disappeared around the corner. The doctors then turned their attention towards Noah who had been in shock throughout the ordeal. They glared angrily at him and one of they started talking to him in a quiet but alarming tone of voice explaining to him that had to be more careful in this environment.
"You see not everyone here likes having boiling hot coffee pored all over them," he said in a sarcastic way, which made Noah want to punch him.
The doctor however didn't stop there but went on explaining the woman's condition, which didn't improve Noah's threatening urge to punch him.
Noah found himself staring intently at the mans lip, just wondering what would happen if he punch it.
Well, it can't be worse than having to listen to this, he thought as he drew back his hand. The doctor seeing this stopped talking abruptly and muttered something under his breath. Noah however didn't stop and threw his hand forward towards the mans face...
"Noah!" came a screeching voice, Noah held his hand away an inch away from the mans face who was flinching.
"Noah!" it came again and Noah saw Hayley running through the dozens of spectators.
"Noah," Hayley said gain seeming relieved that she had found him. "It's Kit, you should come" was all she said.
Noah dropped his hand and the doctor's flinch became an evil smirk.
Noah, dreading what had happened drew back his clenched fist again and swung it at the doctors grinning face and knocked him backwards over the tables in the cafeteria and left running with Hayley to see what had become of Kit.
All the way there Haley was shouting things, the only things Noah had got was Doctor, Pain and thrown out...Noah couldn't care though he just wanted to get to Kit.
Maybe it wasn't what he was thinking; maybe Kit had woken up and was stable. As soon as he had got there however he knew that that wasn't the reason.
He saw Beth in the corner looking fragile holding onto Rhys as if he was stopping her from falling.
Scott had his head in his hands and Dane's hands were placed upon his back gently stroking him.
Noah ran towards Kits room and looked through the window, he quickly pinched himself to see whether he was dreaming this time, it looked exactly the same as his nightmare.
Nurses were swarming around the bed touching buttons and putting their hands over Kit, Noah couldn't look anymore, the one thing that had changed since his dream however was the doctor, in stead of the nice, lovable trustworthy one was replaced by one with a cut lip who glared angrily at Noah before disappearing into Kit's room.
Noah sank t the floor and was greeted by Hayley who wrapped her hands around him and didn't let go...
There you go... Another chapter finished!! Hope you enjoyed it, Please please please update, and if you have any constructive criticism then please share it! I really want to get better!
Notes to my reviewers-
Obsessed crazed busted fan- lmfao...ha ha ha ha... The cinema was packed yesterday, sad U couldn't come...Hee hee...and the bit with Ron Harry and the spiders really reminded me of a certain lesson, a certain teacher and a certain embarrassing moment!! And rite, U know how U put you though Beau would look good in that movie, well I though that Beau should be Ron and Sam Atwell should be Harry!! I would defiantly watch that!!
Becky- I loved that review, the longer the better!! I have tried to do what you and C-Rwbebbe said and tried to slow things down, please tell me what you think!! Oh and the answer to your challenge- I ACCEPT- I am going to write as many chapters as possible to get 100 reviews, and by m calculations I shall need to write...eeerrrr...about 15 more chapters...woah...(what have I gotton myself into??)
Catchastar- Thanyuuuuuuuuu sssssooooon much for updating your Fic...I am quit surprised that no one has thought to get Kit kidnapped in their fic's before, its an amazing storyline, Its imperative that U update soon...I neeeeeeedddd to know what happens...Oh and thanks lot$ for reviewing...I hope U like this chapter and please please please review!!
C-Rwebbe- I love your review!! Thanx sooo much for using a constrictive review!! I don't know why I like them so much but Oh welll...hee hee, I read your fanfic the other day but I didn't review...hang on I'll review now...there U go...please please please review!!
QueenVix- Hello again...thanx for the review and thanks for posting that message on the message board...I have updated the soap lines bit and I have added a lot more pictures and I am working on another poll. Hope you like it!!
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